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Writing Excersize 3
Ciao a tutti! A mio parere utilizzare dei mezzi tecnologici nuovi normalmente non è pericoloso né per lo sviluppo psicologico, né per lo sviluppo fisico dei bambini. Al contrario: credo che l’uso della nuova tecnologia giovi loro nelle molte maniere, se li usano troppo.
Da piccolo, ancora quando ero nella scuola materna usavo il nostro computer personale, e l’internet. Nella scuola dell’obbligo ho ricevuto il mio primo telefonino. A scuola media ho ottenuto il mio primo smartphone. Ma non avevo mai un’esperienza cattiva. Nonostante, è anche vero che i miei genitori non mi hanno lasciato di usarli troppo.
D’altra parte, l’uso esagerato dei mezzi tecnologici, particolarmente dei mezzi tecnici nuovi può essere pericoloso per lo sviluppo dei bambini. Se si li usano troppo, è possibile che diventino dipendenti del internet o dei giochi virtuali – questo è particolarmente vero quando parliamo ai bambini.
Tuttavia, lo sviluppo rapido della tecnologia ci è dato molti strumenti utili, anzi insostituibili non solo ai bambini, ma anche agli adulti. Quelli, tra l’altro ci agevolano di trovare la nostra destinazione, mandare messaggi agli nostri amici, e anche a trovare le risposte alle nostre domande dei temi diversi.
Per riassumere, nonostante usare i mezzi tecnologi nuovi troppo può far male ai bambini, però a mio avviso la sua influenza a loro è molto meglio di quello che molti pensano, e possono beneficare per tutto.
Nov. 7, 2022
7 novembre 2022 - m’habiller le cœur
Le renard a demandé au Petit Prince de fixer une heure chaque jour pour le voir parce que ça s’agissait comme un rituel qui lui permettait à « m’habiller le cœur ». Ici, ce n’est pas vraiment d’envelopper le cœur avec de vêtement mais ça signifie « préparer l’état mental » pour voir le Petit Prince. Mais qu’est-ce que ça veut dire ? C’est comme chaque fois après que je fixe un rendez-vous avec mes amis, plus proche le jour de rendez-vous, plus heureuse que je suis. Je imagine beaucoup de choses en attendant et c’est ce moment-là me donner de motivation pour faire des chaos quotidiens.
Nov. 7, 2022
Gate of happyness
You open the Gate and watch muy little village or muy landscape. You walk on path to River. There is a Bridge and you have across It.
There is a extensive field. Village is in The button.
In village there is a beach on the left and there is a cliff on the right. If you watch to go Hill then you would Drive on Road to mountain valley, near the forest. There is a lot of wood un the forest.
Nov. 7, 2022
La vie d'un élève anglais (7/11/22)
Coucou à tous !
Ce matin, je me suis réveillé à 7h du matin (c'est la même chaque lundi et vendredi) mais mardi, mercredi et jeudi, normalement, je me réveille à 5h55 du matin. J'adore dormir alors les lundis sont assez biens (mais je préfère encore les week-ends).
J'ai pris le bus (pour 1h30!!!) Pour aller au lycée. C'était trop long pour moi mais un peu amusant car je suis appelé ma petite amie.
Pour le dernier deux heures, j'ai fait mes devoir du théâtre, pris le déjeuner (un hamburger et des frites) et parlé avec mes amis/ ma petite amie.
Maintenant je fais le cours du théâtre pour une heure et le français pour une heure et trente minutes.
Alors salut et bonne journée !!! :D
-Sam
Nov. 7, 2022
Past modals
He may have noticed that she's not feeling very well / that she was not feeling very well / that she has not been feeling very well/ that she had not been feeling very well (Are all of them correct? Would it be possible for you to explain the difference between them to me?)
I could have gone on a trip with another class. (If it is a missed opportunity, does it mean that I can't replace COULD with MIGHT or MAY? )
She must have received my message, but she didn't reply.
