[Translation Practice] Harshness of nature seen fromfrom the perspective of a crow [Translation Practice] Harshness of nature from the perspective of a crow

[Translation Practice] Harshness of nature, as seen fromby a crow. [Translation Practice] Harshness of nature, as seen by a crow.

[Translation Practice] The Harshness of nNature seen from cas Seen by a Crow [Translation Practice] The Harshness of Nature as Seen by a Crow

These days crows have been loud sinceall morning. The crows have been loud all morning.

These days is talking about multiple days, but since morning is just talking about this morning.

These days, the crows have been loud sincfrom the morning. These days, the crows have been loud from the morning.

These days crows have been cawing loudly since morningdaybreak. These days crows have been cawing loudly since daybreak.

A pair of them were flying around my house while others noisily croaking perching on utility poles, tall trees, and the rooftops of neighborneighbours' rooftops. A pair of them were flying around my house while others noisily croaking perching on utility poles, tall trees, and neighbours' rooftops.

The rooftops belong to your neighbours. When a plural word which already ends in s would usually have an ('s) after it then you put the apostrophe after the s. https://apostrophe.guide/apostrophe-after-s/

A pair of them were flying around my house, while others noisily croakinged, perching on utility poles, tall trees, and the rooftops of neighbours. A pair of them were flying around my house, while others noisily croaked, perching on utility poles, tall trees, and the rooftops of neighbours.

A pair of them were flying around my house while others were noisily croaking while perchinged on utility poles, tall trees, and the rooftops of neighbors. A pair of them were flying around my house while others were noisily croaking while perched on utility poles, tall trees, and the rooftops of neighbors.

I have a picture book titled “Crow boy.” T”. In the storyline is that, a boy, who is isolated in school, shows a performance of making a crow noiseplays the role of a crow in the school play. I have a picture book titled “Crow boy”. In the story, a boy who is isolated in school, plays the role of a crow in the school play.

I have a picture book titled “Crow bBoy.”. The storyline is that a boy, who is isolated in school, showgives a performance of making a crow noises in the school play. I have a picture book titled “Crow Boy”. The storyline is that a boy, who is isolated in school, gives a performance of crow noises in the school play.

I have a picture book titled “Crow bBoy.” The storyline is that a boy, who is isolated in school, showgives a performance of making a crow noises in the school play. I have a picture book titled “Crow Boy.” The storyline is that a boy, who is isolated in school, gives a performance of making crow noises in the school play.

His performance of various sounds made by crowcrow noises impressed the other students, and after they know the difficult situation of his coming to school from a long distance, they shed tearsthey cried when they learned that he had to come so far to get to school. His crow noises impressed the other students, and they cried when they learned that he had to come so far to get to school.

Yours isn't wrong but it sounds very formal.

His performance of various sounds made by crows impressed other students, and after they know thehis difficult situation of his comy in getting to school from a long distancefar away, they shed tears. His performance of various sounds made by crows impressed other students, and after they know his difficulty in getting to school from far away, they shed tears.

His performance of various crow sounds made by crows impresseds other students and, after they know therealize how difficult situation of his is for him to cominge to school fromover a long distance, they shed tears. His performance of various crow sounds impresses other students and, after they realize how difficult it is for him to come to school over a long distance, they shed tears.

Remembering thavingt I read this book before, I wondered why those crows were making noises. Remembering that I read this book before, I wondered why those crows were making noises.

One morning, I gotwas awakened by uproars by crowscrows making an uproar. One morning, I was awakened by crows making an uproar.

One morning, I gotwas awakened by uproars by crowscrows making an uproar. One morning, I was awakened crows making an uproar.

One morning, I got awakened by uproars bya cacophony of crows. One morning, I got awakened by a cacophony of crows.

Seeing fFrom the window, I could see two crows were pecking something in the rice puddle. From the window I could see two crows pecking something in the rice puddle.

Seeing fFrom the window, I saw that two crows were pecking something in the rice puddla puddle of rice. From the window I saw that two crows were pecking something in a puddle of rice.

Seeing fromLooking out the window, I saw two crows were pecking at something in thea rice puddle. Looking out the window, I saw two crows pecking at something in a rice puddle.

I flew there to find a big crow lying there immobile. I flew there to find a big crow lying immobile.

Don't say there twice

I flewran there to find a big crow lying there, immobile. I ran there to find a big crow lying there, immobile.

I flew there to find a bigran to where they were and found a large crow lying there immobilemotionless. I ran to where they were and found a large crow lying there motionless.

I guessed that this crow gave in after fighting over territory. I guessed that this crow gave in after fighting over territory.

I guessed this crow gave in after fighting over territory. I guess this crow gave in after fighting over territory.

Idly I wondered if this dead crow had a partner or children, as we humans have. Idly I wondered if this dead crow had a partner or children, as we humans have.

Idly I wondered idly if this dead crow had a partner or children as we humans have. I wondered idly if this dead crow had a partner or children as we humans have.

I becamefelt numb knowing there exists a helplessat nature has its own harsh law of natures beyond our control. I felt numb knowing that nature has its own harsh laws beyond our control.

I became numb knowing there exists a helpless hashruthless law of nature beyond our control. I became numb knowing there exists a ruthless law of nature beyond our control.