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Sept. 12, 2024
Sept. 12, 2024
Tendon & Achilles Tendon Rupture
Recently, at least two members on LangCorrect wrote about the Japanese anime "Haikyu!!" regarding volleyball. One of them mentioned that they started playing volleyball again after a long break, which reminded me of Achilles tendon ruptures.
In fact, two (completely different people from the previous "two") of my colleagues experienced Achilles tendon ruptures and had to undergo surgery while playing volleyball after a long hiatus. They were in their 30s and 40s when it happened.
I think it’s very dangerous to play intense sports after a long break, due to the lack of exercise and the effects of aging. Achilles tendons are not soft or elastic enough to absorb the stress from impact shocks.
In conclusion, I'd prefer tendon (天丼 or Japanese shrimp tempura bowl) over an Achilles tendon rupture!
The former is very delicious, and I'd like to recommend you to eat it.
Whereas, I won't recommend you to experience the latter. It's very painful and bothersome.
Hahaha.
Sept. 11, 2024
Sept. 11, 2024
A2 Übung - Alltag
Jeden Tag, wache ich um 7 Uhr auf. Erst, esse ich Frühstück, und dann vorbereitet ich mich für die Arbeit. Ich nehme dem Bus zum Büro. Nach der Arbeit, gehe ich zur Fitnessstudio oder gehe ich wandern in dem Park. In der Nacht, koche ich Abendessen und ich fernsehe bevor ich zum Bed gehe.
Sept. 11, 2024
Un Mélange Surprenant : Curry Japonais et Huile de Chili
Cet après-midi, j'ai mangé du curry japonais avec de l'huile de chili pour la première fois. C'était surprenant de voir comment les goûts se mélangeaient parfaitement, car le piquant de l'huile de chili se mariait joliment avec la douceur du curry japonais. Je sais que ce n'est pas traditionnel, mais j'aime expérimenter avec la nourriture de temps en temps.
Sept. 11, 2024
My Family And Another Animals
I watch interest serial about famous naturalist and writer Gerald Durell childhood. He had loved animals since 2 uears old. When he was 6-7 years old, his eldest brother Lorens left in Greece their family consist of mother, sister Margo and brother Lessly.
I really recommend you to watch - there are funny and lung story!
Sept. 11, 2024
Schlafen
Mein Schlafplan ist kaputt.wenn ich Versuche,ist das Ergebnis,das gleiche.Meine Routine ist, um 10 uhr Stehe ich auf dann nehme ich eine Dusche. Ich kann nicht funktionieren ohne Kaffee.eine tasse Kaffee mache mach viel! Danach fange ich mit einer Geschichte an . Lernen eine fremd sprache durch den Geschichtet verbessere mich . Was ich mache, höre ich es allein dann versuche ich zu vermute ,was ich lese Anschließend lese ich mit dem Audio .Das war's. Um 1 Uhr gehe ich zum kurs . Nach dem kurs mache ich eine Pause. Um 7 Uhr gehe ich mit meiner Freundin spazieren und wir unterhalten mit einander.Manchmal höre ich gerne ein Podcast zu nachdem ich kehre nach Hause zurück.all ist in Ordnung bis dahin aber ich Verschwende zu viel zeit mit meinem Handy . Und ich finde dass mein handy Hält mich wach . Ich kann nicht schlafen.
Sept. 11, 2024
Sept. 11, 2024
Sept. 11, 2024
Une introduction
Bonjour, je m’appelle Kristin. Je viens des etas-unis et j’habite dans Illinois. J’ai trente-neuf ans, mais mon anniversaire est dans dix-sept jours. Quand j'étais jeune j'ai étudié pour devenir avocate, mais je réalise que ce métier ne me convient pas. Maintenant, je travaille pour l’entreprise d'aménagement paysager de ma familie et j’adore mon travail. J’aime lire, tricoter, et apprendre denouvelles langues. J'apprends le français, l'espagnol et le japonais. Mes enfants vont dans une école d’immersion où tout le monde parlant suelement l’espagnol toute la journée. Je veux parler et lire en espagnol avec mes enfantes et les aider avec à faire leurs devoirs. Donc j'ai besoin de beaucoup de pratique!
Sept. 11, 2024
Livres audio en français
Il y a quelques jours j'ai acheté un livre en français qui s'appelle "et si c'était vrai" de Marc Levy. Il est très connu.
J'ai entendu dire que son style d'écrire est un peu plus simple, donc bien pour moi.
Je voulais aussi écouter sur le livre audio, mais j'ai ne l'ai trouvé pas en ligne.
