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un problème sur ce site-web
Un problème que j'ai remarqué quand je corrige l'anglais des autres : Des autres commentateurs faites la surcorrection.
Je vois trop le phenomène où des gens corrigent quelque chose qui n'est même pas incorrecte. Soit le corrigeur ne comprend pas un autre dialecte (l'anglais américain vs. l'anglais anglais, par exemple) ; soit ... je ne sais pas, peut-être que le commentateur pense qu'il doit trouver QUELQUE CHOSE à corriger dans chaque phrase ? Ils ne peuvent pas imaginer des autres façons à exprimer la même idée ?
C'est surtout un problème pour des débutants d'une langue. Principalement, quand on est débutant, il n'est pas nécessaire de rendre chaque phrase 100% naturelle, comme un celle d'un locuteur natif. Pour des étudiants d'un niveau développé, oui, certainement, ces commentaires sont utiles. Mais pour quelqu'un d'un niveau débutant, trop de conseils sont plus déroutants qu'utiles. Il faut mieux de ne corriger que la grammaire de base pour que l'ecriteur puisse vraiment comprendre ses fautes.
Pour moi en français je ne suis plus débutante donc je serais ravie de recevoir des corrections plus détailées, mais je plains des débutants d'anglais qui reçoivent des conseils déroutants.
Aug. 27, 2025
Quand je suis stressée...
Quand je suis stressée par le travail ou ma vie générale, je commence à chercher des nouveaux cours auxquels je peux m'inscrire. Je ne suis plus étudiante, mais il y a beaucoup de cours pour adultes dans mes environs. Récemment je me suis inscrite à un cours de langue des signes (ce qui va commencer en mi-septembre).
Je suis également tentée par un cours de chinois et un cours de menuiserie. Mais le problème c'est que je suis déjà très occupée ! Le mardi j'assiste à un rendez-vous pour pratiquer mon français. Le jeudi j'ai une leçon de japonais en ligne. Le mardi matin, le vendredi matin, le samedi matin, le dimanche soir, j'ai des leçons du patinage à glace. Dans deux semaines mes lundis soirs auront le cours de langue des signes.
En plus de ça, moi et ma mère (avec qui j'habite) avons un chien jeune qui nécessite beaucoup d'attention. Et bien sûr le travail, lundi à vendredi.
J'ai trop de choses à faire. Ce n'est pas juste que je dois travailler ! Il reste tant de trucs intéressants à faire, à apprendre, à lire, à voir !
Aug. 27, 2025
『二つのスパイシーな会話』
(1)
場面： コーヒーハウス。そこは本屋とアートギャラリーも兼ねている。四人の友人が語り合っている。
ロン：（いたずらっぽく、考え深そうな表情で）ねえ、ちょっと思ったんだけど……僕たちって玉ねぎみたいじゃない？
レックス：（足を止め、純粋に興味を引かれた様子で）へえ、面白い視点だね。どういう意味？
人間はみんな多面的だって言うけどさ、確かに、そこから一歩踏み込んでる。
リス：（ゆっくりとうなずき、自分の哲学的な枠組みに結びつけながら）何が表層で、何が核心かっていう区別は、しばしば不明な。
もしかすると、存在そのものが、ヴィスワヴァ・シンボルスカが言うところの「完璧さの馬鹿らしさ」なのかもしれない。まるで一枚一枚の層が、それぞれ完結した存在の鞘であるかのように。
リンダ：（乾いた笑い声が唇から漏れる）不満の皮を剥ぐよりましじゃない？
少なくとも「完璧な愚かさ」なら、何が出てくるかは分かってるわ。
(2)
リンダ： （頭蓋骨の絵を見つめ、唇にかすかな笑みを浮かべて）このイメージ、瞑想にぴったりね。
レックス： （首を振り、ぞんざいに否定して）いや、ただの気を散らすものだよ。
本当の瞑想にふさわしいイメージなんて一つもない。
瞑想っていうのは、思考やイメージをすべて超えていくプロセスなんだ。
真の静けさの中には、映像も音も存在しない。
ロン： それって、ただの眠りみたいに聞こえるけど。何が違うの？
レックス： （ロンの方に向き直り、声を低く強めて）瞑想してみればわかる。
眠るために座るんじゃない、目覚めるために座るんだ。
すべての雑音や映像が消えたときに、残されているものを観察するんだよ。
Aug. 27, 2025
Un mensaje.
Hola Juana, ¿Cómo estás?
Sí, he encontrado un nuevo piso de mi abuela. Lo es un poco grande más que antes, tiene una cocina grande y todas las habitaciones son muy luminosas. El piso antiguo era muy oscuro porque no tenía la ventana. Los ojos de mi abuela son malos ahora, es que lo ha cambiado. ¿Te recuerdas? Cuando eramos pequeño, hemos jugando en una habitación de muy oscura. Luego tú lloró, porque tenías mucho miedo.
