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Aug. 23, 2025
Wish me luck
My lovely soulmate has been very ill lately. I'm trying to stay calm, but I can't do it. In childhood his eye was damaged. Now the eye's retina was detached. The first operation was completed perfectly! But my husband is so nervous person! It's bad for his eye. Today his eye saw a weird picture. I told my soulmate "GO TO THE DOCTOR" and now I'm waiting for the result.
Aug. 23, 2025
Aug. 23, 2025
Aug. 23, 2025
Aug. 23, 2025
Saturday, august 23rd. I wish I shouldn't go back to school!
I've always loved going to school, but ever since I started high school it feels like I'm going to hell instead.
The first year I didn't have a lot of friends, at least they didn't talk to me in class. I was a very quiet kid and I was always scared of getting scolded for talking in class (I also only ''talked'' with people who had totally different interests from me). By the end of the year, though, I began to talk more with some girls in my class, and now they are my closest friends! The problem it that the second year was much more difficult, and even if I still had vry good grades it totally destroyed me as a human being. I was always stressed and couldn't study well enough. I'm scared this year will be the same (or even worse, since I'm starting so much new subjects like physics and philosophy).
Another thing that doesn't help is that I hate most people in my school (both teachers and students. Especially teachers, since most of them don't even teach in class!).
I hope it'll be okay.
Aug. 23, 2025
Story of Ratnag Part 25
Then their teacher, Miss Ritu, came to the place and stopped their fight with a loud voice.
Miss Ritu said, “Enough! You two Rishu, Raghu come to the principal’s office.”
Then Ria said, “Ma’am, this situation happened because of me. So can I also come to the principal’s office?”
Miss Ritu replied, “Ok, as you wish.”
Then Ria, Rishu, and Raghu went to the principal’s office. Ria told the whole situation of the incident.
After hearing and understanding everything, the principal punished Raghu by giving him extra homework.
Then they went back to class. After the class ended, Rishu’s friend Piyush said, “Rishu, how can you beat Raghu? Raghu is a martial arts fighter. Every time you fight, Raghu always wins. But today you beat him what a miracle!”
Rishu replied, “Brother Piyush, I don’t know how it happened.”
Then Rishu thought to himself, “I have to behave like this always, so that no one recognize me that I was not Rishu.”
Aug. 23, 2025
Aug. 23, 2025
The fashion industry has a bad effect on people. Do u agree?
The fashion industry has become one of the most relevant aspects in our lives. Gradually more people base their persona or job on this field, but do its perks mask the bad effects? I firmly believe that people give too much importance to this industry, besides the negative repercussions it has on society.
Firstly, the way you dress, style your hair or do your make up can impact on people's first impression of you. In my opinion, nowadays, we worship people's appearance more than their personality and that can stop us from knowing them better. In addition to this, look can change based on class, culture and personal taste, so it should not affect relationships.
Moreover, the price of clothes is in constantly rising, making it harder for people to afford those. Even in fast fashion price are incredibly high, though the quality is low and they have a negative impact on the environment.
However, the fashion industry not only gives people more jobs opportunities, but it is a way to express ourselves, just like any other art.
To sum up, I agree that fashion industry has more downsides than benefits, although, if handled good, it is an important tool in society
Aug. 23, 2025
Frasi semplici per fare le flashcard - parte tre
Durante la battaglia, un piccolo gesto di coraggio al mio fianco ha fatto la differenza.
La sua ricerca ha saputo distinguere i dati più importanti e rivelare un dettaglio nascosto.
L’ente locale ha deciso di volgere più attenzione al commercio equo e solidale.
Quel libro è prezioso, capace di aumentare la conoscenza di chi lo legge.
Dopo tre ore di guardia, un collega lo ha rilevato al suo posto.
Lo studioso di filosofia ha acquistato dei libri rari all’estero.
Il filosofo diceva che nessuno può sfuggire alla propria coscienza.
Quella scelta è stata per lui una vera croce, eppure necessaria.
Molti studiosi italiani hanno lavorato all’estero, portando la filosofia del loro paese con sé.
Aug. 23, 2025
Meine Reise in Europa: Folge 7
Dieser Tag war ein Ruhetag. Wir sind spät aufgewacht und wir haben Sandwich gemacht. Am Nachmittag haben wir das Benaki Museum besuchen, über der grieschischen Kunst und Kultur. Es war ganz nett, aber manchmal ein bisschen lang.
Als Nachstes sind wir einen kleinen Park durchgegangen um bei einem Joghurthersteller zu gehen. Ich habe einen Joghurt mit Erdbeere, Nuss und Honig, es war lecker.
Am Abend sind wir in Athen spazieren gegangen, und wir sind auf dem Hügel der Nymphen gestiegen. Nach der Ankunft am Gipfel war der Blick auf die beleuchtete Akropolis wunderbar.
