July 31, 2021
Boss monkey
I read an interesting article in the newspaper this morning. It said as follows: A boss monkey in Takasakiyama changed recently. There is a mountain called Takasakiyama in Oita. A troop of monkeys lives there. This time, a female monkey became boss for the first time. Are females becoming stronger in both human and monkey societies?
今朝、面白い新聞記事を読みました。それによると高崎山のボス猿が変わったらしいです。大分に高崎山という山があります。そこに猿の群れが住んでいます。今回、初めてメス猿がボスになったそうです。人間の社会も猿の社会も女性が強くなっているのでしょうか？
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Usually, the first letter of title words has a capital letter, so: "Boss Monkey". However, what you have written would still be acceptable.
I read an interesting article in the newspaper this morning.
It said as follows: A boss monkey in Takasakiyama changed recently.
There is a mountain called Takasakiyama in Oita.
A troop of monkeys lives there.
ThisFor the first time, a female monkey has becaome the boss for the first timthere.
For the first time, a female monkey has become the boss there.
Are females becoming stronger in both human and monkey societies?
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I was not sure where the quote from the newspaper article ended. Perhaps the end was before the new sentence "There is a mountain ..." ? The flow of the passage could be improved a little. Here is a suggestion for you:
I read an interesting article in the newspaper this morning. It said, "A boss monkey in Takasakiyama changed recently."
There is a mountain called Takasakiyama in Oita, where a troop of monkeys lives. For the first time, a female monkey has become the boss there. I wonder whether females are becoming stronger in both human and monkey societies?
I hope the above helps. Let me know if you would like more help.
mjm
Aug. 1, 2021
Thank you!
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It said as follows: A boss monkey in Takasakiyama changed recently. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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There is a mountain called Takasakiyama in Oita. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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A troop of monkeys lives there. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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This time, a female monkey became boss for the first time.
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Are females becoming stronger in both human and monkey societies? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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