Entonces, ahora esta viviendo en la zona sur cerca de "GranCine", el precio del piso es 450 dólares por un mes. Además, delante del piso hay estación de buses, nos podemos ir a toda la ciudad. ¿Qué te parece?
Si hay más pregunta, me mandarás un mensaje por favor.
Hasta luego, un abrazo.
YUte
Aug. 27, 2025
Die könige Namen
Johann von England, dessen Spitzname "Ohneland" ist, gilt als der schlechteste König von England. Da hat keiner König danach das gleichen Name, deshalb heißt er einfach „Johann“.
Der derzeitige König von England heißt Karl, der gleich ist Karl I., der der einzige hingerichtet König auf englischer Geschichte ist. Ich wusste nicht, warum der aktuelle Karl den finsteren Namen heißt. Ich habe aber das vielleicht verstanden, wenn ich über den unglücklichen König nachgeschlagen habe.
Aug. 27, 2025
Warum Homeoffice gut ist
Meiner Meinung nach ist Homeoffice exzellent, deshalb kann man es nach den eigenen Wünschen gestalten. Zum Beispiel konnte ich als Projektmanager bei Wells Fargo mein Homeoffice in der Nähe meines Bettes einrichten, zumal ich um 8:30 Uhr aufwachte. Besonders praktisch war, dass es einfacher war, mein Homeoffice im Schlafzimmer einzurichten, als im Wohnzimmer oder in der Küche.
Aug. 27, 2025
Daily Life: Part 12
Wow! Recently, I have been working on my study schedule. Ends up, I got a list that helps me learn English. I hope it can serve me. OK, I'm going to put a topic in the Native text. I decided to respond to this topic. You can point out my fault. Here we go!
I agree with Andrew's idea, since we all know, Today, we have a variety of applications as TikTok, Facebook, Instagram, etc., so that we are totally transparent. Everything on the app shared the same thing as the news. Therefore, what we know everything is equal. seconds, we use home appliances from other countries, since we use other countries' stuff, we are familiar with those products. It would help us count the differences. Also, there is someone who is stereotypical, like Claire mentioned, but that's a little precent in the whole world. In conclusion, I believe differences are becoming fewer.
😊 I know this isn't for me, but I believe I will be a better man because of all of your helping!
Aug. 27, 2025
Das Abenteuer des Seemanns Teil 1
Gregory ist in Puerto Rico gestern angekommen. Warum? Weil, Gregory ein Seemanns ist. Er hat die sieben Meere gesegelt. Er segelt weil er bleibt in eins Ort nicht gern. Immer wenn er bleibt im eins Ort zu lange, er wird traurig. Gregory ist 24 Jahre alt – sehr jung für einen vollendeten Seemann. Er ist 1,89 m groß, mit kurzen braunen Haaren. Er ist sehr intelligent und lustig, aber ein bisschen angstlich.
Am morgen, er segelt nach Africa am die Schiff, die "Daybreaker." Die Kapitänin um die Daybreaker heißt Kapitänin Monique, aber er hat sie nicht getroffen. Er wird sie am Morgen treffen. Er schläft in einem Hotel. Es war ein sehr schlecht Hotel. Es war schimmelig und hat Ratten. Die Essen war auch schimmelig, so Gregor isst nicht Abendessen oder Frühstück. Er hat viel Hunge wann er geht nach den docks zu treffen Kaptianin Monique und sieht die Daybreaker...
Forgesetzt werden...
Aug. 27, 2025
The Bright Side of Online Games オンラインゲームのプラス面
I used to think that playing online games was a pure waste of time. I believed there should be wiser ways of spending time, such as reading books or doing chores. However, after playing a couple of online games, my view completely changed.
First, playing online games can help you switch your mood. It's much better to immerse yourself in an online game rather than be haunted by negative thoughts. Online games don’t require any gadgets other than a smartphone or tablet. Unlike watching a movie or reading a book, you don’t have to make much effort to follow the story. Basically, they are free of charge and don’t cause any health problems unless you play excessively.
Online games can also motivate you to go out or exercise. Since I started playing an AR online game, taking a walk or riding a train has become a lot more fun. I’ve actually found myself becoming more active after I got into online games.
A life full of seriousness and tension is stressful. If online games can lighten your burden, I see no harm in playing them. I’ll keep enjoying online games wisely, without spending extra money.
Aug. 27, 2025
Sorghum Plant
Chinese sorghum is a popular crop planted in my hometown. It is not a staple crop in my area, and its grains don't taste good either, but it used to be a main source for farmers' livelihoods.
Chinese sorghum is very tall. It is taller than people. It's usually planted at the beginning of July and harvested at the end of October, or the beginning of November.
