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präsentation B2
Guten Tag,
Ich würde mich gerne heute über einen meiner Lieblingsfilme unterhalten, den ich seit kurzem gesehen habe.
Der Film ist ein Drama und Kriegsfilm, der « Die Bücherdiebin » heißt und wurde im Jahr 2013 in Deutschland produziert.
In dem Film geht es um ein neunjähriges Mädchen Liesel, das ihre Eltern verloren hat.
Sie wird in eine andere Stadt gebracht, um bei Adoptiveltern zu leben.
Liesel kann nicht lesen und schreiben Aber sie lernt nach und nach.
Sie flüchtet sich immer mehr in die Welt der Bücher, um die Schrecken des Krieges nicht zu sehen .
Um sich neuen Lesestoff zu besorgen , beginnt, Bücher aus dem Haus des Bürgermeisters zu stehlen .
Dieses kleine Mädchen erlebt zwar viele Lebensschwierigkeiten und Leiden, aber bleibt offenherzig und hilfreich .
Die Hauptdarstellerin des Films ist Sophie Nélisse, eine hervorragende und sehr talentierte Schauspielerin.
Der Film wurde unter der Leitung des renommierten britischen Regisseurs Brian Percival gedreht.
Meine meinung nach, ist der Film sowohl entspannend und gefühlvoll als auch ein bisschen grausam oder schmerzlich und traurig.
Die Musik des Films hat eine genaue Übereinstimmung mit dem Film und hat eine tiefe Wirkung auf das Publikum.
wegen dieser eigenschaften hat er mir sehr gefallen .
Natürlich empfehle ich diesen Film anzuschauen. Weil es uns lehrt, wie verheerend und sinnlos Krieg sein kann.
Ich wünschte, ich könnte Ihnen das Ende des Films beschreiben, aber ich möchte, dass Sie es selbst sehen.
Danke für Ihre Aufmerksamkeit. Wenn Sie Fragen haben, beantworte ich gerne.
April 21, 2023
Garder son sang froid
C'est très important de garder son sang froid face à l'adversité. Il ne faut pas qu'on permet l'adrenalie d'influencer nos actions, paniquer va justement empire la situation. Il y a rien pire que de rater quelque chose qu'on pourrait arriver à faire. Peu importe à quel point une situation est tourné mal on ne doit pas laisser nos emotions conduisent. Acceptez que cette situation est arrivé et la meilleure chose à faire est d'analyzer comme on peut faire le meilleur de cela.
April 21, 2023
A Short paragraph in English
Hello Jazmine, a topic in one of my WeChat groups is how should Chinese people translate “Making Love Out of Nothing at All” into Chinese correctly? Because some people don’t think the Chinese translation (让爱一切成空) is correct. To join the topic, I have looked for the lyrics of the song and its Chinese translation, but I am still not sure about the correct translation of it. Instead, I think it can even be translated into opposite meanings. Now I want you to tell me the right meaning of the title of the song in different ways, so that I can translate it into Chinese correctly. Thank you.
April 21, 2023
Pratiquer un sport ensemble
Coucou Jacques,
Comment vas-tu? Je t'écris pour te proposer de pratiquer la natation ensemble. L’entraînement aura lieu à la piscine à proximité de chez moi. L'abonnement ne coûte que 10 euros par mois et ça vaut vraiment le coup car il y aura des entraîneurs qui nous renseigneront sur des techniques de natation. Nous pourrons nous entraîner deux fois par semaine après avoir fini notre étude a l'université. De plus, en ce qui concerne des équipements, les lunettes de plongée, la tube de natation sont tous disponibles au bassin. Je suis sûr que ce type de sport t'aidera à te ressourcer considérablement. Qu'en penses-tu?
J'attends ta réponse.
À bientôt!
