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Hallo an alle,
heute möchte ich schreiben darüber, dass Weblogs, wie es im Internet nutzt, ich selbst stehe auf dem Stadtpunkt, dass es die Artikelsart im Internet ist.
Früher gab es persönliche Journaling- Websites, die chronologische Genauigkeit in Form von Tagebüchern, speziellen Themen usw. zeigten. Und heutzutage ist Bloggen ein riesiges Konzept geworden. Eine weitere Ursache für Weblogs immer beliebter ist, Leser, wenn Sie den Blog lesen, können Sie einen Kommentar im Blog hinterlassen. Ich würde das Beste halten, wenn man Blog liest, kann man Wikipedia oder andere Websites nutzen. Blog hat den Vorteil, dass es oft umsonst ist und, wenn Leser zusätzliche Dienste wünschen, können sie dafür bezahlen. Heutzutage gibt es ganze Portal-Site von Co-Autoren, und Netzwerk verwendet.
Jan. 20, 2023
The Chinese New Year Holiday
Actually, the Chinese New Year has only three days off, but we did have seven days off.
These seven days include two days on the weekend, three holidays and two working days.
So on the first weekend after the Chinese New Year, we can't have a rest as usual. We have to go to work because we had two more days off during the holiday.
Going to work these two days on the weekend is to make up for the two days of extra rest during the Chinese New Year holiday.
Jan. 20, 2023
My Life in SZ (3)
It's a simple job to be sitting beside the line, you can be a good worker unless you are determined to turn to be a robot. Unfortunately, I was not that kind of person.
One day, when I was working as usual. A colleague beside me warned me, "Don't be sleepy anymore, the boss's son is coming to visit the workshop, and he will bring some of his classmates to see this factory. " "Oh, I didn't sleep well last because two roommates came back to the dormitory after the night shift at 3 o'clock in the morning," I replied to her in a low voice. Speaking can arouse and clear my mind.
About one hour passed. A hand touched me saying, "Hey, hey, how are you? " “Oh, sorry” I immediately woke up and involuntarily answered to the "greeting". A handsome teenager with sparking clean leisure clothes was standing beside me with a smile while four other peers staring at me too. I could feel his smile was full of sympathy, the eyes of his classmates filled with pity. I adjusted my following glasses and continued to work. No one blamed me afterward because everyone know it was normal for a newcomer.
We had one hour free from 12:00 to one o'clock including lunch and rest. From the workshop to the canteen would spend 5 minutes, canteen to the dormitory 10 minutes. It would cost me 30 minutes to work on time in the afternoon. Nearly all of the employees finished their lunch in 5 minutes. I had no time to sleep in a bed, so I often lean a box in the workshop to take a 10 minutes nap.
The most terrible recollection feeling was the dormitory in the Worker House.
Jan. 20, 2023
Diary 1/17 & 1/18
1/17
Today I finished one of my studying processes for January. It's so early than I expected. I think the reason is that I considered too many unpredictable things and thus not arranged more I could handle. When the new semester starts, it will be better to manage time than on winter vacation.
1/18
I went to have lunch with my friends from high school. We ate at the all-you-can-eat restaurant which I ate before. We always find a day to hang out on the long vacation because we are all busy during a semester. But this time one friend was
absent due to the exam preparation. After she takes the exam, another one will go to Japan. Therefore, this vacation we can't have a date that no one being absent. I appreciate every time we meet because I know we will become more and more busy when we all enter the workforce. If we work in the different city, it's more difficult to contact regularly.
Jan. 20, 2023
The Year of Rabbit
This Year is the year of Rabbit. There are some fun facts about rabbit I read from a post. A word in chinese "玉兔捣药", which means a moon rabbit pounding herb medecines. A moon rabbit is a mythical figure that lives on the moon. In Chinese folklore, the rabbit often is portrayed as a companion of the Moon goddess Chang'e, constantly pounding the elixir of life for her. The image of this story was first displayed on a painting in the Western Han Dynasty. That was a long long time ago.
