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Social media and Internet
Think about your own childhood, how we used to play outside, read books and engage in creative activity. Now, compare that with the lifestyle of today's teenagers. you'll notice a huge difference. One of the biggest difference is their dependency on the internet and social media.
July 25, 2025
都市伝説
今日は何について書くのかを決められなくて、LangCorrectのプロンプトを見ていました。そこで、この「都市伝説」というプロンプトを選びました。考えたら、私が住んでいる州の知っている話は、都市伝説というより民間伝承のようなものです。だから、私の祖父母が住んでいる別の町の都市伝説について書こうと思います。
（ちなみに、街と町の違いはなんですか？ここは、「city」と言うつもりでした。）
この噂は90年代に始まったと言われているようです。その町では、夜に悪い魔女が来ると信じられています。魔女は扉にノックして、知っている人の声で呼びかけるんです。もし魔女に騙されて、扉を開けてしまったら、血を吐いて死んでしまうそうです。
でも、家を救う方法もあります。扉の前に「ナーレ・バー」と書いておくと、魔女は立ち去るそうです。意味は、「明日来てください」です。意外と品がある化け物ですね。
日本にも、「口裂け女」や「トイレの花子さん」などの有名な都市伝説がありますね。ネット上では、歩く拡声器のような「サイレンヘッド」や、細くて顔のない「スレンダーマン」のような怪物も有名です。
私にとって、このような現代の伝承はとても面白いです。「私たちは、昔の人たちと同じように、今も伝説を作り続けている」と思うと、なんとなく安心します。
July 25, 2025
Don't Know what to Do
The company that I work for was acquired.
Many executives have been fired, and everyone is worried about the future.
My bosses are waiting for the ultimatum to know who stays or go in September I've been creating tools to automate some tasks, I don't know if I should show them to the manager.
What do you think?
July 25, 2025
July 25, 2025
July 25, 2025
İs an İstanbul dengerous city
I things İstanbul is not dengerous city . Yes being some bad events there but this is could be everywhere. There are people helpful and nice and kind. They are together work without familiar. I like very İstanbul. The people are very kind about tourist there. Of course have bad events but this not do there dengerous city
July 25, 2025
I like doing exercise in summer
İ like exercise in summer so l go to the gym. But gym is very far so l goes by car. I doing treadmil and lift weigt and plates but sweaty finally.After then swimming l am like swimming in summer because is very hot outside. İ m form Erzurum. There are not as hot as İstanbul. I like doing exersice because lose weight and There are have a friend from fakulty.
July 25, 2025
My universıty period
I began to universıty at 2023 year. 2023 is difficult years for me because l have A exam. I have worked 10 hours a days generally. İt is very hard. But l love it. I am dream is living in İstanbul so very studied. Elhamdülillah. I won to Fakulty of medicine. I like a my school but. İt is a small school. Very smal. But İstanbul is very beatiful ı like it. There are have A lot of place to visit for example Ayasofya mosque , Süleymaniye mosque, Üsküdar ….
İ have a few friends. Hatice,Aysu,Hüdanur,Hümeyra …. They are very nice people. We are dream is abroad for example italy,France,Mekke ….
I meet someone there. He is a very nice and handsome. I guess like to he. I have dream about he. I guess takas places.
My part is very hard so l don’t like it. There is a lot of memorazion. İ dont like a memorazion.
July 25, 2025
The world has too much steel (NY times article)
The article is about the overproduction of steel products world wide. Nowadays a lot for countries sustain their own local steel mills, because of national securities reasons. Steel can be used in many ways, like for building cars, bridges and all kinds of civil commodities. But it's also used for building tanks, aircrafts and bombs.
Therefore no nations wants to give up their own steel productions. The result of the overproduction of steel products are falling prices, cutoffs of employies and shrinking companies revenues.
On top of that, imposed the US american president - Donald Trump - new import penalties for non-US steel products. But not only the US tries to protect their markets from foreign - and most important, cheaper steel - also die EU imposed import penalties for chinese steel aswell.
New enviorment regulations forces more and more companies to go for green(er) ways to manufacturing steel. But the problem is, that less enviorment intense manufactoring methods - like melting iron ore with electricity - increases the prices for steel products. Rising prices causes less demand and more overproduction, because potential buyers will wait until the marktet prices are falling.
Btw: There is one detail that is not explained in the article, but it's important to know. To melt iron ore you need a special kind of furnace. As soon as the melting process has startet, you cannot turnout the furnace or lower the outcome. So you must keep going, because otherwise the furnace get's destroyed and needs to be rebuild completly from scratch as soon as the fire turns out.
