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My Day
Hello, Today was a day of relax, I was learning somethings about my area of study (Technology) from different sources, and I put my focus in concepts that in the past was many confuses. In addition, I had a session of english, where I realized exercise of sentences in impersonal passive and personal passive. I have some problems because I don't understand absolutely this concepts and is a little difficult apply them in a real context
Aug. 20, 2025
Cyprus
Cyprus is located in the eastern Mediterranean Sea.
Since ancient times, it has been a transportation hub connecting the Middle East, Africa and Europe.
Cyprus Island was inhabited by humans about 8,000 years ago.
The Old Testament refers to Cyprus as Kittim.
Cyprus is mentioned five times in the New Testament, all of which are in Acts.
In the 12th century BC, the Greeks began to migrate to Cyprus.
As a result, Cyprus has been deeply influenced by Greek culture.
The official language of Cyprus is Greek, and English is also widely spoken.
Aug. 20, 2025
Aug. 20, 2025
Vorstellungsgespräch
Heute hatte ich ein Vorstellungsgespräch, um in einem Bäckerei zu arbeiten. Dies war mein viertes Vorstellungsgespräch, seit ich in Deutschland lebe. Letzte Jahr hatte ich meine erstes Vorstellungsgespräch, um in der Allgemeinchirurgie-Abteilung zu hospitieren und später als Ärztin zu arbeiten. Ich war damals echt nervös, trotzdem habe ich es geschafft, ich habe die Stelle als Hospitantin bekomen. Leider konnte ich dort nicht bleiben. Warum? Das ist andere Geschichte. Mein zweites und drittes Vorstellungsgespräch war am April dieses Jahr, um eine Stelle als Medizinfachangstellte zu bekommen, und später als Pflegerhelferin.
Wegen meiner vorheriger Erfahrungen war ich heute nicht zu nervös. Trotzdem fühlte ich mich unter Drück gesetzt, weil ich fast arbeiten musste. Ich musste überzeugend klingen, zumal ich eine kleine Berschränkung mit meiner Aufenhaltserlaubnis habe.
Am Ende ist es für mich gut gelaufen! :D
Aug. 20, 2025
Aug. 20, 2025
Aug. 20, 2025
Aug. 20, 2025
Rutin
Hi, this is first post me . I started to new learn. I just speak and write basic levels. Today is great day. Full tıme I worked and cooked then I walked seashore. I wanted to eat a taste and give an order. It is name KAPAKTA. ıt s very delicius and basic. I recommend it. Then I readed a book and I will sleep soon.
Aug. 20, 2025
Painting my bedroom
Three weeks ago, my mother was laying on my bed next to me because we were talking about something not really important. When we ended up the conversation she started looking all my bedroom really focused and she found out that it was really dirty, specially the walls.
Since that moment, my mother has told me that we would have to paint all my walls soon.
Today was the marked day and she made all my family work for her caprice, why do I have to do it? I can live without having my room perfectly.
My dad play the worse role, he made a really big effort today. Poor of him!
Even so, we finally paint all the room.
If you are interested in the results, my bedroom's walls were yellow and now are white.
Aug. 20, 2025
Aug. 20, 2025
Aug. 20, 2025
Aug. 20, 2025
¿Qué se necesita hacer para aprender una lengua extranjera?
Hay muchas cosas básicas que se necesitan para empezar a aprender una lengua extranjera, como un libro de texto, un profesor bueno, o simplemente las ganas. Sin embargo, pienso que lo principal es tener mucha paciencia. Todos los que hemos empezado con un nuevo idioma como adultos, sabemos que los principios son muy duros. A pesar de que tenemos muchas ganas y dedicamos mucho tiempo para mejorar, no sabemos muchas palabras y nos cuesta hablar o escribir. Hay muchos videos en youtube que alegan que con un método maravilla los estudiantes llegarán a nivel B2 en un año. Pienso que son exagerados. Todos queremos mejorar rápidamente, pero pienso que no hay manera de acelerar el aprendizaje. Así que se necesita mucha paciencia y regularidad.
Aug. 20, 2025
Что я делаю каждый день?
Каждый день я пишу маленький текст на этом сайте и это мне очень помогает прогрессировать в изучении различных языков, котоыми я хочу овладеть. Обычно я всегда думаю о своем еждневном тексте, но сейчас вечер у меня и я всё ещё не написал ничего! Вот, это мой сегодняшний текст! Я горжусь том, что у меня больше, чем 200 последовательных публкикаций без перерыва. Для языков я всегда очень мотивирован! Вам тоже, уважаемые корректоры, желаю много успеха в изучении ваших языков.
