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June 15, 2021
The season get sick easily
One of my coworkers said her son had a fever last night. Good news were he had recoverd already. But later on I got a call from my wife and said that my son had vomited two times in the kindergarten. So we decided to ask his grandma for help to pick up my son home. I guessed my son probably had something like nauseas. He had no appetite during this days. We let him take some medications for stomach ill and drink more liquids. Just right now, we found him having slightly feverish. My son got sleep earlier than before because he's not feeling well, I think. I wish him feel better soon. This season, that definitely easy to get sick.
June 15, 2021
My Moving History
I am living in Suwon which is a capital city of Gyeonggi province in South Korea.
This is the third city where I live.
My hometown is a small village near Andong where is one of famous traditional cities in Korea.
For my university, I moved to Seoul and lived at a boarding house near my university.
At that time, I took only my computer and I bought all the essential things in Seoul.
After getting a job, I moved to Suwon where I am living now.
I already had many things to move, for example, my bicycle, many books and even a refrigerator.
Now, I have too many things if I would move to another city.
I tried to get unused things away by a minimalism, but I filled other things soon.
I should think twice before buying anything.
June 15, 2021
15. Juni Challenge
Wir befinden uns in der Mitte der Juni-LangCorrect-Challenge. Viele Leute werden heute einen Ruhetag vom Schreiben nehmen, ich aber nicht. Weil ich weiß es nicht, wie man aufhören kann, jeden Tag auf dieser Website zu pfosten. Habe ich vielleicht LangCorrect-Sucht? Oder mag ich mein Streak gar zu viel? Für mich ist es einfach nicht möglich, das zu wissen!
June 15, 2021
It's better to read a book than see a film version
I strongly believe that people should read books instead of watching films. Books are often more compelling, they enable readers to create their own world and convey an original message wholly.
Firstly, reading requires more time and effort, and this is why this activity is more creative. While reading a book you rely only on yourself. There are no other people, directors or actors, with their own vision that may not coincide with what you are feeling at the moment.
Secondly, plots in films are abridged because of time limits. A great amount of nail-biting moments can be omitted. As a result, films are not really faithful to books and not as captivating as they could be.
Finally, some film-makers see the acting stage as a place for solving social problems. This is how a huge number of people of different races and genders started playing in films. The thing is, that they don’t match characters’ description in books so spectators can experience some discomfort.
In conclusion, whilst a lot of people decide to watch films, reading books is much more beneficial.
June 15, 2021
Hydrangea
Today I went to a temple which is famous for many hydrangeas.
Hydrangeas bloom in around late June in my region, so most of them were still in bud today(15, June).
However some hydrangeas were blooming with pink, purple or blue flowers.
They were so beautiful that I could feel the season.
I appreciate that Japan has four different seasons because I can realize and enjoy the seasonal changing.
June 15, 2021
給禮物 — June Writing Challenge #16
我覺得沒有不喜歡受禮物的人。可是每個國家的關於禮物的風俗都不一樣。譬如說，美國和韓國的禮物風俗很差。它們有那些的差別:
1. 價格: 在美國，因為人們覺得給禮物的人的心最重要，所以問人禮物的價格非常無禮。可是，韓國人中——特別年紀大的人中——有不少人覺得給便宜的禮物是你不尊重對方的意思。
2. 結婚: 去婚禮的時候，很多美國人給新人可以在家裡用的東西。也有人給錢。在韓國，如果參加婚禮的話一定要把錢給新人。
3. 生日等: 生日時，給不給禮物是美人個人的選擇。美國和韓國人一樣。有的人給禮物或是錢，也有人給對方買好吃的東西。而且也有別的可以給禮物的日: 情人節，聖誕節，等。
June 15, 2021
Der Zusammenfassung Grimms Märchen die Süße Brei
Das Märchen erzählt über ein Mädchen und ihre Mutter. Sie sind arm und haben nichts zu essen. Einmal geht das Mädchen in den Wald und denn trifft es einer Frau, wer gebt dem Kind eines Zaubertopf. Er kocht so viel Brie wie man will. Wagen der Torf sie sind nicht so hungrig. Einmal das Mädchen lasst ihre Mutter allein mit dem Topf. Die Mutter weiß nicht wie man hören den Topf auf. Der Brei gefüllt alle Straße und nur das Mädchen hören den Topf auf. Schlussfolgerung, muss lehren Eltern mit Technologie geschult.
June 15, 2021
Practice
Question : Is a large university better than a small college?
A large university is more suitable place to spend years in one's 20s than a small college for several reasons. First of all, you can get acquainted with a wide variety of people. If you choose a small college to enroll in, it's difficult to make friends who major different fields or have unique backgrounds. Second, large universities tend to have competent professors and offer attractive classes. I assume that they have to make efforts to draw students' attention because less interesting classes are supposed to be disappear. In addition, you can use well-equipped facilities or receive a financial support from the university when you apply for exchange programs.
June 15, 2021
June 15, 2021
Recuerdas tus sueñas en la mañana?
La respuesta corta es no, nunca. No puedo recordar cuando fue la última vez que me desperté y conocí mi sueño. No sueño nunca. Justo me dormo y me desperto unas horas más tarde. No tengo sueñas, pesadillas o cualquier cosa. Tengo descansos muy tranquilos en general.
June 15, 2021
Journal
Many years later, that is, these past few years, I have been riding bicycles again. The first bicycle was bought from a local mall three years ago, which cost me more than 500 RMB and its brand is Phoenix. It was stolen a few years later. I remember I told you guys about that. Later, I bought an ordinary Phoenix bicycle, which only cost more than 300 RMB. After riding for a period of time, I want to change to a variable speed one, but not a mountain bike. I still want an ordinary one that you don't need to bow your waist when you ride it, but its speed must be variable. I ended up buying an inside three-speed city bicycle and it cost me 1600 RMB. When I rode it, I found it was a bit small and the sitting position was uncomfortable-You had to kind of bow your waist. This time I bought a Forever brand 27-speed travel bicycle with a butterfly handle. I just placed the order today and it is estimated to arrive the day after tomorrow. I hope this one everything goes well.
