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日本の就職
私は日本に住みたいから、ひたすらに就職活動をしています。今年のうちに日本に引っ越したくて、実は３ヶ月以内に行けたらいいと思っています。コロナの時代には日本の国境はまったく閉まっていたけど、最近仕事のために国境が開き始めました。なので、やっと、たくさん会社に連絡して応募しています。
私はシニアソフトウェアエンジニアでも、今までアメリカでしか働いていなかったから、日本の仕事のことがまだ分かりません。たとえば、日本の会社とか、日本の人気のあるテックとか、日本のエンジニアの平均の給料とかまだ習っています。なので、そういうことをしっかりと研究しています。
幸い、今まで連絡した会社はほとんど私に返事をくれました。私にいくつかのオンラインのプログラミングの挑戦を送ってくれました。それらのテストに合格したら、会社は私に連絡して、オフィシャルの面接を始めるべきです。
ところで、ほとんどのテックの会社は英語はオフィシャルの言語でも、私はまだ日本語をペラペラになりたいです！日本語の能力は働くのが必要じゃなくても、日本に住んでいるために、社会人になるために、それから日常を楽しむために、日本語は肝心だと思います！
April 18, 2022
Un viaje a la finca
Ante ayer, tuve la oportunidad de ir a una finca y para mí fue una experiencia especial. Antes de contar la historia, te pongo en contexto. Nací en una ciudad enorme y crecí en las afueras de otra ciudad enorme. Por eso, me siento muy cómodo en cualquier ciudad. Navegar por un sistema de transporte en la hora pico en otro idioma? No hay problema. Andar con un sexto sentido para que no te roben? Manejable. Estacionarme en paralelo? La primera vez. El lugar donde me siento muy incomodo es en el campo. Pero después de pasar tiempo en una finca, todo empezó a cambiar...
April 18, 2022
Conversation about Crayon Shin-chan the Movie
Would you help me to correct anything wrong or unnatural in the following sentences?🙇♂️
I'd like to know common colloquial phrases！ 🙇♂️
As a side note, A and B stand for people❗️
A: Have you seen "Sengoku"?
B: I Watched it!
It was very good!
A: Oh, that's good!
Did you cry?
B: I didn't cry.
A: Seriously?
B: Did you cry?
A: I cried ten times.
B: That many?
A: I cried.
That time when you can't say what you want to say fits the theme of unfulfilled love so well, doesn't it? Even Shinnosuke couldn't tell the truth until the very end, and he kept his promise to Matabei by taking the action of "Kincho".
B: "Kincho" enhances quality of this movie.
A: Yeah, exactly!
Also, Matabee's end made me cry.
B: Oh, I almost cried there!
A: Yeah, I can relate! I was crying the scene, though. Haha
But some anime lovers have a bit of a problem with that scene.
B: Why?
A: Crayon Shin-chan is an anime about never-ending daily life, so Shinnosuke is not allowed to cry
B: Not allowed to cry?
A: Yes, crying means growing up, which is not allowed in anime where the age range is the same all the time!
If Shin-chan cries, people who see a different story will feel strange because he should have grown up by crying at that time.
B: I see.
A: Well, I don't really care.
B: Me too.
I don't really think that's a good idea.
A: I'm with you.
B: Also, the last scene where he looks up at the sky was very moving.
A: Fo sho.
It felt like they were connected, even though it was a different time.
The contrast between Ren looking up at the sky alone in a time when it was not allowed to fall in love because of her status, and everyone looking up at the sky together because they were born in a time when it was possible to fall in love with anyone and build a family was very well done.
B: True.
There is a live-action version of this movie, right?
A: Yeah! It's not good at all, though.
B: Really?
A: This movie is about an impossible love caused by a system that can never be praised, but it doesn't be dipicted it properly as a movie.
B: For example?
A: The theme of not being able to say "I love you" is important, but the main character in the live-action version just says, "Matabei likes the princess."
The title of the movie is ballad. No ballad. It's brat.
B: That's helpless...
A: It's the worst movie ever because there are so many other things that aren't good!
B. Also, I was just wondering what's a nanban-do?
A. Old armor, I guess.
April 18, 2022
Conversation about meals
Would you help me to correct anything wrong or unnatural in the following sentences?🙇♂️
As a side note, A and B stand for people❗️
b What did you have for breakfast?
a I didn't eat breakfast today.
b Same.
What about Lunch?
a soba and yogurt.
bWhat's soba?
a buckwheat noodles!
bOh, good! Easy on the stomach!
aI'm only kind to my stomach.
b Yeah, that's right.
