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Geschichte #4
Als ich ein Kind war, haben meine Familie in der Nähe eines Waldes mit einem Bach gewohnt. Mein Bruder, unsere Freunde und ich haben dort oft gespielt. Der Bach war sehr klein und flach aber zu uns war er ein großer Fluss. Wir haben Brücken gebaut, zu fischen versucht und Papierschiffe getrieben. Aber jeder Winter ist unser kleiner Bach zugefroren und dann mussten wir bis Frühling warten, wenn er schmilzt.
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Nov. 2, 2022
Schon wieder schreiben
Seit fünf Monate habe ich hier nicht geschrieben. Ich muss verraten, dass ich mich auch nicht viele Mühe gegeben, um mein Deutschniveau zu verbessern.
Warum kann ich nicht mit meine Übung regelmäßig sein? Ich bin manchmal so faul. Da ich allerdings gerne Deutsch lerne, finde ich keine Erklärung dafür, dass ich Zeit zu Zeit plötzlich keine Lust auf Lernen finde.
Zwei Wochen vorher habe ich eine moderne Kunstssaustellung besucht. Dabei war auch eine Veranstaltung, wo man vor dem Publikum seinen eigenen Gedicht vorlesen dürfte. Sechs Personnen haben es gewagt. Das war sehr schön, auch wenn ich kaum verstehen habe. Gedichte sind nämlich wie Musik, Lyrics.
Ich selbst würde auch gerne Gedichte auf Deutsch schreiben, aber ich stehe zurzeit sehr weit von bereits zu sein. Anstatt schreibe ich hier, um nie zu vergessen, dass man nur beim Üben vorschritten und sein Ziel erreichen kann.
Nov. 2, 2022
un cours ennuyeux
Aujourd'hui, J'ai eu mon cours de Littérature. J'ai le cours avec ma copine Ronja. Nous sommes amies puisque un peux semaines, mais elle est très sympa et ses blaques est très amusantes. Notre professeur est un bon prof. Il explique les sujets en dètail.
À midi, je suis allée à ma maison pour j'ai manger mon déjeuner. Après, Je suis retournée à L'Université pour mon cours de Linguistique. Mais, dans cette cours, le professeur est un peux ennuyeux. Il était difficile de se concentrer.
À Soir, J'ai fait du shopping dans la ville. Mais, accoun des bus sont nèst venu pas J'ai devrai attrende de 20 minutes.
Je suis un peux fatigué, Je serai dormir.
Bonne Nuit.
Nov. 2, 2022
Challenge, 02 with tenses.
Today is my 02 challenge with tenses because I have difficulty with them. Therefore I need your help me. Thank you for everyone.
I posted yesterday the sentences with " Prensent Simple" and "Present Continuous."
Present Simple:
I ride my bike every day. This sentence uses in my routine.
I go to work every day. It means this is my routine or my habit.
Present Cotinuous:
I am riding my bike right now. This is means an action that happening now.
I am drinking tea right now. This is means an action tha happening now.
Nov. 2, 2022
Challenge, Day 33
Today is 33 day of may daily English challenge. Today I have a busy day. I am very active. I did a lot of things. I decided to watch a vlog on YouTube. I understood all video. It was unbelievable!
I aslo reviewed a bunch of words that I learned yeterday. Before sleeping, I'll read some pages of a book in English.
I am grateful for this website and everyone who has helped me.
Nov. 2, 2022
Mi reto,02 día
Hoy es mi segundo día de mi reto de español. Ante todo, no sé nada en español y estoy aprendiendo sola.Estoy orgullosa de mí misma.
Hoy he madrugado las 07 de la mañana, después he tenido desayuno.Después he decidido ir a la tienda del ordenador para buscar de la placa base por mi télefono, he comprado dos pan y algunas verduras. Cuando llegué en casa. El primer algo he hecho estaba he preparado cocinar porque estaba hambre.Después de fregar los platos. Voy para la cama para descansar muy pronto.
Por la tarde, he léído un libro en árabe y he revisado algunas de la lecciones. Después he léído algunas de la palabras en voz alto.
Antes de acostarme, voy a ver un vlog en Youtube en español.
Mi objetivo siempre ha sido ser un buen oyente y acostumbrarme a escuchar español.
Estoy agradecido por este sitio web y todos me han ayudado.
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Nov. 2, 2022
My vacation
My vacation was so boring. I did that what I do every day. My brother gave me homework and I did sport. That is not all I got homework's from the school and stuff for a test. I musted learn for the test. But I had read my favorite books and watched my favorite episode, and I had two days I was alone to house. I watched on television and ate my favorite candy. So together my vacation was boring and normally. I mean my father took us in a restaurant. But until that everything was normal and nice. Only my homework's steered me and that I learn for my test. In addition, I am happy that the school begins again.
