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I would like write about a day in my work
Today in the morning I went to the central office of my job, this office is about 1 hour and half from my house. I arrived 10:30 am and my boss and me we had a metting with the comercial manager. The meeting time was 11 am but he has put off the meeting because he were waiting for another parther in order to finish his work
We met to introduce to him, because this manager arrived to Lima just 1 month ago, so , we had not met yet.
First I introduce me, I said my name, my age and my occupation then, I talked about our main daily activities and suddenly I realised that my boss (Juanca) had forgotten his glasses in his houses. I thought " How will Juanca read the report?, He must look for glasses soon. O maybe I could read the report for he, I have to went on my presetation and the magener asked me some question.
Finally the manager told me that next week we will have a meeting with the port staff to arrange some issue. I looking for ward these day.
Oct. 2, 2025
Oct. 2, 2025
Oct. 2, 2025
Screen Time
How much screen time do you spend?
Screen time refers to how much time you use smart phones or tablets.
My phone showed about two hour and a half in the past a day.
Although I use Duolingo to practice for learning English and French at least one hour a day, the rest of the time is expected to use other apps including for chatting, watching social media and browsing internet, which must be a waste of time.
If I save screen time, I could get alternative time to be able to spend learning something and doing exercise.
I have to learn more about the value of time from screen time.
Oct. 1, 2025
Mis aperturas favoritas de ajedrez
Me alegra poder jugar al ajedrez porque me gusta resolver puzzles. En mi opinión, mi apertura favorita es la Apertura de Viena porque puedo utilizar el peón e4 y el caballero Nc3 para controlar el centro. También me gustaría usar la Defensa Francesa, el Gambito de Dama y la Defensa Siciliana porque puedo desarrollar mis peones. A veces, uso la Apertura Réti para jugar el caballero Nf3 antes de desarrollar los peones.
No me molesta que pueda usar aperturas diferentes, especialmente al jugar contra otros jugadores. Sin embargo, me encantaría jugar la Apertura de Viena, la Defensa Francesa y la Defensa Siciliana a menudo porque son algunas de las aperturas más populares.
Oct. 1, 2025
Мой день 01.10.25
Cегодня я проснулась в 09:00 часов. Моё первое задание было подписивать на курсе танцы моей университеты. Я планирцю учить танцевать в этом семестре, который начинается через две недели. Потом я тренировалась говорить по-русски с другом и затем я работала c 20:30 часов. Я студентка, но средно один раз в неделье я работую кассиром в магазине. И сейчас я пишу текст, но я действительно хочу спать. Доброй ночи.
Oct. 1, 2025
Nostalgia for Stationery Shops 文房具屋が懐かしい
I have been fond of stationery shops since childhood. I can spend hours browsing the shelves of notebooks and pens without buying anything. Square notebooks and metallic-colored pens attract me, even though they seem impractical.
When I was a child, there were several small stationery stores in my neighborhood, but now they have almost disappeared. These days, I usually buy stationery either at the stationery section of a supermarket, in a shop inside a station building, or online on Amazon. I miss the old days when I could wander into a stationery shop with no particular purpose and enjoy discovering new items.
Oct. 1, 2025
Oct. 1, 2025
Oct. 1, 2025
Ich habe nicht genug geschlafen
Gestern habe ich geschrieben, dass ich heute versuchen werde, etwas Interessant zu schreiben. Nun...ich werde es nicht tun, aber weil mir geht es nicht gut. Ich habe weder Lust noch Energie. Ich habe kaum geschlafen, wegen grübelnder Gedanken. Ich habe versucht, tagsüber zu schlafen, aber ich konnte es nicht schaffen. Aus diesem Grund habe ich gerade Melatonin gekauft, um besser schlafen zu könnten.
Oct. 1, 2025
Entrada de diario, 10/01
Hoje não tenho muito o que fazer e por isso estou contenta. Gosto do meu trabalho mas prefiro passar meu tempo fazendo outras coisas, como aprender e praticar idiomas. Eu dou muita energia para o meu trabalho que eu comecei há mas que um mês, e realmente eu cresci tanto desde então. Tenho assistido muitas aulas e tenho praticado muito, e portanto tenho aprendido muito. No entanto, tem muitas outras coisas na minha vida para que eu gostaria de concentrar. Por exemplo, quero praticar falando e escrevendo português cada dia para que eu posso conectar mais com minhas amigas brasileiras e mostrar que não so aceito a cultura delas, mas ainda mais quero celebrar a cultura delas. Também quero aprender mais com jiu jitsu, quero aprender mais com xadrez, quero escrever mais poesia, quero ler mais ficção, quero limpar minha casa mais, quero passar mais tempo na naturaleza perto de mim, quero viajar mais. Sem ter que trabalhar, ainda eu nunca estaria sem coisas que me agradem; não seria chato.
