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Domingo
No domingo nós fomos para a casa de uma amiga para o aniversário dela. Na estrada meu amigos não consegui decidir ouvir que música, então nós não tínhamos qualquer música. Quando nós chegamos ela nos mostrou a casa e serviu algum vinho para nós.
Todos nós andamos na cidade e fomos ao shopping para jogarmos boliche. Era muito ocupado porque por causa do feriado.
Depois a gente foi para o jantar em um restaurante japonês. Eles tinham coquetéis muito sofisticados.
Nós voltamos para a casa de minha amiga e algumas pessoas jogaram jogos de tabuleiro mas nós precisamos voltar para casa. Foi um dia agradável mas eu estava muito cansada depois.
Aug. 26, 2025
Come scegliere i vincitori?
Ho partecipato tre colloqui in Italia.
Due colloqui sono per l'esame d'ammissione della scuola e uno colloquio è per la master class.
Ma due su tre colloqui sono stati strani, perché la giuria mi ha chiesto delle domande che non c'entrano niente sul colloquio.
Probabilmente la giuria ha già scelto i vincitori prima del colloquio, secondo me.
Allora che senso ha il colloquio in Italia?
Se avete capacità di superare il colloquio, vorrei sapere il vostro segreto.
Dovevo sorridere di più durante il colloquio? O dovevo truccarmi meglio?
Per fortuna, il mio curriculm vitae viene corretto dalla mia ex insegnante d'italiano.
Sarei molto grata se mi rispondeste.
Aug. 26, 2025
Mon voyage à Le Havre
Je dois dire, que c'est vraiment un échange scolaire. Il y a quelques années, quand je suis allée à Le Havre avec ma classe. C'était très excitant, parce que je ne connaissais personne. Malgré tout, c'était mon voyage préféré.
Tout d'abord, parce que c'était très amusant pendant le voyage dans le bus. Je me suis assis à l'avant avec six filles. Nous avons commencé à chanter avec la chanson 'my heart will go on'. Personne ne pouvait chanter et mon professeur, qui peux chanter excellent, devait pleurer de rire. Après notre concert magnifique, il venait à nous pour expliquer, comment nous devons chanter. Je ne vais jamais oublier ton leçon (et ses larmes).
Deuxièmement, nous avons promené à Étretat. La vue était très belle. La mer écrasait contre les rochers. Je ne verais jamais quelques chose comme ça. Après la promenade, moi et 6 autres éléves ont bu du chocola chaud dans un beau restaurant. L'interieur ressemble un peu du style Moyen âge.
Aug. 26, 2025
Lo que me gusta sobre el Alemán
Algo que es interesante para mí sobre el Alemán es que todo los sustantivos tienen que ir en mayúsculas. Yo ha notado que el Alemán es el único idioma que hace esto. A veces me confundo y pongo los sustantivos en mayúsculas cuando estoy escribiendo en inglés. No mucho pero si me ha pasado algunas veces(lol). También me gusta que el Alemán tiene a letra eszett (ß). La letra eszett se ve muy differente al los otros letras y se ve chido.
Aug. 26, 2025
Story of Ratnag Part 28
But the jackal saw Anna while she was running away from the place, so it chased her. While Anna was running, she fell down after stepping on a trap. Alok also stopped and tried to free Anna from that trap, but it couldn’t.
Since Alok couldn’t free Anna, he ran away from that place to save itself from the jackal who sucked human blood.
After some time, the bloodthirsty jackal reached the place where Anna was trapped. Then the jackal said, “At last you are caught by me. Now I am going to kill you and take your blood to my master, so they can perform a ritual with it and become immortal. Do you think the person who killed me in the jungle will save you again? He will not save you from me this time.”
At that moment, a gunshot was heard. The jackal fell down with a scream. Anna, with a confused expression, said, “Alok! You saved me twice. Thank you.”
Aug. 26, 2025
Aug. 26, 2025
Street Animals
Who doesn't love animals? These adorable creatures, been a part of us, existing since the beginning of time. Cats, dogs, birds, hamsters, which you prefer. So, unfortunately, we are facing so much struggle trying to handle so many cases involving abandoned animals and mistreatments. It’s really so sad see street animals, without food, without home, and if is not sufficient, have sick peoples who desire torture these creatures, son of bitch, just think about it, make my nerves ferving. Like as people said “People who don't like animals, it’s not a good person” And I have place to talk, I lost two cats, because people gave poison to them. I saw this, animals are pure and innocent creatures which deserve lovely and care, for a better future for them.
Aug. 26, 2025
Dites « non « aux produits américains
Une guerre commerciale est en cours entre le Canada et les État-Unis. De nombreux canadiens boycottent produits des État-Unis. Je ne voyagerai pas aux État-Unis dans l’avenir proche. Bien que essaie de ne pas acheter produits des État-Unis, j’ai acheté des fruits et des légumes. Il est important que nous mangions plusieurs portions de fruits et légumes par jour.
