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Octavo día de mi reto
Hoy es el Octavo día de mi reto de español. No pude hacer nada porque estoy un dolor muy fuerta; tengo un hernia cervical.Estoy sufriendo mucho.
Por la mañana, he hablado con mi amigo por Skype. Te dice lo que pasó ayer. lo dame unos consejos.
La verdad no pude hablar con él por mucho tiempo porque estoy muy enferma.
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J'ai essayé un restaurant
Ce soir, j'ai essayé un nouveau restaurant en plein air pour dîner la première fois. Je veux dire, le restaurant n'est pas vraiment nouveau mais il est nouveau pour moi car je ne suis jamais y allée auparavant.
D'ailleurs, j'ai mangé << tuna belly >> grillé. Ce n'est pas le meillieur que j'ai goûté mais c'était assez delicieux. Ma partie préférée de l'expérience était l'atmosphère c'est a dire l'endroit était très beau en ce sens que l'éclairage était sympa et le temps était parfait. L'atmosphère était vraiment relaxant.
Heureusement, c'était un mecredi donc il n'y avait trop de monde contrairement à l'habitude. C'est probablement un peu desagréable pendant le weekend quand le lieu est bondé.
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Test
The first semester of my new school is very hard in november gives the most test and school works. December I have a presatation in pesonal account . The test are almost over and then come the schools works. I mean the homeworks are also important.My dad always to do buiness and is not home he came back in six week. But I am happy about that . When my father is not there I have few pressure. So wish me lucky.
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Ordre des mots
Hello
I do not understand why this order there, for an affirmative sentence, which relates a situation →
He asked where Paris was.
and not where was Paris
Why put Was after Paris?
Thanks
Poupette
Bonjour
je ne comprends pas pourquoi cet ordre là , pour une phrase affirmative , qui relate une situation→
He asked where Paris was .
et non where was Paris
Pourquoi mettre Was après Paris ?
Merci
Poupette
Nov. 8, 2022
Viaje a España
Mientras estoy escribiendo esto, mis padres están volando arriba el océano atlántico. Regresan de España, de donde yo regresé ayer al medianoche. Pasamos nueve días en el sur de país conjunto con mis tíos, mi hermano, y mi cuñada. Lo que me recuerdo más es el sistema de transporte público. ¡Era tan eficaz! Disfrutamos también muchos platos típicos en forma de tapas, como las patatas bravas y los croquettes. Me quedo sin más días de vacaciones porque también fui a Perú en la primavera, pero cuando sí tengo más días de vacación querría ir a otro país hispanohablante, porque nada me ayuda más con el lenguaje como pasar tiempo en el extranjero.
Nov. 8, 2022
Worstelingen & Gokken
“Je bent zo koppig” zeg ik. “Ik zeg iets en toch heb ik het gevoel dat je niet naar mij luistert en niet wil stoppen wat je aan het doen bent. Heb je weleens geprobeerd?”. Ik ga door alle stemmingen omdat ik een behoefte van empathie heb die niet vervuld wordt. Ik voel mij elke dag treurig, overweldigd. De aanleiding is tamelijk helder: hij wil niet de persoon worden die hij zegt hij wil worden. Hij is wel iemand wiens persoonlijkheid ingewikkelder te begrijpen is dan wat ik in eerste instantie dacht. Dit doet me denken aan wat hij voor mijn laatste verjaardag had gekocht. Een chocolade hond. Hij wist toch dat ik een afkeer van chocolade EN van honden had. Waarom kan hij niet een keer fatsoen zijn?
Het is wel zo dat hij zijn hele leven met verslavingsproblemen had geworsteld en een grote behoefte aan nabijheid had. Ik denk dat deze behoefte uit zijn jeugd komt. Soms voel ik mij perplex, zonder oplossing. Ik ben altijd ruimhartig met iedereen en vooral met hem maar ik heb ook mijn eigen worstelingen die aandacht en empathie nodig hebben. Ik geneer me ervoor en zou altijd voor hem beschikbaar willen zijn.
Ik had hem betrapt bij op gokken. "Dit beleid ontneemt je risico’s te nemen omdat je anders te veel geld zou verliezen. Je hebt geen controle over wat je doet" zei ik
Nov. 8, 2022
Fire at school
There was a constantly noise in Elena's ears. This sound went after her everywhere. It didn't hurt her, but Elena was sick and tired of them. She knew when and why it appeared.
