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Aug. 24, 2025
Story of Ratnag Part 26
In a hospital whose name was R-K Hospital, a lady was crying. Her husband told her, "Everything happens through God's plan. We can't do anything; we can't change our destiny. We must try our best and be patient; everything will be okay." Then the lady replied, "How can a mother be patient when her children are in danger?" At this time, a nurse came near them and said, "Sorry, Miss Anita, we can't save him." After hearing this, the lady got shocked and emotional and started crying loudly. After some time, she became senseless. Later, a nurse brought the dead body of the daughters of Miss Anita, who was named Bini, and said to Miss Anita's husband, "Please sign here and take the body." So, the lady's husband signed a document and was then ready to leave the place. Suddenly, the body have some movement, Upon seeing this, everyone was shocked, and suddenly, the dead person seemed to awaken. Everyone ran away from the place, fearing that it was a ghost."
Aug. 24, 2025
Aug. 24, 2025
Daily Life: Part 11
Today, I'm able to use the last words from the previous post. I hope I can be exposed to those words from the whole story so that I can arrange them. break my leg! Bob is an engineer from xx tech company. He responds to the Scrum area. One day, he got to percolate another company's system. He called his action a debut, and when he almost dug into the system, he entered the wrong riff, which means he can't get out of the system's safe zone. What a jerk just called out from another employee. They think Bob is sketchy! End of line, he got the dismissal.
Aug. 24, 2025
Aug. 24, 2025
Aug. 24, 2025
Technology
The last years Technology be a part of many things in our life. the Technology makes the life more easier and faster.
students can improve they level by watch educational videos , and find the information more quickly.
Technology also allows to cummonic with others in any time and any where. and there are many fields Technology help us in it like: business, entertainment, ect . Technology make our life better in several field , and we can't imagine our life without it .
Aug. 24, 2025
Stories Wanted (old excercise for B2 cambridge)
Jack and Pedro were trekking through the mountains on the first day of their holidays. School had just ended and they wanted to go on an adventure together before leaving for college.
They arrived at the foot of the mountain with their bikes early in the morning, when the sun was still shining over the town. However, as the boys started climbing, the clouds began to cover the sky. Jack and Pedro noticed the weather was changing as black clouds took away the light. It was going to rain soon. Jack thought they should find a shelter. After looking around for a few minutes, they found a cave and they hid there.
"Do you think we will see each other again?" Pedro whispered after sitting down on a cold rock.
Jack freezed at his question. He put down his backpack before answering. "I don't know"
Over the last year they talked a lot about what would happen when they would go to university. After graduation they never brought that up, though.
That day they just stayed next to each other, enjoying their last moments together and waiting for the rain to stop.
Aug. 24, 2025
Buenos dias, soy nuevo
Hola, hoy me desperté con ganas de practicar mi español. Me senté en frente de mi computadora y a través del teclado escribí en el buscador "como reforzar mi español". Primero me salieron clases paticulares, pero con una busqueda más profunda, encontré este sitio web. Cuando intenté crear mi usuario, escribí simplemente "akira" como nombre, pero me dió que ya se está usando por alguien. Después probé modificarlo, al probarlo me salió este mismo mensaje que recibí la primera vez. "The username is already being used" o algo de este tipo. Al final, lo unico que debía haber hecho fue refrescar la página e intentar de nuevo...
Aug. 24, 2025
Устные детские истории
Когда я был ребёнком, мать мне часто рассказывала истории о своей деревне: истории о своей детстве и ещё старше, когда она сама не родилась.
Такие истории очень ценны, по моему мнению, потому что они не находятся в книгах по истории. Благодаря им я узнал моного о своих предках и жизни в эти другие времена. Я узнал много особенно о своей прапабушке, потому что она вырастила мою мать. Прабабушка также работала для «общественной помощи». Это было государственное учреждение, которое заботилось о сиротах или детях, родители которых не смогли заботиться о них. Учреждение доверяло таких детей женщинам за город, как прабабушка. Конечно прабабушка таже занималась сельскохвозяйнственными деятельностями.
Судя по опиаснию моей матери, прабабушка была очень добрая женщина. Она умерла перед моим рождением, но думаю, что мне бы нравилось знать её.
Aug. 24, 2025
Ballroom dance
I do ballroom dancing for 5-6 hour at week. During my childhood dream, but my mother did not support me. Recently I tried dancing with a trainer at a sports-club. And... It turned out that I'm talented in it. I feel pleasure when I'm dancing. In my life substantially increased feelings of pleasure. I'm currently learning the rumba. I love it!