Source: https://www.nytimes.com/2025/07/25/business/steel-overcapacity-china.html
July 25, 2025
海岸に行ったこと
我が校は本日を「国の緑地を探検するための日」に指定したけど、私は同級生と一緒に海岸に行った。（海岸は緑地と見られてるかどうか知らない。）ほとんどの同級生はスポーツが好きだが、私は個人的にあまり好きじゃないから、彼らがフリスビーやサッカーをするために走り去る時、私は砂の上に座り、ある友達と喋った。先生もそこにいたけど、彼女はたいてい日陰の中のベンチに座り、海に足を踏み入れることを除いて私たちにやりたいことをやらせた。
活動は公式に11時半に終わったが、同級生は3時まで止まることにした。（先生は去る後で彼らはようやく海に入れるようになった。）しかし、私はあまり社会的種類じゃないし、急にさることにし、近くのモールで友達と昼食を食べ、駅で家へ帰った。あまり生産的な時間の使用じゃなかったけど、いくつかの友達と交流する機会があるだけましだ。
July 25, 2025
Diary — July 25 — Day ten.
Hello there!
I didn't write here for 2 weeks ago, or something like that. Maybe I was too busy, or just I forgot it, I'm not sure. A lot of things happened on this time, I did my routine as normal, I went to the gym, I ate healthy and I continued learning English every days, maybe I didn't write on Langcorrect, but I continued improving my pronunciation, reading and majority I was improving my listening watching videos, documentals, and movies in English.
Yesterday, after almost three months without any contact, I talked with my ex girlfriend, I took the decision of talk to her because I saw a sadness stuff in her TikTok, it wasn't a sadness stuff only to her but also for me. Her cat died and I couldn't ask for it, because it was like my son when we were together. We only spoke about it.
I'll try to return to Langcorrect and write every days.
July 25, 2025
Adım adım
LangCorrect'teki Türklü kullanıcıların mirakı aniden arttı, kesin olarak neden bilmiyorum. Birçok düzeltme aldığım anlamına geliyor. Çeşitli insanlardan düzeltmeler almak her zaman ilginç. Maalesef, birkaç sözün ve birkaç tabirin anlam nüanslarını henüz anlamam, ama genellikle düzeltmeleri anlarım. Eklerler ve sonekler (özellikle fiillerde) Türk dilin en ilginç yönü, ancak aynı zamanda bu da en zoru! Her gün bir şeyi ögreniyorum, her gün geliştirmeye çalışıyorum. Adım adım! Yardımları için tüm düzelticilere teşekkür ediyorum!
July 25, 2025
Ejercicio de Preparación CELU (certificado de español)
¿Cómo han transformado las redes sociales la manera en que nos comunicamos y cuáles son los beneficios y desafíos de esta transformación?
Las redes sociales son omnipresentes en nuestras vidas. No solo sirven para divertirnos sino también para comunicar. De hecho, hoy en día las redes sociales son los modos de comunicación más favorecidos. Que sea para el trabajo, para comunicar con nuestros amigos, con nuestra familia o con nuevas personas todo se vuelve más sencillo con esas redes. No hace falta memorizar un número, no hace falta ir a casa del otro.
Esta facilidad para comunicar hace que hoy en día hablar directamente con el otro parece más fastidioso. De ahí el hecho que la manera en la que nos comunicamos se convirtió más virtual que presencial.
Este cambio tiene a la vez sus beneficios porque como se lo mencioné, comunicar por las redes sociales es más sencillo y fácil, podemos hablar con cualquier persona, en cualquier hora. Sin embargo, tiene sus desafíos como por ejemplo una adicción a las redes la cual conllevaría a un aislamiento del individuo, es decir, el efecto opuesto de las redes sociales ya que son para comunicarse con los demás.
(Este ejercicio es una preparación para el CELU, un examen de español que tendré que tomar. Si tienen algún consejo, comentario o vocabulario que me recomiendan de utilizar, se lo agradecería :))
July 25, 2025
Eile
Jetzt bin ich in Eile, weil ich heute mit einem Deutschen zu lange gesprochen habe. Mir hat es so viel Spaß gemacht, dass ich über die Zeit total vergessen habe und ich habe mit ihm zusätzliche anderthalb Stunden geredet. Daher habe ich nicht genug Zeit dafür, meine anderen Aufgaben für heute zu erledigen.
Vorgestern habe ich es angefangen, mein Tagebuch wiederzulesen. Obwohl meine Gedanken daraus nur mehrere Monaten alt sind, finde ich das Lesen extrem spannend. Wenn ich sie lese, kann ich meinen Fortschritt sowohl im Deutschlernen, als auch in anderen Tätigkeiten sehen. Ich habe schon manche Ideen vergessen und jetzt denke ich von ihnen wieder.
