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My last holiday
Last Sunday, I and my girlfriends went to the exibition of my favorite auther at Kyobashi, Tokyo.
At first, we're so surprised because the venue was highly crowded by many guests.
We're required to wait 3 hours to entire the venue!
So we got a reservation and went to a cafe.
This cafe provided us great cheese cakes!
It's fantastic!
We may visit this cafe again.
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In letzter Zeit
Fast immer, wenn ich schreibe, habe ich keinen Plan.
Ich schreibe, was mir in den Sinn kommt.
Ich bin seit etwa einer Woche krank.
Jemand hat das Fahrrad von meinem Onkel beklaut, und es war vor dem Haus meiner Oma.
Es war ein gutes Fahrrad, es ist sehr frustrierend.
Normalerweise das Fahrrad aufbewahrt wurde, aber wir haben gedacht, dass es gut wäre, wenn wir es draußen lassen.
Danach haben wir die Katze von meiner Oma bei Tierarzt gebracht und sie wurde geimpft.
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My ideal study destination
Study destination, what about it. Maybe it´s sounds simple or just another superfluo question with barely importance to mayority of the people but we don´t notice, it´s one of the most important decision that we´ve to take alone. There´s a lot of help from institutions, familiy, etc. But in the end its no the case. The impact on our proyection is invaluable. In this text, using my experiencia i going to point in the first place the importance and them where is my ideal destination.
Get out of your confortable zone is too hard because this sesation, instinc is inner our brains. Why move on or change something when its already works and almost why take some risks. This is the question, this the breakpoint at least to me. In childhood, even now I admire, the people who left his mark in history, who mades social, politicals changes and there´s a constant study far froom home. I take all this context, the make a point to justifice, my ideal destination and Why I did this, i believe every space even a small one, can have an impact. I don´t have an ideal place, the only thing that i´m sure is abroad of my contry. The experiencia of open your mind, notice that your world is small and out of them are some incredibles realitys, cultures is one of the most beautiful experiences in life.
The conclusion of this small text wherever you have to idea to study try to that opcion be outside, far froom you safe zone and I promise it will chance your history and your life.
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10 Jahre Deutsche Reise
Ich habe angefangen Deustch zu lernen im Jahr 2016. Ich musste eine Sprache auswählen für die Schule, weil in meinem Land jeder muss zwei Sprachen lernen. Meine zweite Sprache ist Niederländisch, also ich habe Deutsch gewählt. Ich dachte dass es einfach wäre.
Ich habe mich sehr geirrt. Deutsch ist sehr schwierig, aber ich finde es immer noch schön zu leren. Die Sprache klingt wunderschön, und es ist nicht so schwer zu sprechen. Jetzt versuche ich mich durch Schreiben zu verbessern. Es ist nicht einfach, und ich vergesse viele Wörter, aber ich hoffe dass ich bald eine Besserung sehe.
Tschüss!
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My Trike
Last winter, I bought a small trike. The brand of it is Jinpeng, and the model is Douqi Pro. Its size is 2080mm in length, 1060mm in width and 1635mm in height. It has three seats: a driver seat and passenger seats.
It is a battery-powered trike with a 650 - watt electromotor. There are two doors respectively on the left and right and a small skylight on its roof. It is really like a mini car.
Why did I buy it? During winter, the weather in my place is very cold - the temperature can be negative. If I ride an electric bike to work, the cold air makes my face ache, my nose run and me cough.
If I drive a car to work, it is difficult to find a free parking space. And you know, driving a car means a lot of trouble, such as getting traffic tickets, finding free parking spaces and adding gasoline.
This trike won’t get a traffic ticket as there aren't strict rules for trikes in my city. It’s very easy to find a parking space for it since it’s very small. It’s very convenient to drive because it is small and flexible.
It also saves money. It can run about sixty kilometers with a single full charge, which is about eight hours of charging and only consumes two Chinese yuan.
Before I bought it, I often stayed at home on weekends, but after I bought it, I ride it around my city every weekend. It’s much healthier riding around than just staying at home.
Today is the weekend again and I am going to ride around with my wife. I don’t have a plan for the trip; we just ride somewhere spontaneously to relax and have fun.
Well, that’s all for this journal and I will see you soon with the next one.