Aug. 23, 2025
Aug. 23, 2025
grilled ham and cheese (Croque Monsieur en français)
Grilled ham and cheese is for me one of the best way to gain time on lunch and dinner.
My grandma did this recipe a lot of times, but she always used an oven to heat them.
But last christmas she bought me a waffle machine that can also be used as a sandwich toaster machine.
The avantage is that this machine warm really faster than a classic oven and use less electricity.
It also makes the Grilled ham and cheese less dry.
Aug. 23, 2025
Aug. 23, 2025
Daily routine
Every morning, I spend few minuts to read an article or listen to a podcast from an another language.
At the beginning, it's hard to understand everything, but step by step, word become more familiar.
I take note from new expression in a little book and I try to use their in my conversations.
It's a simple habit wich make the learning more natural and motivating.
Aug. 23, 2025
Aug. 23, 2025
Do you prefer baths or showers?
There are so many different ways to get our body(s?) clean. The most common ones are to take a bath or have a shower. So, do you have a preference? Why is that?
For me, I prefer showers {for/ based on} three reasons.
First one, it's cleaner. Taking a shower uses running water, while baths use dead water. If I was in a really dirty situation, steeping myself into a tub of water just doesn't really seem helpful. By showering, I can flush the dirtiness away from my body without having to encounter them again. Has the thought ever occurred to you, that where you're wondering "Wait, did I just use foot-washing water to wash my face?". See where I'm going?
Second one, it's quicker. I don't actually have a bathtub in my bathroom, but I take it that it costs a while filling a tub full with water, and so does empty it. And I'm just not a lover of waiting on such trivial things.
Last one, it's more friendly to our environment. As a man (no offense to women), I just don't believe it will take more than a tub of water for me to do a shower. Although in where I live, the amount of water resources never seems to be a problem, it's always good to reduce the usage; if not for posterity, then for my water bills.
So, these are the reasons why I prefer showers rather than baths. But of course, enjoying yourself with a Jacuzzi while relaxing to sweep off today's tiredness is another thing. Either way, remember to wash yourself when necessary.
Aug. 23, 2025
Aug. 23, 2025
Aug. 23, 2025
La stabilità
Secondo me è essenziale avere stabilità in questo contesto economico.
La certezza di un posto di lavoro e una routine regolare possono migliorare la salute mentale. Conosco troppe persone che stanno ancora cercando lavoro senza riuscire a trovarlo.
Sono stata fortunata a poter fare domanda per un altro progetto all’interno dell’azienda, però questo non significa che non mi sia impegnata al massimo.
Ho superato vari colloqui, ho iniziato un tirocinio retribuito, ho sostenuto tanti test e ho sempre mostrato interesse.
Mio papà sta ancora cercando un nuovo posto di lavoro ed è rimasto deluso, perché quando si ha una certa età nessuno sembra interessato ad assumere.
Spero che le cose vadano meglio per lui, soprattutto perché non accetta la mia offerta di aiuto.
Aug. 23, 2025
GeoGuessr
Gestern war ein wunderschöner Tag. Zuerst habe ich einen Freund getroffen, und wir haben mit unseren Fahrräder anderthalb Stunden gefahren. Danach habe ich ein paar Stunden Deutsch geübt und einen anderen Freund angeruft, mit dem wir noch zwei Stunden zusammen GeoGuessr gezockt haben. Die Idee vom Spiel bester darin, dass man sich an einem zufälligen Ort auf Google Maps befindet und soll in einer beschränkten Zeit mit der Hilfe von Kennzeichen, der Sprache auf Schildern und einfach Glück es herausfinden, wo man ist. Wer näher das Zeichen stellt, der gewinnt die Runde. Die Anzahl der Runden hängt von den Einstellungen ab. Dieses mal hat der Freund gewinnt, aber ich war nicht weit vom Sieg! Zum Abschluss des Tages den Sonnenuntergang beobachtend fuhr ich mit dem Fahrrad und genoss den Abend.
Aug. 23, 2025
Aug. 23, 2025
Listening
Many people struggle to understand a new language because they take the first step incorrectly.
Their method is to read subtitles of videos, focusing on sentences and looking up words.
This is called the "visual-first approach".
However, English is an auditory-dominant language.
The correct order should be to first listen to the original audio without subtitles.
Write down what you hear, then compare it with the transcript to analyze your mistakes.
Listen repeatedly until you can form a clear picture in your mind.
Aug. 23, 2025
Aug. 23, 2025
Neuer Stil
Ab morgen schreibe ich hoffentlich jeden Tag eine neue Geschichte. Sie werden nicht realistisch sein, weil sie aus meiner Fantasie und meinen Träumen kommen. Einige davon habe ich sie schon auf Englisch geschrieben, aber die meisten haben mindestens einen Tod, und ich werde sie vielleicht nicht posten? Sogar damit sind die Themen nicht düster.