You should have informed me that there's a meeting today.
I ought to have known that this relationship will/ wouldn't last long. (Do they mean the same?)
She could /may/ might have told me that she's mad at me. (Are all these options correct? Does MIGHT express a slighter degree of probability than MAY? )
Nov. 7, 2022
El peligro de los extraños
Vivimos en un mundo en que la gente se sienten cada vez más sola, excluida y desconectada. Lo que no nos ayuda es el miedo a hablar con extraños, que nos aflige por culpa de quienes han difundido el mensaje de que el acto de hablar al azar puede ponernos en peligro. Algunos expertos afirman que enseñarnos esto, desde una edad temprana, ha tenido graves consecuencias: un tipo de precaución y preocupación que va demasiado lejos ha reducido nuestra capacidad de confiar en otras personas, y ha llevado a la pérdida de oportunidades sociales y económicas. Sin embargo, hablar con desconocidos, en las condiciones adecuadas, puede mejorar el estado de ánimo y aportar un sentimiento de pertenencia.
Toda la vida nos han vendido el mensaje del peligro de los extraños, así que no me sorprende que les tengamos miedo. Cuando era más joven, todos los adultos me advertían que no hablara con desconocidos por el peligro. Pero a medida que fui creciendo, me di cuenta de que hablar con el desconocido a tu lado tiene sus beneficios. Al hablar con ellos en los bares y las calles, he encontrado momentos de alegría y amistades tan profundas que no esperaba, que no habrían sido posibles si no hubiera interactuado con ellos. Ciertamente, algunas personas han atravesado experiencias traumáticas con desconocidos; lo mismo me ha pasado. Pero eso no significa que todo el mundo represente un riesgo, ni que debamos descartar a todos por no ser un conocido.
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Nov. 7, 2022
2 milliards de personnes mangent des insectes
Dans une entrée de journal précédent j’ai mentionné la sécurité alimentaire et j’ai posé la question : s’il y aura assez de nourriture pour tous les inhabitants du monde dans les années à venir. Le Salon international de l’alimentation vient de se tenir à Paris et les délégués qui venaient de partout, réfléchissaient à cette question. Comme j’ai déjà écrit, l’innovation est le clé et pour certains spécialistes les insectes pourraient faire partie de notre alimentation quotidienne.
Je vois vous frissonner mais pour 2 milliards, c’est à dire, un humain sur quatre mangent des insectes régulièrement. Apparemment, on dit que ces personnes sont entomophages : un nouveau mot pour moi ! En Thaïlande, au Mexique et dans certains pays africains, les chenilles, les criquets et des vers sont au menu. Ce dont je me souviens, c’est quand j’étais en Thaïlande, nous nous sommes arrêtés à un feu de circulation et il y avait des petits enfants qui vendaient des insectes frits. Le chauffeur m’a fortement encouragée d’en acheter. Selon lui, c’étaient délicieux et on les mangeait comme collation.
Alors, mettre de côté nos préjugés, car on dit que les insectes sont pleins de nutriments : des vitamines, des protéines et beaucoup plus encore. En effet, les insectes sont pleins des substances indispensables à notre bonne santé. De plus, élever des insectes est écologique. On n’a pas besoin de beaucoup d’eau ou d’espaces et ils mangent n’importe quoi.
Quant à moi, je hésite de remplacer de temps en temps la viande ou le poisson avec les insectes. Ça sera pour moi, un pas trop loin.
Nov. 7, 2022
J'ai envie de dormir
Je me suis levé aujourd’hui en me sentant super fatigué. C’est parce que j’ai dormi très tard la nuit dernière et que je n’ai pu dormir très bien. En effet je continuais réveiller en pleine nuit. Maintenant, je ne veux rien faire d’autre que dormir mais j’essaie de lutter ce sentiment. Même si la météo ne m’aide pas du tout. Il pleut tellement du coup tout ce que je veux faire est dormir. Pour combattre contre ça, je vais prendre un bain froid et faire une promenade.
