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My diary 1
My diary is in English and before I'll write this story there, I'd like you to check my grammar. Thanks.
After my recent heartbreak I told to all my friends that I was not going to fall in love with anyone any time soon. How wrong I was!
A month ago I got to know an attractive girl with an old money vibe from my English class. She used to compliment me quite often during my course and we've had a few smalltalks. I remember how once after we finished our lessons, I was walking out of the classroom with my another friend and suddenly I heard someone calling me by my name. That was her. We already were in the hallway so I stopped to listen to what she was going to tell me. She was outstretching a hairpin and telling me how she saw it falling from my bag. I told her it wasn't mine (actually, I stopped using all those hairpins and elastics decades ago because my hair is quite short), but her acting was pretty good (well, I believe it was an acting considering the fact how much attention she gave me, yk, compliments and so on) and she continued to insist that she saw it falling, so I told her again that it's not mine and went home. A few lessons later I tried to do the same she did, to compliment her first. So when our class ended, I wanted to tell her that she has an unique style, but I was so nervous so I told her that I like her lipstick shade lmao. After that I couldn't even walk like a normal person because my legs were trembling and in that moment I realised I have a kind of attraction for her. A few weeks later, when our English course was coming to an end, I took my heart and asked for her contacts. She gave me her IG and suggested to walk together to the bus stop. I agreed. During our walk we had a pretty good conversation, she was really outgoing and talkative. She even asked if we could go and have a coffee, I really wanted to but I had to refuse because I was hurrying to get home. I remember how excited I was after this walk, so I called my friend and I was literally screaming while I was telling her what happened. We didn't chat very much until June 15 because she had to prepare for her exams and I just don't like disturbing people. After she passed her exams, we started texting more often. You know, I rarely do get to meet someone in real life who is as interesting as her, which is one of the reasons why I am so anti-sociable. Anyway, I genuinely like spending time with her, partly because she is really talkative as I said and I do not have to make her talk (I had this problem with other people I was interested in). I often have a feeling like we are so similar but at the same time we are so different. I had never met anyone like her. My feelings for her started growing and I felt like now it's more than a simple attraction, it's a crush. But this thought made me feel more hopeless because we live in a very homophobic country and I knew that most likely I have zero chances + she's going to move away to another country before autumn.
June 22, 2023
Une lettre à le maire
Monsieur le maire,
Je vous écris concernèrent une idée pour notre ville. Je viens de voir une diffusion sur le sujet d'environnement. C'est a dit que il y a plusieurs de solutions pour le crise d'énergie et environnement, mais j'ai observé que nous n'en faisons rien ici. Alors, je vous proposerais nous commençons quelque chose avec le but d'améliorer notre situation.
Le premier que je souhaiterais vous proposer est l'introduction de recyclage pour la ville. C'est vraiment mal que nous ne faisons pas encore de recyclage, je crois que vous serez d'accord. Je sais que ce n'est pas facile, mais maintenant est le temps de le faire.
Le deuxième proposition est un objectif d'utiliser seulement d'énergie renouvelable dans la ville à 2025. Oui, c'est un grand objectif, mais j'ai foi en vous et je crois que c'est possible !
J'espérerais que vous serez d'accord. Nous n'avons pas le temps de perdre !
Je vous prie de croire, Monsieur, à l'assurance de mes salutations distinguées,
June 22, 2023
Taxation
If an employee of BV Netherland comes to Turkey to operate the equipment, in this case BVTurkey has to withhold 30% of each payment. For example; BV Netherland issues invoice of 1000 EUR to BV Turkey. BV Turkey makes payment of 700 EUR to BV Netherland, payment of 300 EUR to tax office. However, the withheld amount (300 EUR) can be recovered from the tax which BV Netherland pays in Netherland.
As for VAT, on the one hand, whether to charge VAT or not depends on local rules in Netherland. On the other hand, BV Turkey has to self-account for VAT on the total amount of the invoice which BV Netherland issues. Self-accounting VAT is not cost for BV Turkey.
If Ipek LLC has an exemption from VAT, BV Turkey invoices to Ipek LLC excluding VAT. If no exemption, BV Turkey has to invoice with VAT to BV Netherland. Even if TUPRAG grants an exemption to Ipek, it has nothing to with BV Turkey. So BV Turkey invoices with VAT to Ipek LLC.
