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Noisy
The dormitory keeper told me that three students of mine played mobile phone and chatted in the hallway at late night. What they did had badly disturbed the others resting. Especially two of them had been violated many principles. He asked me to deal with the situation.
I notified all of their parents of their sons' bad behaviour. For the worse boys, I asked their parents to have their sons stayed at home for a week. One parent asked me why the students would still carry their phone to school since the school had prohibited it before. I told her that apart from the phone, what her son did had violated the principles, so he must be punished. Then, another boy's grandpa asked me about the phone as well. I totally didn't want to respond him. Soon after, he talked it on the Wechat parents group, and some parents joined in. Ironically, the parent who was the most active in the discussion, her son had violated many principles as well.
Dec. 17, 2021
My Phones
I have two smart phones; one is Galaxy S10, the other one is iPhone 8.
Because of my old phone was able to use video talk service, so my father bought the iPhone for me.
With the phone, my father and my sons can have conversations with live video.
On the other hand, I should bring the Galaxy S10 because of my company's rule.
My company's employment card is only possible to install the series of Galaxy Phone, so I bought it for convenience in my office.
It is a bit heavy when I bring both phones, but I can use experiences both iOS and Android.
Dec. 17, 2021
Jour 29 : Disneyland
Quand j'étais enfant, ma famile m'a mené qu'une fois à Disneyland car ça coûte cher et ma mère disait qu'il n'y avait rien très intéressant. Mais moi, entant qu'enfant, j’aimais vraiment le Disneyland. Quand j'étais au lycée, j’adorais bien me balader dans les hôtels de Disneyland car ça ne coûtais rien et on pouvait quand même s'emmerger dans un monde de magie. En fait, c'est très beau. J'aime toujours ses histoires, ses films et ses chansons parce qu'ils ont toujours des leçons morales et des mots d'encouragement. Mais aujourd'hui quand j'y suis allée, je ne trouvais plus ma passion pour les jeux de Disney. Ce que je pense, ce n'est qu'un lieu parfait pour se balader et prendre des photos.
En fait, si on a un cœur d'enfant, on peut trouver le magie à n'importe quel endroit.
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Ma vie, jour 6
Je venait de m'asseoir dans le train quand la chanson "You Can Call Me Al" de Paul Simon commençait jouer. Je ne suis pas un fan de Paul Simon, ni Simon et Garfunkel, mais ce chanson est un hit! Maintenant, j'écoute de musique differente, comme Polyphia ou Dance Gavin Dance, mes bands favorites. Je suis assis dans le train à mes parents, mes ils ne se trouveront pas à la maison. Mon père est à travail et ma soeur (je ne sais pas comment faire le oe signe au laptop) est à école. Ma mère sortira à ma grand-mère dans quelques heures. Heuresement, avant qu'elle sorte, elle me ramasse.
Aujourd'hui, j'ai un rencontre avec l'un des enseignants de ma lycée ancienne. Nous parlerons de un "soir de étudiantes anciens". J'en ai envie! Après, moi et mon ami vont se promener dans le Sahara, mais pas l'un d'Afrique.
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December 17th, 2021
The Japanese women's curling team, "Loco Solare," played against Turkey last night, but they ended up losing. If they had won the game, they would have qualified for the Beijing Olympics. I am watching the game between Japan and Korea now. If they win the game, they will qualify for the Olympics.
Dec. 17, 2021
Defly
My secret name is Defly, you won't find out your real name yet, I'm a world heroine. As a little girl, I always wanted to become a heroine and help people. That wish came true and now all the children know me by it. I was named after the first three letters of the word „Defense“. My symbol signifies a yellow triangle and inside is an exclamation point, that symbol signifies security.
Many children ask me how I became a heroine. It happened overnight, I started to feel like something was going on with my body. I woke up and I could fly. I read various books and found out it was one about super power. In addition to flying, my super powers were invisibility and speed. Like any heroine, I have a costume, I wear a yellow cloak because yellow is a symbol of security. I have a skirt and a black T-shirt with the letter D on it as Defly. The weapons I use are a shield and my super powers. I am fighting against my biggest enemies these are Evilman, Lex Luthor, Brainiac and many more.
Everyone wants to be a superhero, but you don't have to be a hero to help someone in danger. Be fair and help someone because it will come back to you well.
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How I became a superhero
The superheroes are very interesting to me.
Firsty,they have something special what we,common people don't have and secondly we can always realy on them,because they are here to help us.