April 21, 2023
恶梦、怀孕和生日
我前两天做了个讨厌的恶梦：我怀孕了！我是个男人，所以从生物学角度来说，这是不可能的。在梦里，我感觉到在短袖衫里，肚子上附近有奇怪东西。我太害怕了，一点也不敢偷看。但我不知怎么知道它是个婴儿，然后有预感马上就会生了！我很惊慌失措，可能不久会昏倒。除了喊妈妈，都不知道该做些什么。我终于醒了，但心突然就停了一下。在我肚子上还有东西！它原来是我的抱枕。我感到太愚蠢了！
今天是我的生日。前两天的恶梦可能是妈妈生下了我的困难的提醒。分娩的时候，她危及到自己的生命，面临无法想象的恐惧和疼痛。从现在开始，我更要珍惜生命。无论如何，我希望不会再做恶梦，要不人这个网站会成为我恶梦的日记。祝我好运！
April 21, 2023
April 20, 2023
Honorifics
I’m not confident about using honorifics properly so I read several books about them. Those books said different things, so I was confused. Then I decided to use more honorifics when in doubt. No one would be disgusted if they were treated with excessive honorifics, but many would get mad when they were treated with lower level of honorifics.
適切に敬語を使えてるか自信がないので、何冊か関連する本を読んだ。それぞれ違ったことが書かれているので、混乱した。それで、わからないときには、敬語を多目に使えばいいと思った。過度の敬語を使われても、誰も気分を害することはないでしょう。でも、敬語の程度が低いと、腹を立てる人が多いことでしょう。
April 20, 2023
Honorifics
I’m not confident about using honorifics properly so I read several books about them. Those books said different things, so I was confused. Then I decided to use more honorifics when in doubt. No one would be disgusted if they were treated with excessive honorifics, but many would get mad when they were treated with lower level of honorifics.
適切に敬語を使えてるか自信がないので、何冊か関連する本を読んだ。それぞれ違ったことが書かれているので、混乱した。それで、わからないときには、敬語を多目に使えばいいと思った。過度の敬語を使われても、誰も気分を害することはないでしょう。でも、敬語の程度が低いと、腹を立てる人が多いことでしょう。
April 20, 2023
Сообщения (5)
+ Вау, действительно? Это нормально (=that's normal), Анна. Я действительно ценю тебя (=I really appreciate you). Я тоже хочу говорить как носители.
- У тебя такое бывало?
+ Ага, конечно.
- У тебя пока все отлично (=you're doing great so far). Ты должен продолжать практиковать до ты легко говоришь (=speak with ease) и совершать маленькие ошибки. Если ты продолжишь так как, ты достигнешь этого в кратчайшие сроки. Увидишь.
+ Разве? Спасибо за поддержку.
- Благодарю тебе за твои добрые слова. У тебя уже хорошего уровень. Я бы хотела, чтобы я могла говорить по-русски, как ты говоришь по-английски.
+ Я не уверен. Ты можешь это сделать, но тебе нужно больше практиковать.
- Почему нет? Ты должен больше верить в себя.
April 20, 2023
La peur de parler français
J’ai peur de parler français !
Actuellement, je passe les vacances à la ville de Québec. C’est une très belle ville, et j’y ai visitée quelques fois dans ma vie.
Mais j’ai un problème : Quand je veux parler français à quelqu’un, je me sens paralysé par la peur ! Par exemple : aujourd’hui, une petite fille québécoise me regardait. Elle rigolait et était très mignonne. J’aurais dit « coucou mademoiselle ! », mais j’avais trop peur ! C’était que deux mots !
J’ai peur de parler français pour deux raisons. Tout d’abord, quasiment tous les québécois parlent anglais couramment. Je me sens un peu bête quand je leur parle en français… ça sera plus facile si je leur parle en anglais. Deuxièmement, j’ai un mauvaise accent. Je parle parfaitement dans mes pensées, mais quand je parle français dans la vraie vie, j’ai un gros accent américain.
Je sais que la seule façon d’améliorer mes capacités à parler, c’est de parler plus fréquemment. Quand je serai à l’université, je voudrais passer une année à l’étranger (en France, au Québec) pour que je puisse parler français avec plus de confort.
Si quelqu’un a des astuces pour n’avoir pas de peur en parlant, n’hésitez pas à me dire !
April 20, 2023
Ingénieure Logiciel
Je suis une ingénieure logiciel. J'étudie puis environ 2-3 ans maintenant à la UC Berkeley pour mon master. Je travaille en developpment et recherche. J'aime les mathématiques. Quand j'etais petit, je disais aux gens que je voulais être scientifique. Et maintenant, je suis quelque peu scientifique. Je me sens un peu perdue quant à mes objectifs futurs.