Nov. 7, 2022
Nov. 7, 2022
A diary written yesterday
I stayed up late last night just for watching short videos about XuSong, a famous singer in China, through Bilibili (one of the most popular video websites in China). I felt so regretted that I didn’t write my diary timely and waste a lot of time. It hurts my eyes a lot cuz the light was too faint at the night. I just couldn’t t stop scrolling through the screen even though I didn’t find something that attracted me too much.
Is this app full of magic? Then why my eyes could not move away from the screen? Reflecting on myself, perhaps it is the feeling of boredom that make me do this kind of useless and repeated thing.
I promise to finish every day’s tasks first, then have a little rest. Try to have a real life conversation with friends to clear my head.
When I went to the bed, I suddenly remembered my unfinished work, watch a spoken practicing course, memory new vocabulary and listen to the interpreting course. How busy should I have been. However I didn’t take it seriously, as if it’s not a big deal for me. Only if the examination of CET 6 is around the corner will I fully concentrated on studying.
Super thank you for corrections.
Nov. 7, 2022
Дтп
Неправильно говорить, что производители и эксперты краш-тестов никогда не рассчитали женскую анатомию, когда они придумали манекены, использованные в соответственных тестах. На самом деле, согласно десятилетнему отчёту, сделанному американской газетой, транспортное управление уже начало тесты женских манекенов с 2003-го года. Тем не менее, тогдашние модели были по-простому уменьшенными вариантами стандартных мужицких моделей, равнявшись размерам двенадцатилетнего, символизировав по этой причине только 5 процентов женщин.
Сегодня, шведские инженеры выпустили обновленные манекены, назвав их "моделями для оценки сидений", которые являются более символизированными женских тел.
Числено говоря, мужчины с гораздо более вероятностью гибнут в ДТР, чем женщины, поскольку они проводят длиннее время за рулём, и они более склонны к совершению рискованных действий на дороге. Однако, женщины страдают от более серьёзных травм после аварии, если учесть размеры их тел. Из-за этой принципы, женщин-инженеры были вдохновлены создать более точные модели.
Сегодняшнее исследование сосредоточивается на смягчении ударов, причинённых во время ДТП. Исследователи сделали акцент на то, что дизайн сиденья влияет на вероятность выживания, из-за разницы центра тяжести между мужчинами и женщинами. Насчёт причины, почему только сейчас есть точное изображение женского тела, они ответили, что
мужчины царят в научной области, так что число сторонников более точных моделей-очень мало. В будущем, они надеются , что будут создаться модели пожилых, детей и тучных.
Nov. 7, 2022
A WeChat Message
Hi, Eilidh, People who do Covid tests are transferred from some public or private hospitals, and they get their salary from their original work unit.
In fact, every volunteer has a work unit and has a steady income.
Epidemic prevention and control work is only phased work, and volunteers don't need to work for it for so long, so it doesn't matter much to work for it for a short period without paying.
But if people took it as full time work for a long time, there would be a specific department paying them, otherwise no one would do it.
People who do the job also need to live, to support their families, so they can't do things without getting payback.
Nov. 7, 2022
My little diary
Do work out a lot. I felt sore and ache all over from back to feet.
Yesterday I went to a suburban home with my friend, and when we came back to school, we immediately happened to catch a bus, which was extremely fortunate, because we have to waited for at least 10 minutes in the bus stop before. Interestingly, the bus driver was still the one who sent us to our destination in the morning.
In the afternoon, though the restaurant was crowded with people, most of them are students, we got into the restaurant without a hesitation. Waiting for about 20 minutes, our delicious dinner was on the table. I did not think the food was as good as it used to be, maybe I was just not hungry anymore after a long wait.
Thank you for correcting.