Aug. 26, 2025
A challange I recently faced
Last Tuesday I came home from work very late at night, and I was craving for a long, warm, relaxing shower before going to bed. But when I tried to have one I realized there was no hot water. I checked the boiler and it turned out it wasn't receiving gas because the methane supply had been cut off two hours before. I had to tough it out: a freezing shower would not have killed me!
Aug. 26, 2025
People trash many clothes
Every day, people throw away millions of pieces of clothing. Starting with this sentence, I would like to introduce how insane the quantity is from discarded clothes, so much that it is impossible to recycle all of them. Maybe it’s just a reflection to our society, and the fast changes in fashion, proves to be an obstacle for those who want to always stay in fashion. In my opinion, if you are going to throw it away, why not donate? be for your family, or people who need it, make a good choice, help who need. Toys, clothes, books, I know with the right consciousness, we can change this.
Aug. 26, 2025
Pollution and how to solve this problem
Every country in the world has problems with pollution and damage to the environment. Do you think these problems can be solved?
The battle to protect the environment has been one of the main topic of concern in the last decade. Millions of people fight against pollution, asking for better laws to protect our planet and more attention by the politicians. But the problem can be partially solved without the help of the government.
First of all, nowadays, cars took over cities and every family has at least two cars. This not only made small towns and big metropolis highly trafficked, but also over polluted. People should start by using less their vehicles and more public transportation or bikes, which do not use gas.
Moreover, rivers and seas are increasingly getting more contaminated, especially due to plastic litters and waste substances which are released in waters by industries. People should be more observant when it comes to throwing rubbish and avoid polluting the environment.
Lastly, I personally feel that promote volunteer among teens and young adult, who would have the possibility to engage with other people their age, to clean cities and natural places so that the rate of pollution would decrease.
In conclusion, there are a lot of things we can do to protect our planet, and we should do all it takes to save it.
Aug. 26, 2025
Review on a tv programme about history
'Behind the rulers' is a tv programme and documentary which explores the lives of the greatest sovereigns in history. There are episodes where it talks about Roman emperors, the British monarchs or France's kings. Though, one I particularly enjoyed is its latest episode on Charles Magnus.
It is mainly based on Eginardo’s biography of Charles' life, showing both the responsibilities and the flaws of having to control a vast empire. It presents the monarch since his birth, having a look at his ancestors and how they affected and formed his way of being. It gives us a better knowledge of society and culture back then, which also explain how the population evolved into its modern form. It pictures Charles character and persona through paintings and manuscripts written by people in his court, just like Eginardo himself.
I found this programme really interesting and captivating, especially for people fascinated by history and the people who made it.
Aug. 26, 2025
Mein perfekter Tag in Lake Buena Vista
An meinem perfekten Tag in Lake Buena Vista, würde ich am Schwimmbad zwei Stunden lang schwimmen, damit ich mit anderen Menschen schwimmen kann, weil ich das liebe. Zum Beispiel möchte ich heute im Bonnet Creek Resort schwimmen, weil es Möglichkeiten, um mit anderen Gästen zu sprechen. Gestern Abend habe ich mit anderen Gast im Bonnet Creek Resort gesprochen. Leider weiß ich nicht seiner Nam, aber ich erinnere mich, dass wir über Florida und unsere Zeiten im Bonnet Creek Resort gesprochen haben. Nach diesem Gespräch war ich am Schwimmbad in der Nähe mindestens 20 Minuten lang schwimmen. Idealerweise würde ich am Schwimmbad mindestens 45 Minuten lang schwimmen, zumal ich Rundenschwimmen üben möchte. Persönlich liebe ich Rückwärtsfahren und Freestyle, da ich viele Runden mit dieser Schwimmbewegung. Ich kann also Brustschwimmen tun, aber ich mag gerne Rückwärtsfahren.
Darüber hinaus würde ich im Fitnessstudio Sport machen, zumal ich in Laufband laufe. Nach dem Laufen möchte ich Zirkeltraining machen, weil ich Muskeln aufbauen will, vor allem an den Armen. Außerdem möchte ich in meinem Schlafzimmer tanzen, wo ich die Musik auswählen kann.
Zum Schluss würde ich in den Jacuzzi gehen, um mich zu entspannen. Es wäre spannend, überhaupt nicht zu denken. Wenn ich in den Jacuzzi gehe, bin ich ruhiger.
Aug. 26, 2025
Aug. 26, 2025
Aug. 26, 2025
Double Standard
Language discrimination means the difference between standard English and blue-collar dialects.
Standard English discriminates against blue-collar dialects.
Meanwhile, among the same group of people, those who speak standard English admire French very much.