Aujourd'hui a été une journée épuisante. Je suis allée à la bureau toute la journée. J'ai travaillé sur un project de groupe pour ce soir. Mon semestre de printemps se termine bientôt.
April 20, 2023
Formal Email 1
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing in reply to your rental housing advert that you posted, and I would like to schedule an appointment to view the property as soon as possible. Before doing so, I would like to request some additional information regarding the rental. Could you please provide me details regarding the rental such as the monthly rent, lease rent, and any other information that you think could be relevant for me to know? Additionally, I was wondering if you would be so kind to send me some more pictures so that I may have a better idea of its condition. Furthermore, it would be helpful to know if any utilities are included in the rent.
Thank you very much for your time and consideration in this matter. I hope to hear back from you soon to arrange a viewing at your earliest convenience.
Yours faithfully,
Sergio
April 20, 2023
April 20, 2023
Le temps
Parfois je trouve le temps est une chose mystérieuse. Pourquoi? Parce qu’on peut le mesure par une horloge, mais avant la création d’un horloge, comment on l’a mesuré? On l’observe par le soleil ou la lune? Cela vaut dire quand la nuit arrive, la lune apparaître, c’est la nuit, quand le soleil apparaît, c’est le début d’un jour. Lorsque l'homme a inventé l'horloge, tout avait une mesure. Scientistes ont dit qu’il y a 4 dimensions dans le domaine physique. On pense généralement qu'il n'y a pas d'espace avec 0 dimension pour les points, 1 dimension pour les lignes, 2 dimensions pour les surfaces et 3 dimensions pour les objets volumétriques.Mais le temps et l'espace peuvent-ils être mélangés ensemble ou non ? Nous parlons de 4 dimensions, nous introduisons le concept de temps, mais je pense personnellement qu'il s'agit d'un concept erroné, car le temps et l'espace sont deux concepts différents qui ne peuvent pas être superposés.
Tout comme l'espace est tridimensionnel, le temps peut également être analysé en trois dimensions, c'est-à-dire en lignes temporelles, en plans temporels et en corps temporels. Le temps et l'espace peuvent être librement combinés dans n'importe quelle dimension, ou ils peuvent exister séparément l'un de l'autre, sous forme de lignes, de plans et de corps sans temps. Ou encore une ligne, un visage et un corps de temps sans espace.
Merci beaucoup pour votre correction ! :)
April 20, 2023
April 20, 2023
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Are there more natural ways to say the lines below?
I'd like to speak English more naturally and not the way you would find in a textbook. 🙇♂️
It's alright if you even change an entire sentence!!
Yes! That's exactly what I wanted to say! I learned a lot! Thank you so much!🙇♂️🙏
I lose feeling in my legs if I sit on the toilet for more than 5 minutes, and if I sit on the toilet for more than 10 minutes it hurts that I really have to limp. Sometimes even just sleeping I lose feeling in my legs. I looked it up and it came up as pisiform muscle syndrome. I thought about going to the doctor, but before I do that, I'm going to stretch and soften my body to improve it.
You are so bright. Even if I go blind, I can still find you.
What's that?
It's a green tea flavored cookie. I think it's a classic souvenir.
When I am nerves, by mind went blank often. I want to be calm in times like that. I want to overcome that.
Can I take a bath first?
Sure. Go ahead.
April 20, 2023
12
Are there more natural ways to say the lines below?
I'd like to speak English more naturally and not the way you would find in a textbook. 🙇♂️
It's alright if you even change an entire sentence!!
I think I have an idea that I can only be kind to those who benefit me in some way. But I have one of my goals in life to reduce the number of animals killed to zero. I thought this was not about profit. But helping them would save me from reliving their painful reality in my thoughts, and seeing them live happy and healthy would eases my heart. The point is, I have my own interests in this as well. Previously, I was walking through a train station and an old lady asked me for money and I gave her $10. At the time, I only gave it to her because she was in trouble, but when I thought about it again, I realized that there was a benefit to me in this as well. If I did not give her the money, she might be in trouble more, and I would feel responsible if something bad happened to her. In order to avoid such a future, I thought that I understood this reflexively and gave her the money. In other words, I gave her the money to escape responsibility. I think there is no one in the world whom we helped even though there was really no benefit to us. That is natural when you think about it. My actions are related me. Even if there is no real benefit such as "money," the relief or satisfaction or things like that within myself is also a benefit to that person.
