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La meilleure série
J'adore la serie Futurama, c'est un dessin animé americain qui est sorti il y a plus de vingt ans.
La creator est Matt Groening qui a aussi créé les simpsons, mais Futurama est différente parce que le genre est sci-fi, et les personnages sont dans le futur distant.
Je peux me détendre quand je la regarde, le rhythme est assez lent, les blagues sont drole et l'écriture est intelligente.
Jan. 27, 2025
Working on my grammar
Hello, my name is Jacky and I am currently 19 years old. I live in Germany and went to school for my A-levels until march 2024. After that I started an apprenticeship as a insurance sales woman, but i stopped after 3 months because the job wasn`t for me. Since last year november I'm jobless and i have been trying to figure out what to do with my life. This may be turning into some kind of vent but it feels kind of freeing to just write about my problems and also do something to improve my english skills. I've experienced a lot of negative thoughts throughout the months and I'm frantically trying to find professional help, but that seems pointless. They either have no free appointments or a waitlist of 6 months and more, which really gets on my nerves. Moreover I feel like my mental health is slowly breaking apart again (I have had problems since I was 13, so I am scared of falling into that hole again) and it feels like I am trapped in my own thoughts that I can't escape. So many things happened in the past 6 years, the last 2 especially, so I don't know how I can continue. My parents got divorced in May 2023 out of the blue and my mum, the person that watched me grow up, moved out and left me in big disappointment, since she cheated on my father and didn't even tell me nor my siblings. I was hurt, devastated and felt like she was leaving me. I did not have a good connection with my father since he was working from 6am to 8pm most of the days, so i never got to share my childhood with him. When we moved in 2016 into our new home, he worked from home but because of my brother, who was born in 2015, he mostly spent time with him and my little sister (born in 2008). So I was kinda the left out or left behind child, especially after the divorce because my siblings and I were devastated, but my father only noticed their feelings, not mine. He does not know what I went through the past 2 years and it hurts me so bad that it seems like I can't talk to anyone. I just want him to show the same affection to me like he shows to my siblings and realize that it hurt me too. i just want him to see how hurt I am, how confused and fed up I am with my feelings. I just want to be seen and get help and treated equally, because I am his daughter too and just because I'm the oldest does not mean I am less hurt.
Jan. 27, 2025
Hallo LangCorrect!
Ich heisse Nasrul Huda und Ich komme aus Indien. Ich lebe in Hamburg und bin ein MasterStudent an der Universität Hamburg. Ich studiere Data Science und Künstlicher Intelliganz. Ich bin hier, um mein Deutsch zu üben. Ich habe morgen eine Deutschprüfung. Wünscht mir Glück!
Jan. 27, 2025
Jan. 27, 2025
Jan. 27, 2025
Jan. 27, 2025
Jan. 27, 2025
Jour 50
J'ai une amie qui s'appelle P.C.
Elle a deux enfants et elle a trente ans. Je ne suis pas sûre si elle a trente, trente et un, ou même trente-deux ans, haha.
Nous nous sommes rencontrées sur une application sociale l'année dernière.
Quand je lui ai parlé de ma situation au travail, elle est venue me voir avec des fleurs et des chocolats.
Aujourd'hui, nous sommes allées en ville dans un mall pour jouer à un jeu qui s'appelle le bowling.
Pendant le jeu, nous avons ri, bavardé et bu des cocktails (je ne sais pas comment on dit ça en français).
Après, nous avons marché dans la rue, bras dessus bras dessous.
Elle avait un dîner avec son fiancé et ses collègues, donc nous avons quitté la ville avant le coucher du soleil.
Merci à Dieu pour l'amitié de P.C.
Jan. 27, 2025
Lunedì 27 gennaio
Sono esausta dopo aver cercato di capire una nozione grammaticale italiana. Ho passato ben più di 4 ore a capirla, ma credo di avercela fatta!
Ci sono cose che non sembrano avere senso, però si dice che si pensi meglio dopo un sonno rilassante. Non vedo l'ora di andare a letto! Mi sembra di essere invecchiata di 10 anni oggi.
Mi restano altre 3 ore di lavoro e spero che vada tutto bene per il resto della giornata. Sono grata di essere riuscita a studiare e a sbrigare le faccende a tutti i costi, però il prezzo è stata la mia tranquillità.
Jan. 27, 2025
Jan. 27, 2025
The snow
When I was kid, i always tried to wondering how the snow can be. In some movies, the snow always look perfect; the perfect white color, the cold weather and everything. When I saw the snow the first time, I had the same expectation like a kid during Christmas period. After some hours, I discover the snow can be dirt. The perfect white become something I never think. Since that day, I understand white can be dirty more.
Jan. 27, 2025
Jan. 27, 2025
Un juego de cartas: "la guerra"
La guerra es un juego de cartas muy sencillo que se juega normalmente con dos jugadores, pero es posible jugar con más personas.
El objetivo es muy simple: ganar todas las cartas de sus oponentes.
Primero, baraja bien las cartas.
Da las cartas para que cada jugador tenga el mismo número de cartas. Cuando hay 2 jugadores, vas a utilizar toda la baraja.
Para jugar, cada jugador pone la primera carta de su baraja, sin verla.
