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Sept. 2, 2025
Going to the County Seat
The first time I
The first time I went to our county seat was when I was in elementary school.
One day, my father asked my brother-in-law to get some coal from the county seat as fuel for cooking. I asked my father if I could go with my brother-in-law.
The only vehicle we had was a man-powered wooden cart, which was used by every family for farmwork.
On an early morning, we went to the county seat. My brother pulled the cart and I followed him. The county seat was about 35 kilometers away from my village, which meant we wouldn't reach there until the afternoon.
When we arrived at the county seat, my brother contacted some people, and he quickly finished the trade process and loaded the coal. Then we immediately started returning home.
The building in the county seat that left a deep impression on me was a tall, red, round water tower because it was totally different from other buildings. Everything in the county seat looked new to me because I hadn't had any chance to go to an urban area.
When we arrived at the town about ten kilometers from my village, it was already late at night. We stayed at a small private inn, and ate a few cold steamed buns with water as our dinner.
We got up very early the next morning because we wanted to get home early. When we arrived home, it was around ten a.m. I felt very happy although I was exhausted.
Sept. 2, 2025
夫婦の姓
アメリカで、夫婦が結婚すると、どの名字を使うかは夫婦の選択です。両方が夫の姓にせよ、妻の姓にせよ、まったく新しい姓にせよ、どっちでもいい。違っている名字でも大丈夫です。
この自由にもかかわらず、ほとんどの女の人は夫の姓を名乗ります。少なくないの女の人は自分の姓を保ちます、あるいは夫の姓と自分の姓を組み合わせます（例：Linda Smith は Bob Johnson と結婚すると、Linda Smith-Johnson になります）。しかし、男の人はめったに妻の姓を名乗りません。
この現象の起源は何ですか。もちろん、この伝統は家父長制に基づいていると言って差し支えません。問題かどうか、大した問題かどうかという質問に関して色々な意見を持っている人もいます。
Sept. 2, 2025
Sept. 2, 2025
Sept. 2, 2025
Meine Traumreise nach Deutschland mit einer Million Euro
Wenn ich eine Million Euros hätte, würde ich nach Deutschland reisen, damit ich viele Städte in diesem Land besuchen kann. Zum Beispiel möchte ich nach Stuttgart, Köln und Düsseldorf, zumal ich diese deutschen Städte besuchen möchte. Wenn ich an der Cornell-Universität war, habe ich mit eigenen Deutschen aus Stuttgart, Köln und Düsseldorf gesprochen, besonders wenn es montags einen Sprachcafé gab. Sie waren charmant und herzlich, zumal ich Anfänger war. Außerdem hab es ein Masterstudent Hans, der hilft mir mit meinem Deutsch. Er erklärte mir deutsche Grammatik, Wörter und Etymologie. Dank ihm habe ich Deutsch nicht aufgegeben und ich habe mein Deutsch wirklich verbessert. Darüber hinaus habe zwei deutsche Bücher: „Tschick“ von Wolfgang Herrndorf und „Die Verwandlung“ von Franz Kafka. Wenn ich in Stuttgart bin, würde ich diese Bücher und andere interessante Bücher über Geschichte und Technologie kaufen.
Übrigens würde ich Köln und Düsseldorf besuchen, wenn es Fasching ist, weil es viele bunte Kostüme und Straßenfeste gibt. Zudem wäre es mein erste Mal, dass ich Fasching in Deutsch feire.
Ansonsten möchte ich mein Geld sparen, weil ich andere Dingen bezahlen möchte. Vielleicht würde ich die Investition des Geldes, aber ich weiß nicht, wofür ich mit meinem Geld benutzen würde.
Sept. 1, 2025
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Sept. 1, 2025
September
Autumn begins in September.
It becomes cool in the morning and evening.
Autumn is the harvest season.
There are many herbs on the mountain where I live.
Lycopodium is an herb and is recorded in Traditional Chinese Medical books.
It can be used to make soup to treat skin diseases.
I don't know much about Traditional Chinese Medicine, but my mom has studied it and has extensive knowledge of herbal medicine.
Sept. 1, 2025
Sept. 1, 2025
Finland
Why is Finland the happiest country?
How to understand Finnish happiness:
For the seventh year in a row, Finland has been ranked the happiest country in the world by the amount of snow that has fallen.
Finland even has snow in the summer.
Most of the northern hemisphere enters spring in April, it is still snowing heavily in Finland.