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Nov. 6, 2022
Mi rutina de mañana
Original:
Cuando me levantaba en la mañana, usar el baño y lavarse los dientes. Después puse la ropa, cepillarme el pelo, y ir a desayuné. Usualmente, comía un bagel y bebía un taza de naranja.
Con la correcciones:
Cuando levantaba en las mañanas, usaba el baño y me lavaba los dientes. Después me ponía la ropa, me capillaba el pelo, e iba a desayunar. Usualmente, comía un bagel y babía un vaso de jugo de naranja.
Nov. 6, 2022
Quelle est votre saison préférée ?
Ma saison préférée est définitivement l’automne. Premièrement, je pense que la météo est le plus agréable en automne. Je ne supporte pas trop la chaleur, et je suis toujours soulagé quand la première fraîcheur d’automne arrive, alors je peux porter une jolie chemise en flanelle. Les changements plus rapides dans la météo, le feuillage, et la lumière sont un rappel d’être conscient de l’impact de l’environnement sur nos vies. Bon, ça peut devenir un peu fatiguant d’avoir besoin de ratisser les feuilles tout le temps, mais à mon avis ça vaut le coup. Deuxièmement, l’automne a deux de mes fêtes préférées : l’Halloween et le jour d’Action de grâce. Il y a toujours des soirées déguisées à Halloween où on peut s’amuser bien avec ses amis. En revanche, le jour d’Action de grâce est une période de passer chez famille, réfléchissant bien à quoi est le plus important.
Nov. 6, 2022
Frases 13
Nota: quiero usar el pronombre "ustedes" con el dialecto de América Latina. Quiero sonar lo más auténtica posible, por favor, siéntete libre de dejar cualquier corrección.
1. My dad is really cheap.
- Mi papá es muy tacaño.
1. I’m not looking forward to summer this year.
- No estoy deseando que llegue el verano este año.
1. Apparently this summer is going to be the hottest it has been ever.
- Al parecer, este verano va a ser el más caluroso que jamás haya sido.
1. I would like to get a tan at the beach!
- ¡Me gustaría quemarme en la playa!
1. Are you an extrovert?
- ¿Eres un extrovertido?
1. We have to buy fake nails. (Plastic nails)
- Tenemos que comprar uñas falsos.
1. I enjoy talking to you.
- Disfruto hablar contigo.
1. What country would you travel to to see snow?
- ¿En cuál país te gustaría viajar para ver el nieve?
1. In Australia, it snows in only one place.
- En Australia, solo nieva en un lugar.
1. Although I haven’t done much in my life yet, it just means that I have more experiences to look forward to later in life and now!
- Aunque no ya he hecho mucho en mi vida, solo significa que tengo más experiencias que esperar más adelante en la vida.
1. My friend left (dropped out of) school early due to bullying.
- Mi amigo dejó los estudios temprano debido al acoso.
1. We are all working and we all want to travel together.
- A todos estamos trabajando y todos queramos viajar juntos.
1. I find it really exciting that we are all going to go to university.
- Me cuesto emocionante que a todos vamos a ir a universidad.
1. It doesn’t matter.
- No importa.
1. It is a six month course you do, and after you complete it, you can go into any university course you want.
- Es una carrera de seis meses que hagas, y después de entregarla, puedes ir a cualquiera carrera quieres.
Nov. 6, 2022
O que eu gosto em Portugal
Olá a todos, espero que esteja tudo bem com vocês.
Hoje eu gostaria de falar sobre algumas coisas das quais gosto em Portugal.
Primeiro, acho que o clima é muito bom, é muitas vezes ameno e o sol costuma estar presente. Por isso, é bastante diferente de França onde não há muito sol durante o inverno.
Portugal é uma país com uma cultura muito rica, ora no âmbito literário com autores como Luis de Camões, José Saramago e Fernando Pessoa como em outros âmbitos artísticos com por exemplo o fado. A comida também é uma das coisas das quais eu gosto muito, em particular dos caldos e dos pastéis de Nata que como quase diáriamente.