El jugador que puso la carta más fuerte gana todas las cartas jugadas. Antes de empezar, todos deben ponerse de acuerdo con los otros jugadores si el as es la carta más o menos fuerte.
Si los jugadores ponen una carta de mismo valor, hay “guerra”. En este caso, cada jugador pone una carta escondida, y otra visible. El jugador con la carta más fuerte gana todas las cartas jugadas, incluidas las escondidas. Si las segundas cartas visibles todavía son iguales, hay “doble guerra” y cada jugador pone 2 cartas escondidas y otra visible…
Cuando un jugador no tenga más cartas, es eliminado.
El juego se termina cuando un jugador ha ganado todas las cartas de todos sus oponentes.
Jan. 27, 2025
80 일
지도자는 조직의 공동목표를 달성하기 위해 조직원을 이끄는 사람이다. 따라서 조직의 성공과 실패 결정에 매우 중요한 역할을 지도자가 있다고 할 수 있다. 그러면 진정한 지도자는 어떤 사람입니까? 지도자의 조건은 통솔력과 추진력을 생각한다. 첫째, 통솔력은 조직이 효율적으로 이끄는 능력이다. 이를 수해하려면 우리가 인재관리를 잘해야 하며 인재 발굴과 역량 개발에 노력해야 한다. 그리고 사람 마다의 능력에 맞는 열할을 결정하고 그역할을 잘 수행하도록 도와줍다. 다음 추진력은 목표를 나아가 효율적으로 안해하는 힘입니다. 그렇게 하기 위해 지도자이 뛰어난 능력하고 일을 추진할 때 방향도 명확해야 한다. 또한 지도자의 조건은 겸손, 도덕성, 책임감도 있다. 그러나 주의가 경계한 부분이 있다는 사실을 잊지 말아야 한다. 진정한 지도자이 조직을 이끄는 데 있어서 자의 독단적인 판단을 경계해야 한다. 따라서 구성원들의 의견을 수용하고 새로운 방향을 제시하기 위해서는 공감하고 소통하는 자세가 필요하다. 지금까지 우리는 지도자의 역할, 조건과 주의할점 정리한다. 진정한 지도자 되려면 주직구성원의 의견과 인격을 존중하며, 조직을 이끌고 동기를 부여하며 이끌어거는 능력이 필요하고 공감하고 소통하려는 태도가 필요하다.
Jan. 27, 2025
Jan. 27, 2025
Jan. 27, 2025
Jan. 27, 2025
Sentiments printaniers
Aujourd'hui, il fait super beau.
Le soleil brille et il fait 13 degrés.
À cette époque de l'année le temps est normalement mauvais et souvent il y a encore de la neige.
J'ai donc profité de cette chance et j'ai bu mon café sur la terrasse.
Comme je port un pull, c'est presque un peu trop chaud.
Plus tard, j'ai un rendez-vous près des montagnes.
Je m'en réjouis. Les jours comme aujourd'hui les paysages est magnifique.
Jan. 27, 2025
My Thougths About ChatGPT
I think that ChatGPT is a great tool, probably were the first AI tool for a lot of people. I use it a lot to boost my studies. I also pay for the premium subscription.
However, I also think that ChatGPT will be replaced for another app in some time, this because ChatGPT is really expensive for OpenAI maintain it, I'm not sure but ChatGPT isn't profitable yet.
In meanwhile another companies are trying to launch an app like ChatGPT with less cost and same results, and in my opinion it will be reached.
Jan. 27, 2025
Jan. 27, 2025
Monitor tour 2
The second part of the visit, it was three sake breweries. They are located not far away from where I live, I recently knew it. Participating in this tour was good since the tour bus was arranged so I did not have to worry about driving after tasting sake. Although we could not enter the production site, we could taste several cups of sake. Now is the season of new production of sake so they were busy. I appreciated that I could purchase the sake that was exclusively available in the breweries.
Jan. 27, 2025
Jan. 27, 2025
Jan. 27, 2025
Jan. 27, 2025
Aller au cinéma ou voir un film en ligne
Il est bien connu que certaines personnes qui préféraient visiter le cinéma parce que cette peut être une expérience relâchée pour une personne de partage avec leur amis et famille. Parallèlement, le cinéma on permet plus d’apprécier un film et on permet s’immerger pleinement dans l’histoire avec moins les distractions.
Cependant, il y a des raisons qui conduisent certains à penser que voir un film en ligne donne le même plaisir. Tout abord, aller au cinéma est souvent plus cher quand qu’on s’achète un film en ligne, sans le coûte de voyager, les rêpas, et les billets, donc les gens peuvent faire des économes. De plus, aller au cinéma peut prendre longtemps et beaucoup d’ennuis, alors que voir un film en ligne signifie qu’on peut reste à la maison, ce qui est plus facile. Dans le passé, la plupart de gens a seraient faisaient des efforts à sortir de voir un film, contre d’aujourd’hui où on a la privilège de regarder un film du la comfort de notre propre maison.
Tout bien considéré, je sens que l’avantages d’aller au cinéma dépasse les inconvénients et qu’aller au cinéma provire une expérience meilleure pour tout le monde
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