June 22, 2023
June 22, 2023
Respecte soi même
Il faut toujours avoir du respect pour soi même si l'on n'a pas pour soi même les autres ne vont pas l'avoir non plus pour nous. Si quelqu'un fait quelque chose qui ne nous plait pas on doit en parler sinon ils ne vont jamais arrêter. C'est la seule choix comme ça il ne va pas avoir des disputes et notre mentale n'aura pas des soucis. M'épreniez pas mal je ne dis surtout pas de confronter chaque personne qui ne nous montre pas le respect ça serai un gaspillage de l'energie et du temps. Quelqu'un qui se laisse irriter des petits mots et de n'importe qui est faible cependant avec les gens qui sont proches de nous ou avec qui on travaille toujours c'est une histoire différente. Peu importe à quel point on aime quelqu'un il ne faut jamais oublier de pas associer avec des gens qui ne nous montrent pas le même respect que nous le montrons.
June 22, 2023
Einsatz von digitalen Medienim Unterricht
Ich möchte in diesem Forumsbeitrag etwas zum Thema "digitalen Medien im Unterricht" schreiben.
Heutzutage steigt die Entwicklung von Technologie immer mehr, aufgrund dieser Entwicklung, ist digitalen Medien im Unterricht beliebter.
Meiner Meinung nach ist sie sehr nützlich, da Sie ,was herkömmliche Unterrichtsmethode können nicht, erlauben.
Darüber und aus verschiedene gründe beziehen Lehrer immer öfter digitale Medien. Wenn Mann Videos und Musik im Unterricht benutzt, verstehen Mann nicht nur schneller, sondern auch effizienter als mit Texten.
App und Software ist eine der beste Arte zu lernen da es sehr gut mit Videos und Beispiele gebildet hat. Und studierende könnten viele Übungen mit dieser neuen Technologie machen.
Für digitalen Medien, die der Deutschunterricht verbessern können, habe ich zwei Vorschlagen. Eine davon ist YouTube. Dadurch können wir viel zu lernen. Die Zweite ist Seiten, wie zum Beispiel longcorrect.com, mit dieser Seite kann Mann seine Schreiben kostenlos verbessern und andere Sprachlernen korrekteren.
An der anderen Seite haben herkömmliche Unterrichtsmethoden auch Vorteil. Bucher sind sehr gut strukturiert und organisiert und sind für Anfänger sehr effizient. Aber nur aus dem Text lesen kann einige studierende ermüden, die Interaktion benötigen.
Zum Schluss möchte ich bemerken, dass wir im Zeitalter der digitalen Medien leben und davon sollen wir diese Gelegenheit zu nehmen, um unsere Lernerfahrungen zu verbessern.
June 22, 2023
Reasons to the Dragon Boat festival
I am not sure how many people will write the story of the Dragon Boat festival these days, since from today to the next two days, people in China will have a national holiday for it.
During these days, people would eat sticky rice dumplings and have boat racing to celebrate it. About 2500 years ago, a poet and stateman in ancient China, named Qu Yuan. He worked for Chu Kindom when he heard that his country was occupied by another kingdom, in order to show his loyalty, he himself jumped into a river to show his disgruntle and patriotism. Therefore, local people threw sticky rice dumpling into the river to prevent fish from devouring his body, and arose the noise of boat racing to keep the evil spirit away aiming to ensure the safety of Qu Yuan's spirit.
Throughout history, plenty of famous figures have come and gone, why we people in China only celebrate this stateman or poet? As to my understanding and give a personal opinion on this; Qu Yuan would like to suicide when his country was conquered, this is what our government wants to imply to us. They'd like to see this idea be inherited from generation to generation.
June 22, 2023
Giovedì
Ieri pomeriggio ho saputo il mio orario a luglio. È qualcosa di orribile - lavorerò dalle tre e mezzo fino a mezzanotte. Addirittura lavorerò tutti i weekend. Dovrò cambiare di nuovo il mio orologio interno. È una delle cose che mi fanno sentire più stressata del solito.
Ieri ho fatto le pulizie, ne ho avuto il tempo dopo ho finito il lavoro.