What about dinner?
a Salmon grilled salted.
B: Salted?
A: Japanese style grilled salmon is salted salmon.
B: Oh, It's very Japanese.
A: Yeah.
What did you eat today?
B: I didn't eat breakfast too, had shrimp pasta with cream sauce for lunch, and steak, hashed beef rice and cabbage for dinner!
A: You had bid dinner!
B: Oh,yeah? Cause I was starving.
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Le covid et moi
Heureusement, je n'ai pas été infecté jusqu'à présent. Pendant le 2020 et la majeure partie de 2021, je suis resté chez moi, en télétravail. J'ai pu continuer et finaliser mes études à distance et seulement quand j'ai eu les deux doses du vaccin, je suis retourné au bureau. En attendant, j'ai pu passer des temps avec ma famille, pratiquer mon français et éviter de utiliser le transport publique. J'ai eu de la chance, vraiment. Mes sœurs ont étés infectées au début de l'année mais elles ont déjà été vaccinées, donc leur malaise ont été léger, seulement quelque jours au lit avec des lignes de fièvre, mais rien de plus grave que cela.
April 17, 2022
Le trajet
Hier, mes parents et moi sommes allés dans un village pour la journée où nous visitons presque chaque année. La dernière fois que nous avons y visité en octobre 2020. C'était un peu différent mais je me suis senti nostalgique. Nous avons marché pendant deux heures et puis nous avons déjeuné à l'hôtel que nous aimons beaucoup. Les plats étaient délicieux et je n'avais pas faim du reste de la journée. Malheuresement, c'est un trajet deux heures en voiture donc nous avons dû voyager pendent quatre heures. Mais, surtout c'était une bonne journée.
April 17, 2022
Sentences I want to be corrected 3
1)Our current office does not have a meeting room.
significantly
2) I lied my son down yesterday because it was time to go to sleep.
3)´´Some people choose taking a plane since It is cheaper thanks to globalization´´ or ´´some people prefer traveling by plane since It is cheaper thanks to globalization´´.
4- people feel the need to travel because lately there is a great influence of the media.
5 -I would like to travel to norway to see the northern lights
6- Improved transportation is what has contributed most to the increase in international travel.
7- you might be able to find a good spot on the train if you get on it at an early time of the day.
8- I can be in france in hour thanks to high speed train
9- One of the most efficient tools to travel are airplanes.
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gcse practise 90 words
Scrivi una lettera al tuo amico italiano (Marco). Menziona:
• le vacanze preferite
• le attività che fai di solito in vacanza
• un viaggio che è andato male
• una vacanza ideale.
Scrivi circa 90 parole in italiano. Rispondi a tutti gli aspetti della domanda
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Ciao Marco!
La mia vacanza preferita è in posti lontani non piace Inghilterra perché adoro il tempo caldo ma Inghilterra è un po' freddo per me.
Di solito, in vacanza, la mia attività è andare a la spiaggia perché mi piace gelato è nuotare al mare. Anche di solito restiamo in l'albergo con un ristorante così possiamo mangiare colazione non lontano le camere.
L'anno scorsa, sono andato un viaggio con la mia famiglia ma che è andato male perché siamo arrivati in tardi per aereo così abbiamo dovuto comprare un aereo nuovo!
La mia vacanza ideale è andare a Francia con i miei amici perché noi posare alla Eiffel Tower e mangiamo il cibo di francia!
April 17, 2022
17 avril 2022 - enseigner
Je donne des cours privés à des étudiants du lycée il y a presque 4 ans, parce que c’est une bonne moyen de gagner un peu d’argent supplémentaire. Mais au début, je l’ai fait pour la simple raison de m’occuper. C’est un travail exigeant et difficile parce que j’ai mal à expliquer le concept d’une manière simple à mes étudiants. Cependant, je pense que c’est même plus facile de leur expliquer les concepts ou les questions après on a changé notre plateforme (de face-à-face à en ligne). C’est drôle mais je crois que la raison principale, c’est qu’on peut voir le même page dans l’écran partagé et donc tout est plus clair. De plus, les étudiants sont aussi moins nerveux quand ils ne savent pas répondre à mes questions.
April 17, 2022
Alice Through the Looking Glass
Today, I saw "Alice Through the Looking Glass".
It is the sequel film Alice in Wonderland.
I enjoyed watching the previous one, so I watched it with anticipation again.
The humor associated with time was particularly interesting.
"I'm right on time."
"Your time is up"
"It will be a race against Time"
I like these jokes.