Oct. 1, 2025
01.10.2025
Yesterday I read an article on the site https://www.bbc.com/travel. The article was simpler, and I think that I understand very well. The article describes a small town close to Amsterdam named Zaanse Schans. Zaanse Schans is very famous for its windmills. In this place, there is more tourism, but in a small place, which could be a problem because all the services of Zaanse Schans aren't sufficient for all the tourists. This is awful, because the Zaanse Schans loses more money. If you wander up into Zaanse Schans, you can meet more tourists from England, Italy, France, and Germany. If you decide to go to Zaanse Schans you remember to wear a windproof jacket. In this place, the weather is very threatening.
Oct. 1, 2025
Sinners (= Pécheurs)
Il y a une semaine, j'ai vu le film nouveau « Sinners ». Ça veut dire « Pécheurs » en français. Il s'agit d'un group des (surtout) américains noirs qui doivent se protéger d'un vampire irlandais qui veut les tuer et les tranformer en vampires.
J'ai trouvé le film très genial et passionant. Les personnages ont été développés avant la violence a commencé, alors on s'est souci des personnages quand ils ont commencé d'être tuées. Elles étaient très interessantes et pas stéréotypées. Le film est une métaphore pour l'expérience des minorités (surtout des américains noirs) en États-Unis au début du 20e siècle mais aussi aujourd'hui. Le film est plein du symbolisme lucid, comme que c'est un amérindien qui avert une famille de « ne pas laisser le diable entrer dans leur maison » quand il parle du vampire blanc. Le symbolisme central du film est la musique et sa spiritualité, ce que j'ai aimé parce que j'aime la musique.
Je ne veux pas dire des « spoilers », alors regardez le film vos-mêmes !
Merci d'avoir corrigé
Oct. 1, 2025
Mon parcours français
Je m'enseignais le français pour voyager dans les Antilles sur ma voilier. On a voyagé dans les îles de Martinique, Guadeloupe, Saint Martin, et les autres îles non-francophone pendant trois ans. Cependant, on est aux États-Unis, et je suis en train d'oublier mon français. J'ai decouvert ce site web, et j'ai décidé de l'utiliser pour pratiquer jusqu'à je peux voyager autre fois à les pays francophones. Merci pour votre aide.
Oct. 1, 2025
Oct. 1, 2025
Daily Journal
Hoy es un día de vacation por yo. En la mañana, me levanté a las 7 y yo hice la café. Antes, la desperté mi hija. Ella toca el bus en la mañana para ir al escuela. Antes ella se fue, yo fui a una junta de su escuela.
Por almuerzo, comé pollo y fideos de Tailandesa. Ahora, estoy practicando español. Más tarde, voy ir a las clases de agilidad con mi perro. Ella se llama Rosie!
Oct. 1, 2025
Who I am? Where I am in my life?
Hello! My name is Aila.
I would like to know English very well , but I don’t have enough money for English teacher.
So I decided to learn English yourself.
At this time isn’t easy for me, because I lost myself. Knowing English will help me get into a masters program. I want to learn a new profession, maybe it helps me define who I am ? I want to work for the benefit of people and benefit society.
Oct. 1, 2025
Oct. 1, 2025
Oct. 1, 2025
Oct. 1, 2025
Journal Entry
Je suis stressé. Je veux peindre les jeans de senior avec mes amies ce soir, mais mes parents sont inquiets, j'ai besoin d’une pause. Je suis un petit peu fatigué mais je suis pas mal. Nous sommes très occupés et n’avons pas un autre temps pour cela. La répétition musicale était très amusante hier soir. Mes copains sont très talentueux pour chanter, danser, et faire du théâtre. Dans la chanson, “Pandemonium”, ils sont sauvages. J’adore chanter avec eux. Demain, j’ai un course de cross-country. Je suis un petit peu douloureuse mais je vais essayer de faire de mon mieux. J'ai faim pour un snack. J’ai mangé un pickle hier, c’était délicieux.
Oct. 1, 2025
Oct. 1, 2025
Oct. 1, 2025
Mars Dream
Humans have been dreaming of exploring outer space for a long time. In the 1960s, one American astronaut successfully reached the moon and walked a few steps. That was an amazing technical improvement and symbolizes a historic milestone in history. Besides the Moon, Mars, however, has come to us recently. Elon Musk, the richest and one of the most talented guys on this planet, has expressed many times in different scenarios, willing to send regular travelers to Mars. As a fan of space, I am looking forward to it. I believe I am unable to afford the travel fees, but I will feel excited if someone rich can fly to Mars as a tourist. I firmly believe I will witness the memorable moment before I pass away.
Oct. 1, 2025