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My First Experience at the Office
Have you ever been the last one to leave the office? Overtime works sometimes allow us to feel depressed or panicked. In the last week, I found myself working at the office around nine o'clock. Other than me, there were only two female colleagues who are one year younger than me. They seemed to complain about their hard works and feel like crying. However, I couldn't afford to comfort (relieve) them at that time because I don't know how to close the office and where to return the key. I would also feel like crying if they left the office earlier than me.
I said to them, "Hey, could you wait a moment? I've never been the last one who makes sure that everything is alright. Could you let me know how to close the office?" They looked surprised at my words and began to laugh as if they forgot their complaints.
July 31, 2021
July 31, 2021
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Quando acabou "13 Reasons Why" ficava muito triste. Não porque acabasse a série, mas sim porque achei que a série tenha muito potencial, e em vez de fazer bom uso do enredo, os diretores decidiram dar-lhe um final ruim.
Nas últimas temporadas, a série mudou de rumo. Virou uma de assassinos e homicídios, e assim deixou a historia inicial de como todo o mundo deve consultar um psicólogo caso se-sinta deprimido, e não recorrer ao suicídio como um método para aliviar-se da dor.
Com o passar dos capítulos, me pareceva estranho que os estudantes pudessem levar uma vida escolar normal e finalmente graduar-se sem nenhuma repercussão, já que tinham feito muitos crimes graves e infrações da lei. Ao final, a série decepcionou todos os espectadores dela.
July 31, 2021
My Family's Old Shop
When I was young, my house was nearby our family's store.
The shop sold clothes, blankets, fabrics, silks and so on.
My grand family and my mother always were there and operating the store.
My brother and I used to play the store, jumping between goods, trying to open and close the shop window and helping to calculate money.
When out-of-business sales, my grandfather seemed sad.
Now that I think about it, the shop was his everything and many memories were there.
Getting older, I can understand him better.
July 31, 2021
July 31, 2021
Follow-Up
Last evening, I got my second dose for COVID-19. I didn't have any side effects except for muscle pain until I went to bed. At 3 am, I woke up because I had chills, but I didn't have a fever. Then I slept but woke up again at 6 am because I had fatigue and fever. I took medicine and got better after a while. If I have to get vaccinated every year, it will be tough.
July 31, 2021
July 31, 2021
父母和爱
在这一辈子只有一个事实我们有机会理解，就是真爱。世界上有不同的人，文化和语言。大自然就是这样子。可”爱”，这个单词，这个感觉到底设什么?
某人认为父母给孩子的爱是最单纯和温柔的。无论发生什么事情和情况，爸爸妈妈都会爱自己宝宝。对我来说父母与孩子的关系是太了不起了，因为是上帝给他们的礼物，可以出生一个可爱的小生物，饱和他么俩最好的特点。不仅是很大的礼物，也是很大的责任，因为孩子们是父母最好的老师，一起会经验生活的考验。
夫妻有不同的方法给孩子们爱。比如说教养宝宝儿的时候爸爸和妈妈需要用大声告诉他那个东西不能做，或者孩子长大时，让他独立生活。有的人觉得让孩子吃苦是很重要的。可能本来孩子们不会明白为什么不让他回家或者其他的情况，可是有的父母认为不吃苦的话，怎么长本事啊。
总而言之爱孩子们有很多不同的方法，所以每个家庭都有期待找到最适合自己的情况，住一起又开心又感动和谐。虽然当好的父母并不容易，所以大家都要坚持努力哦，熟能生巧，勤能补拙，从第一天到最后一个。
July 31, 2021
Boss monkey
I read an interesting article in the newspaper this morning. It said as follows: A boss monkey in Takasakiyama changed recently. There is a mountain called Takasakiyama in Oita. A troop of monkeys lives there. This time, a female monkey became boss for the first time. Are females becoming stronger in both human and monkey societies?
July 31, 2021
July 31, 2021
درس هفتم ۳
لطف کنین، یک قاشق و یک بشقاب.
لطفا پنجره را ببند.
لطفا پنجره را ببندید.
این هشت واژه فارسی را در دفترتان بنویسید.
چه از او میپرسی؟
اسمش را از او بپرس.
به چه کسی نامه را مینویسی؟
لطفا دفتر شاپور را بده.
در را نبندید.
بفرمایین انجا، چای بخر.
دوستم ومان حجازی را میخواند.
شما هر روز روزنامه میخوانید؟
از اینجا میدان سرخ را میبینید؟
چه میکنی؟
مجله میخرم.
این مجله را سر کلاس میخوانیم.
این واژه جادبد را روی تخته بنویس.
این حرف را بزرگتر بنویس.
July 31, 2021
درس هفتم ۲
لطفا چیزی از او نپرسین.
امروز به من نیآ.
یک قاشق، لطف کنین.
نترسید، بیآین.
لطفا به من از ایران نامه بنویسین.
گرسنه ای، نان با پنیر بخر، شیر بنوشی.
