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Language
I don’t think that one’s personality may really change alongside with one’s language. It sounds a bit weird though i admit it may appear to be true for some people.
However, the first thing that crossed my mind after reading this question was not the one concerning a personality but a voice. I’ve always noticed that my own voice changes a lot when I speak English or French. Maybe it’s because of the pronunciation, who knows🤔anyway it may be quite funny sometimes, ‘cause I always sound childish in English
June 13, 2022
Родственные Души
Сегодня я бы хотела написать о родственных душах.
Я верю что у каждого человека есть родственная душа. Возможно на земле или в загробной жизни. Иногда родственные души человеки, животные или часть природы. Родственные души иногда не романтические. Тем не менее, они живут во этой вселенной. Если вы улучшите себя, твоя родственная душа появится быстрее и они будут лучше чем если вы не улучшите себя. Есть кто-то для всех. Следуйте свой страсть, и жизнь вознаградит вас.
June 13, 2022
Journal
Although there are only a few years left before I retire, I still can't wait to retire now.
After I retire, I would like to travel around. First of all, I plan to take a deep trip inside China by spending three to five years. After that, I would travel all over the world.
I would choose those developed, civilized, beautiful countries as my priority destinations, and follow this rule, travel to as many countries as I could.
When I feel that it's enough for traveling, I will go back to my hometown to spend the rest of my life. If my health permits, I still want to do some small business, but at that time, I wouldn't be doing business for myself. It would be for others who would be in need of help.
Life is too short. In an instant, we will become old. We can't go back to the past, as well as retain our youth. The only thing we can do will be do more useful things and leave more good things to this world.
June 13, 2022
Technological advances vs socialization.
As civilizations progress, traditional means of communication differ from what they were in the past. Distance is not any issue to communicate with each other as now we have the Internet. Sending doves as it was not so much time ago or even sending paper letters are falling into oblivion. It is indeed something out of ordinary how fast our world is developing. Nonetheless, a great advance in a certain field can lead to a detriment in another one. This is specially certain regarding communication.
Socialization is in the palm of your hand. A phone is all that is required to talk to anyone from anywhere. There are tons of social media outside for you to discover. Nonetheless, it is quite interesting that having all those easinesses, we can still feel alone and forgotten.
There was news that made an impact on me. An old man told that he was more lonely than ever. Now, with smartphones, there was no need for their grandchildren to go to visit him. They would just video call him and that is all. He mentioned that there was a time when all family would gather and pay him a visit. Development is growing rapidly, and sometimes it is difficult to keep pace of it. Every day something new appears, and communication is different every decade. Our elders sometimes have no choice and end up like that man.
I do agree that development is necessary. Going against it would be a preposterous nonsense. However, he should pay attention that our social bonds, not only with our family but also with people we could meet any time, are at risk if we just forget that close contact that makes us feel beloved and appreciated. Nowadays, young people are exposed to these media, and sometimes they prefer to chat through any app than meeting in person. As a result, young people are going through mental health issues related to that; not to mention that bullying is on the rise as it is almost impossible to control it due to that anonymity the Internet offers.
We ought not to forget who we are and how strong relationships are made. It is an advantage to be able to know people all around the globe with just Wi-Fi and a laptop or a smartphone. Nonetheless, do not trust on that way that easily; remember that human contact is psychologically a need. Could you imagine your childhood without those hugs or those tender kisses from your beloved people? Or how did you meet your friends when you were just five years old? Let us not fall into tribulations and make this clear: it would be difficult to leave a mark on those you want to cherish if you do not step ahead and cross that technological gap.
June 13, 2022
Journal
When I was in middle school, I had nine subjects: Chinese, English, mathematics, politics, history, geography, physics, chemistry, biology.
Amongst these subjects, I hated politics and history the most. Politics always told me what was correct and what was incorrect, but I didn't think it made sense. I hated history because history had many historical events that I needed to remember, but didn't like to remember those things. My opinion was that all the things had passed and they might have nothing to do with nowadays.
I liked Chinese and geography the most. Geography also needed me to remember things, but all the things are visible, for example, coal mines, grasslands, mountains, deserts and so on. I could look at them on maps. I liked Chinese because it's my mother tongue and I liked literature. I wrote many articles and poems. Some of them were published in my local newspapers.