June 15, 2021
attaccamento
Al momento probabilmente ho due cose preferite che possiedo, ma a dire la verità, questa è la prima volta che mi faccio questa domanda. Direi che uno è il mio ebook reader. Penso sia una cosa bellissima poter avere 300 libri con me anche viaggiando. L'alta cosa è la nostra macchina. Lei si chiama Covida e l'abbiamo comprata prima il lockdown con il mio ragazzo. Non avevamo un posto fisso da stare quindi abbiamo deciso di comprare un furgone. Il nome gliel'ho dato e creato io, perché dopo un anno e mezzo di relazione a distanza con il mio ragazzo, siamo finiti ad essere chiusi in un furgone in mezzo alla pandemia. Ho quindi preso il nome covid, dandole vita con questo gioco di parole (co-vida ossia vita in spagnolo). Lei è stata la nostra casa e il nostro trasporto per mesi e nonostante sia una vecchietta di 24 anni, si è rivelata essere una macchina fortissima che non ci delude mai. Lei è calda quando abbiamo freddo e fresca quando fa troppo caldo. Noi l'abbiamo pitturata e l'abbiamo fatta più accogliente cucendole delle belle tendine e in ritorno lei ci da supporto in ogni circostanza. Covida non è sola una macchina ma è una famigliare.
June 15, 2021
June 15, 2021
The Glow of Fireflies
The other day, I went to see fireflies near my university. The fireflies inhabit around a brook at the foot of a small mountain. I usually pass through the mountain to go to university but didn't know about the fireflies. I barely remember I watched fireflies as a kid, so I was moved by how beautiful it was at that time. The glow was faint but fluorescent, which was flashing slowly. A citizen group is trying to protect the fireflies. I hope we can see fireflies at the spot forever.
June 15, 2021
Queenstown
Magari fosse possibile farvi vedere una foto! Sono veramente fortunata perché da un mese vivo a Queenstown, in una casa con vista al lago e le montagne. Io lavoro da casa, quindi ogni giorno vedo questa città spettacolare dalla mia finestra. Quando inizio a lavorare è ancora buio e quindi ogni giorno posso guardare l'alba con la nebbia e le nuvole sul lago, come sale sopra le montagne.
June 15, 2021
I miei sogni
Quasi ogni mattina, quando mi sveglio, mi ricordo almeno un sogno, ma tante volte più sogni dalla notte precedente. Per questo direi di avere una connessione speciale con i miei sogni. Di solito sono vividi, vivaci e talmente strani e mi diverto a raccontargli ai miei amici, però tante volte mi sveglio come se non avessi dormito durante la notte.
Ho anche dei sogni ricorrenti dalla mia infanzia, tipicamente con un tema di guerra ma ci sono anche altri temi che mi visitano in un certo periodo. Per esempio nell'ultimo anno ho sognato più volte, quasi ogni settimana, di essere lasciata da diversi fidanzati che in realtà non conosco e di non ricordare il mio ragazzo attuale. Durante questo sogno ho sempre una strana sensazione, una sensazione che qualcosa non sia al posto ma non sapere cosa esattamente.
Mi è anche successo più volte di sognare il futuro che può essere disturbante. Per esempio ho sognato di incontrare qualcuno oppure l'incidente del mio padre e il morte del cane di miei genitori.
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June 15, 2021
14 de junio - El tiempo
Donde vivo, el clima está muy rara en los veranos. Por ejemplo, esta mañana fue soleada pero llovió justo antes de la hora del almuerzo. Por la tarde, había una tormenta con rayas y mucha lluvia durante solo cinco minutos y luego había un arcoíris. Podía sacar mi perro a caminar sin llevar un paraguas.
June 15, 2021
June 15, 2021
最近读的漫画
我开始在Webtoon上读漫画。因为我的注意力没那么强，我正在同时读三四个漫画哈哈哈。
第一幅漫画叫Purple Hyacinth。Purple 是紫色，Hyacinth是风信子。属于悬疑惊悚类型。主角是一位警察，以前是一位侦探。她可以发现如果别人在撒谎。她要跟一位去世的朋友报仇。
故事的构架是基于二十世纪初的法国
我也在读Omniscient Reader. 主角是一位28岁的韩国工薪族. 他每天下班读一本网络小说叫“Three Ways to Survive the Apocalypse." 有一天晚上，虚构的故事成真了。
练习使用“谦虚”来写个句：
为何说怎么谦虚的话？别小看自己，你最进特别努力！我知道你最进一直努力复习。
June 15, 2021
June 15, 2021
Good morning.
I don't have a fixed routine. My time table is totally horrible from the others' eyes.
In some days, I walk in the early morning, so I can sometimes see a little bit unusual sights.
For instance, there are pigeons eating something on the road in a bustle. I don't want to interrupt their breakfast at that time. But in other situation there is a time I can follow them walking as if I were a peer behind of them.
And the other is that baseball players of high school on a school ground gather even before 7 a.m., presumably because they can avoid cruel sun at noon or over in their practice, or they might go to a venue of a game or games after all gathering together. Anyways, these students have to wake up early. I want to cheer for them, but simultaneously I feel sympathy for them because it's too early for general students.
Their duty is not a baseball, they also need to study hard. Then, can they sleep well? Can they enjoy themselves in hanging out? etc.
See you!
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