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Dream City & House
Honestly, I intended to buy a four-bedroom apartment with a giant balcony overlooking the sea near an urban and famous area after I graduated from university outside of Iran.
I can decorate it and design my ideal home with whatever facilities I want. It has an unobstructed view. It have a giant yard and beautiful front walk and entrance door that cover by garden and flower bed.Have a patio and roof garden that have a large lawn lawn surrounded by a high hedge. I planning to settle down LA in my future.
April 28, 2022
Describe Your room and favorite place in your home
My current room is actually like a prince's room but a smaller version. I use it to sleep and study as well. It is painted in pale blue. It has a bed, bookshelves and a desk. It’s not really spacious but I'm crazy about it. However, I can design my place layout to suit myself. I also have a separate bathroom for myself.
I prefer my bedroom most due to its convenience and privacy. I want to be in a quiet place and never disturbed by anyone else.
My second favorite place in my home is definitely the kitchen. Not only launch and dinner time but also all of my family reunions take place there. Moreover, the kitchen is fully equipped with all mod con.
I have been living there ever since I was born, which is 23 years so far, that is a relatively long period of time, so I’m really attached to this quiet house. I hate house-hunting because moving into another house is too exhausting.
Both my parents think that moving to a new place is time-consuming. Although my mom thinks that cleaning and rearranging would be like torture for herself, She doesn't mind new decorations.
April 28, 2022
Daily Pratice
My daily English Practice: The usage of preposition
Against
1. Against with verbe
Millions of citizens gathered by social media to demonstrate against the new law proposed by the government.
My friend advise me against using too much electronic devices since it may be harmful to my eyes.
He is highly rebelling against the traditional rules.
The students argued against the idea that she has chat in the exam.
Regular workout helps guard against diseases.
He felt that he was discriminated against out too his poor look.
2. Against with noun
The major accusation against this cruel criminal is murder.
He makes a complaint against the seat arrangement.
We should keep the battle against poverty.
We have a fight against our enemy so we should keep training until we win the fight.
3. Postions
The lady in red dress was leaning against the wall .
April 28, 2022
Un conflit à le bureau
J’ai eu deux collègues qui ne s’entendaient pas bien. Les deux étaient gérants et ils avaient des styles de management complètement différents. Le première a un comportement calme et décontracté la plupart de temps. Pourtant, quand il est stressé, il ne sait pas comment maîtriser sa colère. Dans l'espace d’une seconde, il peut devenir irrationnel et perdre la tête. Il hurle à nous, les employés, même si nous ne sommes pas responsables du problème.
L’autre, en revanche, est toujours stressé. Son bureau avait des papiers partout de manière très désordonnée. Il est capable, mais il a tendance à faire des erreurs parce qu’il ne prête pas attention à des détails. Ils avaient une relation tendue. Je me souviens d'une réunion quand une dispute a éclaté. Ils hurlaient des insultes, et l’un d’entre eux sortait en trombe.
Après la dispute, ils tentaient de s’ignorer. Cela était regrettable, parce que notre travail comptait sur leur collaboration. D’ailleurs, dans leur vie personnelle, au début ils étaient des amis proches. Ils avaient même pris une vacance ensemble ! J’imagine qu’il soit passé des choses entre les deux que nous ne sommes pas au courant. Des rumeurs circulaient, et finalement le gérant désorganisé a décidé de démissionner.
Cela s’est passé il y a trois mois. J’ai reçu une invitation pour dîner à la maison de mon collègue qui a démissionné. J’y vais ce soir. Je me demande si je vais dénicher la vérité sur ce qui s’était passé entre les deux.
April 28, 2022
April 28, 2022
Bonjour ?
Argh
Trois années et le mot seulement que je peux dire bien est bonjour !
Est-ce que tu penses que je n'essaie pas mais je suis. Beaucoup !