When I was a child, I heard a lot of scary stories related to the sorghum fields.
If sorghum is planted on two sides of a countryside road, after it grows to its full height, it always feels scary to walk along the road. You never know what will jump out from the sorghum fields. Beasts? Ghosts? Or bad guys?
However, Chinese sorghum is very useful. Its leaves can be used to feed livestock, and its stalks can be used to make mats. The sorghum stalk mats can be used to build houses, make beds and walls, and can be used to dry some agricultural products outside.
The sorghum panicles can be used to make brooms and a kind of cleaning tool used in the kitchen. The sorghum peduncles can be used to make pot lids, steamed bun baskets and other daily - use items. So it seems all parts of the sorghum are treasures.
However, people in my area rarely plant Chinese sorghum nowadays. I guess the reason might be that Chinese sorghum is only a coarse grain, and since living conditions have improved a lot, they don't need to eat sorghum or make their daily - use items from sorghum.
I saw some farmers still planting sorghum, but it is not the one farmers planted in the past. Instead, it's a kind of sorghum that is shorter than the one in the past. They plant the sorghum for alcohol factories to make liquor.
Aug. 27, 2025
Aug. 27, 2025
Tanjiro and Giyu From Demon Slayer (140)
I'm going to write about Tanjiro and Giyu from the anime Demon Slayer.
Tanjiro is the main character from the Demon Slayer.
His mother, sisters, and brothers are killed by man-eating demons.
Only one sister Nezuko is survived.
He gets panicked, but immediately, he runs carrying Nezuko on his back to see the doctor.
But then, Nezuko suddenly tries to bite him.
She is somehow transformed into a demon.
When Tanjiro is attacked by Nezuko, Giyu shows up and saves him.
This is how Tanjiro meets Giyu.
Aug. 27, 2025
Aug. 27, 2025
8 Hours of Sleeping
This one is not negociable. The benefits of sleeping correctly can reproduced by any other mean. I often listen about guys who claim that can work perfectly and as usual with 4 or 5 hours of sleep. But the brain needs the correct amount and quality of rest to fully recover. There are a couple of habits related with improving this crucial area, I'll cover them in the next writings.
Good night!
Aug. 27, 2025
Aug. 27, 2025
Aug. 26, 2025
About Yesterday
Yesterday ım learned ı didint take any unıversty. Its mean ı have to study one more year for Türkiye university exam. Actually its makes me really sad and nervous ı cant do anything yesterday from think all of thinks. I was thinked go to another abroad üniversty but probably i cant take visa f also euro and dollar is expensive one euro is more than 40 lira i am not rich at all axtually im not rich any i have no money. Also i am not sucsessful student at all im a normal student and that makes my chances of studying abroad even more impossble. This summer i was hopefully i was try to learned english , i was improve myself, i was learned other cultures . Not the traviling i was read and watch the videos. My all hopes are gone i dont want do anything. This is not the end of the world i know also i dont want to find excuse for the not working like unseccesful people but i dont do it on purpose. Im not sad only for me actually ım prepared for this result i was thinkig i have to study again but other students had to go to universities with lower scorest than their exam results. I will live same thinks and i scare of all thinks.
Aug. 26, 2025
Aug. 26, 2025
Aug. 26, 2025
Aug. 26, 2025
尊敬する有名人
下の文法や表現を使って、「私は尊敬する有名人」という題で作文を書きなさい。（300〜400字）
- 名詞修飾
- 「（〜によると）〜そうだ」「らしい」
私が尊敬する有名人はルイスハミルトンというF1レーサーです。何回もF1で優勝しました。記者によると厳しくて健康にいい習慣を作るそうです。生活は忙しいらしいのに、優しい人らしいです。たとえば、厳しい国に行く時、LGBTQの権利について発言します。それに、インタビューをする時冷静な声を使います。実は、私の一番好きなレーサーはハミルトンじゃなくてピアストリですけど一番尊敬する人はハミルトンです。でも、ハミルトンは長年になったからすぐF1を辞めると思うから、ピアストリに支持するつもりです。多分F1の後、彼は良いことをし続けると思っています。今、女の子たちにレーサーになることを促しています。そのことを続けるそうです。
Aug. 26, 2025
Das Gehalt
Seit einigen Wochen wiederholt mein Freund einen bestimmten Satz, der wir jetzt lustig finden: "wenn ich das Gehalt erhalten, werden wir es kaufen".