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April 17, 2022
Aprendo español otra vez
Hoy quiero empezar a aprender español otra vez. Yo sé que necesito el idioma en mi vida, pero tengo que desarrollar mis capacidades de la lenguaje. Hace mucho tiempo que la he utilizado, y la mayoría de mi energía para idiomas extranjeros es utilizado para aleman. Porque siempre estudio aleman, me siento un poco confuso cuando intento a pensar en español. Tengo la tendencia a formar mis frases en la forma que sería en aleman, o confuso las palabras individuales con los de aleman. Por eso quiero al mínimo intentar a formar ideas y frases otra vez en español, antes de que sea en situaciones más importantes, como con el trabajo.
April 17, 2022
I top 3 app sul mio smartphone
Ci sono alcuni app che uso molto spesso. Il primo, e quello che penso di usare spessissimo, è il youtube. Lo uso un sacco di tempo perché mi piace guardare i video differenti, e anche perché ci si può trovare molti video sui tutti i soggetti che mi interessano. Per esempio, mi piace guardare dei video sull'apprendimento delle lingue, cartoni animati indipendenti ed altre cose. Youtube è fantastico perché si può usarlo anche per ascoltare la musica. Questo è qualcosa che io faccio sempre. Ho anche creato alcuni playlist con la mia musica preferita.
Il secondo app che uso è HiNative. Lo adoro perché mi aiuta molto con le lingue, specialmente quando non riesco a capire un nuovo concetto, o qualcosa di simile.
L'ultimo app è Discord, che uso principalmente per chiacchierare con la mia amica.
April 17, 2022
Covid-19
My son has covid-19. It sounds dangerous but everything is going well. The problem is always my mind: thinking too much, imagining all the bad situations that can come.
I deeply feel that we don’t care about our health as it needs. When illnes comes everyone run but it’s late. But what can we do? If we work too much we have not time for us. Maybe we need to prioritaze time over money, maybe this is the only drug we need.
April 17, 2022
Una lettera d'un tizio al suo amico
Caro Peppe,
Sono molto orgoglioso da annunciare che cominciando da oggi cambierò completamente la mia vita. Dopo un sacco di ricerca, ho trovato il metodo perfetto per migliorare la mia salute.
Prima di tutto, mi sono iscritto in palestra. Pianifico andarci ogni mese. Credo che una volta al mese sarà basta per diventare muscoloso come John Cena.
Ovviamente, anche una dieta corretta è molto importante per mantenere un sano stile di vita. Quindi ho comprato qualche polverino magico al mercato nero. Il venditore era molto carino e mi ha detto che quello polverino è molto buono per la salute. Non vedo l'ora di aggiungerlo alle tutte mie dolci.
Per finire, ho finalmente cominciato a dormire di più - quattro ore invece di tre!
Ho appena cominciato però già mi sento più forte e sano.
Ci vediamo presto ai giochi olimpici!
Paolo
April 17, 2022
Нью-Йорк
В середине души Нью-Йорка существует раскол. Насилие с применением огнестрельного оружия растит беспокойно в Америке. В прошлое, большинство случаев ограничился загородными частями штатов или местностями, которые управлялся уголовными организациями. Тем не менее, кажется, что в настоящее время стрельбы приближаются к метрополии. На прошлой неделе, бездомной атаковал метро во время часа пик.
Меня запутал факт того, что он уже совершил многие преступления перед инцидентом, но полиция решила не отслеживать его. Разумеется, что следствие этой халатности, у человека была абсолютная свобода, чтобы поразить общественную транспортную систему в сердце Нью-Йорка.
Самонадеянность мэра не должна влияет на его ежедневные обязанности. На данный момент, он отказывается от введения большего числа дивизий полиции, так и усиления режима дозоров.
В результате повторных инцидентов, многие граждане боятся поехать поездом. Ответственность придумать кампанию, чтобы внушить мужество и уверенность в жителей (жителях?) попадает на городское управление.
April 17, 2022
About a Crayon Shin-chan
If there's anything wrong or unnatural, would you correct these English sentences? I'd like to know common colloquial phrases！ 🙇♂️
As a side note, A and B stand for people❗️
w of that.
A: I guess it's like a Japanese version of The Simpsons. Maybe. Anyway, it's a Japanese national anime about crazy family!
But it's really fun, so give it a watch!
I'd love to hear your honest thoughts.
B: I liked The Simpsons, so I might like it!
A: Then you might like it!
But a lot of people overseas hate them lol.