Je suis une aux meilleurs dans ma classe mais je veux plus; parce que je veux d'écrire les romans dans français. Mais comment si je ne peux pas écrire une histoire courte !
Merci beaucoup pour tous vos aides.
April 28, 2022
Ich lerne eine Fremdsprache, weil...
Ich lerne eine Fremdsprache, weil ich mich verbessern möchte. Besonders will ich Deutsch lernen. Wenn ich Deutsch lerne, kann ich in Deutschland wohnen. Lerne Deutsch gefällt mir. In Letzter Zeit, anfange ich deutsche lieder hören. Die Sänger, die ich am meisten höre; Berge, Rammstein und Max Raabe. Was ist eure Empfehlung für deutschen Lied?
April 28, 2022
April 28, 2022
이번 주의 문법
1. 어제 뭘 했나요?
오늘 퇴근하는 길에 공항에 가서 동생이 마중했어요.
2. 지금 출발하나요?
네. 제 친구가 집 앞에서 밖에 가는 길이에요.
3 . 후라이드치킨을 왜 먹지 않아요?
기름이 너무 있는데다가 다이어트에 중이에요.
4. 요즘에 많은 사람들이 아이를 낳고 싶지 않는 것 같아요.
맞아요. 모든 친구들만 해도 미혼이에요.
5. 어떤 가계를 정말 사용하지 않아요?
핸드폰조차 사용하지 않아요.
6. 티켓을 막 판매되었네요! 지금은 살까요?
싼 티켓을 있거든 사려고 해요.
7. 저 가게를 왜 아주 좋아하나요?
옷이 예쁠 뿐만 아니라 점원들이 정말 친절해요.
8. 왜 화를 내요?
아까 경찰관이 정차하게 했는데 교통 위반 딱지를 줬어요.
9. 와, 강아지가 진짜 키가 커요!
이전에 강아지는 건강하지 않으니까 수의사가 강아지가 작을 거라고 했어요. 하지만 강아지가 갑자기 건강되던데요. 그래서 많이 자랐군요.
10. 많은 꽃을 키우네요!
먼저 꽃을 좋아하지 않지만 제 남자 친구가 많은 꽃 가지를 사서 저도 좋아하게 됐어요.
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April 28, 2022
Gli alieni
Molte persone dicono che gli alieni esistono, altre dicono di no. Ma gli ultimi scoperti dagli scienzati indicano che ci sono tanti pianeti nel nostro Universo. Inoltre, più gli astronomi scoprono nuvoi pianeti, più la probabilita cresce che ce ne sia uno che potrebbe sostenere la vita come quella che conosciamo a Terra.
Spero che gli alieni esistono perché senza un'altro compagno intelligente nell'Universo la nostra esistenza sarebbe stato solitaria e diminuita e avrebbe meno rilevenza.
Infine, lo scoperto di vita extraterrestre avrebbe avuto un'altro significato. Oggi noi umani dobbiamo affrontare dei problemi molto grave. Incontrare esseri da un'altra pianeta significherebbe che possiamo anche risolvere i nostri grandi problemi e sopravivere nel futuro.
April 28, 2022
Question
I had to enter that mall first and then TAKE (why isn’t it “took”?) an elevator.
when I first heard her SAY (why isn’t it “said”, or “says”?) that.
The above two sentences are from my native English teacher. My questions are inside brackets. I hope someone can help me out. Thank you very much.
(I only use my phone to access LC, I don’t know where the question area is, please forgive me for posting questions here)
April 28, 2022
Journal
Yesterday afternoon, I saw a message in our department WeChat group that was sent by our leader. He said we could go to our office to work since then.
It's been around a month since the last time we were in our office because of the pandemic.
But at present, we are not able to get to our office the same way we used to because the first floor entrance is still closed.
The first floor of our office building connects to a mall. We have to enter that mall first, and then take an elevator down to basement level two, and walk for a while to the elevator we used to take.