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An Ocean Of Frustation
There's an ocean of frustations
And I drown in it every day
Silence, thougths, inmsomnia.
I wish I could reboot
Try again
But maybe it only made it worst
It is a lot of changes
But the lonliness its the same
There's something moving me, but I don't know what it is.
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Pursuing high-quality education
Pursuing high-quality education requires constant change and adaptation to human complexity, as well as applying experimentally proven methods. Hence, it is imperative to explore various change models to identify the best fit for the current school situation and the standards set. Several models have been introduced, but this essay compares Kotter’s change model and Lewin`s model. It argues that Kotter’s model is a better choice for educational institutions.
Kotter’s model focuses on both practical and emotional aspects of the change process. First, it encourages education leaders to infuse a sense of urgency among stakeholders needed to take action. Second, a coalition has to be formed among the personnel, which creates mutual support and guidance among them. It stresses the need for a clear vision to guide staff through the process. Leaders not only have to consistently communicate the vision and goals to all the stakeholders but also prepare them with the training and resources needed for this change. The small achievements of staff should be appreciated by the leaders to sustain this change. The step-by-step nature of this model makes it easy to follow. However, the limitations of Kotter's model lie in resistance that happens in any change. Leaders not only have to convince people of the vision but also make them commit to it. Furthermore, the 8-step process of this model takes a long time, especially in schools where taking decisions should be immediate. (MSG Team, n.d.).
Lewin’s model addresses change through three main stages. The first stage is unfreezing. It’s all about conveying the desire for change. Leaders have to communicate the vision of the institution and the demands of the current situation. Transparency is necessary in this stage to involve the team. The second stage is change, where action is taken through training programs designed for the team. The goal of this stage is to make the change permanent through consistent supervising, empowering members to lead, and establishing a reward system for small wins. The final stage is refreezing, where the team moves from the transition phase of recognizing and being trained for the change to a more stable state. People now live the change and can sense the outcomes, and it is time to gather feedback from the team to understand how this change is reflected in their work. Limitations may arise in the oversimplification of the model when dealing with more complex situations that require additional processes to make the change successful. Change requires acceptance and the ability to adapt to it. Resources must be adequate for the desired change. That’s why allocating sufficient time, money, and any other necessary resources would make a difference. (Frontline Education, n.d.).
In conclusion, among the two discussed models, Kotter’s 8-step model appears to be the most effective in establishing well-rounded change in an educational setting. Kotter’s model stands out for the balance it creates between emotions and practicality. Educational settings require this balance. However, each model provides a framework to follow, and no single model can address all aspects of change.
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my contact with writing
I've always been passionate about books. At nine years old, I looked at my mother and said: "I wanna be a writer!" and this decision changed my life. I started creating comic books about mystery (yes, I wrote and drew too). I showed to my friends and it was amazing to them. Now, I'm trying to start a novel, and I hope it turns out (is this right?) as I'm planning ;) 🤍
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Technologien im Alltag
Hallo zusammen,
ich möchte über ein besonderes Thema sprechen, das mir sehr interessiere. Das Thema: Technologien im Alltag.
Beginnen wir mit einem Blick auf die aktuelle Situation, es ist unbestreitbar, dass heutzutage Technologien ein Teil von unserem Lebe ist. Deshalb müssen wir auf die Risiken denken.
Früh benutzten Kindern Technologien wenige, aber heutzutage habe ich Kinder mit 6 Jahr mit ein Handy gesehen. Das repräsentiert ein großes Problem für Zukunftsgenerationen. Viele auf die aktuelle Psychologiegesundsprobleme verbinden mit Medien und Technologie.
Zum Beispiele habe die UNO gezeigt, dass viele Ländern in der Schule Handys verboten haben, weil sie die Bildung auf Kindern beeinflussen. Aber das Problem endete nicht doch. Eltern denken, dass technologische Gerät eine guten Dinge sind, um ihren Kinder zu ablenken.
Wir müssen realisieren, dass großes Problem, das wir erzeugen.
Ich hoffe, dass wir darüber durchdenken.
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Some words that I learnt today
Today , I was learning some new words that I would like to introduce to my vocabulary :
My achievement for today is learning more about new cultures such as African culture .
My best acknowledgement is can to listen the problrem from other people.
I am considered a activist person.
I must to make a adaption of these new conditions .
I must to admission my mental problem.
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