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Beaty and inner beauty
Yesterday I corrected an article in langcorrect website which named “beauty and inner beauty.” The author thought beauty is more important than other qualities in these days. Because beautiful creatures can get more opportunities and occupy the possibilities of success.
I don’t think so.
I am not deny that beauty is a great quality that may guide you to success. But that doesn’t mean beauty is the most powerful quality in the world.
Same as other qualities, such as honesty, consistency, foresight and so on, different qualities have different applicable scenarios.
If you want to be an actor or actress, beauty is a basic and most important quality you must have. If you want to be a wife married to a rich man, your beauty may help you increase the possibility.
However, if you are a boss who wants to promote a CFO(the chief financial officer), which one would you consider? The beautiful one or the honesty one?
In Chinese contemporary economics history, the top 10 richest people such as MaYun, WangXing.eg, who get such a great achievements aren’t because their beauty, but benefiting from their foresights and consistency. In countless fields, beauty is the most useless quality.
You may excuse that if two people reach the same level in other qualities, you will choose the beautiful one. This would not overthrow the point that beauty is one of the great qualities, putting other qualities instead of beauty into your sentence will also make sense.
You also may excuse that inner beauty qualities can’t easily be seen. My dear, success wouldn’t come out at the first sight. And just because the inner beauty is so hard to be seen, so once it is seen, the one with those qualities becomes more reliable.
I fill so pitiful with the author. So many great females devoted themselves to reach the equality of men and women, but you still think beauty is the most important thing, which have advantages over other inner qualities only in marriage!
Jan. 23, 2024
Jan. 22, 2024
Jan. 22, 2024
Lernen Deutsch in Deutschland
Vorher habe ich Deutsch an der Universität für einige Semesters lernen. Es war nicht super, weil immer eine ärgerlich Dinge nach jeden Niveau passierte. Es gab gefährlich 3 Streiken, von Studenten und Arbeitnehmer, unda dann, wenn alles nicht schlechter sein könnte, kam die sehr bekannte Pandemie...
Seit drei Monaten lebe ich in einem kleinen deutschen Dorf, in Süddeutschland. Jeden Tag höre ich gesprochenes Deutsch auf dem Strasse, in dem Supermarkt, under in meinem Arbeitsort. Das klingt sehr gut, aber manchmal kann das auch sehr stressig werden. Und hier gibt es auch viele Streiken, aber ich mache keine Sorge über sie, da sie auch auf Deutsch laufen
Jan. 22, 2024
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Jan. 22, 2024
Practico el complemento directo y el complemento indirecto
¡Estas oraciones son de mi profesora de español! (No entiendo todo las palabras o oraciones😅😂)
¿Por qué no le compramos un ramo de flores a Rosa?
Vale, mañana por la mañana se lo compramos
¡Cómo llueve! ¿Me dejas el paraguas?
No, no te lo dejo (a ti) porque yo también tengo que salir
Es una foto preciosa, ¿me la reglas?
¿Por qué no les escribimos una postal a Tahili y Rossy
Jan. 22, 2024
Immersion method
（すごく長かったですね。ごめんなさい。）
「immersion」に相応した言葉が日本語でもあるかもしれませんが、この文章で英語話者の使い方について話したいと思っており、こういう言葉を英語に限定すれば適切だと気がします。
日本語を勉強し始めたところ、どうすればいいかははっきりしたものじゃなかったので、ユーチューブの動画に相談して、この「immersion」方法はよくおすすめられました。これは、子供が母言語を身につける仕方はインプット、及び、聞いたり読んだりすることしかないので、大人にもこの風にできて、文法の様はいらないとするセオリーです。
しかし、今のところ科学的には、子供が聞くしかないということに違って、子供が親に話されては親と話すことで言語を学ぶのです。それに学校でも習うことを行うのではないのでしょうか？子供が失敗してはやり直して、それを繰り返す方法で言語を身に着けます。この「immersion」セオリーとはいえ、子供の学ぶ方法は別として、役に立つものでもないと思います。
このセオリーがよく普及されているのは、多分、多数の人がその方法で成功できたからです。それにしても私が信じられないのは、多分、多数の人ができなかったからです。どっちのほうが大きいか分からないけど、問題は誰にもわからないでしょう。
日本語を学ぶには、話せなければ上手にならないと思います。そして、私は最初から書いたり話たりする練習することに優先しています。正しいかどうかわからないですけどね。
Jan. 22, 2024
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Jan. 22, 2024
Le sanglier
Le sanglier est une espèce de mammifère de forêt omnivore qui fait partie de la famille Suidae. Cette espèce qui est chassée en abondance est aussi considérée comme très intelligente et capable de développer des stratégies pour s'adapter selon la pression de la chasse.
Le cochon domestiqué vient du sanglier. Considéré longtemps comme une sous-espèce du sanglier par le nom Sus scrofa domesticus, il est maintenant considéré comme espèce seule (Sus domesticus) pour raison de limiter la confusion entre les populations sauvage et de domestique.