Rabbit's feet is not only a ordinary animal's feet. It means lucky and auspicious. Some people will hang a pendent of rabbit feet in the car for wishing a save and nice journey.
In Buddhist scriptures, cony hair indicated a extremely tiny material phenomenon. I don't get the meaning of a extremely tiny material phenomenon. it said that there is four-character word means a rabbit grows horns and a tortoise hair to metaphor Failing to achieve something but with obsession.
May the beauty and joy of rabbit year remain with us throughout the whole year!
Jan. 20, 2023
Divagaciones 5
Todo se alineó a destiempo y ni siquiera estábamos preparados para ocuparnos de eso.
La nieve seguía acumulándose a tutiplén y para cuando estábamos listos para irnos, las condiciones habían empeorado tanto que no era posible.
No necesariamente queremos arrojarlo a los lobos, pero tampoco queremos que nos siga causando problemas aquí.
¿Le dan un préstamo a cada hijo de vecino pero no nos consideran en absoluto, qué pasa?
Jan. 20, 2023
Venerdì
Anche se oggi è venerdì, posso dire che per me oggi è martedì, perché lavoro tutti i fine settimane questo mese.
Il mio programma al lavoro e strano e non è lo stesso ogni mese. Almeno ho ancora un posto di lavoro, purtroppo certa gente non può dire lo stesso.
Ogni volta che la mezznotte si avvicina, mi sento felice. Stacco il lavoro e poi posso rilassarmi senza preoccupazioni.
Ovviamente studio sempre, non c'è un giorno in cui non studio. È una prova di carattere a questo punto, no?
Questo è quello che succede quando ci si ha dei obiettivi nella vita.
A volte è stancante, ma se io provo spesso ad imparare, posso raggiungere i miei obiettivi.
Oggi studio più di ieri, in questo modo posso diventare una persona migliore.
Generalmente, mi piace studiare e leggere, fortunatamente ho del tempo da fare tutto quello che voglio.
Un giorno sarà più facile, lo so.
Jan. 20, 2023
プログラミングと日本語
日本語を勉強し始める前に別の独学の期間があった。今の仕事はプログラミングだけど、大学卒業してから自転車のメーカーで５年ぐらい働いて、説明書を書いたり、中国にある工場に出張したり、自転車屋の店員に教えたりしていた。実は楽しくて色々なことを覚えたのに、給料は低すぎた。それで辞める一年ぐらい前にプログラミングを一人で勉強し始めることにした。
よく日本語を勉強しながらその時を思い出す。日本語の独学はプログラミングの独学に似ていると思っているんだけど、語学はプログラミングの勉強に比べてずいぶん難しい。
一番大切な理由はフィードバックだと思っている。言語の練習方法は書くことか喋ることだけで、それから誰かは「いい」か「間違う」と言ってくれなければいけない。日本語だって、フランス語だって、JavaScriptだって、同じことだ。
プログラミングするときに、エディターで書いてボタンを押すとすぐに正しいか間違いかどうかを知ることができる。この即座のフィードバックを使って、速く色々な解答をしてみることができる。 それに対して、言語を独学するとき先生がいないで自分で答えを遅くみつけなければいけない。
もちろん言語を覚えるとコミュニケーションをしたい。結局、独学を辞めて人と喋るほうがいい。
プログラミングより日本語の独学は何倍も勉強しにくいと思う。最初からプログラミングを覚えるのが2年間くらいかかった。日本語は１０年以上かかるはずだ。できると思う！
僕の限界ですよ！僕の日本語をこれで全部使いました。複雑な話について書いてみたかったんです。 もっと練習がいるなぁ。。。
Jan. 20, 2023
Prefiero...
Prefiero libros físicos mucho mucho más que digitales. Hay solo algo especial sobre cogiendo un libro en mis manos y siendo capaz girar las páginas. También me gusta viendo mi progresa con un marcador físico. No puedo hacerlo con los libros digitales y no me gusta mirar en las pantallas por un largo tiempo.