Am spannendsten finde ich es, über meine damalige Routinen zu lesen: wie viel Schlaf bekommte ich, wann stand ich auf, wie viele Stunden lernte ich Deutsch und so weiter.
July 25, 2025
July 25, 2025
A Good Girl's Guide To Murder Kitap Çevirisi
25/07/2025
Pip onların nerede yaşadığını biliyordu. Little Kilton'daki herkes onların nerede yaşadığını biliyordu. Onların evi kasabaya ait perili ev gibiydi; insanların ayak sesleri/adımları oradan geçerken hızlanırdı ve sözleri/kelimeleri boğazlarında boğulur ve ölürdü.
Sizce Türkçenin doğal yapısına uygun bir çeviri olmuş mu? Gramer hatası ya da herhangi bir eksik, kusur var mı?
July 25, 2025
July 25, 2025
La dominance apicale
C’est l’un des aspects du monde végétal qui ne cesse de m’émerveiller. Les plantes sécrètent une substance appelée « auxine» qui ralentit la croissance des bourgeons latéraux afin de concentrer les nutriments vers le bourgeon terminal. Ainsi, en faisant pousser en priorité leur sommet, elles peuvent s’élever plus haut et capter la lumière avant les autres. Il va presque de soi que, nous aussi, lorsque nous poursuivons un objectif, il est essentiel d’y concentrer toutes nos forces. Cependant, dans la société japonaise actuelle, il n’est pas rare de voir des personnes ayant dédié leur vie entière à leur travail, se retrouver démunies de tout sens de l’existence une fois à la retraite. Les plantes, elles, ne sont pas aussi imprudentes. Elles prennent soin de laisser en veille leurs bourgeons latéraux. Et si leur sommet venait à être brouté par un herbivore, ces bourgeons jusque-là discrets prennent aussitôt le relais, comme s’ils n’attendaient que cela.
Dans un monde aussi instable que le nôtre, il est risqué de ne dépendre que d’une seule source de revenus. Si une profession décline, ou qu’un domaine est remplacé par l’intelligence artificielle, nous pouvons facilement nous retrouver sans repères. Disposer de plusieurs compétences, pouvoir être utile dans différents domaines : cela peut devenir une véritable source de tranquillité.
La capacité à s’adapter avec souplesse à son environnement, la prévoyance d’entretenir d’autres possibles, d’autres chemins susceptibles de devenir un jour le centre de notre vie…
La stratégie à la fois robuste et flexible des plantes me semble être un bel exemple, un modèle de sagesse auquel nous pourrions nous inspirer pour vivre avec plus de paix, de solidité et de liberté.
July 25, 2025
Think of any word. What is it?
The word that comes to mind first is, "espresso." I bought an espresso machine just one week ago, and I've looked for favorite beans. My brother got hooked on a coffee first a few years ago, then I was influenced. I would like to drink an authentic espresso in Italy someday.
July 25, 2025
July 25, 2025
Les langues que j’ai essayé d’apprendre
J'ai essayé d'apprendre beaucoup des langues par example:l'espagnol, le chinois, l'italien et l'allemand mais j'ai abandonnée ces langues car je ne savais pas comment d'apprendre une langue tout seule. Alors, j'ai décidé d’apprendre le français parce que j'avais prendre des cours de français donc je connais quelques bases
July 25, 2025
July 25, 2025
Qu’est-ce qui vous a amené à commencer à apprendre la langue
Actuellement , j'apprends le français. Enfait, j'ai appris le français parce que j'ai pris des cours de français mais les professeurs n'étaient pas bon donc j'ai décidé que d'apprendre le français toute seule. J'aime beaucoup la langue française parce qu'il une langue très magnifique et intéressante et j'aime les langues en général. Actuellement , je suis en niveau A2. J'espère pouvoir passer au niveau B1
July 25, 2025
Heute
Ich habe heute in der Schule gearbeitet. Ich musste unter den Boden gegangen. Es war sehr schmutzig. Aber ich habe um dreizehn Uhr um die Arbeit zu beenden. Ich habe circa fünfundvierzig Minuten später zu Hause angekommen. Ich habe mein Kinder gesehen, Dann wir zusammen einen nickerchen gemacht haben. Danach wir haben Abendessen gekocht, dann wir zusammen Abendessen gegessen haben. Es war sehr toll und lecker.
July 25, 2025
Venerdì 25 luglio
Finalmente sta arrivando il weekend. Sono totalmente esausta e spero di riuscire a riposarmi questo fine settimana.
Quando vado a letto dopo un turno impegnativo, il mio cervello è ancora attivo, quindi finisco per essere troppo sveglia per addormentarmi.
Ogni inizio è difficile e spero di cavarmela abbastanza bene.