Y-a-t-il quelqu'un qui connaît un site où on peut trouver les livres audio en français ?
Merci !
Sept. 11, 2024
tasks on describing people
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1. Since Paul is honest people trust him
2. The reason he is successful is that he works extremely hard
3. Joan is interesting person due to living in exotic places, as a result she has had so many strange experience
4. Don tends to ask people a lot of questions, so he comes across as being inquisitive
5. I dislike her due to the fact that she is vain and self-centered
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1. He has a habit speaking with mouth full, which I find to be disgusting
2. Sarah strikes people as being immature, since they often giggle when someone speaks to her
3. Owing fact that David never pay anything, gives the impression of him being mean
4. In my opinion, as he don't return things which he's borrowed, he seems to be dishonest
5. Since my sister often forget where she puts things, she appears to be absent-minded
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1. Having been covered in dust, Oliver climbed down the ladder
2. Having been tired out, Veronica couldn't go on with the journey
3. Being so rude, Richard has no friends
4. Being so intelligent, she can speak six languages
5. Being so absent-minded, Frank always forgets his car keys
6. Having been laughing hysterically, Susan couldn't speak
7. Having been walking on crutches, Paul left the room slowly
8. Being so patient Louise is cut out to be a teacher
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1. Being vain, Cathy spend hours doing her make-up, furthermore, she is always looking at herself in the mirror.
2. Since Jerry is timid, he not only blushes easily, but also looks at the floor when talking to people
3. In addition to that Gordon shouts at people a lot, he also clenches his fists whenever he gets angry, so he strikes as being aggressive.
4. Paula gives the impression of being insincere, as she flatters people she dislikes as well as pretends to agree with them, even she's of a different opinion.
5. As far as I'm concerned Roberts tends to tap her foot if she has to wait, moreover, she sighs if things don't happen quickly; it seems to me that she appears to be impatient
Sept. 11, 2024
Sept. 11, 2024
Una introducción
Hola, me llamo Kristina. Soy de los Estado Unidos y vivo en Illinois. Tengo trentinueve años, pero, ¡mi cumpleaños esta en diesisiete dias! Cuarenta es un cumpleaño muy importante y estoy muy emocionada. Cuando era joven estudié para ser una abogada, pero antes de trabajando en este profesion algunos años, yo realizado que no es el trabajo para mi. Ahora trabajo en la empresa de paisajismo de mi familia y me gusta mucho. Me encanta leyendo, tejido de punto, y aprendido otras idiomas. Estoy aprendiendo espanol, francés, y japonés. Mis niños attenden una escuela inmersion cuando todos hablan y leer en español todo el dia. Quiero hablar y leer en español con mis niños y poder ayudarlos con su tarea. Entonces, ¡necesito practicar mucho!
Sept. 11, 2024
La Cultura de Comida en Islandia 🤮
Islandia no es muy famosa para esa comida y es para un razón bueno. Para cientos de años los islandés sobreviví la clima dura y necesitan conservar la comida para mucho tiempo. Así que la comida volversí muy ácida. Comida como tiburón, carne de ahumado y pescado. Ahora en veinteyuno siglo no es muy óptimo y la mayoría en Islandia solo como este comida una vez a cada de año.
Pero hay algunas comida hoy en Islandia son todavía las jentes comen, como la sopa de carne. Es unos de platos tradicional que sobreviví en el moderno tiempo. Tambien tenemos tentempié como pescado deshidratada y tambien pan sin levadura con carne deshidratadapan pero que la país volverse más moderna la comida distinta tambien. Hoy Islandia tiene muchas variedad de comida de otras culturas tambien y tiene muchos restaurantes muy bueno. Y la cocina de islandes es relevante todavía.
Sept. 11, 2024
Sept. 11, 2024
Soap&Skin
I'm a huge fan of Soap&Skin. Soap&Skin is the name under which Austrian musician Anja Plaschg is performing.
I like her music for being sad and depressed. Because of her I decided to pick up playing piano, since I wanted to play her songs.
I saw that she was giving a concert in Portugal this summer and decided to visit it.
The concert was part of a goth festival, which was quite surprising, because I don't really think her music suits it well.
On the festival were quite a lot dark clothes, piercing, and interestingly looking people.
The concert went really well and I was all over the moon I managed to visit it. I was grinning constantly during the concert because I was so happy.
I liked it so much that I've already bought tickets for the next years concert in Austria.
Sept. 11, 2024
I miei sport preferiti...