I always wanted to be a superhero and until recently I've been only thinking and writing about it. One night I wrote in my diary what kind of hero I want to be and also what powers I have.I'm wearing tight black suit with sparcles on it and a black mask on my face because my favourite superhero is Batman.I have a long brown hair tied in pony tail. I'm wearing a cool sneakers.My superpowers are really amazing. I can talk to animals and plants. I think they need a superhero as well so they can teel what they need.Next, I can flying. Im invisible too,I think that I am a really supercool hero.I fall asleap and I dreamed of me as a superhero and when I woke up and looked in the mirror I was a superhero...
To summerise the story ,I'm popular,people call me when they need a help and the kids loving me.Finally my dream came true,I'm superhero!
Dec. 17, 2021
こんにちは
私の名前はジルだ。三十一才だ。アメリカ人だ。カリフォルニア州に住んでいるけど、ペンシルベニアで生まれた。もともと、わたしの家族はマサチューセッツ出身だ。私たちは野球が大好きで、毎年ボストンレッドソックスをみている。残念ながら、私はボストンにいったことがない。でもいつかいきたい。秋は特に美しい。
私は二人の兄弟が要る。名前はジョセフとジョーダンだ。ジョセフは三十六才、ジョーダンは二十四才だ。ジョセフはチェスをしたり、天文学のほん読んだりがすき。ジョーダンはビデオゲームをしたり、歴史の本を読んだりするのが好き。私たち三人は一緒にビデオゲームをするのがすき。マリオパーティー はわたしたち私たちの一番のが好き。
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A Reply
Hello Allan,
Thank you for your compliments, which makes me very confident.
Thank you for taking notes and pointing out all the mistakes I made during our class.
To save your time and make our lessons more efficient, I think you can send those mistakes to me after our classes and I can figure them out by myself.
In short, I like talking with you. Even if you don't say anything, I still have the motivation to talk because I know that a native English speaker is in front of me and he knows everything I say. Besides, he will let me know all the mistakes I made.
Again, it's my great honor to have you as my tutor. I am very proud of it.
Best wishes always!
Sincerely
Your student, Jack.
Dec. 17, 2021
Third journal
I’m so much into writing journals these days and after thorough search, I’ve found a perfect site for me! I’ve always wanted my writing to be checked by natives. Actually, I have one Canadian friend who will be willing to check what I write, but I didn’t want to bother her everyday since I’m determined to write journals almost everyday. I’m thrilled to have found this site. God bless to all who give valuable time for me!
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Dec. 16, 2021
estoy un cabron?
estoy un cabron?
Yo empecé un curso de tutoría para español y estuve muy emocionado por aprender el español.
Además, la profesora estuvo un poco extraña. Soy de un país en Asia y la profesora hizo muchas preguntas sobre estereotípicas cosas de Asia. la encontraba molesta, pero yo traté de entender la dado de ella era muy joven.
lo que realmente importaba, yo apenas tuve oportunidades de hablar en Espanol. Ella prefirió hablar en Inglés por alguna razón. Esto podría deberse a mi mal español, pero ¿cuál es el punto de tomar un curso?
Me acerqué a el equipo de servicio y les pregunté a cambiar mi profesora por otra persona.
Me siento muy mal, estaba mal para mí a preguntarleslo?
Dec. 16, 2021
Les réseaux sociaux, existance inquiétante
Aujourd'hui, dans le cours de français, on a décortiqué les paroles d'une chanson de Stromae intitulée « Carmen ». Dans ce morceau, il critique globalement Twitter et les réseaux social qui a un effet néfast sur les relations humaines, telles que l'amour et l'amitié.
Quand j'étais petite, il n'exsitait pas de réseaux sociaux. Je me suis préoccupée des regardes placée sur moi par les autres, mais le niveau de préoccupation était assez normal en tant qu'une fille à cette époque-là. De toute façon, après être rentrée chez moi, j'était libre des perceptions des autres élèves. Ma maison, c'était mon monde, mon endroit où personne ne pouvait interrompre.
Mais maintenant, cette époque est révolue et la situation a beaucoup changé. On est toujours connecté sur Internet. Il y a tout le temps des activités de socialisation et l'amitié peut s'y figurer. Afins de ne pas être mis a l'écart, les enfants en bas âge ne peuvent pas vraiment échapper à ce system de communication. Il doit y avoir des gens qui sentent comme s'ils étaient guettés et surveillés 24 heures sur 24. Si j'avais mené la vie comme ça depuis que j'était à l'école, j'aurais fini par se stresser fortement et je n'aurais pas su distinguer la vie en public et celle à domicile.
Dans le cours, nous avons dû donner notre opinion sur des moyens de résorber ce problème, mais je n'avais aucune idée. Peut-être qu'il est mieux de établir un seuil d'âge pour utiliser les réseaux sociaux, mais je ne pense pas que cela soit réaliste à cette époque de digitalisation. Présque tout le monde se connecte pour obtenir des informations, et le taux d'utilisation doit être beaucoup plus élevé chez le jeune public.
