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Fremdsprache
Würde bei mir gefragt, welche Fremdsprache spreche ich. Morgen muss ich eine Antwort geben.
Als erste Fremdsprache habe ich Englisch in der Grundschule gelernt. In der 11 Klasse habe ich auch Französisch, trotzdem kann ich nicht mehr Französisch sprechen. Ich benutze die Sprache nicht und deswegen habe ich alles vergessen. Zur dieser Zeit habe ich bereits einen Japanischkurs besucht, aber zwei Sprachen gleichzeitig lernen, war anstrengend. Französisch war verpflichtend, aber Japanisch war nicht so. Deswegen konnte ich damals nicht Französisch aufhören, obwohl ich gewollt hätte. Als ich in der Universität war, habe ich mich für Japanisch entschieden, aber wegen meines Medizinstudium konnte ich Japanisch nicht weiterlernen. Ich finde das bedauerlich. Ich kann nicht nur Französisch sprechen, sondern auch Japanisch.
Jetzt lerne ich Deutsch. Ich wollte es einmal lernen. Die Sprache gefällt mir, aber es so ist schwierig ein C1-Niveu zu erreichen, finde ich, dass manchmal gefällt mir es nicht mehr (haha). Wenn ich noch Lust oder Nervenzellen noch übrig habe, möchte ich Italienisch lernen.
Aug. 11, 2025
Los incendios
Hola a todos
Ahora estoy haciendo El Camino de Santiago y estoy un poco preocupada hoy debido a los incendios. Cuando caminaba hoy no tenía Wifi, pero me dí cuenta de que los nubes eran oscuros y el cielo parecía un poco diferente en vez de los días pasados. No pensaba demasiado pero cuando llegué al pueblo y visté las noticias, oí sobre los incendios. Estoy un poco cerca y necesito viajar hacia el región donde están los incendios. Y también estoy un poco preocupada porque no quiero caminar debido a la calidad de aire. También, tengo un profesor quien tiene familia en el norte y son ancianos. Esto me molesta mucho porque ellos pueden necesitar a salir pero esto es difícil para los ancianos. No sé qué pasará pero vamos a ver mañana, vale?
Aug. 11, 2025
A Piece of English
While we earn a living, we also spend our entire lives. Is the gain and loss balanced? It's impossible to calculate. Some people are still striving desperately, while others are giving up voluntarily. Many times and many things, we really can't understand. But at least, I clearly know: what I like and what suits me.
Aug. 11, 2025
My Second, Even More Unconventional Hobby
In my last post I wrote about my first hobby, wich is playing an instrument, and how it affected all the different areas in my life. Now I want to introduce to you another passion I am following since I can remember. This hobby is called bowling. And I know what you're thinking - "Bowling isn't even that uncommon" but there is a big twist. In Europe, especially in germany and east of it, another type of bowling is played. It's actually the original version of it. The main differences are, that there are not 10, but 9 pins, the bowlingballs have no holes in them and a game is played by four sets via 30 attempts - 120 throws in total. Furthermore, there are a lot of rules that make this sport way harder than the US Version. I personally think it is a very great sport, even though it will probaply die out in the next few generations due to the lack of spectator appeal and the enourmous expenses such an alley has. But I will tell you, the feeling of playing a match 6 versus 6 - two duels at a time for 3 rounds wich at least last 1 hour each, and then winning, is the greatest feeling i've ever had. If you have the opportunity to experience it, do it!
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A Boring Day.
Hello.
Today I went to downtown with my niece to accompany her to her job interview.
We left a little bit late but in my motorcycle we arrived at time.
I was waiting for three hours about, finally she left the interview place and we go back to my house.
The interview was well but I think that she won't take the job because that company didn't offered her enough money.
I hop she can find a good job soon.
That is all.