The nature of a person's behavior changes depending on what kind of benefit is inside them. I don't think there is no such thing as no-benefit support in this world. If there is, please tell me.
April 20, 2023
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Are there more natural ways to say the lines below?
I'd like to speak English more naturally and not the way you would find in a textbook. 🙇♂️
It's alright if you even change an entire sentence!!
I have never studied at all in my life, so now I enjoy studying.
I don't know about the younger generation today, but it was like that in our time.
Do you think guys really like her?
What am I talking about?
What was I talking about?
Your way is more elegant.
Opposing Russia's invasion but not imposing economic sanctions or nothing against it is the same as doing nothing and just saying "rape is wrong" when a woman is being raped in front of your eyes.
In Uganda, same-sex sex can be punishable by death.
I heard there are over 1,200 species of spiders in Japan, but only about five are poisonous.
North Korea, Uganda, China. If you look at the countries that side with Russia, you will see that Russia should not be allowed to win.
When I see a Japanese supermodel married to an unsuccessful Japanese comedian, I feel true love, not money.
Fireworks festivals are often held even when it rains, as long as there is no wind.
I heard that some Japanese elementary and junior high schools are using manga as teaching materials in their moral education classes these days. For example, using One Piece as a teaching material, they are teaching how to make friends and the words that must be said because they are friends. I think this is a good way to make moral education fun for students, since they are still immature and often have no interest in such things. So I hope that the cartoonist will draw more philosophically and morally good things.
April 20, 2023
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Are there more natural ways to say the lines below?
I'd like to speak English more naturally and not the way you would find in a textbook. 🙇♂️
It's alright if you even change an entire sentence!!
I think there are certain behaviors that are acceptable if done by a woman that I think is beautiful, but not if done by a woman that I don't think is beautiful. For example, if a beautiful woman brought something to my house every day, I would be very happy, but if someone who isn't brought something to my house every day, I might feel annoyed. I thought this is lookism, and I thought this is a dangerous thought.
In this world, we provide good service to those who pay us, but not to those who don't. In the same way, I can be more tolerant of people who heal my eyes in return, and I can be more kind than usual to them. But money is the right of any person to have, but beauty is largely a factor that each person is born with. It is discrimination that determines whether a person receives the service or not based on their natural factors, so to speak, luck.
At any rate, I think lookism is a dangerous ideology, but I can't imagine how it can be completely eliminated from my mind. If there is a way to eliminate this idea, please tell me that.
April 20, 2023
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Are there more natural ways to say the lines below?
I'd like to speak English more naturally and not the way you would find in a textbook. 🙇♂️
It's alright if you even change an entire sentence!!
a: Do you buy lottery tickets?
b: I don't. Do you?
a: I sometimes buy scratch tickets! The prize money is very expensive in the U.S, right?
b: How much is it in Japan?
a: It's not scratch, but in Japan, the highest prize ever is about 50 million dollars, I guess. But I heard before that the prize money in the US is 3 billion dollars. It's a dreamy story. It is the best proof that luck exists.
It's difficult. I don't understand it at all. Is this really a question for elementary school students?
That happened to me too.
私にも同じことがあった
Something like that happened to me too.
私にも同じようなことがあった
言われてみれば確かにそうだね
Come to think of it, maybe you are right.
君は映画を何で観る？ネットフリックス？
What do you watch movies on? Netflix? Amazon? Or the illegal ones?
感覚的にマイナス一点しただけです！
Minus 1 point is somehow I just feel so.
April 20, 2023
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Are there more natural ways to say the lines below?
I'd like to speak English more naturally and not the way you would find in a textbook. 🙇♂️
It's alright if you even change an entire sentence!!
I think the famous donut shop in Japan is Mister Donut or Krispy Kreme.
Which do you prefer?
It depends on the day. But I don't buy either by myself. I usually get them from someone. But if I were to buy one myself, I would choose Krispy Kreme when I want something rich and filling, and I would choose Miss Donut when I want a regular donut. I more get Misdo because they have more stores in Japan than Krispy Kreme.