لطفن به بازار برو.
بفرممایید اینجا.
خواهش میکنم، به فارسی جواب بدیت.
خواهش میکنم، ترجمه بکنسد.
خواهش میکنم، به من از ایران بگو.
خواهش میکنم، کمک بکنید.
بفرمایین تو.
بفرمایین به تخته سیاه.
لطف کنین، یگ چای دیگر.
لطفا آن را از حانم استاد بپرسید.
لطفا انجا ننشستسد.
لطفا به او چیزی در باره این نگو.
July 31, 2021
July 31, 2021
Über Mich
Hallo! Mein Name ist Amila. Ich wohne jetzt in Amerika, aber ich bin in Bosnien geboren. Ich bin vierundzwanzig Jahre alt und mein Geburtstag ist am 6. Januar. Mein Traum ist Deutsch zu lernen, weil ich in Deutschland leben will. Ich will eine Psychologin werden. Jetzt arbeite ich psychiatrische Forschung. Es ist ein guter Job, aber es ist nicht mein Traum. Wenn ich Deutsch lerne, dann kann ich in Deutschland studieren und ich könnte meinen PhD bekommen. Ich weiß nicht, wenn ich in Deutschland arbeite. Ich denke, dass es nett sein würde, aber was passiert, wenn ich einen Mann finde? Ich hoffe, dass er in Deutschland bleiben will. Amerika ist nicht für mich. Es ist ein gutes Land, aber Deutschland ist besser. Deutschland hat Krankenversicherung und sie kümmert sich um Klimawandel. Meine Meinung ist, dass Amerika sich nicht um Klimawandel als Deutschland kümmert. Schließlich denke ich, dass ich nur eine Veränderung brauche.
July 31, 2021
July 31, 2021
A short dialogue
(In a badly-lit classroom there are Bill and Cassidy. The former, a funny, talkative guy. The latter, a rude, quiet guy. After half an hour of class, the teacher, an indifferent philosophy professor, went out to receive a call. Bad news, surely.)
(Bill, without hesitation, address Cassidy.)
B: Are you the one who works on metaphysics?
C: I'm not. Who are you?
B: Bill, nice to meet you. I do metaphysics... too.
C: What are you? A Platonist or an Aristotelian?
B: I would call myself an Aristotelian biased towards the analytical philosophy.
C: So, you intend to teach modern logic to Aristotle... You better teach yourself Greek. Otherwise you'll be dealing with the phantom of a phantom.
B: Phantom of what? I see you're versed in speaking gibberish.
C: That's one of my honed-skills.
July 31, 2021
Journal
My department is a public institution which focuses on farmers training in our district. This year we have to train 300 farmers and they belong to different majors, such as fruit planting, vegetable planting, grain and oil production and so on. Of course, there is a ginger plants class this year and the video you saw is that the students of that class were holding their field practice. For every class, there are two sections which are theory learning and field practice, and the second section should take at least half the duration of each class.
You are a good sister and I think everyone would want to have a sister like you. You are so kind, thoughtful and dedicated to your brother, but you shouldn't take care of your brother only by yourself, and you should let his wife and children do some nursing stuff too. I know you must be exhausted because of looking after your brother, so I won't want to write and read more this time, so that you can have a nice period of rest. By the way, have a safe trip to your brother’s house and I will read the Chinese words 杭州 for you. Bye bye.
July 31, 2021
聲の形
今日は「聲の形」をもう一度読み終えた。すごく好きだから、二日で読んだ。好きなの以外に、読むの速さは進歩の証かもしれない。そう思いたいだけかもしれない。一つの好きなテーマは自分を高めることだ。佐原は主人公の石田に「どうやったら自分が昔より成長したってことを証明できるんだろう」と聞いた。私とたくさんの知り合いは頻繁にこの質問や進歩について考え込む。石田は「変わろうと足掻いてる時間の方が大事なように」と答えた。この答えが割と好きで、特にこの物語の中ではいい答えだ。悔しい過去から逃げ出したい気持ちがあって、自分を高めることが多いと思う。でも進歩を示すのは難しいから、足掻くことそれ自体は大事だ。
July 31, 2021
Washington, DC
Washington, DC adalah ibu kota Amerika Serikat. Ada kota besar lebih besar dari Washington, seperti Los Angeles dan New York. Distrik itu tidak terletak di Virginia atau di Maryland. Seperti DKI Jakarta, itu bagian negara yang berbeda. Ada kereta api dan kereta bawah tanah di kota itu.
