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Meine Mutter kommt Deutschland
Ich bin glücklich. Meine Mama besucht mir nächste morgen. Sie kommt von mein Land und ich bin aufgeregt. Sie beliebt für zwei Monate. Ich koche viel Essen diese Abend für sich. Morgen will ich meine Wohnung aufräumen. Ich habe ihr gevermisst und ich bin sehr glücklich zu sie sehen.
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edit my essay intro
Motivational speeches frequently evoke mixed reactions. Proponents assert that such speeches serve as a catalyst, inspiring individuals to take action. In contrast, opponents contend that these speeches are largely ineffective; many people either fail to act afterward, or efforts are short-lived. Nevertheless, the key insight is that some individuals are genuinely motivated, while others struggle to translate motivation into action. This suggests that motivational speeches are effective initially, and their apparent ineffectiveness later arises from psychological barriers. By closely examining the barriers, this essay will demonstrate that motivational speeches can indeed foster meaningful action.
Sept. 9, 2025
Fernstudium oder Präsenzstudium?
Nach der Corona-Pandemie hat sich die Frage gestellt, ob in der Zukunft statt Präsenzveranstaltungen Online-Universitäten eingesetzt werden müssen. Zu diesem Thema gibt es facettenreiche Vor- und Nachteile, die zu betrachten sind. Als Vorteil lässt sich vor allem anführen, dass man unabhängig vom Land an Seminaren teilnehmen kann, Es gibt nämlich Menschen, die das Studium nicht im gewünschten Land absolvieren können und ihre Träume aufgeben müssen. Außerdem müssen die Studierenden durch Fernstudium keine Zeit mit Verkehr verlieren, wodurch mehr Zeit fürs Studieren bleibt. Ein weiter Aspekt wäre, dass man in der Lage ist, Veranstaltungen aufzunehmen und später zu besuchen. Ungeachtet dieser Vorteile gibt es einige zu berücksichtigende Nachteile. Als Nachteil lässt sich zum Beispiel erwähnen, dass an Online-Universitäten sich weniger Freundschaften schließen lassen, die Studierenden sind nämlich durch Präsenzstudium imstande, neue Kontakte zu knüpfen. Zudem führt das Präsenzstudium zur Förderung der Teamfähigkeit, was im Fernstudium nicht zu beobachten ist. Darüber hinaus lassen sich die Lernstoffe im Präsenzstudium besser vermitteln als im Fernstudium, weil im Präsenzstudium mehr Zeit zum Verständnis eines Themas aufgewandt wird.
Mit der Entwicklung der Technologie und dem Bedürfnis der Menschen nach mehr Zeit ist eine Zukunft mit Fernstudium zwar zwangsläufig, jedoch bin ich der Meinung, dass das zukünftige Studium eine Mischung von Präsenzphase und Fernstudium sein sollte, damit nicht nur den Studierenden die Lernstoffe besser vermittelt werden, sondern sie können auch dadurch neue Teamfähigkeiten erwerben.
Sept. 9, 2025
What I learrn today in the 6 minutes English podcast
Today, I listened a 6 minutes English podcast to imorove my english. It was about a country that measures the happiness. I liked it, it was interesting. I learnt that here is an international Day for the happiness, it's the 20th of March. I don't remember the name of the coutry I spoke about but it is a country located in Asia and they said that it was never colonised so it have all the traditions from the last centuries. But they had a problem because a lot of people were leaving the country because of the work and to earn more money. So they went in Inda for example. And to they made come back, they spend 100 000 000 (I don't know how to say that number) of dollars. I liked this epidode.
Sept. 9, 2025
I modi di studiare l'italiano (parte2)
E poi, ci sono moltissimi video soprattutto dei simboli fonetici su Youtube per chi studia Inglese, parlando l'inglese mostrando la sua bocca come si muove.
Vivo da anni in Italia, mi capita che gli italiani mi fanno i complimenti per il mio italiano.
Anche se so che si tratta di un complimento di cortesia, mi fa comunque piacere.
Tuttavia, una volta mi è capitato che una commessa mi ha detto che la mia pronuncia dell'italiano non è buona, e da quel giorno continuo a cercare un metodo efficace per migliorare la mia pronuncia in italiano.
Per esempio, ascolto il CD e parlo con gli amici italiani, ma non riesco a vedere i movimenti della loro lingua, e quindi non riesco a capire bene come articolare certi suoni.
A volte cerco il video in Italiano su YouTube usando le parole come "dizione" o "logopedista", ma alla fine non riesco mai a capire bene dove posizionare la lingua nella bocca.
Personalmente penso di non riuscire a pronunciare bene la "u", "gli" e le "rr".
Perché quando dico "due", capita spesso che mi chiede "tre?", e non sono mai riuscita a dire "arrivederci" correttamente.