In Japan, Mister Donut is called Misdo for short.
April 20, 2023
Words 10
Is there a way to say these sentences so that they sound more natural?
I'd like to speak English more naturally and not the way you would find in a textbook. 🙇♂️ Also, it would be very helpful if you could provide a sentence with the word's correct usage if the word is used incorrectly.
1 can
共感できます。
I can relate.
2 happen
旅の恥はかき捨て。
What happens in the us stays in the us.
3 even
とんとんで終わった。
We broke even.
4 good
早めに出発して正解だったね！
Good call leaving early!
5 people
ここは若者が遊ぶ町です。
This is where young people hang out.
6 keep
私、口固いから。
I can keep a secret.
その状態をキープして。
Keep just like that.
7 quiet
彼はとても静かだね。良い子だ。
He's very quiet. Good boy.
8 at
感情を持ち込むな。
Leave emotion at the door.
9 library
図書館が好き。落ち着くし、家よりも集中できるし。そこに横になれる場所あったら住むだろうな。
I like libraries. It's calming and I can concentrate better than at home. If I had a place to lie down there, I would live there.
10 man
男はやるときはやらなきゃ。
A man's gotta do what a man's gotta do.
11 not
私が求めている物とは違う。
It's not what I'm looking for.
12 live
人生は１度しかないからやりたいことをやろう！
You only live once.
誰かに介護されながら生きるくらいなら、その前に死にたい。
I would rather die before that than live while being cared for by someone.
13 without
これなしでは生きていけない。
I can't live without this.
君なしではできなかったよ。本当にありがとう。
I couldn't have done it without you. Thank you very much.
14 lose
（失敗しても）ダメ元よ。
I have nothing to lose.
それなくしちゃった。
I lost it.
あ、蚊がいる。
ほんとだ。あれ、見失った。どこだ。
Ah, there is mosquitoe.
Omg, true. Oh, I lost it. Where is it?
15 blue
青はすごく似合うね。
Blue is your color!
16 glove
手袋って一つも持ってないから、良いのを探してる。
I don't have one pair of gloves, so I'm looking for a good ones.
17 party
持ち寄りパーティしよ！
Let's have a potluck party!
パーティーの主催者は誰なの？
Who is hosting the party?
18 we
友達を通して出会った。
We met through a friend.
日本にチップの習慣はない。
We don’t tip in Japan.
話が違います。（約束と違う）
That’s not what we agreed.
19 need
カンペが必要だ。
I need a cheat sheet.
返してほしい。
I need it back.
20 some
私の分も残しておいて。
Leave some for me.
もう少し私を信用してよ。
Give me some credit.
April 20, 2023
Words 9
Is there a way to say these sentences so that they sound more natural?
I'd like to speak English more naturally and not the way you would find in a textbook. 🙇♂️ Also, it would be very helpful if you could provide a sentence with the word's correct usage if the word is used incorrectly.
1 strong
Stronger strongest
見かけの割に昔は強かった。
しっかりした味。
強い香水は嫌いじゃないけど、車に酔う。
I used to be strong for what I looked like.
Tastes too strong.
I don't mind strong perfume, but it makes me carsick.
2 person
君のような優しい人がまだこの世界にいたなんて嬉しいよ。
I'm glad there is still kind person like you in this world.
3 grandfather
祖父は脳梗塞に 5回なった。
My grandfather had five strokes.
祖父は10年以上寝たきりで家で祖母が食事からトイレから全てをお世話していた
My grandfather was bedridden for over 10 years and my grandmother took care of everything from eating to toileting at home.
4 die
未来の世界のために何か良いことを残してから死にたい
I want to leave something good for the future world before I die.
5 last
最後にあったのいつだっけ？
When was the last time we met?
6 gas
痛みが全くないガスが開発されれば話は別だが、動物の安楽死にガスを使うのは大反対だ。
Unless a gas that is completely painless is developed, I'm very much against the use of gas for putting animals down.
7 price
値段はどこに書いてあるの？
Where are the prices written?
予算オーバーです。
It’s out of my price range.
これの送料や手数料、全て込みの値段を教えてもらっても良いですか？
Can you tell me the all-inclusive price for this, shipping and handling?