Dec. 16, 2021
Las tres letras
En el día del traspaso del poder entre los presidentes Nicolas Sarkozy y François Hollande, el primer se entrevista con el segundo en un lugar muy secreto del palacio del Élysée. Sarkozy dice, dando a Hollande tres sobres: "Aquí son tres letras. Cuando tendrás un problema, abre una de ellas, y te explicará la solución".
Algunos meses después, Hollande prepara su reforma del trabajo, en un contexto de desempleo masivo. La población (que elegió un presidente teóricamente socialista) se pone furiosa. Hollande no sabe qué hacer. Así, decide abrir el primer sobre.
Lee: "Echa la culpa a la situación económica".
Por tanto, anuncia a la población que se trata de una reforma difícil pero necesaria, que la situación económica requiere que el mercado laboral se haga más flexible, y los ciudadanos se tranquilizan un poco.
Pero el pobre presidente no tiene ninguna suerte. Manifestaciones contra su proyecto de ecotasa empezan en Bretaña, y el movimiento va aumentando. ¡Todos temen una rebelión generalizada al país entero! Hollande tiene miedo y abre el segundo sobre.
Lee: "Echa la culpa a tu predecesor"
Pues, Hollande explica que va a renunciar a la ecotasa, pero que esta decisón estaba necesaria, ya que el liberalismo (que Sarkozy y la derecha simbolizan) está destruyendo la planeta. De nuevo, la población se calma.
Sin embargo, la popularidad de Hollande queda a media asta. El libro de su ex novia causa sensación: le describe como un hombre que desprecia a los pobres, a sus proprios colaboradores, y que tiene ni inteligencia ni coraje. Desperado, Hollande se pregunta como va gañar las elecciones. Decide abrir el último sobre
Lee: "Escribe tres letras..."
Dec. 16, 2021
Generous Lady
Hi, my name is Generous Lady, I am a superwomen with very strange power. You probably haven’t heard of such power yet but you believe it is special.
In addition to being invisible, I have the power to give things that homeless people need. When night falls I nod my ears twice and then I am invisible. I go to the homeless I see on the street. I give them food or something else from my special invisible cloak while they sleep. My enemies are those who give nothing to those on the street, see them and just pass by. I don't have a weapon, because I only have good intentions. I discovered my super power a few years ago because I was helping the homeless and anyone who doesn’t have their own home. Along with all that, I also got an invisible cloak with which to surprise the homeless with food or other things.
I love my power, it is special and rare. Helping poor homeless people makes me feel better. I use my power in the best way, not for my own purposes but for the purposes of those who need it.
Dec. 16, 2021
How I became a superhero
The superheroes are very interesting to me.Firsty,they have something special what we,common people don't have and secondly we can always realy on them,because they are here to help us.
I always wanted to be a superhero and until recently I've been only thinking and writing about it. One night I wrote in my diary what kind of hero I want to be and also what powers I have.I'm wearing tight black suit with sparcles on it and a black mask on my face because my favourite superhero is Batman.I have a long brown hair tied in pony tail. I'm wearing a cool sneakers.My superpowers are really amazing. I can talk to animals and plants. I think they need a superhero as well so they can teel what they need.Next, I can flying. Im invisible too,I think that I am a really supercool hero.I fall asleap and I dreamed of me as a superhero and when I woke up and looked in the mirror I was a superhero...
To summerise the story ,I'm popular,people call me when they need a help and the kids loving me.Finally my dream came true,I'm superhero!
Dec. 16, 2021
Spider Man
Hi, I am Peter and my favourite super hero is Spider Man.
Spide Men can't fly and he doesn't have big muscles but Spider Man has a very tight cobweb so he can move very fast is similar like flying, you can climb walls just like a spider, which is obvious by name itself. One of his major enemies is Venom.
Spider Man is my favourite hero because he is different from the others and because it's pretty interesting. I love watching it and sometimes something I learn from him.
Dec. 16, 2021
My superhero
Hi, I'm Lara. And I have a friend who travels through time, and he
can see the future. His name is Jacob. One of his symbols is lightning.
Every day he is in a different decade or century. Last year, he
traveled through time for the first time. He travels with his watch,
where he can choose where he wants to be. He is addicted to travel. He
always wears green clothes. He also has dark brown hair and wears a
black hat. Jacob has his opponent Fred, who is trying to ruin his travels.
But Jacob is trying to stop Fred.
When he stops Fred, he will finally be able to travel without any
problems again.
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