When she had a lunch after her classes rang out a fire alarm. But it didn't make her anxious. Instead of that, she left a dining room and went towards the alarm in the corridor.
It ringed so loud, that Elena thought, she would never able to hear anymore. She made sure, that the alarm was not broken and hurried up to leave the school.
Elena thought, that she was alone in the building. However she noticed a group of pupils in one of the classes. Kids didn't pay any attention to the alarm. Elena told them to leave the school because in the building must be started a fire.
As soon as they went out, the police and firemen arrived. There was a fire in one of the classes . Something was burst in the laboratory and caused a fire. Nobody was injured, but Elena still heard the sound of the alarm.
Nov. 8, 2022
November fifth 2022
Today,I got up very late ,and I felt also terrible.I read a book named Frankenstein about an hour and ate a hamburger and a half of chicken as lunch which cost twenty RMB.
At Afternoon,I was told my little brother got a 95 in the Chinese exam and 110 in the English exam.His essay written in the Chinese test paper really moved me.He said it was our mother who take him leave the fog when he was abused by his classmates.
I am very happy to see he have such a big progress.I hope my family to be better day by days.
Thank you for checking on my journal,if you have any questions about Chinese,you can ask me.I will do my best to help you.
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Random Thoughts
Thoughts after working in an isolation point for a period.
A young generation is always better than an old generation in terms of work. The former are active, energetic, nimble and efficient.
Our Covid prevention works still have many shortcomings, and there are a lot of spaces that need to be improved.
When it's time to retire, just leave your office. It's not because you are not capable, but because you have already missed your best years.
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Сообщение в блоге
Вчера я прочитала интересную статью под названием «Как начать говорить на иностранном языке». Вот полезные советы из этой статьи:
Почти каждый, кто изучает иностранный язык, встречается с трудностями в разговоре и боятся начать говорить. Это явление называется языковой барьер.
Причины языкового барьера все психологические. Во-первых, человек боится сделать ошибки, потому что они не хотят показаться глупыми или смешными. Во-вторых, многие люди стесняются своего произношения.
Мне интересовали эти два способы решения из статьи: нужно начинать говорить как можно раньше с простыми фразами и важно увеличивать словарный запас. Однако я не согласна, что нужно не бояться ошибаться, потому что иногда не бояться – это невозможно. Будьте удобно с опасением.
Кроме статьи у меня другие способы начать говорить на иностранном языком. Во-первых, нужно практиковать два или три раза в недели с учителем (например, на iTalki или на Preply). Во-вторых, говорите с собой или с домашними животными!
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Ma quale idea
Tra 20 anni, 20% della popolazione francese e 40% dell'italiana potrebbero ritrovarsi in situazione di scarcità di acqua d'estate. Significa uno o più giorni in cui l'acqua non scorrerebbe dal rubinetto. Naturalmente, il riscaldamento globale (che causa estati più secchi) ne è un fattore. Tuttavia, il problema è soprattutto peggiorato da alcune pratiche assurde. Per esempio, la principale regione che fornisce l'Europa in prodotti alimentari è l'Andalusia, con 3 526 669 tonnellate di merce in 2014. Si tratta di una regione semidesertica, dove l'agricoltora intensiva sta già asciugando le falde acquifere... Ma quale idea, di fare agricoltora intensiva in una tale regione!
Una pratica di cui stiamo parlando molto in Francia è quella delle bacine (ho tradutto la parola francese literalmente, "bassines", ma non so se queste hanno un'altro nome in italiano). Le "bacine" sono serbatoi enormi (come piscine olimpiche) per conservare l'acqua. Di fatto, magior parte di quest'acqua si evapora, e gli ordini restrittivi di uso dell'acqua non riguardano lo sfruttamento delle falde acquifere per rimpiare le bacine. Ma quale idea, di dare a alcuni il privilegio di sprecare una risorsa che appartiene a tutti!
Ora, gruppi di ecologisti stano manifestando contro un progetto di "bacina", e occupando il terreno. Il governo ha detto: "trasformeriamo l'agricoltora per adattarla alla situazione ecologica, e rivedremo il sistema di remunerazione degli agricoltori perché non abbiano bisogno di queste pratiche". No, sto scherzando! Ma quale idea, di pensare che la politica consista in fare cose utili che sirvono l'interesse generale!