Fra poco farò una passeggiata e poi cucinerò il pranzo di oggi. Mi ci metterà quasi mezz'ora.
La scorsa notte quando sono andata a dormire le mie vicine davano di nuovo una festa. Mio marito ha mandato loro un messaggio, ma non hanno nemmeno risposto. Volevo andare a parlare con loro, ma non l'ho fatto. Non sono delle persone con cui qualcuno può discutere di qualcosa di buon senso. Sono maleducate, è troppo tardi per educarle.
Sto per uscire di casa, a domani!
June 22, 2023
June 22, 2023
Ephemeris : Italian journal #7
Che cosa ho fatto oggi? Oggi ho preparato un contratto per il partner dalla Serbia. Prima di questo, ho preparato la “autorizzazione al viaggio” (“travel authorization”) per lui. È un documento che permetta la trasportazione di un partner oppure di un addetto (“employee”) con dei fondi aziendali. Ho avuto qualche problema, ma li ho risolti. Il mio lavoro diventa più facile giorno dopo giorno.
Che cosa ho mangiato? Mi sono fatto un panino col pollo “jerk” che ho grigliato ieri. Il pollo “jerk” (jerk chicken) consiste di una ricetta haitiana : le spezie come la noce moscata, il pimento, il pepe nero, il timo. Non dimentichiamo la cipolla e l’aglio. L’ingrediente speciale è il peperoncino “scotch bonnet”, che è dieci volta più piccante che il jalapeno… certo, ho sofferto per la mia creazione. L’amo…
Sono abbastanza felice che siamo a fine settimana. Sono stato molto occupato questa settimana, e mi sono lasciato di non finire il mio lavoro personale per due giorni. Per due giorni, non ho fatto né il corso di macroeconomica che seguo, né il mio regime d’italiano che devo fare ogni giorno se voglio parlare correntemente quando arriverò in Italia questo autunno. Ma adesso posso concentrarmi! Penso di stare felice... vediamo.
June 22, 2023
June 22, 2023
June 22, 2023
Cuidar del planeta
En mi opinión cuidar del planeta es muy importante. Nadie puede vivir sin un medio ambiente saludable. Para cuidar del planeta es importante que todas las personas y empiezas grandes también hacen algo.
Personalmente, no como carne desde yo era muy pequeña. Entiendo que esto no es posible para todos pero me gusta comidas vegetarianas.
Además mi familia no tiene un coche. En la ciudad es facíl utilizar bicicletas y trenes y en esta manera ahorrar dióxido de carbono - y dinero también!
Otra manera de cuidar del planeta es no comprar cosas que no necesitas. Esto no es facíl, pero intento a comprar ropa usada y libros usados cuando es posible.
June 21, 2023
June 21, 2023
June 21, 2023
Sa voiture est en panne
Mon neveu a décidé d’acheter une nouvelle voiture. J’admets que sa voiture actuelle est vielle. L’autre jour, il conduisait sur l’autoroute et tout d’un coup la voiture a calé. Il y avait beaucoup de circulation et c’était une expérience horrible. Mon neveu a essayé de démarrer la voiture : sans succès. Hélas, la voiture était en panne.
Donc, il a appelé une dépanneuse qui est venue rapidement. En attendant, mon neveu et certains autres conducteurs ont poussé la voiture sur le côté : les autres conducteurs étaient très serviables. Le lendemain, le mécanicien dans le garage a donné la mauvaise nouvelle à mon neveu. Ça va coûter beaucoup pour la réparer. Mon neveu n’était pas sûr s’il devrait la réparer ou en acheter une nouvelle.
En ce moment, sa femme est enceinte et il a pensé qu’une nouvelle plus grande voiture serait plus utile. Après avoir réfléchi, il a décidé que c’était le bon moment d’en acheter une nouvelle. Après la naissance du bébé, ils auraient besoin d’une voiture plus spacieuse pour la poussette et toutes les autres affaires du bébé.
June 21, 2023
June 21, 2023
Daily text 3
Yesteday was a long day.
First, we went to a little town near to my city, there we harvested potatoes to analyze the yield production. Later we classified these potatoes as a "saleable" or not "saleable". In the afternoon I was gauging the advance of a fungus inside the wood of a grapevine. After that I got home and sleep all the evening, I was exhausted.