Most of the Finnish winter is spent in darkness, and the occasional glow in the sky is a green aurora.
In the Finnish summer you can embrace the sun 24 hours a day.
It's not dark in summer, it's not light in winter.
In Finland, looking up at the green aurora, riding a dog sled, it's much like a fairy tale.
Sept. 1, 2025
My Elementary School
The elementary school I attended was located behind my village, with only a small moat separating them.
The moat surrounded my village, and the only entrance to the village was in the south.
When the children in my village went to school, they would leave through the entrance, then walk along the moat to the north until they reached the school.
The elementary school served children from four surrounding villages, including mine.
It was a shabby, old school, and I don’t know when it was constructed or by whom.
It consisted of several one-story rooms connected together, made of mud, wood, and straw.
The tables and stools were also made of mud and wheat straw, constructed by students under the guidance of our teachers during summer breaks.
The school had about five classes, from grade one to grade five, with each grade having only one class of about thirty students.
There were only three teachers in the school: one state-paid teacher and two part-time teachers who were also farmers. They taught both Chinese and mathematics.
In winter, we liked to take a shortcut by crossing the moat, as the ice was solid enough for us to walk across safely.
I studied at the school from grade one to grade five, a total of five years, before moving on to junior high school in my hometown.
I assume the teachers from the school are no longer around, as they were quite old.
I also don’t know when the school closed.
Everything changes, and I am no exception.
Sept. 1, 2025
Acabo de ver una video sobre Nietzsche
Okk entonces vi una video (porque no comprendo su obra "más allá del bien y del mal") sobre su concepto de "superhombre" y es bastante interesante (Me encanto mucho Nietzshe su modo de pensar)...
Este concepto debe ser interpretado de la buena manero porque ser un "superhombre" no es tener mucho fuerzo o cosas en vinculo con el fisico.
Ser un Superhombre no este, sino es la superacion de su mismo en el aspecto moral.
Asi, un superhombre es capaz de se liberar de las limites imponado por la religion y entonces vivir solamente para el tras vida.
No, el superhombre vive para accumplir su vida y desea una cosa muy importante en la filosofia de Nietzshe : el eterno retorno.
Podemos buscar este en su obra maestra llamado "Así habló Zaratustra" que todavia no lei pero me parece muy interesante...
El eterno retorno es la idea que vamos a vivir nuestro vida de nuevo todavia y todavia y todivia...
Aunque puede ser extrano o triste, nos anima a vivir una vida lleno de gozo y a su maximum
Es solamente lo que comprendo de su video, pero no soy daccuerdo con este vision porque dependiendo de si crees en Dios o no, este vision puede no ser valido... no sabe si me hago comprender.
Voy a parar aqui...
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Schwierigkeiten bei der deutsche Sprache
Die deutsche Sprache hat viel mehr Wörter in Vergleich zu Spanisch. Spanisch hat nur 93,000 Wörter, Deutsch aber mehr als 5 Millionen. Der Unterschied ist riesig. Bei manchen Gelegenheiten finde ich es toll und interessant, weil sie sehr präzise ist, aber als jemand, der die Sprache lernt, finde ich es gleichzeitig lästig. Ich habe viele Beispiele, dies ist eine: die Wörter bedecken, zudecken und verdecken, die ähnlichen sind, besteht trotzdem auf Spanisch nur ein Wort, das beschreibt dasselbe und überraschenderweise auch zuhalten und verstopfen. Auf der anderen Seite haben wir die Artikel der, die und das, auf Spanisch besteht nur zwei. Der schlimmsten ist, dass es nicht nur der, die und das ist, sondern auch die Deklination des Artikels. Dazu noch hinzufügen die Präpositionen. Wenn ich Falsch die Präposition verwende, alles andere Falsch werden.
Sept. 1, 2025
C'è poca varietà del sushi in Italia.
Ci sono pochi tipi di pesce crudo per il sushi in Italia.
Ci sono anche dei ristoranti che hanno solo il tonno, il salmone e il branzino.
Penso che sia molto strano perché se ci andassi al sud Italia, ci sarebbe anche il calamaro e il riccio di mare.
Il mio preferito del sushi in Giappone è il nighiri di tsubugai( un tipo della lumaca di mare).
Sept. 1, 2025
Sept. 1, 2025
Xícara de chá
primeiramente, enche a chaleira com água
em segundo, ferva a chaleira
quando a chaleira está terminando, pegue uma xícara.