Il governo ha mandato la polizia e datto agli attivisti degli "ecoterroristi". Riconosco che alcune azioni a nome dell'ecologia sono totalmente stupide et inutili, come attacare dipinti. Ma quale idea di chiamare "terroristi" quelli chi denunciano abusi, quando si usa la forza per difendere un modello economico disastroso che distrugge la natura e ucciderà millioni di persone...
Nov. 8, 2022
Mal aux genoux
Bien que je viens de commencer à faire de l’exercice, j’essaie d’en faire au moins deux fois par semaine. Hier, je suis allé a la salle du sport pour m’entraîner. C’était une journée de jambes alors je faisais des exercices comme des squats, des fentes, et cetera, et j’utilisais des machines des jambes. J’étais trop confiant hier donc j’ai augmenté les poids des machines. Malheureusement, je pense que je les ai trop augmenté car j’ai mal aux genoux depuis je me suis levé ce jour-ci.
On fait quoi quand on a mal aux genoux? Moi, je mets de la glace sur mes genoux et je les laisse reposer.
Nov. 8, 2022
A diary of things happened yesterday
About airdrop.
Today when I was studying in the library, my phone received an airdrop from a stranger’s phone. Honestly, I was extremely curious about the picture that he airdropped me, but I didn’t accept it because I even don’t know this guy. I remembered I have seen some posts on Xiaohongshu about people receiving airdrops from others and most of the contents are pictures of WeChat QR codes of those who sent them. The main reason why I didn’t accept this picture is that I am not sure if it’s sent to me or just the person made a mistake. It was my first time receiving an airdrop from a stranger. Anyway it’s really funny though I haven’t seen the picture.
Nov. 8, 2022
Ein Einkaufen
Lieber Samer,
Wie geht es dir? Ich hoffe, geht es dir gut.
Bei mir ist alles in Ordnung.
Endlich schreibe ich dir, weil ich dir von was ich letzte Woche getan haben, erzählen möchte.
Ich habe mit einem Freund von mir ins Einkaufszentrum gegangen, um ein Geschenk für Ninas Geburtstag einzukaufen.
Das Einkaufszentrum war nicht nur groß, sondern auch schön. Es gibt dort, was du brauchst, wie Lebensmittel, Kleidung, Sportgeräte und Schmuke.
Endlich habe ich eine Armbanduhr gekauft, die sehr schön aber teuer war. Leider hat sie 200 € gekostet.
Dann sind wir ins Restaurant Zum Mittagessen gegangen, wo wir einen Döner gegessen haben. Der Döner hat nicht gut geschmeckt. Und er hat mir nicht gefallen.
Außerdem gab es im Restaurant viel Stau und Lärm.
Schade, dass du nicht mit uns kommen konntest. Wann hättest du Zeit?
Ich möchte gerne mit dir ins Einkaufszentrum gehen, weil ich am nächsten Montag einen neuen Mantel kaufen möchte.
Wir würden viel Spaß zusammen haben.
Hast du Lust darauf ?
Ich freue mich auf deine Antwort.
Liebe Grüße,
Azedien
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Tradução de um texte de um livro de inglês
Quando vamos a um restaurante, com frequência acreditamos que a comida que pedimos é boa para nós. Mais muitos restaurantes servem comida sana, como peixe ou saladas, com salsas que usam muito óleo, graxa o açúcar. A British Food Standars Agency quer que todos os restaurantes dizer exatamente nos seus menus quantas calorias, quanta graxa e quantos aditivos é que tem em cada um dos pratos. Eles pensam que os restaurantes não oferecem aos clientes suficiente informação, e que este novo plano poderia ajudar as pessoas a seguir uma dieta mais sana. No entanto, os chefs não são contentes com este plano.
Bruce Ward, professor de Medicina, disse: "As pessoas sabem que o tabaco é mau para eles, porque há avisos nos maços. Mas quando vão ao restaurante, frequentemente eles não têm ideia de si a comida é saudável ou não. Os produtos alimentícios com muitas calorias, graxa e açúcar precisam de ter um aviso exactamente como o tabaco".
Nov. 8, 2022
Mike Tyson
Hoffe ich, das ich kann sich mit Mike Tyson treffen. Mike Tyson ist ein Menschen, der aus den Armut stemmt. Er hat kein Geld, aber könnte er alle Finanzieren Barriere von seiner Kindheit überwinden, und er wurde ein Erfolg. Ich glaube, das seine Geschichte sehr inspirativ ist. Mike Tyson uns habe gezeigt, das auf der Welt, alles möglich ist.
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