The main character often moon someone, and I think this cartoon was banned in the US and Indonesia because of that!
B: Really? LOL.
A: On top of that, some people even call it a "naughty little boy."
But Japanese people love Crayon Shinchan.
The anime is mostly a gag, but the movie is seriously moving.
I'm moved by the kindness rarely shown by the main character, his parents, and his friends, and by the unexpectedly deep message. The movies "Sengoku" and "Otona Teikoku" are the best examples of this.
B :Oh, I might have heard of "Otona Teikoku" before.
A : Oh, really!?
B: I've never seen it, though.
A: It is such a work that you cannot talk about Japanese animated films without seeing it.
B: That much?
A: Maybe, I think I said too much.Haha
But that's how much I love it!
You should watch it because it's definitely one of the great Japanese anime films! Like it or not.
But I think you should watch "Sengoku" first.
I think this is the one that everyone will like.
I have never heard of anyone in Japan who dislikes this film. I haven't heard of thoughts that anyone from overseas saying, though.Haha
B: Ok! "Sengoku"!
I'll check it out!
A: Also, if you haven't seen the anime, some things might need a little explanation, so it might be a good idea to know the family structure and characteristics beforehand.
If I were to explain it to you, it's an anime about a family of four people and a dog, and the daily life of Shinnosuke, the eldest son of the family, who is a very selfish five-year-old boy who annoys the people around him.
B: I see.
Thanks! I'll take a look!
A: Yeah, check it out!
April 17, 2022
Report: new shopping centre (C1 CAE)
2. You work as an environmentalist for the local council. A large shopping centre has recently been built in your area.
You have been asked to visit the shopping centre and to write a report saying what effect the shopping centre might have on the local environment and the community.
Your report should state both the positive and the negative aspects of the shopping centre.
Finally, you should make some suggestions as to how the more negative aspects could be improved.
Write your report.
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What could make it sound more natural ?
Report on the effects of the new shopping centre in Utrera.
Introduction
In the last two years the tourism data in Utrera has experienced a huge decrease as a consequence of the improvement of several facilities and leisure areas in the city of Seville. Therefore, with the aim of recovery our previous position for tourists, it has been recently built a new shopping centre, which far from being suitable for most of citizens, it has been a topic especially controversial.
Social and environmental effects
According to the environmental impact assessment, which was written before the works started, the area selected is far enough from our streets and homes, as well as any natural park or reserve, as to have any direct negative impact. However, there is a long list of indirect effects both in people's health and nature. Of them all the main problem stressed by neighbours was the noise linked to the unexpected huge success of the new mall. This is a small city and people were used to a quieter way of life.
As regards environment, the main problem is the same, since noise affects the behaviour and growth of a lots of different species, especially birds, from the national park located 20 km away from Utrera, in the north of Seville.
Between the positive aspects, it can be highlighted the extraordinary success of this project. There have been never so many tourists here before, which has allowed the opening of several new shops and restaurants, which in turn means more jobs.
Suggestions
There was not a mandatory issue to build noise barriers along the highway that connect with the mall, since noise's law is pretty soft in this city. Nevertheless, this works must be done in order to avoid future European sanctions in environmental issues.
Conclusion
In conclusion, the new shopping centre will be an overall positive project for citizens in Utrera and nature surrounding the city provided that a noise barrier is built.
April 17, 2022
What do I do?
What do I do when the guy says he wants to take things slow and get to know me better when I say I'm getting attached to him, but he is also acting close with the love words and the attraction?
Love is complex. We should talk about this from different perspectives depending on the situations. Here are two hypothesis from my own understanding:
1. The boy is a good boy. He doesn’t want to get into a relationship fast because he knows the faster you love someone, the more misunderstanding you get from someone. He may start thinking if you guys are matched or not.
2. The boy is a bad boy. He is hanging you and has no feelings for you. You are prey and he enjoys the liking you expressed. He also is chatting and flirting with other girls.
Ok, the priority problem is clear. You should figure out what type the boy is. I would like to give you two suggestions for the two situations separately:
1. Stay with him and discuss with him about you believe you guys are matched. You may prove your true heart and love to him by your actions in which you show your gentleness and understanding. After that, just wait for the result or announcement from him.
2. Leave him as soon as possible, every girl should have alert and protect themselves well. Bad boys often won’t be the good boy because they have opened the door to pleasure and taboo. You can’t make him change no matter what you do. This is a piece of honest advice from a man who has seen these things a lot.
The above are my suggestions. I hope they can help you and you are doing well.
Thank you for reading and have a lovely day!
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