More than a thousand years ago, French speakers were the upper class.
French was actually the official language in England for around 300 years.
They believe that French culture is superior to Anglo-Saxon culture.
Until now, there will be some people who think French culture is better.
So, the British culture has double standard.
Aug. 26, 2025
Le nazioni celtiche
Nei tempi antichi, la civilizzazione celtica si estendava dalla Romania al Portogallo di oggi. Col passare degli anni, molti di questi celtici si sono romanizzati e gli altri sono stati respinti dalle invasioni germanichi, ció che ha ridotto l'area culturale in cui le culture celtiche erano predominanti.
Tuttavia, si considera che esistano ancora sei nazioni celtiche: l'Irlanda, la Scozia, il Galles, la Cornovaglia, l'isola di Man e la Bretagna. In tutte si parla al meno una lengua celtica. Tutte queste lingue sono ora minacciate (la lingua cornica era persino morta prima lo sforzo di revitalizzazione nel XX secolo).
Alla lista delle nazioni celtiche si aggiunge spesso la Galizia. Sebbene la lingua galliziana (il gallego) sia una lengua romana, le tradizioni celtiche sono rimaste molto vivaci in questa provincia spagnola. La Galizia è regolarmente invitata al Festival Interceltico di Lorient. Per dieci giorni, questo festival che ha luogo ogni anno in Bretagna raccoglie decine di gruppe folkloristiche di tutte le nazioni celtiche in una bella serie di sfilati, concerti e altri eventi culturali.
I nomi "Galizia", "Galles", come "Gallia", provengono tutti da una parola di proto-germanico, *walh che designava i popoli che non parlavano una lengua tedesca, soprattutto i celtici.
Aug. 26, 2025
Aug. 26, 2025
Aug. 26, 2025
¿Por qué sería bueno ser honesto?
Para ser honesto no es una cosa fácil. Muchas veces el camino más fácil es mentir o engañar. Pero, cuando ser una persona honesta, puedes vivir una vida más libre. No necesitas te preocupar sobre mentiras o engañado alguien. Puedes llevar a un mayor bienestar en ambos su mente y emocional. La honestidad también es importante para desarrollo personalmente y profesionalmente.
Aug. 26, 2025
Man gives food to dogs – level 1
This text talks about a man that care street dogs, he loves animals especially dogs and carefull their food and health with vaccine. He post on tiktok some midias for other people help the animals too, because e very expensive. The dogs often have disease and if other helpping too, it's more easy.
Aug. 26, 2025
tuve una clase de español
Hoy tuve una clase de español en Preply y me da cuenta que aún no sé coversarme bien.
He aprendiendo el español hace dos años.. entiendo mucho cuando veo películas o videos. Pero cuando tengo que hablar con gente me pone muy nerviosa y olvido todas las palabras.
Me siento tonta y como no aprendí nada.
Desde ahora quiero mejorar mi habilidad de hablar la idioma, escribiré entradas del diario y hablaré español con mis amigas bilinguales (las que hablan mi idioma nativo y español)
hasta pronto con una entrada de diario
- maria
Aug. 26, 2025
Dîner et cinéma
Ce soir, je préparerai des spaghettis parce que j'en avais très envie depuis quelques jours. J'ai déjà fait des cookies hier soir, donc on aura du dessert aussi. Mon mari m'a demandé si je voulais voir un film avec le dîner et j'ai proposé « Le Fabuleux Destin d'Amélie Poulain » parce que je ne l'ai pas vu depuis de nombreuses années avant de commencer à apprendre le français. Je crois que c'est le film français le plus populaire pour les anglophones. C'était mon ami anglais qui m'a offert le film la première fois. L'actrice me rappelle Audrey Hepburn. Elles sont toutes deux minces, élégantes, brunes aux cheveux courts et semblent rayonner naturellement.
Dans d'autres actualités, j'ai découvert que mes arbrisseaux ne sont pas des pommiers cannelle mais plutôt des abricotiers ! J'ai oublié que j'avais également fait germer ces graines, qui sont d'originaires du jardin du grand-père de mon mari. Ça fait plaisir.
Aug. 26, 2025
Aug. 26, 2025
Vacances à Melbourne !
(C’est sous forme d'e-mail à un ami).
Bonjour Percy,
J’ai manqué nos conversations si j’ai pensé que je vais écrire un email.
C’est ma dernier semaine à Melbourne. Mes vacances est en hiver. C’est très froid, mais il n’y a neige pas. Je pense que j’aime du shopping à Paris plus que à Melbourne. Mais, j’ai acheté très ! Les jardins à Melbourne est beaux aussi que à Paris. J’ai pris des trains autour de la ville. Ils sont occupés avec personnes à la fin du jour. J’aimerais pouvoir faire du vélo.
Je te manque ! À bientôt Percy