Jan. 20, 2023
Cleaning day w/ my bf
Девятнадцать январь 2023
Сегодня, я проснулся в десять утро. Я не спала хорошо. У меня не было снов. Ну, я их не помню по крайней мере.
Сейчас, я пью Монстер энергетик которую мой парень купил для меня. Он такой милый.
Мы уберём в дома после обед. Нам нужно пойдем в магазин за новым чистящими средствами.
Jan. 20, 2023
La Nouvelle Année chinoise
Dimanche prochaine, le 22 janvier, des millions de personnes vont célébrer la Nouvelle Année chinoise. C’est la fête, la plus importante en Chine et dans nombreux d’autre pays. Selon un chiffre que j’ai vu récemment, la population chinoise ou d’origine chinoise est environ 1,5 milliards de personnes : c’est vertigineux !
Selon la tradition chinoise, il y a 12 signes lunaires : ces signes font le zodiaque chinois et, chaque année est représentée par un signe animal comme le serpent, le tigre et le singe. Cette année, c’est l’année du lapin. Le date de la Nouvelle Année dépend sur le calendrier lunaire et change chaque année. Traditionnellement, le festival dure 16 jours, commençant avec le réveillon de la nouvelle année et culminant avec le festival des lanternes. Cette période est un temps pour l’action de grâce, les célébrations et passer du temps avec les proches.
Apparemment, l’Année du lapin représente de l’énergie paisible et patiente. Il faut puiser dans cette énergie et l’exploiter. Alors, les points sur lesquels il faut se concentrer cette année sont nombreux. Mon ami, m’a conseillé d’établir des liens solides avec les autres, profiter des possibilités de réseautage (networking opportunities) et augmenter mes revenus, mais à même temps d’être prudente et vigilante. N’oubliez pas que le lapin est sage, douce, patiente mais aussi circonspect.
Jan. 20, 2023
医療過誤の責任は誰にあるのか
2017年12月17日に、米国のヴァンダービルト大学病院で、ある看護師が薬の取り間違えで、患者が死亡した。当日に退院するはずだったその患者は、薬が投与されてから一時間以内に脳死状態になって、死亡が確認されたとのことだ。看護師は患者のCTかPET検査の不安を和らげるために、薬を飲ませると判断した。ゆえに、看護師が取り出そうとしていた薬は「Versed」という鎮静剤だったが、実際に患者に投与したのは鎮静剤どころか、「Vecuronium」という危険な筋弛緩剤（麻痺材）だった。看護師は自分の過失に気付いた直後に、責任を取るつもりで病院の担当者に真実を伝えたが、即刻解雇にされた。
通常は、事故が起こる時に、病院は報告書を提出しなくてはいけないことになっている。だが、ヴァンダービルト大学病院が書いた報告書によると、死亡の原因は看護師の誤りや医療過誤によるのではなく、処方の間違いなどという曖昧なものが書いてあったそうだ。それだけではなく、病院は患者の家族にも口止めをしたとのことだ。
しかし、これはいずれ詳細が暴露されてニュースに出てきて、いつの間にか議論になってきた。蓋を開けてみれば、その日、この元看護師が新入りを指導していた上で、過剰のノルマを背負っていたことが明らかになってきた。それに加えて、病院が導入していた「自動処方薬調剤システム」にはエラーが発生してあり、医者でも誰でも薬を取り出そうとする時、表示してくるエラーを無視するのが頻繁に必要になっていた。バグってるソフトウェアを使ったことがある方は分かるだろうが、意味のないエラーに慣れると、注意すべき警告が出てきても、人間は自然に重要な情報を見逃してしまう傾向がある。残業の疲れは、さらにこれに火に油を注くだろう。
これらの点から考えると、今回の事故の責任は紛れもなく看護師側にあるのか？事故であっても、人の命を奪うのは恐ろしいものなので、この元看護師の肩を持つつもりはないが、人間は所詮人間だし、完璧なものではないわけだ。将来にこういうことを防ぐという話になれば、私たちは個人だけじゃなく、組織側の責任にも目を向くべきのではないだろうか。
Jan. 20, 2023
Jan. 20, 2023
Day 13: Languages That I would Like to Learn
I fell in love with Japanese when I saw its writing system in the movie "My Neighbour Totoro" by Studio Ghibli. Japanese is tradicionally written in columns from top to bottom with three writing systems which are: hiragana, katakana and kanji. But there is more languages that attract my attention, one of those is Norwegian because I want to know more about Nordic culture, Nordic mythology and Vikings history.