Le sanglier est nocturne (c'est possible que ce soit un trait evolutif qui est causé par l'existence de l'homme), largement sedentarisé, et territorial. Quand même, ils peuvent traverser plusieurs douzaines de kilometres dans une nuit.
Jan. 22, 2024
Mon idéal partenaire
D'abord, j'étais jamais en couple donc mes avis sur cette sujet pourrait bien changé. Je crois que beaucoup de gens ont déjà réfléchi à quoi leur partenaire idéal resemblerait s'ils étaient en couple. Chaque personne à ses propres preferences et goûts à cause de ça le idéal partenaire est différent pour nous tout. Pour moi c'est ainsi, j'aimerais quelqu'un à mes côtes qui prendre soin de son corps et sa mental en gros une personne qui traîte son corps comme un temple. De plus quelqu'un qui a confiance à soi même et est imperturbable, j'apprécie vraiment les personnes avec un fort caractére qui suivent leur principaux quoi qu'il en soit. C'est assez de caracteristique pour une partenaire à mon avis.
Jan. 22, 2024
Jan. 22, 2024
un'escursione mozzafiata
[it] Ciao a tutti. Ieri ho passato una bella giornata. Ho incontrato una amica in città per andare a portare a spasso il suo cane. Come il giorno era bellissimo e che c'era sole abbiamo deciso di salire al castello che sovrasta la città. Sono solamente 273 metri di dislivello positivo ma come non abbiamo una buona condizione fisica ultimamente, siamo arrivate in cima in un poco meno di un'ora. Non è cosi male e non mi ha sembrato troppo difficile. Di più la vista sulle montagne era davvero mozzafiata! Sono più motivata a fare trekking grazie a questa esperienza :)
Jan. 22, 2024
Health Check
I had a health checkup once a year.
I had to have a stomach test, so I didn't eat or drink after 9 PM the night before.
I usually drinks something after taking a bath, but since it was past 9 PM when I left the bath, I couldn't drink anything.
It was hard time for me too I can’t being able to eat or drink anything from 9 PM until around the noot the next day when the test was over.
Jan. 22, 2024
Jan. 22, 2024
Jan. 22, 2024
Jan. 22, 2024
The Romanesque and Its Music: Gregorian Chant I
When we enter a Romanesque temple, its architecture, decoration, and spatial arrangement combine to create an experience that invites reflection and spiritual contemplation.
We step into a sacred space, and the visual experience makes us forget about its sound. The musical harmony resonating in its space was immaterial and essentially intangible. Surely, its chords were Gregorian...
But... what was its music like? Singing in Romanesque churches began in the Middle Ages, specifically in the 9th century. At that time, liturgical singing was in the hands of the monks and was performed in Latin. This singing, known as Gregorian chant, was named in honor of Pope Gregory I, who supposedly compiled and organized the repertoire of liturgical music in the 6th century.
To describe this chant and understand it a bit, we need to delve into the curricula of the time: the Trivium and the Quadrivium.
This medieval educational system focused on the study of seven fundamental subjects, and music and singing were studied in the Quadrivium. The "subject" of music included the study of music theory, notation, composition, and performance.
During this era, music was considered one of the liberal arts, meaning it was a discipline cultivated by free individuals and was essential in intellectual development and the formation of the mind.
Jan. 22, 2024
(D8) – The Use of social media in schools
My topic today is social media culture, particularly in schools.
A few days ago, the school sent me an email to inform me that, if I wanted my child to participate in the annual concert, I had to allow him to be posted on social media. Otherwise, my son wouldn’t be able to participate in this activity. I must add that my son had been chosen to give a small speech to present at this concert, for which he had been preparing for several weeks then.
Regardless of how this turns out, I believe that schools should know better than to impose this social media exposition. From my point of view, I don’t see any benefits for kids and a lot of risks. Firstly, once a post is made, control over it is lost forever. Secondly, schools should impart education on social media aimed at not only students but also parents.
In conclusion, as a society, we still need to take a step forward to ensure safety and security when using these tools. While they are amazing for communication, their inherent risks shouldn’t be overlooked.
Jan. 22, 2024
I went to see Spy x Family (25)
I went to see Spy x Family today.
Twilight and Yor are always cool and Anya is always funny.
This time, the most funniest scene was where Anya was holding her poop.
It was hilarious and I couldn't help laughing.
However, there were some people in the cinema, I tried not to laugh out laud.
Some kids were cackling, so my laugh didn't standout.
I'm going to read the comic English version Spy x Family one page today too.
It's just right for me to read one page a day because it's a little bit difficult.
Jan. 22, 2024
Jan. 22, 2024
Les mariages de Louis XII
Louis XII, né Louis d’Orléan, succéda le duc d’Orléan à 2 ans. Il prit en tutelle de Louis XI. Ce dernier maria le prince à sa fille, Jeanne la boiteuse, physiquement estropiée, dans l’espoir de l’extinction de la famille d’Orléan. Après son ascension au trône de France, il supplia le pape de reconnaître la nullité de son mariage avec Jeanne pour se remarier à Anne de Bretagne, la veuve de l’ancien roi, Charles VIII. Sa demande fut acceptée et le roi de France épousa la douairière.