Nov. 2, 2022
PLEASE REVIEW MY ESSAY
Where is your hometown?
Buon Ma Thuot is my hometown. It is the capital city of Dak Lak province, which is located in the central highlands of Vietnam.
2 Is that a big city or a small place?
It is just a small city with about half a million people.
How long have you been living there?
I have been living here since I was born, but I was out of town for about five years to study at a university in another city - so just over 20 years.
Do you think you will continue living there for a long time?
Yes, I think so. Several years of studying at a university in another city have made me realize that nowhere is as comfortable as my home. The streets in Buon Ma Thuot city are not crowded and the air quality is quite fine. Because the city is located on a highland, flooding rarely happens. And the key factor that makes me want to settle here rather than elsewhere is the food. I quite dislike the taste of food in other cities, and even in some other countries. I think it is because I am already used to the food here.
Please describe your hometown a little.
Buon Ma Thuot is just like all other cities with closely packed buildings and a network of streets that are crowded with vehicles during rush hour. But it also has various unique features. For example, it is known for producing high-quality coffee, which has always monopolized the Vietnam market. So coffee shops can find everywhere, and there is even a museum specifically for exhibiting coffee-related artifacts and tools, called The World Coffee Museum. Buon Ma Thuot is also famous for its majestic waterfalls, primitive jungles and ancient stilt houses made of wood or bamboo, but they are quite far from the city centre.
Do you like your hometown?
I do not really think about whether I like my hometown or not, because I just think of it as a place to live; it is not really different from other cities that I have lived in for a period of time. But I think to me and maybe to almost everyone, the thing that makes our hometowns so special and different from other places is that it is where we grow up and experience many memories with our families. I spent my childhood to adulthood in my hometown, Buon Ma Thuot city, and my parents and younger sister are currently living there, so it has a special place in my heart.
Do you like living there?
Yes, I do. The streets here are not as crowded as in other major cities that I have been to, the air quality is quite good, and the food is exactly up to my liking. There is not much to complain about.
What do you like (most) about your hometown?
To me, the best thing about living in Buon Ma Thuot is that the food is exactly up to my liking. Although I can find the kind of food here everywhere else, the taste is extremely different; I had paste vermicelli soup and meat bread, which we call bun rieu cua and banh mi thit, in Nha Trang, Ho Chi Minh and some other Vietnamese cities, but the tastes are quite weird. They are too oily, meaty or salty, while in Buon Ma Thuot, they are delicate and tasty.
Is there anything you dislike about it?
What I dislike about living here is it is quite difficult to order food to home. While I was studying at the university in Ho Chi Minh, I did not know how to ride a motorbike, so I always ordered food online through some apps such as Grab Food and Baemin whenever I did not want to cook. But the online food delivery industry in Buon Ma Thuot has just recently started; there are not many restaurants and food outlets that register in such apps, and the choices of food for delivery are quite limited. I still do not know how to drive a motorbike, so it is really bothersome when I do not want to eat homemade food as I have to ask my parents to buy something for me.
Nov. 2, 2022
A Mind For Numbers
This is a summary from one of my favourite books called "A Mind For Numbers" by Barbara Oakley.
I hope this will be useful for you :)
Our brain has two ways of thinking: focused and diffuse mode.
Focused mode is placed principally in the front of the brain and whenever we have a thought, with focused mode we repeat a pattern.
To enter to focused mode we only need to put our attention to something.
Meanwhile, in diffuse mode we don't repeat specific patterns, instead, we make scattered neural connections in all the brain.
Diffuse mode gives us a "big picture". That's why using this mode is essential to solve hard problems.
Diffuse mode occurs when we relax our attention.
Examples:
Sleeping, meditating, making art, doing exercise, driving, going for a walk.
Kinds of memories.
We have two kinds of memories, they are long term memory and working memory.
Whenever we are learning something we're trying to go from working memory to long term memory
Working memory.
This kind of memory happens when you're consciously holding the information.
The working memory can hold only 4 chunks and it's crucial to be active and give them energy so your metabolism doesn't use that energy.
For example repeat someone's name until you write it.
Long term memory.
Long term memory is a enourmus storage of information. It's like a giant library. To find any book it's necessary to revisit the path a few times in order to remember it.
There's a way to remember "that path", is called Spaced Repetition System and it consist in alternating recall and rest.
Sleep
It's important because when we sleep toxic products are eliminated because our cells shrink and the space between our cells are bigger so fluids can pass and clean those toxins.
That's why when we don't sleep well we can't think effectively.
Chunking.
Chinking is one of the most important elements to understand anything. When you chunk informations it's easier for the brain to understand it.
Chunking means to divide informations into little pieces and then tie them through meaning.
Pause and recall.