Bye
Aug. 11, 2025
Grammar practice
1. Yesterday, I went (go) to the park with my friends.
2. She has never met (meet) a famous person before.
3. We took (take) a taxi because it was raining.
4. Look! I have just saw (see) a shooting star.
5. They had (have) lunch at 12:30 yesterday.
6. I’m so thirsty. I already drank (drink) two glasses of water.
7. He wrote (write) three books in his career so far.
8. My sister sent (send) me a message an hour ago.
9. We came (come) here every summer when we were kids.
10. She brought (bring) a cake for the party last night.
Aug. 11, 2025
A Piece of English
It is getting cool these few days. Before that it was really hot. I couldn't sleep without turning on the air conditioner.
Now it's 23 degrees Celsius. I am lying down on my bed without any covers and still feel very comfortable. I don't feel cold at all.
I remember I once got to know that the best temperature for human is between 17 and 23 degrees Celsius, which I believe is super true.
I don't know how long this kind of weather will last. I of course wish it would last forever.
Well, it's another piece of English. I've written three pieces of this kind of English already after I woke up.
Now it's 2:46 in the early morning. I think it's time to stop writing and try to fall asleep again.
Aug. 11, 2025
La politique
Personne n'est illégal. Être méchant aux gens qui ont besoin de l'aide, ne fera pas notre vie plus facile. Il ne faut pas donner le blâme aux personnes. Je connais plusieurs cases où les enfants qui habitent à l'Allemagne depuis quelque années et qui visitent l'école, étaient déporté. Je ne peux pas expresser combien c'est triste.
Aug. 11, 2025
A piece of English
It was a little past one o'clock at night when I woke up because I felt like peeing.
I couldn't fall asleep again. I tried to write some of my thoughts in English and record this case.
I don't know if I can fall asleep again before dawn. If I can't, I'm worried about the performance I'll do tomorrow.
Hopefully, I will fall asleep soon and I will be as energetic as I was during those days when I had a good sleep.
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Aug. 11, 2025
Futbol fantasia
Estoy emocionado por esta temporada de fútbol fantasía. Es una actividad que disfruto mucho, y es un juego de estrategia y de azar. Me gustan mucho los juegos de azar, como el Blackjack y el Póker. Siento una gran emoción cada vez que juego. En cuanto a fútbol fantasía, tengo muchos equipos con jugadores diferentes, y por eso mirar los partidos los domingos es muy divertido. Aunque sé que no seré un jugador profesional en un deporte, es suficiente jugar a los deportes de fantasía. Mis padres no me permiten participar en juegos de azar con dinero real, así que tengo que apostar con dinero ficticio. No es tan divertido, pero está bien. Quisiera asistir a un partido de fútbol americano, particularmente de los Ravens, porque soy de Baltimore y me encantan los Ravens, y nunca he ido a un partido de fútbol americano. Los problemas con asistir a un partido son el precio y la ubicación. No vivo cerca de los estadios de fútbol americano, lo cual creo que es muy triste.
Aug. 11, 2025
Les dentistes
Je ne fais pas confiance aux dentistes. Je crois qu’il font beaucoup de travail inutile. Ils sont heureux quand leurs patients ont des caries. De plus, ils toujours disent : « Vous êtes besoin de radiographie « . Mon dentiste est radin. Il ne me donne jamais d’échantillons de dentrice ou de fil dentaire comme le font les autres dentistes. C’est pourquoi quand je suis allée au Mexique en février, j’ai consulté un dentiste pour me nettoyer les dents.
Aug. 11, 2025
Random thought
Never try to change people. It's useless and a stupid idea.
Choose people. Choose people who have the same mindset as yours.
When you stay with people who can't share the same perspective with you, just keep silent. Never try to change them and try to leave them quickly.
There are many people that we can't understand, but that's what it is. Please keep away from them.
Aug. 11, 2025
My favourite series
"I was in love with Bollywood series. It sets in the India. I liked scientific movies that depends on the imagination of life and the imagination of nature. Also, I liked truth stories that convey someone personal life into reality and how he was suffering or how he became a fomous character in all the whole of world.
Are there any mistakes about my paragraph?