There is a hotel in our office building. It has a different entrance and an elevator from our office and is on different floors. When the past wave of the pandemic started, that hotel was arranged as an isolation site by the government, but the entrance we used to get to our office was also closed.
It's said that even now, there are around ten students remaining there. That is why we still can't get to our office in the same way we used to.
I don't think this makes sense, because that hotel is only in the same building as our office, but they are on different floors and have different entrances and elevators.
Can Covid-19 go through walls or floors? I think the government overreacted.
Many private companies in that building use the same entrance and elevator as us, so they also couldn't go to work during the pandemic, but the government won't give them any compensation. It's not fair.
April 27, 2022
Vorbereitungen auf Prüfungen
Ich fange früh genug an, etwas zu lernen, wenn ich eine Prüfung habe. Ich plane immer vorab, was und wann ich lernen werde. Natürlich füge ich immer Pause hinzu, um etwas Schönes zu unternehmen, wie zum Beispiel Freunde treffen oder Sport treiben. Das entspannt mich und kann das Lernprozess leichter machen.
Allerdings leide ich an Prüfungsangst. Ich habe mir lange nachgedacht, warum das passiert, obwohl ich mir die Informationen einfach einpräge und rechtzeitig mit dem Lernen anfange. So bin ich zu der Einsicht bekommen, dass ich geringes Selbsvertrauen habe. Ich kann alles wissen aber werde nicht total fühlen, als ich das Thema gut beherrsche. Allerdings passiert immer, dass ich die Prüfung mit guten Note bestehe.
Ja, ich muss mehr an meinem Selbstvertrauen arbeiten.
Mit anderen zusammen lerne ich nicht gerne. Andere Menschen haben ihren eigenen Lernrhytmus und dieser kann anders als meiner sein. Manchmal kann jemand schneller oder langsamer als ich lernen und das nervt mich. Dementsprechend lerne ich am liebsten immer allein.
April 27, 2022
Después de la Semana Santa
Ya terminaron las vacaciones de Semana Santa, y al parecer toda la población de la Cuidad de Mexico está de vuelta. La calles volvieron a estar repletas de coches y camiones, hay mucha más gente caminando en las aceras, y el gimnasio está super lleno (supongo que todos quieren perder los kilos que adquirieron tomando cervezas en Acapulco durante las semanas pasadas). De verdad, no se qué haría si tuviera que viajar diariamente en coche en esta ciudad. Hay tanto tráfico que a veces es más rápido caminar! Por lo menos, ya empezó la temporada de la lluvia, y eso hace que el aire sea mucho mas limpio y que el efecto de la contaminación del tráfico y aumento de coches no se note tanto.
April 27, 2022
April 27, 2022
Is it fair?
I went to the zoo last week and realized that I didn’t get the same feeling as I did when I was a kid. Seeing some animals depressed and stressed made me sad. Is it really fair to keep animals in captivity for our amusement and wildlife education? I fully aware the fact that zoos are saving some endangered species from extinction. But still ,the cons outweigh the pros. They can’t have the freedom they deserved. Some can’t get proper care due to staff shortages and limited budgets during this pandemic period. I think we should seek the long term solution rather than promoting not to go to zoo at this time because adequate animal care in zoos is relied on public finical support from visitors. What are your thoughts on that?
April 27, 2022
Harry Potter und der Stein der Weisen
Harry Potter und der Stein der Weisen ist ein Kinderbuch von J.K Rowling. Es wurde im 1997 veröffentlicht von Bloomsbury-Verlag. Es gibt sieben Bücher in die Serie und ein Stück betitelt Harry Potter und das verwunschene Kind. Die Serie heutzutage ist die bekannteste Kinderbücher in der Welt, weil es einhundert Millionen Kopien verkaufen haben.