Admiro muito a beleza de Lisboa, é uma cidade muito colorida e gosto muito da sua arquitetura e do fato que esta cidade tem muitos parques e espaços verdes onde é possível descansar. Um detalhe do qual gosto são os pavimentos de pedra com padrões artísticos.
Finalmente, gosto imenso dos portugueses, acho que são muito abertos, alegres e fazem todo o possível para que eu me sinta como se estivesse em casa. Acho que encontraram um equilíbrio entre a vida profissional e as atividades de lazer.
Poderia falar de muitas mais coisas, e fá-lo-ei, mas nos meus próximos textos.
Até já!
Nov. 6, 2022
Nov. 6, 2022
Challenge, Day 37
Today es the 37 th day of my daily English challenge. Today I felt much better than yesterday.
After woke up, I drunk lemon juice. I don't like to have breakfast. Then, I washed my face, brushed my teeth. I begun to clean the fridge because had messy. After I finished it. I baked chicken potato. It was delicious!
In the afternoon, I reviewed some lessons in Spanish, then I read tow texts a loud. I also did same in English. I was delighted that what I did today.
Before sleeping tonight, I will take care of myself and I read my book.
Nov. 6, 2022
Please review my essay.
Do you collect anything?
No, I don’t. I am not very into collecting things. I understand that many people collect on particular stuff because they love it so much. I have a strong love for books too, but I do not want to make a whole collection of my favorite novels and comics. For me, it seems like a waste of money as I can pay a much lower price for the digital form. Besides, my house is too small for this kind of hobby.
3. Is collecting a popular pastime in Vietnam?
I am not sure because I do not know a lot of people, but there are many people that I know who are into collecting. My younger sister and brother, for example, have a whole collection of shoes, some of which they never wear. My childhood friend bought the whole series of all his favorite comics, and dedicate a room to store them.
4. Do a lot of people in Vietnam collect things and what do they collect
I guess just a small number of people in Vietnam are into collecting things. Most people do not have the time or money to pursue this hobby. But I have seen many young people who like to collect high-end products such as shoes, bags, and watches. Stamp collecting is popular among the older generation in Vietnam.
What subjects are you studying?
I’m currently working now, so I do not study any subject at the moment. But I graduated from the University of Finance and Marketing with a degree in International Business.
What subjects are you studying?
I’m currently working now, so I do not study any subject at the moment. But I graduated from the University of Finance and Marketing with a degree in International Business.
4. Why did you choose to study that subject?
The first reason is that I have a knack for learning English, so I decided to pursue a career that could make use of it. Another reason is that at that time me and my parents believed that the business sector offered better salaries than others. As a result, I wanted to work in the import and export industry, so I chose to study International Business.
5. Do you like your subject? (English linguistics)
No, I did not. While the courses that required English skills were rather easy for me, those that required Math skills, such as financial analysis, were torture for me, as I am very bad at Math. I wish I had chosen to study English linguistics major instead.
1. Is it very interesting
Some courses were quite interesting. I don’t really remember their names, but one course really opened my eyes to the basic concepts of a country’s financial system, which were totally fascinating. Others, on the other hand, were quite dull, especially ones that required mathematics and Excel skills.
Nov. 6, 2022
Día sexto de mi reto
Hoy es el sexto día de mi reto de español. hoy me he levantado poco bien. lo primer algo lo he hecho es tomar zumo de limón,luego me he lavado la cara y los dientes.
Por la mañana, he limpiado la congelador porque estaba sucio y desordenada,después he preparado un plato es " Patatas con pollo al horno."
Por la tarde, he revisado algunas lecciónes en español, además, he léido un texto en voz alta. Creo que es una buena manera para mejorar mi dioma.
A la 15 horas, tuve una cita con a mi amiga por Skype y la había esperado por mucho tiempo, desafurtunadamente,no ella estaba en linea. Entences, he leído tambien dos textos en inglés en voz alta.
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