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Dear Diarly
Lots of good things happend with me on my day. I learned lots of new things. I fell better than yesterday. I was very sick yesterday, I don't have already problems. I leardned mathe chemistry and english today. I improved my english vocabulary. I will regulary revise englisch words every day how I don't forget it. I would like tell talles my school. My teacher is very kind and they helped me in the study. But I have some teacher, who I don't like. Such as my mathe teacher. You don't explain clearly. But I still like math. I study alone. I like logical connection. I like chemistry, mathe and biology. I want to continue learning with these. I would like doctor to be. My English skills are very low. :(( I hoppe after lots of exercise, go well. I will make many mistakes at first, but I will learn a lot from these mistakes. I want to do well.
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Aug. 11, 2025
La colline
Il y a quelque temps, j’ai été invité à un anniversaire en Pologne. La fête a eu lieu dans une maison qui se situait à l’extrémité d’un village. L’hébergement où j’ai séjourné pendant trois jours se trouvait à l’autre bout du village, sur une colline. Comme j’avais pris le train pour aller en Pologne et comme il n’y a avais aucun transport en commun dans ce village, je devais marcher pour arriver à mon auberge. Le village était composé de peu de maison, mais celles-ci étaient très dispersées et formaient une agglomération à la fois très étroite et très longue. Ça m’a pris à chaque fois environ une heure pour parcourir la distance entre la maison de la fête et mon hébergement. En plus, c’était une rue assez raide, sans trottoir et illuminée très faiblement. Pendant ces trois jours, je n'ai croisé aucun piéton sur ce chemin, uniquement des voitures qui roulaient toutes trop vite. La dernière nuit de mon séjour, il pleuvait pendant que je suis monté la colline. Les vaches allongées sur le pâturage qui longe la route m’observaient, stupéfaites ou indifférentes, je ne le saurai jamais. Dans la lumière de la lune, leurs dos mouillés scintillaient. Le chien des propriétaires de l’auberge m’accueillait comme toujours dans l’obscurité en aboyant férocement. Mais cette fois, il a arrêté immédiatement en me reconnaissant. Les animaux commençaient à s’habituer à ma présence. Pour eux j’étais devenu un villageois. J’aurais pu commencer une nouvelle vie sur cette colline.
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Aug. 11, 2025
Wie hat sich mein Leben in den letzten fünf Jahren verändert
Vor fünf Jahren war ich noch in der Schule und lebte bei meinen Eltern.
Mein Alltag war einfach und ich hatte viel Freizeit.
In den letzten Jahren habe ich neue Freunde kennengelernt und viele Erfahrungen gesammelt.
Ich habe gelernt, selbstständiger zu sein und Verantwortung zu übernehmen.
Außerdem habe ich begonnen, neue Sprachen zu lernen, was mein Denken erweitert hat.
Mein Leben ist heute aktiver und abwechslungsreicher als früher.
Aug. 11, 2025
Una cosa che me dispiace nell'italiano?
Onestamente, non ci sono cose che realmente mi dispiacciono nell'apprendimento dell'italiano. Naturalmente, a volte mi dimentico di alcune doppie, o scrivo le vocali sbagliate (particolarmente sotto l'influenza dello spagnolo). Non penso sempre alle elisioni, e persino mi capita di formare una parola di una manera morfologicamente sbagliata, per esempio dire "pensamento" invece di "pensiero" perché ho pensato allo spagnolo "pensamiento". Anche in questi casi, si sente l'influenza di altre lingue, compreso la mia lingua madre. Ma va tutto bene. Il passato remoto e l'imperfetto del congiuntivo ancora rapprensentano una difficoltà per me, perché non sono tempi naturali per noi francofoni, sebbene alcuni anni di spagnolo mi aiutino molto con le coniugazioni italiane. Tuttavia, nemmeno queste cosine mi arrabbiano. Al contrario, mi fanno apprezzare tutta la bellezza e la diversita delle lingue latine e mi incoraggiano a imparare ancora di più!