July 31, 2021
2021/07/30
除了《火焰之紋章》，我現在最愛玩的遊戲是《黑帝斯》。這個遊戲基於希臘神話，主角是黑帝斯的兒子—— 扎格列歐斯。他想離開陰間去人間，不過要突破陰間裏的迷宮才行。他在路途上會遇到奧林帕斯十二神，不同的親戚會給他不同的特殊能力。除了特殊能力，還有其他因素能影響遊戲玩法，比如武器、獎勵等，所以每回都有可能變得非常不同。因為玩法會隨著故事而變化，而且還有新的對話，不僅玩了多少次，還會有新鮮感。我現在用十五分鐘能逃出陰間，但上網看，有些人只需五分鐘就打通了，我十分佩服。這個遊戲我極力推薦，不過必須警告你，是超易上癮的。每次打通後我都想繼續玩下去，常常就是這樣不知不覺玩了幾個鐘頭，要做的事全都忘掉了。剛寫完這篇文章，我心血來潮又想玩一頓，今晚大概甚麼都做不成。幸虧現在是週末了，玩得痛快點也可以。
July 31, 2021
A calculate mistake
Few weeks ago, I start a one-week training program.
In that week I will jogging one hour each day.
The result was good.
But there just a little problem about location.
I need to take a bus go to that sport center, which needs 45 minutes to an hour.
In total will be around 2 hours.
This week I decided to jogging at my house.
I was thinking I can save a big deal of time.
But the truth isn’t what I thinking at all.
Because I don’t need to take the bus hence, I get up late.
I spend longer time in eating breakfast, shower…
In a real comparison go to sport center will be more effective.
July 31, 2021
L'envie d'aimer
Cette chanson est très belle. Pour moi ce n'est pas difficile de comprendre ses paroles. Je n'en ai pas besoin de suivre ses paroles.
Pour moi c'est presque un miracle parce que j'ai mes problèmes pour comprendre les français parfois.
Je dirais que si la personne parle rapidement, je ne comprends pas rien.
Je suis certaine que tous les jours nous devons entendre quelque chose dans la langue que nous sommes en train d'apprendre, mais j'aimerais apprendre la langue vivante e pas quelle des manuels de langues.
Parfois je m'oublie que c'est important faire l'imitation comment un perroquet sans penser trop à les regles de la langue.
Pour moi, quand j'apprends quelque chose en français, j'essaye de comprendre le structure de la langue et je sais que je fais cet erreur très souvent.
Mais parfois je pense : Si je dois apprendre toutes les règles de grammaire et d'orthographe avant de commencer à parler, ça me coûtera un tas de temps, donc je préfère entendre une chanson qu'est plus amusante.
Oh, maintenant j'écoute "Le lien" par Gregory Le Marchal. Ça faisait beaucoup de temps que j'avais trouvé cette chanson.
PS: Je sais que Gregory était malade et il est mort, mais je n'ai pas compris exactement quel était sa maladie. Je ne suis pas quelqu'un que connais bien le monde de la chanson française. Le même si passe avec Daniel Belavoine.... je sais que il est mort à cause de un accident/crash d'avion., mais je ne comprends pas pourquoi ces chanson sont très tristes. Quelqu'un pourrait m'expliquer tout ça, avec des mots faciles ? Merci !
Ps: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=COJB9LCdH1M et tant pis..... si je me détruis ....
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SSKIvNhoNYo Seul sur le sable........ Les yeux dans l’eau ........Mon rêve était trop beau
July 30, 2021
July 30, 2021
Are there professions that the society allows be amoral?.
When we were raised by our parents, professors, church, among others. They taught us about morality, ethics, what is good or bad, but when we get close to the way the world worked, we figured out that these values do not work in some areas of the society.
You can see a flexible morality in lawyers. They choose a part or position and build their cases, they do not always taking the fair side. They build the case that seem under the law, but that does not mean to be below the values taught us at home, like, the person that has to compensate a thief for defending itself, the country has to compensate a corrupt corporation for breaking some capsule of a contract, no matter the corruption context . All society knows about this behave and keep it no matter what .
How about the business world, some businessmen and companies have a profile that looks like that of a psychopath or a sociopath. They take advantage over other, non matter rights or lives of others. They finance corruption, pay for wars, manipulated people, they just care themselves. Again, all society knows about this behave and keep it no matter what.
The society embraces this kind of behaving, even exalts it. Why?. Maybe some kind of primitive instinct of predator and prey, where the winner deserves the award. I do not know. What do you think about it?.
July 30, 2021
Journal ordinaire
Aujourd'hui j'ai parlé avec mes amis japonais pendant 7 heures ! Je me suis amusée bien, et j'ai beaucoup ri.
En même temps, j'ai un problème avec Chronopost (ce qui semble qu'elle n'ait pas de bonne réputation du tout...) sur une livraison avec la douane, j'ai un autre problème avec un restaurant, qui m'a demandé au phone mon adresse d'email pour confirmer la réservation, mais je n'en ai pas encore réçu un. Je crois que le dernier s'est trompé de l'addresse soit parce qu'il contenait le mot japonais, soit je l'avais mal prononcé.
Ça me rend toujours nerveuse quand je dois téléphoner car j'ai beaucoup mal à comprendre ce que dit l'interlocuteur quand il parle français. J'aurai également à appeler à Chronopost, ce qui me rend encore plus nerveuse à cause de leur mauvaise réputation. J'espère que ça va aller...
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