8 suddenly
人生の目標を達成したのなら、ぽっくり痛みなく死ぬのも悪くない。
I want to live with as few regrets as possible in case I die suddenly.
9 drop
落とさないでね。
Please don't drop it.
この話をやめよう。
Let's drop it.
10 week
週末はどうだった？
How was your weekend?
今週ずっと雨だね。
It's been raining all week.
11 boy
少年よ、大志を抱け
私の心はまだ少年のままだ。これ誰の言葉だっけ？
Boys, embrace your ambitions! Whose words were these?
My heart is still a boy.
12 almost
もう少しで終わる
Almost done.
もう少しでクビになるところだった。
I almost got fired.
もう少しで帰り着く。
I’m almost at home.
もう少しで終電に乗り遅れるところだった。
I almost missed the last train.
13 fall
落ちないでね。
惚れやすく冷めやすい。
Don't fall off.
I am easy to fall in love with and easy to cool off.
惚れっぽいんです。
I fall in love easily.
眠っちゃいそう。
I’m falling asleep.
信じないで。（だまされないで）
Don’t fall for it.
14 off
どんなことがあっても笑い飛ばせる人が好き。
I like people who can laugh anything that happens off.
語呂がいいね。
It rolls off the tongue.
肩の重荷が降りた。
That’s a weight off my mind.
大通りからちょっと入ったところ。
It's off the main road.
15 bicycle
最近の自転車はカッコイイ。
Recent bicycles are really cool.
16 never
不可能はない
Never say never.
17 grow
最初は違ったけど）いいと思えてきた。
It's growing on me.
She’s growing on me.
（彼女のことがいいなと思い始めた
背が伸びたね。
You've grown.
一緒に歳をとりましょう。
Let’s grow old together.
18 old
年をとっても向上し続けていたい。
あなたは本当に年をとってる？なんか魔法の薬でも飲んでる？
No matter how old I get, I want to keep improving.
Are you really getting older? Are you on some kind of magical pill?
19 bad
意外かもしれないけど、昔は悪ガキだった。
It may come as a surprise, but I used to be a bad boy.
彼は嫌な空気を醸し出している。
He’s giving off bad vibes.
I’m picking up bad vibes.
（嫌な空気を感じている）
20 thing
It’s a guy thing.
男にしか分からない（感覚、拘り、悩み）
It’s a Japanese thing.
日本人にしか分からない（感覚、拘り、悩み）
The last thing I want to do is put you out.（君に迷惑をかけることだけはしたくない
The last thing I want to do is lose my phone.（携帯を失くしてしまうことだけはしたくない
April 20, 2023
Toeic 60-70
Is there a way to say these sentences so that they sound more natural?
I'd like to speak English more naturally and not the way you would find in a textbook. 🙇♂️ Also, it would be very helpful if you could provide a sentence with the word's correct usage if the word is used incorrectly.
Based
This is a fact-based film.
Facility
What kind of facility is this?
Advance
Technology is going to advance quickly.
This is paid in advance.
Committee
What does this committee do?
Successful
The event was successful.
Excellent
Excellent service
Industry
There is a lot of darkness in the entertainment industry.
Fee
How much is the late fee?
Accept
Do you accept the offer?
Upcoming
What are your expectations for if there is an upcoming event?
April 20, 2023
Toeic 50-60
Is there a way to say these sentences so that they sound more natural?
I'd like to speak English more naturally and not the way you would find in a textbook. 🙇♂️ Also, it would be very helpful if you could provide a sentence with the word's correct usage if the word is used incorrectly.
Display
Can I buy the clothes displayed there?
Candidate
It's great that you were chosen as a candidate!
State
アメリカの最大の州は？
アラスカです
Which is the largest State in America?Alaska
Please state the reason for returning the product.
本製品を返送される理由を書いてください。
The building we visited was in a terrible state.
私たちが訪れたそのビルはひどい状態でした。
Exhibit
Can I buy the exhibit?
Session
If you have any questions, please ask during the Q&A session.
Note
May I take notes?
Process
The insect may have mixed in during the manufacturing process.
Instruction
Did you follow the instructions?
Membership
How do I become a member?
Agency
He works for a travel agency.