Aug. 24, 2025
Review My Article Summary: Help Me Improve My Language and W
In the Eurozone, The bank is cautious about the influence on the interest-rates cut by the increasing pace of wages in the last three months, However still ranking lower than the end of the last year.
The European union officials is deliberating the impact of the U.S. tariffs on the inflation. Inside the Eurozone, Germany has gained a little pace while France continued to weaken. Activity in the U.K. has surged its higher in the year while still dealing with weakness in the country’s factory sector.
drops of millions has hit some European companies while Chinese manufacturers has become a threat to the employment in Eurozone due to the higher U.S. tariffs forcing them to find customers elsewhere.
Aug. 24, 2025
Uma Cidade Pequena
Hoje, nós fomos para uma cidade pequena no campo. A gente viu muitas lojas bonita que eram propriedade independente. Paramos para pegar café, há tivemos café e bolo, eu tive bolo de cenoura mas estilo britânico. No volta para casa o trânsito estava muito ruim.
Quando chegamos em casa, eu caí de sono no sofá e quando acordei nós pedimos pizza porque estávamos com preguiça de cozinhar.
Aug. 24, 2025
Aug. 24, 2025
My trip to Switzerland: Day 3, morning (part 1)
On the 3rd day of the trip, we went to Grindelwald. Grindelwald seemed to be one of popular sightseeing places in Switzerland; We saw far more tourists in the place among all the places we visited during this entire trip. The main area of the town around the main train station consists of a lot of commercial buildings for tourists and hikers such as souvenir shops, restaurants, and hotels. The area was vibrant with many tourists enjoying shopping, eating Swiss cuisines, and taking photos of great views of famous mountains encircling the town. There was one big main road running through the town. This road leads to many cable car stations spread throughout the town, each of which goes to a station built alongside or at the top of a different mountain. We took one of them and first went to Mittelhorn as we planned.
Aug. 24, 2025
Aug. 24, 2025
Der Flugunfall von Helios Airways 3
Normalerweise ist das Druckausgleichssystem im Flugzeug automatisch, aber im diesem Zeit war es manuell. Wenn der Luftdruck im Flugzeug zu niedrich ist, man das Bewusstsein verliert. In dieses Fall verloren beiden die Piloten das Bewusstsein, bevor sie bemerkt haben, dass der Luftdruck sinkte.
Die Person, die der Militärpilot i Cokpit gesehen hat, war ein einziger Flugbegleiter im diesem Flugzeug, der länger das Bewusstsein hielt als die Piloten. Er hatte eine Flugausbildung macht, aber vieleicht wegen der niedrige Luftdruck konnte auch er das Flugzeug nicht steuern.
Aug. 24, 2025
Aug. 24, 2025
Aug. 24, 2025
Freizeitparks
Als ich noch ein Kind war, liebte ich es, Freizeitparks mit meinen Eltern zu besuchen. Ich hatte nie eine Interesse an krassen Achterbahnen oder sehr starken Emotionen, sondern an Autoscooters und relativ beschaulichen Attraktionen. Alle Sommerferien verbrachte ich auf dem Land, meiner Oma im Garten helfend. Da schaute ich mir verschiedene Zeichentricks an und spielte mit Spielzeugautos, meine eigene Handlungen dazu ausdenkend. Außerdem mochte ich es, mit Freunden mit den Fahrrädern zu fahren und Spielzeugwaffen zu verwenden. Damals gab es keinerlei Problemen oder Sorgen, nur „Der König der Löwen” und Eis nach dem Mittagessen.
Aug. 24, 2025
Der Fluganfall von Helios Airways 2
Nach einer Weile ist jemand im Cockpit gekommen. Der Militärpilot sagte ihm mit einem Zeichen, er solle ihm folgen, aber der Mann machte das nicht. Das Flugzeug kreiste über dem Zielflughafen. Schließlich ist der Flugzeug aufgrand von Treibstoffmangel auf einem Hügel gefallen.
Im nächsten Post will ich dieses Anfalls Grund schreiben.
Aug. 24, 2025
Why are you studying English?
I want to be a citizen of the world. I'm not sure whether I can use English at work or not. If anything, I just would like to enjoy speaking with people in English around the world. However, as long as I study on desk, my world can't expand anymore. I think I have to make a move.
Aug. 24, 2025