Aug. 20, 2025
Las marimbas
Amoche hubo un concierto en un parque no muy lejos de mi casa. En el verano hace buen tiempo y los días son largos, así que, caminé 30 minutos hasta el parque. Llevé una manta para sentarme en la hierba. Había cuatro músicos tocando dos marimbas. No sé mucho sobre este instrumento, pero según Wikipédia, vien de África y pertenece a la familia de la percusión. Me gustó el sonido que producía. Disfruté la noche.
Aug. 20, 2025
Starting Here
Hello, everyone!
This is my first time writing on this website, my intention with this is to improve my English. I live in Brasil and work from a multinacional company, so I use English a lot. When people are talking in English I undestand almost 100% of what they say, but I'm still insecureted with speaking and writing.
Hope this app can help me with this.
Thank you all!
Aug. 20, 2025
Les marimbas
Hier soir, il y avait un concert dans un parc pas loins de chez moi. En été , il fait beau et les jours sont longs, alors j’ai marché les trente minutes au parc. J’ai apporté une couverture pour m’asseoir sur l’herbe. Il y avait quatre musiciens jouaient deux marimbas. Je ne sais pas grand-chose sur cet instrument, mais d’après Wikipédia, il vient d’Afrique et fait partie de la famille des percussions. J’ai aimé beaucoup le son qu’il produisait. J’ai apprécié la soirée.
Aug. 20, 2025
Story of Ratnag Part 22
The scene shifts to a village named Kadum, where some people are crying beside the dead body of a boy.
The boy had been playing in the garden when suddenly a snake bit his foot. Due to the venom, the boy became unconscious. Unfortunately, by the time he was taken to the hospital, he was declared dead. His family brought back the body, and they were preparing it for cremation.
When they placed the body on the wooden pyre to burn it, something strange happened. Just as the firewood was arranged, the boy’s body suddenly moved. People nearby were shocked.
One person exclaimed, “Oh my God! A dead person came alive, how is this possible?” Another villager, Kumar, said in a frightened voice, “I think he is a ghost!”
But then a lady rushed to the boy and asked, “Rishu, are you alright?” The boy opened his eyes, and everyone, relieved, said, “Thank God!”
Aug. 20, 2025
Aug. 20, 2025
食べ物について
皆さん、こんにちは。ブライアンです。今日の作文は食べ物についてです。
私は好きな食べ物がたくさんありますよ。日本の食べ物はもちろん好きですが、メキシコ料理やイタリア料理もとても好きです。
好きなレストランは近い寿司屋です。弁当をいつも食べます。また、メキシコ料理の移動販売者に行くのが好きです。海で色々な移動販売者がいつもあります。今、私はビリアタコスが欲しいですよ！
デザートも好きです。アイスクリム、カンノーリ、そして、ピーナッツバターチョコレートの味が大好きです。
皆さんはどんな食べ物が好きですか。今日はここまでです。次の時にまた会いましょう。最後まで読んでくれてありがとうございます。じゃあねー。
Aug. 20, 2025
ニュースの記事の翻訳 八月二十日
映画「国宝（こくほう）」の人気（にんき）が続（つづ）いています。
この映画は、歌舞伎（歌舞伎）の世界に入（はい）った男（おとこ）の子が国（くに）が認（みと）めた人間国宝（にんげんこくほう）になる話です。
十七日までに七四七万人（まんにん）がこの映画を見ました。映画の収入は一零五億円（おくえん）になりました。
アニメ以外（いがい）の日本の映画は、二十二年の間、収入が一零零億円（おくえん）になっていませんでした。
この映画を見て歌舞伎（かぶき）を見に行く人も増（ふ）えています。
PS：
我怎么没有听过这个电影？是最近新出的电影吗？我只关注到《死神来了5》和好像有个柯南的新电影要上映。
Aug. 20, 2025
Which grammatical construction is correct?
"You're learning English all summer holidays for IELTS" or "You study English all summer holidays to prepare for IELTS". One give me a translator, ane i try to create myself. Maybe i can practise my English with creating short tik-tok videos, just for a lark. I can use simple phrases that i would never create in Russian language, cause if you know the language very well and use it like an academic - you can't create a silly videos, because your facepalm can kill you first before you put mouse on "click"
Aug. 20, 2025
Lebanon
Lebanon is one of the few countries that retains its biblical name.
Like Israel, Lebanon is a country mentioned in the Bible over and over again.
Since ancient times, the region has been famous for its timber production, most of all, cedar wood, which reportedly was used to build King Solomon's Temple.
The cedar has since become Lebanon's national emblem and even appears on its flag.
Arabic is the country's official language, while French and English are widely spoken.
In recent years, refugees from Syria have flooded into Lebanon.
Lebanon suffers from a lack of electricity and frequent blackouts.
Snow falls in Lebanon in winter, and snow in the mountains can last for nearly half a year.
There are many ski resorts in the northern snowy mountains, attracting a large number of tourists.