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La de número 26
Rara vez la veo. En las ocasiones en que sí la he visto, no me ha saludado. Apenas me reconoció. Jamás la veo en su jardín, aunque su perro siempre ladra de detrás la puerta del jardín cuando entrego sus cartas. No la veo nunca paseando por la calle. De hecho me cuesta describirla. Presumo que viva sola y a menudo me pregunto si está contenta o si alguien piense en ella.
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Global Warming
It's common sense that Global Warming is a global preoccupation, many countries faced a lot of struggling with campaigns at divulgation, warnings and conscientization. Like: Electric cars, more green places and reduction of pollution. Of course, there are a lot of ways to reduce these changes. However it’s very difficult to continue if this doesn't affect all people. Despite this, let’s first explain what Global Warming means.
Global Warming is when the earth gets warmer, but not naturally, because it’s caused by human activities. The main causes are burning fossil fuels (coal, oil, natural gas), deforestation, and certain industrial/agricultural practices. Your effects are: rising global temperatures, melting ice caps and glaciers, sea level rise, more frequent heatwaves, stronger storms, and shifts in ecosystems. With all this, it is clear for us, if we don’t change our habits, nothing changes. It may not seem like it, every person could make the difference, we don’t want our beautiful world to get destroyed by our acts, make you the difference.
Sept. 9, 2025
Survival horror games.
Finally, I’ll start with a topic which I love so much: Horror games. Not just games, but anything related to horror. I started this when I was just a kid, around my 11/12/13 years, yes I know this is too early, but even this time, I already had contact with horror games like Resident Evil. The problem is, I didn't know anything in English, barely read, felt lost much easily and I gave up. This is not for me, or so I thought. Starting my adolescence, youtube was already a phenomenon, with a lot of content creators and every type of videos to watch. I always liked to watch videos, mainly about the games, watch videos from my favorite youtubers playing horror games which I didn't have any courage to play, show me that I was passionate for horror games, just not have the bravery to play haha. Analog horror, psychological horror, survival, games, videos, and movies, the creativity involved always captivated me, mainly if it involves monsters. Jumping for the current era, with my 19 years, I always play every game, about horror, as far as survival Horror Resident Evil, psychological horror, Silent Hill, but oddly enough, Outlast 1 it’s my favorite game about horror, not the franchise, but your purpose to be a really scary horror. Putting you into a skin to Miles Upshur, a freelance journalist who receives anonymous denouncing about the strange events in Mount Massive. Miles, doesn't have any weapon, or knows to fight, it’s only you and the unknowns. With this purpose, this game shows me the major physical horror that I have been faced with, a sick game, I recommend it if you are as in love with horror as me.
But in your opinion, do you like horror? Do you have a favorite game?
Feel free to share, I’m interested to know.
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use new word to make sentences
*Note:I used chat gpt to correct my sentences and this is the result.I am very suspect the AI, can you guys check it again
for me?
Words that I was trying to make sentences with:
attend staff launch strike counterstrike nuclear site chief
revolutionary aftermath carry out enrich set to
mutton dressed as lamb
1.Mary is the only one who isn't allowed to attend the party.
2. The supermarket staff didn't do their job well; they don't even know where the WC is!
3. My school launches an event each month.
4. I don't think launching a strike against that team is a good idea, maybe they would implement a counterstrike at any time.
5. Don’t approach a nuclear site or you might put yourself in danger.
6. A chief is the most important person who has to be a good leader and strategic.
7. Revolutionary warriors often have a good place in people's hearts.
8. In the aftermath, houses, skyscrapers, and other buildings collapsed into rubble, causing ain pollution.
9. Scientists are carrying out research on a new medicine that allows teeth to regrow in adults and the elderly
10. Chefs usually use butter to enrich the flavour of the dish.
11. They are set to launch their store next Thursday.
12. She is 70 years old but always dresses like a 20- year-old woman what a mutton dressed as a lamb!
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04 et 05 de septembre
04.09.2025
Je pense que je suis une personne sensible.
Ils sont passé deux ou trois choses importantes dernièrement.
La première, ou au moins l'événement plus récent, est le fait que un gar de notre camp de rock, il ne peut pas aller à notre réunion. C'est un problem, parce que trouver une nouvelle date, ça paraît impossible. Je voudrais y aller, même si ce gar ne peut pas arriver. Je voudrais y aller pour une autre personne.
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La réunion est annullée. Mon amie, elle ne peut pas aller aussi. Ça me rende fâchée. Nous planifions cette réunion pendent juillet et août, donc deux moins et ils découvrent just maintenant qu'ils déjà ont plans et ne peuvent pas y aller. Je suis particulièrement affligée, car je voulais voir mes amis et une personne que j'aime exceptionnellement.