Der Buch verfolgt Harry Potter, eine Waisenkind, das mit seiner missbräuchliche Tante und Onkel (Mr. und Mrs. Dursley) lebt. An seinem elften Geburtstag erhält er einen Brief aus Hogwarts Schule für Hexerei und Zauberei. Ein alter Zauberer namens Hagrid Harry besucht und erklärt, dass Harry ist eigentlich auch einen Zauberer! In Hogwarts sind das Zauberer/Hexen vier Schulhäuser eingeteilt. Gryffindor ist rot und darstellt Tapferkeit, Ravenclaw ist blau und darstellt Klugheit, Hufflepuff ist gelb und darstellt Freundlichkeit, und Slytherin ist grün und darstellt Ehrgeiz.
Harry ist in Gryffindor mit seiner zwei Freunden (Ron und Hermione) geordnet. Hermione ist äußerst schlau und Beste aller ihrer Klassen geworden ist. In ihre erste Jahr, das Trio kämpfen ein Troll, treffen ein bösen Zauberer namen “Voldemort” und streiten mit ein Slytherin Schüler namen Draco Malfoy (einen Antagonisten).
Ich denke, dass die Buch war lustig und zuordenbar aber ist mehr passend fur Grundschule Schuler. Jedoch hat das Buch wichtig Moralen (Freundlichkeit, Freundschaft und Tapferkeit). Meiner Meinung nach “Harry Potter und der Stein der Weisen” ist ein klassischer Kinderbuch!
April 27, 2022
April 27, 2022
"Le Bazar De La Charité"
"Le Bazar de la Charité" is a series insppired in real facts. The Bazar was an event where the high class of Paris sold all type of objects like works of art, jewelry, books, etc, coming from donations. In that time, this charity events was organized by women and all this money was destined for the poor people. For this reason, usually there was more women that mens. Unfortunately, one day was a fire during the projection of a film, due to an error, had a mix between ether and oxigen in the projector. The fire ran very fast and in few minutes all the building was in flames. In that situation, all people went into panic and for the chronicals of journals and newspapers of that days, many mens don't doubted to use the force against women to get out of that hell. As a result of it, the majority of casualities were women. Thus, is a magnificent period recreation series based in a sad history.
April 27, 2022
27 avril 2022 - Matin ou soir?
Êtes-vous plutôt un lève-tôt ou un couche-tard?
Je suis 100% une lève-tôt parce que je fonctionne mal dans la nuit. Je ne comprends pas pourquoi la plupart de mes camarades ou amis couche si tard, par exemple 1h du matin, tandis que nous avons des cours à 8h30 or 9h, c’est-à-dire qu’il faut se réveiller à 6h30 si on veut prendre un petit déjeuner. Comme je dois me réveiller à cette heure, souvent environ 22 ou 22h30, je commence à être vraiment fatiguée et ne peux rien faire.
Avant, j’ai utilisé le temps de petit matin pour faire des revisions, c’était une habitude que j’ai eu depuis lycée. Mais dès que j’ai commencé à apprendre le français, je me suis rendue compte qu’il y a beaucoup des choses qui sont plus intéressantes que les études dentisteries, alors désormais, le petit matin est réservée pour mon projet et le développement personal.
April 27, 2022
sommeil
Actuellement, je me sens fatigué à cause de ma mauvaise habitude. Alors, habituellement l'école commence à huit heures pour moi. Mais aujourd'hui c'était à 9 heures. Et tous le temps si quelque chose de cette facon c'est passe, je suis réveillé 1 ou 2 heures plus. Parce que j'ai plus de temps à dormir. Malheureusement j'ai me réveille tous le temps à un certain temps, donc je n'ai pas assez dormir.
April 27, 2022
Talking With My Senior
I asked some questions to my senior who is a board member of the SW develop team.
The questions were about the capabilities of SW architectures that I really want to become.
He said that a SW architecture don't bother difficult issues, and he should give a result with nice negotiations.
Besides, he has to experience many fields over business boundaries.
His advices were not easy to do, but I thought that I could get many skills while doing them.
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