Don't look at the text, ¿what were the principal ideas? ¿How can you use this?.
Have a nice day :)
Nov. 2, 2022
A dinner with a famous person
If I would have a dinner with a famous person I would like to do it with a famous sociologist Ekaterina Shulman.
She is very clever, open-minded and well-read person. She interprets what's happening in the world. And she does it in calm and eloquent way. I enjoy reading her channel.
She discuss not only political science, but also classic and contemporary literature. She has tree children as I have. And now she lives in Germany. I have a special relationship with this country.
So, if I would have a chance to meet her I would definitely do it.
Nov. 2, 2022
Dream job
When I was a child, I'd like to be a teacher.
When I was 7, I loved to write in workbooks and made different workbooks for my dolls. Barby, her husband and their numerous children had to learn writing and reading 😄
At the end of the 3rd grade I asked my classmates what did they dream about future job. They said teacher, babysitter, vet, racketeer. Yes, there were 90-ties. As I asked, I thought about myself. Maybe I would like to be a teacher.
After that there were a lot of things I was interesting in: theater, science, design... Now I'm a German teacher and make digital worksheets and workbooks for my students.
Nov. 2, 2022
Mein Auslandsaufenthalt
Hallo zusammen,
letzte Woche bin ich mit meiner Schule zu einer Buchmesse in Belgrad gereist. Wir sind dort mit einem Bus gefahren. Obwohl es eine lange Reise war, hatten wir viel Spaß. Musik, lachen und schlafen machten den Trip leicht. Wir haben in einem Hotel gewohnt, das "Slavija" heißt. Es war alt, aber nicht schlecht. Wir wohnten dort nur zwei Tage. Abgesehen von der Buchmesse, haben wir viele Sehenwürdigkeiten besichtigt und meine lieblingste war das JNA-Stadium. Dort spielt mein Lieblingsfußballclub. Besonders hat mir das Zentrum gefallen. Es ist nicht zu alt und nicht zu neu. Ingesamt war diese Reise toll! Ich kann so einen Auslandsaufenthalt nur empfehlen.
Nov. 2, 2022
how to balance work and leisure
Everyone has a require of working and resting,but many people can't make a good use of time.how to balance work and leisure?Follow are some advise from
me.
First of all.we'd better make a list of things which we need to do.A clear list can help us assign time to each thing.What's more,we should judge our stituation to
make a descion:if we can solve these problems at once,or divide them in parts and try to solve them gradually.An excellent plan can't without a deeply think.
last but not least,when we try to put our plans into practice,we must be clam down when something we've not expected happened.Remember,each desicion
you made must to be based on the fact.
Above all,to make a balance between work and leisure,we need to estimate ourselves' ability rationally,and put our plan into practice flexibility.
Nov. 2, 2022
Insurance Talk
Many different types of insurance are available in ABC country, from health insurance to commercial property insurance. Some are required by law, while others may be "icing on the cake". What type(s) of insurance should I purchase? What are the most important?
To answer these questions, we invited XYZ, co-founder of XXX, to our Thursday meetup this week. She hopes to help the audience better understand insurance plans and avoid unnecessary insurance plans and misleading marketing strategies.
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Nov. 2, 2022
Toefl essay
I personally believe being genuine is an essential quality to have. Humans need other two qualities too, but genuine is important for yourself and the person who talks to you. Humans are afraid to be judged so they can't be genuine around people they didn't know. There are several reasons why I feel this way, which I will explore in the following essay.
Firstly, how we define genuine. My own definition of genuine is " how you have truthfulness to yourself regardless of other people's opinions or criticism ". My own experience, was when I took credit for a history team project, for doing nothing. Even so, I told the teacher I do nothing to my team. It's a small moment for most of people, but then I know I can be genuine about teachers' criticism. After that, I can be genuine around people. This is so much relief
Secondly, as I mentioned before most people are afraid to be judged. People face pressure from society such as people saying that you act imperfect even though there can't be the perfect person. If we didn't care about other peoples thinking, we will become much happier. This eventually leads to having great life experience than previously do.
Last but not least, being genuine can also help your own environment. Your own circle of people such as friends, family, and classmates is most important to you. What if you pretend to them accidentally or intentionally? This is a horrible thing to do. If someone you know asks your opinion or advice, but you told them with an autocorrected response. Just be yourself and don't wear a mask that hides your true self.
In conclusion, being genuine is hard for most people but it's a handy skill to have. Humans just can't have only one skill, but I prefer genuine over anything.
In this essay, I discuss how being genuine is trustful not only for you but your loved ones. People only look for the real you. Stay truthful to yourself
Nov. 2, 2022
Exercise 1
1. In my town, there are many stores, museums and restaurants. However, comparing to other towns, the number of the are small. As I remember, there’s two parks near my house.