Ich erkläre. Wir leben in Deutschland seit anderhalb Jahr, und seitdem haben wir hier mit unseren Sparnisse und Gelehien gewohnen, bis letzten Monat. Mein Freund hat am 15. August mit der Arbeit angefangen. Er hat, wie erwartet, nur hälfte des Gehalt bekommen, deswegen konnten wir nur die wichtigste wie die Miete und den Einkaufen bezahlen. Wir haben natürlich andere Bedürfnisse. Also, gestern habe ich gesagt: "meine Liebe, ich habe viel gelaufen und deswegen habe ich Schmerzen in der Ferße", worauf er antwortete: "Keine Sorge, wenn ich das Gehalt erhalten, werde ich dir eine Sportschuh kaufen". Wir haben diesen Ausdruck in vielen anderen Situationen, sowohl für Dinge, die dringend sind, als auch für Dinge, die nicht, dass wir jetzt denken, dass das Gehalt nicht genug wird. Vor kurzem habe ich nur gesagt: "wir brauchen" … und wir haben sofort gelacht. Wir wussten die Antwort: "wenn ich das Gehalt erhalten..."
Aug. 26, 2025
Votos de matrimonio
¡Hola! Por favor ayudame con mis votos matrimoniales - tengo un prometido catracho.
I remember you once told me, “I always wanted to find a girl like you.” And I joked back, “You always wanted to find an Asian gringa from Baltimore?” And you said, casually but earnestly, “No, I’ve always wanted to find someone I can be myself with.”
And that really touched me. It was such a sweet and genuine thing to say. And I realized that I felt the same. With you, I can be my true self. I know that, no matter what, you’ll accept me and appreciate me. Even when I’m driving you crazy, you love me. And I know this is true because it’s the same for me. Even when you’re driving me crazy, I love you. And you drive me crazy a lot.
Recuerdo, una vez, me lo dijiste, “Siempre yo quería encontrar una mujer como tú.” Y yo bromeé de vuelta, “Siempre querías encontrar una gringa Asiática de Baltimore?” Y tú, con facilidad y sinceridad, dijiste, “No, siempre quería encontrar a alguien con quien pudiera ser yo mismo.”
Y eso me conmovió tanto. Eso fue muy tierno, muy genuino. Y me di cuenta que sentí lo mismo. Contigo, puedo ser mi verdadera yo. Sé que, no importa qué, me aceptas y me aprecias. Incluso cuando te estoy volviendo loco, me amas. Lo sé esto porque siento lo mismo. Incluso cuando me estas volviendo loco, te amo. Y a veces tu me vuelves loco en puta.
There’s a short story I like, it’s called El Mundo. I’m going to read it to you now, first in the original Spanish, and then I’ll translate.
Hay un microcuento que me gusta que se llama El Mundo. Voy a leerlo ahora.
El mundo es un mar de fueguitos. Cada persona brilla con luz propia entre todas las demás. No hay dos fuegos iguales. Hay fuegos grandes y fuegos chicos y fuegos de todos los colores. Hay gente de fuego sereno, que ni se entera del viento, y gente de fuego loco, que llena el aire de chispas. Algunos fuegos, fuegos bobos, no alumbran ni queman; pero otros arden la vida con tantas ganas que no se puede mirarlos sin parpadear, y quien se acerca, se enciende.
Por supuesto tú tienes un fuego muy loco. Pero tu fuego alumbra mi vida y me guarda caliente, y ojalá mi fuego haga lo mismo para tí. Aunque ardamos, ardemos brillos juntos.
The world is an ocean of little fires. Each person shines with their own light among the others. No two fires are alike. There are big fires and little fires and fires of all colors. There are people with calm fires that don’t even notice the wind, and people with crazy fires, filling the air with sparks. Some fires, silly fires, don’t light or burn, while others burn with so much passion that you can’t look at them without blinking, and whoever comes close catches fire.
Obviously you have a crazy fire. But your fire lights up my life and keeps me warm, and I hope my fire does the same for you. Even if we burn, we'll burn bright together.
I love you. Te amo.
I can’t wait to spend my life with you. No puedo esperar pasar el resto de mi vida contigo. Siñá nagúrabahan nasügürüni sun nibágari buma.
Aug. 26, 2025
Aug. 26, 2025
Sesame Plant
Sesame is a popular crop in my hometown, but people don’t plant it on large farmlands as it is not a staple crop in my area.
People usually sow sesame at the beginning of June after harvesting wheat.
The sesame flower is white. We have an old saying about it: “Sesame flowers grow higher with each joint,” which means things are getting better and better.
Sesame leaves are edible. People pick them, boil them, dry them, and then eat them as vegetables in their daily lives.
Sesame stalks are a very good source of firewood. Farmers use dried sesame stalks for their earthen pots.
We use sesame to make edible oil for our meals. It’s very fragrant, even when we use only a few drops in our dishes.
People also use sesame as an ingredient when making flour-based foods. Foods with added sesame are very fragrant and delicious.
The only drawback of sesame is that its yield is not high. That’s why it’s not a staple crop in my area.