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The first letter of words needs to be capitalized.

I Llike it here. I like it here.

I Llike it here. I like it here.

Native speakers don't ever say what you wrote. The phrase I gave you is colloquial.

When people are speaking a foreign language, they somehowtimes speaks like a child or like a robot. When people are speaking a foreign language, they sometimes speak like a child or like a robot.

When people are speaking a foreign language, they somehows speaks like a child or like a robot. When people are speaking a foreign language, they speak like a child or a robot.

I made some corrections. Somehow is not used correctly here, at least not colloquially. The use of the word like is redundant here. You only have to say it once. I somehow broke my bike. 我莫种方法地弄坏了我的自行车。 How they speak is specifically being described as like a child or robot, there is no uncertainty that requires to use of the word 'somehow'. We know how.

I find it interesting to read what others write on lang. I find it interesting to read what others write on lang.

Native speakers would say this, although I believe... I find it interesting to read what others have written on lang. Would probably be better.

Although words are not always correct, it can sometimes look like a metaphor sometimes. Although words are not always correct, it can sometimes look like a metaphor.

Although the words are not always correct, it seems/looks like metaphors sometimes. Although the words are not always correct, it seems/looks like metaphors sometimes.

Don't forget to use articles (the/a). I know they aren't commonly used in Chinese.