Coloque um chá em saquinho na xícara e um pouco de açúcar se você gosta - eu gosto de uma colher de chá em meu chá.
derrame a água quente na xícara e mexe
então você pode adicionar leite à sua preferência
certifique-se de que você remover o chá em saquinho antes de você beber.
Sept. 1, 2025
Frasi semplici per fare le flashcard - parte cinque
In un istante ha trovato il potere di opporsi a chi voleva strappargli il sogno.
Poiché era capitato un imprevisto, abbiamo aspettato sino a sera.
All’orizzonte c’era addirittura una tempesta, ma lui sembrava tranquillo e sano.
Capita che la vita ti strappi qualcosa, eppure, sino alla fine, bisogna guardare l’orizzonte con un cuore sano.
Nella pianura si sente il ritmo lento della natura, che molti ammirano in silenzio.
L’imperatore volle fondare una città sul margine del fiume.
Quando scoppiò la guerra, la vecchia concezione di pace crollò all’improvviso.
Sul margine della pianura, gli abitanti ammiravano il tramonto come un rito dal ritmo antico.
La concezione dell’imperatore era chiara: fondare un impero stabile, nonostante i conflitti potessero scoppiare.
Sept. 1, 2025
Nowadays,more and more children enjoy and play video games.
*Note:I am practicing writing ielt task 2.Could you fix the essay to make it more formal and academic?
Nowadays,an amount of children who spends more time on playing video games for entertaining is raising.This essay will discuss both sides.
One advantage of children playing video games is that they have more various entertaining options.This mean that they can have fun even if they don’t have partners to play with.For example,some parents are busy and don’t have time to play with their children so they can give the children a phone.It makes the children don’t mess up a house and also playing indoor can reduce the risk of kidnapping.
On the other hand,spending more time on playing video games means less time for physical activities.This mean that children will be less active,which is a healthy trait at their age.Little physical activities can lead to weak immune system.For instance,the children who have excessive screen time are getting illness when the weather changes easier than who don’t.Another negative consequence is that children will be emotionally detached from their families.This mean that they spend little time on family activities.For example,they focus on the video games and neglect the conversation of family members.
In conclusion,the downside of children playing video games is more concerned than the benefit.Because even if video games have some good points but they are almost temporary solutions for parents who want their kids play quietly without making trouble. But the disanvantage especially when children play video games for significant amount of time will badly effect their personality on later life.
Sept. 1, 2025
Work-life Balance
Der Anteil der Menschen, die an psychischen Erkrankungen leiden, nimmt kontinuierlich zu und die exzessive Arbeit scheint, dabei eine Rolle zu spielen. Deswegen frage ich mich: Wie viel Arbeit ist eigentlich zu viel? Wie kann man einen ausgewogenen Lebensstil haben ?
Der hohe Arbeitsdruck hat laut der Wissenschaft viele negativen Konsequenzen zur Folge, er kann nämlich zum Stress und einer psychischen Belastung führen.Dieser Stress löst dann die Ausschüttung von verschiedenen Stress Hormonen aus, was dauerhaft das Immunsystem schwächt und zu zahlreichen Erkrankungen wie Depression, Herz-Kreislauf-Erkrankungen und krebs führt. Außerdem kann ein hoher Arbeitsdruck zu sogenannten „ Burnout „ beitragen.Darüber hinaus wirkt sich dieser Druck negativ auf die erbrachte Leistung aus.Eine Work-life Balance hingegen bringt viele positive Folgen mit sich. Als Bespiel lassen sich Folgende anführen: Arbeitnehmer können mehr Zeit mit Familien und Freunden verbringen, sie haben außerdem mehr Zeit für ihre Freizeiten,Zudem erbringen sie auch eine bessere Leistung bei der Arbeit. Arbeitgeber spielen natürlich bei dieser Work-life Balance eine entscheide Rolle dadurch, dass sie zum Bespiel die Arbeitnehmer nicht überfordern. Außerdem ist es ratsam,flexible Arbeitszeiten und Home-Office-Möglichkeiten zur Verfügung zu stellen. Außer Work-life Balance fördern regelmäßige Bewegung und eine gesunde Ernährung einen ausgewogenen Lebensstil. Zudem ist is empfehlenswert, sich Auszeiten zu gönnen, um Erschöpfung und psychische Belastungen zu vermeiden.