Mi piacciono gli sport di cui posso fare da sola, perchè io divento molto stressata quando fare lo sport in un gruppo, come il calcio o tenis. Per questo ragione, prefersico andare al gym per fare esercizi aerobici. Quando ero una bimba sempre andavo alla piscina nel mio paese per nuotare. Mio padre era un nuotatore e mi ha insegnato per nuotare. Mi manca la piscina e speramente tra poco comincerò andare lì di nuovo. Però è stato proprio molto tempo!
Sept. 11, 2024
Rhapsody on a Piece of Rachmaninoff (Part E)
"The orchestra starts with a Theme of Paganini."
First of all, our lives have some primer on which we paint them further. It does not have to be the leitmotif of life in general. Indeed, life's opening can be played before introducing the main theme, as Rachmaninoff did in the Rhapsody: The theme comes only after the Introduction (Allegro Vivace) and the First Variation (Precedente). Moreover, the theme by which we live is often not ours but external and articulated by a famous person, as was the case with the Rhapsody, which is a set of 24 variations on the twenty-fourth and last of Niccolò Paganini's Caprices for solo violin. Rachmaninoff did not invent the theme of his composition, but he did create a unique piece of music. We do not invent our direction in life either. We pick it up in one way or another but then go along a unique path that defines us.
We have no genuine fellow travellers on our road of life. We can be compared to a piano with a leading role in the piece. Our environment, which includes all our relatives and friends, is merely an orchestra that communicates with us, adopting our tunes and suggesting theirs.
However, we cannot play life without the orchestra. The orchestra is the one which leads us when we take our piano baby steps in our lives. It gives us everything when we are children, even a theme that we will associate with our entire lives. We will change it beyond recognition after years of variation, but everything we do stems from the melody of a simple Caprice that our parents taught us when we could barely follow them on the way of life.
Nevertheless, we are the only ones who complete this way. We are soloists, the ones who gather the orchestra under our banners. Only we can skitter effortlessly through the variations, and they have identities due to our actions. We would share a part of authorship of our lives only with our most intimate friends and relatives, who are still no more than leading strings in the orchestra.
Sept. 11, 2024
Sept. 11, 2024
大人
大人になるにつれて、ことを楽しめなくなると言われている。僕の場合、この現象は特に激しいと思う。もちろん、自分が興味を持つことは楽しめる（例えば日本語を勉強したり日本に行ったり）けど、一般的に人が楽しむことは楽しむことが難しいと感じる。例えば、パーティーに行ったりくだらない話をしたりすることをつまらなく感じることが多い。子供の頃はくだらないことをしても普通に楽しめる。パーティーに行けばふざけて楽しめるし、子供の遊びはいくらでも楽しめた。でも大人になるにつれて（僕の場合、精神的に大人になるのが早い方だったと思う）、もっと真面目になって頑張らないとというシフトが起こる。それでも多くの人が「一般的に楽しい」ことを普通に楽しめるように見える。
Sept. 11, 2024
Eine Übung von "doch".
Asiatische Nudeln instant schmecken gut, doch sie enthalten viele Additive.
Warum hast du keines baren Geld?
Ich habe doch keine Zeit, zur Bank hinzugehen, gehabt.
Trotz am Vortage konnten wir unser doch zwei Tickets des Konzerts kaufen.
Wenn ich doch im nächsten Jahr nach Deutschland flöge!
Sept. 11, 2024
Mercoledì 11 settembre
Sono esausta. Fortunatamente mi rimangono solo tre ore fino alla fine del turno. Non vedo l'ora di andare a letto.
Il lavoro è stancante a causa dei cambiamenti. Spero che tutto vada bene dopo che ce ne abituiamo. Vorrei che i capi ci capissero.
Ovviamente preferisco avere un lavoro piuttosto che non averne uno, ma ci sono ancora motivi per lamentarmi.
Sept. 11, 2024
Is hard to think in English?
Since I decided to learn English, I realized that think in English in a country where only speak spanish, is so difficult.
Sometimes I would wish write my emails in English, but my coworkers would complaint about it.
All in all, the good news is exists plataform to practice. Given my learning comprises 4 aspects (listening, speaking, writing, reading) and my free time is limited, I have to practice every another day 2 topics. For example, I practice on langcorrect my writing and use some youtube channels for my listening today. Tomorrow, is turn to speaking in another platform and practice my reading (my ebook "atomic habits").
To be honest, every day practice my listening and when i understand more words and contents I feel more proud for me.
Thank you for to be part of my process. I feel I will reach my goal.
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