As to mathematics, physics and chemistry, it's hard to say I liked them or not, but I had to learn them, otherwise, I wouldn't gain good grades. However, they were better than politics and history because you didn't need to remember too many useless things. You only needed to remember basic formulas and you would do well on the subjects.
In my opinion, science subjects mean smart while liberal subjects mean diligent. I like being smart.
Time neither goes back, nor I go back to the past. Now, I can only recall things that happened in middle school.
June 13, 2022
Journal
I started to learn English when I was in middle school grade 1.
I still remember that school didn't have an English teacher. They just hired an English teacher from another town. That teacher was an old man, short, thin, and looked like he was in his sixties.
According to what I have learned nowadays, his pronunciation was not so accurate or natural.
An English sentence in my textbook that I still remember was "Dongfanghong tractors are made in Luoyang".
I learned reading, vocabulary, grammar, comprehension and translation, but not listening and speaking, because learning English in Chinese school is only for passing exams, not for speaking.
I remember that my textbooks had many English stories. I liked to read them and translate them into Chinese.
I didn't like to translate Chinese into English because I couldn't remember how to spell a lot of the English vocabulary.
In the high school entrance exam, English only accounted for 50 points and I only received 32.25 points. That was not a good score.
After middle school, I stopped learning English because I really didn't need to use English in my work or my daily life.
Now, I learn English in order to not waste my time. Over all, I think I am old and I should use my limited time to do some meaningful things.
June 13, 2022
My Favorite English Word
Grind, according to Merriam-Webmaster:
Intransitive verb.
1. to perform the operation of grinding
2. to become pulverized, polished, or sharpened by friction
3. to move with difficulty or friction especially so as to make a grating noise
4. drudge. especially: to study hard
There's a verse of Eminem where he says:
"We stay on the grind, you slip, we out-grind you."
There is a word in Portuguese "ralar" that kinda translates to grind, but it's not possible to use it to express that you've surpassed someone through hard work. That's why grind is my favorite English word.
Thank you for reading.
edited:
Grind, according to Merriam-Webmaster:
Intransitive verb.
1. to perform the operation of grinding
2. to become pulverized, polished, or sharpened by friction
3. to move with difficulty or friction especially so as to make a grating noise
4. drudge. especially: to study hard
There's a verse by Eminem where he says:
"We stay on the grind, you slip, we out-grind you."
There is a word in Portuguese "ralar" that kinda translates to grind, but it's not possible to use it to express that you've surpassed someone through hard work. That's why grind is my favorite English word.
Thank you for reading.
June 13, 2022
12.06.2022
Heute ging ich in einem Park. Das ist sehr schön. Das hast viele Blumen und einige Bäume. Ich mag den Park.
Heute habe ich diese Wörter gelernt:
• drucken
• drücken
• durch
• der Durchsage, die Durchsagen
• die Durst
Ich suche mit diesen Sätze zum schreiben:
• Kannst du das Formular für mich drucken?
• Du musst der Knopf drücken.
• Er kam durch der Gang.
• Ich höre der Durchsage in der Bahnhof.
• Hast du Durst?
Vielen Dank für lesen.
edited:
Heute ging ich in einen Park spazieren. Der ist sehr schön. Dort gibt es viele Blumen und einige Bäume. Ich mag den Park.
Heute habe ich diese Wörter gelernt:
• drucken
• drücken
• durch
• die Durchsage, die Durchsagen
• derDurst
Ich versuche mit diesen Sätze zum schreiben:
• Kannst du das Formular für mich drucken?
• Du musst den Knopf drücken.
• Er kam durch den Gang.
• Ich höre die Durchsage im Bahnhof.
• Hast du Durst?
Vielen Dank für das Lesen.
June 13, 2022
June 12, 2022
Una carta de amor cringe
Personaje 1 escribe a Personaje 2:
Mi querido,
Mi vida es oscura sin el luz de tu amor. Echo de menos aquélos tiempos más simples, cuando no te conocía, pero entiendo que ya no puedo volver allí, porqué sin saberlo, has obtenido control total sobre mi vida. Cada mañana me levanto con un solo deseo - respirar el mismo aire que tú.