June 21, 2023
Ma allergie
Je suis allergique à l'amoxicilline, un antibiotique très répandu. Ma famille ne savait pas que j'étais allergique jusqu'à ce que ma sœur et moi en prenions pour des soins dentaires quand nous étions enfants. Ma sœur n'a pas réagi, mais j'ai été couverte de taches rouges pendant des jours. Pire encore, mes parents pensaient que la réaction était à cause de l'infection, et m'en ont donné plus avant de découvrir le lien. J'ai entendu dire que si l'on est allergique à une pénicilline, on est allergique à toutes les pénicillines, donc je suis probablement allergique à elles aussi.
June 21, 2023
My translations exercises 21/06
1. The low pressure area spreads along the western coastline.
2. We enjoy mild sunny weather all summer.
3. A heavy amount of snow has fallen in the north states.
4. Shower was registered by meteo stations in New-York.
5. The most heavy thunderstorms have passed in Texas.
6. Three tornados cause destruction in Florida.
7. More than two feet of snow have fallen in Arizona.
8. Record high temperatures were registered in Washington.
9. The temperature went over 110 degrees in Fahrenheit.
10.It is impossible to find weather suitable for holiday!
June 21, 2023
21/6/2023
Je vais aller à la fête du travail. Cést un travail de prétendre être un parti. Je voudrais travailler. Mais je voudrais travailler sur un projet. Maintenant, je travaille sur un projet pour mon cours. Le projet est une algorithme que apprendre détecter fractures vertébrales. C'est difficile á faire ! Merci de lire. Bonné journée !
June 21, 2023
Electricity Short Circuit
In the past week, there was an issue with the electricity in one area of my house that frequently caused short circuits, which frustrated me a lot. It is a common sense that safety is paramount when dealing with such situations. Although I am not a professional electrician, however, I have undergone professional training in this field and obtained a working license. Therefore, I carefully investigated the matter myself.
Eventually, I discovered that these short circuits were caused by a shorted hot wire and a neutral wire in the garden due to the incessant rain. I immediately disconnected the wires leading to the garden, then resolved the problem within the house. Once the rain stopped for a while, I will deal with the electrical issue in the garden.
June 21, 2023
学校の最後の日は近づいています。
僕の学校の最後の日は6月26日です。残り5日はあります。近づいているから、僕の感じはすごく複雑です。まず、僕は夏が大好きです。夏では、僕は自由の気持ちがすごく好きです。友達と一緒に自転車に乗る計画はありますので、めっちゃいい夏になります。二つ目は、僕は友達と話し合いことができません。僕は仕事を三つありますので、この夏で僕はすごく忙しいです。この年度で僕は多い友達を作ったので、夏でこの新しい友達と話し合いことができません。三つ目は、僕は先生たちを失います。僕の英語の先生は中々いい先生です。僕の数学の先生は三つのクラスといるので、先生を随分失う。逆に物理学の先生をうしないません。彼はとても固めですから。
June 21, 2023
June 21, 2023
Healthy lifestyles
Today, it is thought that a person who has good health has lots of assets. They have to create and follow a healthy lifestyle in order to enjoy the benefits of having a healthy lifestyle. Before anything else, a healthy lifestyle is a way that keeps a person’s body fit, boosts their immune system to avoid getting sick easily and helps us to enjoy our happy life. It includes some activities and exercises that a person has to do it regularly so that they can keep and improve both their physical and mental health. In my opinion, it is important to have a healthy lifestyle because it will make our lives better. There are three principles of staying healthy and having a healthy lifestyle. First, we have to relieve our stress. Some people are always busy with work and hectic schedules. It prevents them to have time to relax and stress may weaken their health. To do that, we have to practice meditation every day. Next, we should consume healthy food. A healthy diet means a meal that will increase our life expectancy. If we follow the diet, we have to often eat fresh fruits and vegetables. Besides, it is better if we also eat more fish and less red meat. Last but not least, working out is another good choice to have a healthy lifestyle. We can play sports: jogging, cycling, swimming, doing gymnastics or practising yoga if we reach middle age. In short, it is vital for us to have a healthy lifestyle because it will help us live longer and have a better and happier life.
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