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HELP!! It's too easy
I had an assignment which was a really tough one. I need to explain art history using annotations such as books(not allowed to use Wikipedia). However, I had no time to finish this, so I used ChatGPT and just explained in Japanese like "Please write a 150-word sentence with like a high school student's grammar level. Don't be specific because I didn't read it, and the professor also knows". And GPT answered splendidly well. My brain says, "This is not the right thing" and I feel guilty. AI is really useful these days, but it also makes me lazy. That's why I came back here to write English on my own. AI is too easy, and it leads me to take the easy way and making me unable to think anything by myself.
I have to be strict with myself!!!
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This is my second text here
I started to read a new book. I have never read a book in English so I bought it with a topic that I like it: wrestling.
Title´s book is "Crazy is my superpower" by A.J Mendez, former wwe wrestler.
Took me 20 min read the first page because It has a lot of words that I didn´t know their meaning.
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Können Frauen und Männer befreundet sein?
Das ist ein kompliziertes Thema. Jetzt höre ich ein Podcast und es anfängt mit einer Frau, sie sagt, dass ihr Freundschaft mit ihrem Freund beendet hat, als er ihr seine Gefühle gestand.
Ich glaube, dass es möglich ist, aber meistens kann es keine Freundschaft sein, ohne dass einer oder beide mehr wollen.
Es ist auch einfacher, romantische Gefühle zu entwickeln, wenn man jemanden oft sieht, denn man fühlt sich mehr zu dieser Person hingezogen. In der Psychologie nennt man das den „Mere-Exposure-Effekt“ (auf Deutsch: „Effekt bloßer Darbietung“).
Oder vielleicht gibt es Eifersucht bei Paaren, sie könnten sich unwohl fühlen, wenn es eine Freundschaft mit jemandem von anderen Geschlecht gibt.
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Come perdere peso (1/6)
Come perdere peso (1/6)
Non sono un uomo grasso, non lo sono mai stato. Però, quando guardo vecchie foto di me stesso, mi accorgo che in alcuni anni sono più grasso che in altri. Nel 2010, quando mia figlia aveva 2 anni, io e la mia famiglia siamo tornati da una vacanza in Okinawa. Che buona vacanza! Però ... mi sono accorto di essere più grasso che mai. Un mese dopo mia moglie è rimasta incinta di nostro figlio. Ero molto felice, ma ... so che quando la moglie è incinta, il marito ingrassa. Oh no ...
Nello stesso periodo, un amico ha perso 10 chilogrammi. Wow! "Come hai fatto?" Ho chiesto.
Mi ha spiegato: è andato dal dottore per la sua visita medica annuale il medico ha detto che lui era troppo
grasso. Il medico ha detto che può mangiare solo 1800 calori al giorno. Allora ha iniziato un piano di conteggio delle calorie. È un ingegnere, quindi è diventato entusiasmante fare piani, grafici e statistiche ecc. Comunque, ha perso circa 10 chilogrammi. Ottimo!
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Eine Formalle Email an das Gemeindeamt
Sehr geehrte Damen und Herren,
Mein Name ist Marco und ich habe meine Reisepass vor vier Monaten beantragt. Leider habe ich ihn bis heute nicht erhalten.
Ich habe bereits sehr lange gewartet und brauche den Reisepass dringend, da ich in zwei Wochen eine Geschäftreise habe. Mein Arbeitgeber ist darüber sehr verärgert.
Können SIe mir bitte mitteilen, wann ich meine Reisepass erwarten kann und warum es so lange dauert?
Sie erreichen mich unter der Telefonnummer +49666666 oder per E-mail an [email protected]. Ich bitte um eine rasche Rückmeldung.
Vielen Dank im Voraus,
Mit freundlichen Grüßen,
Marco.
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First day of using this site
I want to learn English deeply. I have already graduated from the university, but lastly ı thought ı knew English very well, but it was not. I have just learned anything related to the curriculum, so now I have just specified two hours in my day to learn English. In addition, I want to use all the words that I have learned before, but ı do not know how I can ı put them ın my essay or ın my writing . So from now on ı will write every day a small paragraph, and I will be happy ıf you correct that for me
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the work of beautiful art made by making pottery
I've been learning how to make pottery for two years. It gives me a sense of peace, and I met a lot of very sophisticated classmates. By seeing them and learning pottery with them, I get relaxed. Most of them are older than me, and two of them are non Japanese. One of them is from Thailand who got married to a Japanese man. The other one is from Malaysia. There are two old Japanese men in front of my seat. Without learning pottery, it could be difficult to communicate each other, but with the help of learning it, we always enjoy talk in class. Through learning pottery, I always enjoy the beauty of art and heart. It's not a comepetition, but a work of art made by all the people I meet in class.
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Chilean Army Missions.
The main mission of the Chilean Army is keeping peace, national sovereignty, territorial integrity, and protection of citizens, institutions and vital resources of the country against any foreign threat. In summary, its objective is insure the national defense of the country.
The Chilean Army missions are:
Sovereignty defense and territorial integrity: Implies the boarder protection.
International cooperation and external political support: International missions and international cooperation in external political measures.
Support to the National development and governmental actions: Supporting national development projects and governmental issues.
Territorial security and interests: Boarder security and maritime guarantees.
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Auf dem Bild
Auf dem Bild gibt es vielen unterschiedlichen Sachen. Ich sehe zum Beispiel viele Blättern mit unterschiedlichen Farben, einigen sind rot, andere orange, und einpaar sind grün. Ich lege das Bild an der Wand, weil es überhaupt kein normales Bild ist, sondern Dekorationen auf einem Kalender.
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Ich wäre Ritterin
Ich mag mittelalterliche Themen, darum muss ich auf diese Frage als eine Ritterin antworten. Ich möchte Kampf lernen, aber ich habe keine Möglichkeiten. Oft wünsche ich mir, dass ich solche Aktivitäten in meiner Kindheit machen durfte, aber jetzt habe ich leider keine Zeit. Ich bin einer treuer Mensch und ich werde mein Leben geben um jemand zu schützen. Das ist nur einfach zu sagen, aber ich denke, in diesem Szenario könnte ich das tun. Obwohl dieser Aspekt unwichtig ist, genieße ich Liebesgeschichten mit einem Ritter. Ich bewundere dieses Typ von Mensch, und ich versuche so viel ich kann, "ritterlich" zu sein.
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Sentences to be corrected
Sentence 1: You wanted me to adjust the sales by considering offical ratios which was published by goverment. The ratio in September and in December are different. That caused a difference when you cancelled the sales in December. If you apply the same ration in September to the cancelled sales in December, net effect would be zero. But in this time, P&L statement in Corporate Tax Return will be more different than the one I submitted you.
Sentence 2: I calculated this figures by considering invoice date, not incurred date. Please show me an example how to calculate it. This way, I can revise it.
Sentence 3: I used confirmed figures by Daniele. He is in charge of audit of Uffucine Sla. I could not change the figures without him knowing.
Sentence 4: Exchange gains/loses are done by ex-ch rate which is released by Central Bank. It is not associated with inflation.
Sentence 5: I dont understand what is wrong with that. Because you wanted me to use goverment's ratios and I used them. So I used them for calculation. I will try to find a way to reach conclusion you want.
Sentence 6: You can see my answer in below e-mail. Please take a close look at them. I could not adjusted excel file the way you wanted , because I returned my PC to Mr Daniele.
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