La necesidad de estar contigo se apodera de mi alma, y el pasión incontrolable me sofoca. Sin ti a mi lado las noches son más largas y los días son más difíciles. Todo en ese mundo me acuerda de ti. Nuestro amor ha cambiado mi vida en un modo que no podía imaginarme.
El recuerdo de tu belleza aún está quemando en mi corazón, desde hace el nuestro último encuentro. Te pido, por el amor de Dios, mándame algo, para que sepa que estás vivo. Al menos una foto, o un flor.
¡No puedo esperar a verte pronto!
Personaje 2: Mi amor, nos vimos esta mañana.
June 12, 2022
June 12, 2022
使う電気を少なくしなければならない理由
ニュースによると、日本の政府は暑い夏、電気が足りなくなって止まることを心配しています。そして7日、会社や家庭に使う電気を少なくすることをお願いしました。特にエアコンを使い過ぎないようにお願いしました。エアコンの代わりに扇風機を使ったら電気節約ができます。エアコンを使うときドアや窓を開けないことが大切です。
エアコンを使わないほうがいいですが、避けられない事実は、地球温暖化が激しくなっているということです。暑くなれば暑いほどエアコンを使うことになります。そしてエアコンを使うとき使う電気のため地球温暖化がもっと激しくなります。国際エネルギー機関によると、世界中エアコンの数は１６０万台がありますが、２０５０年まで５６０万台ぐらいできると予測しています。天気が暑い時電気節約が難しいですが、電気節約をしないのならもっとも暑くなる悪循環です。
June 12, 2022
¿Cuáles son tus pasatiempos?
Mis pasatiempos son aprender idiomas, leer sobre la historia universal y la política, y dibujar. He estudiado muchos idiomas, pero solo continué con tres (hasta ahora). Esos tres son japonés, coreano, y español. En el futuro quiero aprender chino, vietnamita, y filipino también, pero ahora no tengo tiempo.
Leo muchos libros sobre imperialismo americano e historia de Asia. (¿Es así cómo se dice: imperialismo americano -- o imperialismo estadounidense?). En particular, leo muchas sobre cosas que ocurrieron después de la 2 guerra mundial, como la guerra de Corea.
June 12, 2022
June 12, 2022
La climatisation et l'utilisation excessive de l'éléctricité
Quand j'étais jeune, j'ai écouté pour la première fois le terme "réchauffement climatique". À ce temps, il me paraîsait un phénomène très pressant, mais aussi un phénomène auquel les humains pourraient mettre fin. Mais en fin, ce n'était pas du tout le cas, et nous continuons à combattre les effets du réchauffement climatique. L'effet plus évident est, bien sûr, le temps qui devient de plus en plus chaud. Selon l'agence internationale de l'énergie, le parc mondial des climatiseurs pourrait atteindre 5,6 milliards d'unités d'ici à 2050. Par comparison, il y a environ 1,6 milliard d'unités utilisées aujourd'hui. L'utilisation des climatiseurs font un cercle vicieux: comme le temps devient de plus en plus chaud, nous utilisons de plus en plus de climatiseurs, la utilisation desquels aggrave le réchauffement climatique à travers de l'utilisation excessive de l'éléctricité.
L'utilisation excessive de l'éléctricité est un problème très grand. Dans l'été, quand il fait chaud, il y a de temps où les gens utilisent plus de l'éléctricité qu'on peut produire. Dans tels cas, il y a des coupures de l'éléctricité, quelquefois à
grande échelle. Aujourd'hui, j'ai lu un article à propos de ce que le gouvernement japonais fait pour éviter des coupures. Ils encouragent des bureaus et des ménages d'utiliser moins de l'éléctricité. Ils suggèrent qu'on n'utilise pas trop le climatiseur, et si on l'utilise, de n'ouvrir pas les portes et les fenêtres. Si on voudrait mettre fin au réchauffement climatique, on doit passer des temps un peu chauds et inconfortables.