2. I have two glasses and two sunglasses. I have a bunch of mandarin orange and chestnuts in my kitchen. I have a lot of appliances like refrigerator, microwave, stove and oven too.
Nov. 2, 2022
Un livre intéressant à partager
Il y a quelques mois, j'ai lu un livre qui s'appelle « The Devil's Advocate » de Steve Cavangh.
L'histoire commence avec un homme qui va être executé par électrocution, il s'appelle Darius Robinson, arrêté pour une meurte il y a quatre ans. Son advocat, Cody Warren, ne peut qu'appeler lieutenanat gouverneur Patchett et espérer qu'il va annuler la peine de mort. Sa opposition, Randal Korn, est un advocat qui aime à mettre les gens sous une peine de mort. Malgré ça, Darius a été executé.
Cinq mois plus tard, Skylar Edwards est kidnappé par un homme inconnu. Quelques chapitaires plus tard, cet homme est connu par son surnom « The Pastor » (Le Pasteur), il est très associé avec la meurte d'elle. Après la meurte de Skylar Edwards, Andy Dubois est choisi d'être le bouc émissaire. Puis, Eddie Flynn, un advocat vient de New York va aller à Alabama pour occuper le cas de Dubois et battre contre sa opposition, Randal Korn.
Pendant la préparation pour ce cas, Randal Korn est allié avec un policier corrumpu, Colt Lomax, qui l'aide à modifier les évidences, assure les témoins et le jury disent ce qu'ils sont demandés, quelque soit le façon utilisé. Pour que Randal puisse avoir tous les advantages contre Eddie Flynn. Cependant, après la mort de sa femme, il a changé le camp, il essaye à donner l'évidence décisive à l'équipe d'Eddie qui peut absolutement renverser le résultat de ce cas, et sauver Dubois à être executé. Mais avant tout ça, Lomax a été tué par une balle à la tête.
Pour le reste, je ne vais pas tous gâcher mais c'est vraiment intéressant ! Même si la fin de ce livre est comme la majorité des livres et films.
Nov. 2, 2022
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Chaque seconde qu'il était loin de la maison il le passe à penser à la chaise où il s'agenouille pour dessiner.
Mais bien que le dessin est une obsession, ça ne suffit pas; il y a donc ans qu'il nourrit son cerveau par tous le moyens possibles: langage corporel, sociologie et la liste est très long. Le fait intéressant est que tous ces nouveaux intérêts amplifient l'obsession pour le dessin: les nouvelles idées devaient tôt ou tard sortir de la leur dimension abstrait, et à travers son crayon il les donne corps. Pour lui le dessin est donc le lien entre le souffrance physique et le plaisir imaginaire; une chose comme ça, comme peut-elle ne devenir pas une obsession?
De plus, il était tellement égocentrique que les amis ne l'importent pas; attention, son égocentrisme est le résultat de sa seul nécessité de nourrir son cerveau: en réalité son coeur était plein d'amour qu'il ne sait pas donner.
On peut donc dire que sa intelligence et sa vie sociale forment un circle vicieux, et la seule issue de secours qu'il a trouvé est le dessin.
Peut-être que son coeur a besoin du amour, de l'affection d'une femme qui tôt ou tard tombera du ciel comme une ange? Mais son coeur, sera-t-il prêt pour recevoir autant amour après ans de sécheresse?
Nov. 2, 2022
毎年台風がたくさんあります。後件を軽減するため、何をしますか。
フエには毎年いつか大小の台風があります。台風が過ぎるたびに多くの深刻な結果を残っています。建物が倒したり、木が壊れたり、尊い命を奪ったりすることさえあります。結果は本当に深刻です。
後件を軽減するために、自治体だけでなく、一人一人台風を防ぐのは責任があります。さまざまな方法があります。たとえば、台風に来る前に、丈夫な建物に動くとか、慎重屋根を支えるとか、木を剪定しなければなりません。それは台風に来たとき、みんなにもっと安全になっています。大切なことは台風中に絶対に外に出かけません。大変危ないです。
台風はとても恐ろしいものです。全てのものを奪うことができます。それで、真剣に考えて慎重行動した方がいいです。
Nov. 2, 2022
Nov. 2, 2022
Mon téléphone
Mon téléphone est vraiment vieux. C’est un iPhone 6s Plus et je l’ai depuis six ans. Évidemment, il est en très mauvais état. Le bouton principal et la caméra ne fonctionnent pas. De plus, il a beaucoup de rayures sur l’écran et le haut-parleur est si doux. Et pour couronner le tout, l’état de la batterie est très mauvais. Je déteste dépenser de l’argent pour électroniques mais j’en ai eu assez! Je vais acheter un nouveau téléphone bientôt.
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