Je suppose nous allons à nous voir pas avant juin.
C'est dommage, parce que je le vois presque chaque nuit dans mes rêves. C'est un tourment.
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NCT 정우 오빠한테 메시지 보내고 싶어요🥹 저는 아직 한국어 초보라서 ChatGPT의 도움을 받았어요…
정우 오빠에게
사실 오늘은 제가 오빠를 처음 만난 날이에요.
그래서 그냥 일방적으로 러브레터를 보낼게요.
조금이라도 오빠의 눈에 닿을 수 있다면 정말 기쁠 것 같아요.
정우 오빠를 정말 좋아해요.
오빠를 만나고 나서 많은 게 변했어요.
인생에서 처음 간 콘서트가 127이었고, 원래는 여행이나 먼 길 가는 게 서툴렀는데 지금은 너무 즐겁게 느낄 수 있게 되었어요.
그리고 멋진 친구들도 많이 늘었어요.
오빠가 저를 여러 곳으로 데려가 주고, 멋진 것들을 많이 보여 주고, 좋은 사람들을 만나게 해 줘서 오빠는 정말 마법사 같아요ㅎㅎ
조금 과장일지도 모르지만, 오빠는 그만큼 제 안에서 소중하고 멋진 존재예요.
오빠가 기쁘면 저도 기쁘고, 오빠가 슬프면 저도 슬프고, 오빠가 즐거우면 저도 즐거워요.
그리고 오빠가 팬들한테 많은 환호와 칭찬을 받을 때 제가 괜히 기뻐지고, 오빠가 여러 곳에서 활약하는 걸 보면 괜히 자랑스럽고, 오빠가 열심히 하는 걸 보면 저도 열심히 해야겠다 생각하게 돼요.
오빠가 다정하고 멋진 사람이기 때문에 저도 그렇게 되고 싶어요. 마음이 바로 서는 느낌이에요ㅎㅎ
오빠를 좋아하는 건 당연하지만, 오빠를 좋아하는 제 자신도 좋아해요.
그렇게 생각하게 해 주고, 저에게 멋진 걸 많이 보여 줘서 고마워요.
앞으로도, 가능하다면 쭉, 계속 좋아하게 해 주세요.
밥도 잘 먹고, 푹 자고, 물도 많이 마시고, 앞으로도 계속 건강하고 행복했으면 좋겠어요.
오빠 인생 속에서 웃을 수 있는 시간이 제일 길었으면 해요. 오빠의 웃는 얼굴이 너무 좋으니까요ㅎㅎ
언젠가 직접 감사 인사를 전할 수 있기를 바랍니다.
Sept. 9, 2025
Necesito ayuda con el siguiente texto (para trad de ingles)
La traducción es mucho más que trasladar palabras de un idioma a otro; es un proceso complejo que requiere comprender el contexto, la intención y la cultura del texto original. Un traductor debe tener en cuenta no solo el significado literal de las frases, sino también la manera en que serán recibidas por el público objetivo. Por ejemplo, un texto publicitario que funciona en un país puede no tener el mismo impacto en otro debido a las diferencias culturales. Además, existen distintos tipos de traducción: literaria, técnica, audiovisual, entre otras, y cada una exige habilidades específicas. La traducción técnica, por ejemplo, requiere precisión terminológica, mientras que la literaria necesita sensibilidad para mantener el estilo del autor. Con la globalización, la demanda de traducciones ha crecido considerablemente, lo que convierte a esta profesión en una herramienta clave para la comunicación internacional. Asimismo, la tecnología ha introducido nuevos retos y apoyos: los traductores automáticos pueden facilitar ciertas tareas, pero difícilmente reemplazan la capacidad humana de interpretar matices. Por ello, el traductor moderno debe combinar sus conocimientos lingüísticos con el uso inteligente de herramientas digitales para ofrecer un trabajo de calidad.
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Konzerte
Irgendwie ist es so gekommen, dass ich noch nie auf einem echten, coolen Konzert war. Fast alle meine Lieblingsbands sind auseinandergefallen; die übrigen einrichten Konzerte selten und nur da, wo ich nicht anwesend sein kann. Hinzu kommt, dass man heutzutage alle Konzertaufnahmen zur Verfügung online hat, und zwar kostenlos. Damit bekommt man die besten möglichen Bild- und Klangqualität und riskiert nicht, den Ohren Schaden zuzufügen. Jedoch können Aufnahmen die Stimmung eines Konzerts nicht vollkommen übertragen, was für viele Menschen der entscheidende Faktor ist. Persönlich sehe ich keinen Sinn darin, ein Konzert einer zufälligen Band zu besuchen.
Wenn ich zukünftig die Möglichkeit habe, mir meine Lieblingskünstler live anzuhören, würde ich auf sie unbedingt ergreifen!