June 12, 2022
June 12, 2022
Meine Wohnung
Ich wohne in einer tollen Wohnung. Sie ist nicht sehr groß aber es ist genug für euch. Sie hat viel Zimmer. Es gibt drei Schlafzimmer: eines für meine Eltern, eines für meine Geschwister und eines für mich. Es gibt auch zwei Badezimmer und einer Toilette. Wir haben eine Küche und eines Wohnzimmer. Draußen, wir haben keinen Garten aber wir haben einen Balkon und eine Garage. Ich mag meine Wohnung sehr.
June 12, 2022
Übungsätze: Verben mit dem Wortstamm -ziehen
1. Das Handy des Mädchens wurde ihr von ihren Eltern entzogen, weil sie sehr schlechte Noten in der Schule hatte.
2. Um dieses Problem zu lösen, versuche ich, die Strategie der Lehrerin nachzuziehen.
3. Weil etwas aufkam, mussten wir den Termin vorziehen.
4. Der ehemalige Politiker wird vom Land wegziehen, um sicher zu bleiben.
5. Obwohl es schwierig ist, weiß er, dass er durchziehen muss, um die Universität seiner Träumen zu besuchen.
6. Sie wollen die verblassten Kissenbezüge mit Schöneren beziehen.
June 12, 2022
ヒエロニムス・ボス
私は最近カンザスシティに行きました。そこで家族とネルソン・アトキンス美術館に行きました。この美術館は様々の国と時代の作品を展示しています。私にとっては一番面白い作品はヒエロニムス・ボスの聖アントニウスの誘惑という絵です。これで見えます（https://static01.nyt.com/images/2016/02/01/arts/02BOSCH-01/02BOSCH-01-superJumbo.jpg?quality=75&auto=webp）。ボスは快楽の園という絵を描くことで有名なオランダ人の画家です。ボスは１５世紀と１６世紀にキリスト教に関する暗くて空想的な絵を描きました。ボスに興味があるので、意外に彼の作品を見るのは楽しかったです。見た絵はアメリカにある五つのボスの作品の一つです。
June 12, 2022
Il significato della vita
Il significato della vita é desiderio. Senza desiderio, nessuno farebbe niente. No c'é un dio che crea significato nel mondo, soltanto gente che ha desiderio. La mattina mi alzo perche voglio vivere, amare, ed essere felice. Se non voglio, la mia vita sarebbe vuota e senza significato.
June 12, 2022
June 12, 2022
Les films ou les livres?
Ça c’est une très bonne question. J’aime les deux mais, mais mon choix va dépend sur mon humeur. En général quand je lis c’est pour apprendre quelque chose et quand je regarde les films c’est pour relaxer.
Alors, si je suis stressé ou si je veux échapper de la réalité ces toujours les films. Cependant, quand je veux étudier quelque chose je vais toujours essayer de lire.
Au cours de l’année passé ça a changé un peu. J’ai commencé à lire beaucoup plus en français et je lis n’importe de quoi. Avant, quand j’ai lu en anglais c’était toujours les livres non-fiction. Mais en français j’essaie de lire une variété de matériel. Je trouve que ça enrichis mon vocabulaire et ça m’aide à mieux comprendre la grammaire.
C’est le meme chose avec des films maintenant. Qu’est ce que vous préférez?
June 12, 2022
June 12, 2022
love letter
Love Lisa
I am crush on you a almost a whole year and I can not help me you are so perfect your heart for the animals that soft hair and you crystal blue eyes and your beautiful smile this laught and your skin .
You are the best students in the class and get only one s and you would like animails like me you goig to veterinarian right like me and you eat also gladly candy . My favoutite subject is also math we have so many together and I would like ask will you go out with it with me be happy
Give me please me your answer your secret admirer
June 12, 2022
12 juin 2022 - faire du bénévolat
Dès que je suis entrée à l’université, je fais rarement des bénévolats officiels mais j’aime bien aider les autres et je le fais souvent comme répondre aux questions de mes camarades. Hier j’avais promets une dentiste d’être une bénévole pour servir des mamans monoparentales aujourd’hui. Ce matin, j’ai vraiment regretté de la promettre si vite parce que je me suis réveillée tard et donc j’ai manqué du temps pour faire de l’arabe. Néanmoins, comme c’est une promesse, je suis allée ; et je suis heureuse pour ma décision parce que même j’ai sacrifié le temps pour étudier, j’ai fait de chose concrete pour rendre ma journée significative.
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