French is another one that I would like to learn because sounds very smooth and romantic, and also because I would like to learn how to cook French food. I'm a native Spanish speaker and I'm currently learning English, so I think that learning French could be easier for me. French is from the same language family than Spanish and forty percent of English vocabulary is from French language.
I also really love how Italian is spoken, sometimes when I'm happy, I sing Italian songs which I learned from memory when I was in middle school. There are many languages that I would like to try but, for now, I can just only focus on two. Maybe after mastering English language, I will start learning one of those. My limit right now is two languages, English and Japanese.
Jan. 20, 2023
３４：高校に爆弾を仕掛けたという通報の話
今日の投稿は高校３年生の時に起こった一生に忘れられない事について書きたいと思う。今の言語力でどれほどこの文章にその体験を再現できるかはわからないけどやってみないと分からないだろうね。じゃあ、さっそく書こう。
アメリカでは高校生達にとって３年生の時は最も大事な時期だ。入学試験は言うまでもなく、入学のためのエッセイも書かなければならないのだ。その入学の事で悩む日々の中、受験生は学校で良い成績を保つ必要もある。一番下の弟と一緒に電車で揺られながら、そういう考え事をしていた。学校の最寄り駅で降り、今日の１時限の機械工学の教室へ向かった。校門の辺りに着いたところで、学校の全部の扉から人の洪水がぞろぞろと飛び出てきた。偶然、機械工学の先生が最初に出た人なので、すぐ気づいた。気楽に挨拶を掛けたとたん、「速く、公園へ！」と先生に叫ばれた。一体何が起こったんだろう？
弟と向こうの公園へ移動し、他の生徒達に尋ねてみたが、誰も状況を把握していなさそうだった。でも、すぐにある噂が流れてきた。ガス漏れがあったという。数十分後、消防車とか救急車とかはサイレンを鳴らしながら学校を囲んできたので、ガス漏れの説をもっともらしくと信じてきたと思ったら、パトカーも来ました。ただのガス漏れなのに警察が必要かと疑問だったけど、近いうちに状況の真相が明らかになった。
僕の学校は生徒の皆さんが別々の時限で学校を始めるという変わった精度をしているから、ずっと弟だけと一緒に公園で待っていたけど、３時限になっていたところで、２人の親友がついに学校に着いた。その２人と合流する前に、メールで事情の説明をしていたが、彼らは公園の予想外の大勢にぽかんとしていた。５０００人以上すらいる全校生徒がこの小さな公園に集まっているのは本当になんてことだ。親友の２人と挨拶を交わしたとたん、他の生徒達が動き出した。全校生徒が来る３時限の時を待っていたようだった。状況をちゃんと理解できていないまま、皆は近くにある大学へ避難し始めた。
その大学は学校の最寄り駅の真向にあるので、たくさんの生徒は大学に入る前にこれを機会に、地下鉄に入り、サボったり家に帰ったりしました。弟はその内の１人だけど、僕と親友の２人は大学に入った。全生徒が体育館に入り落ち着いたところで、スピーカーで状況の説明が始まった。高校に爆弾を仕掛けたという通報があったらしかった。
正直、謎を明かした後、体育館にいる皆は騒いだりなんてしなかった。むしろ、平気そうで、ようやく状況をわかってきた事にほっとしていただけだった。爆弾通報になんとも思わないのとツッコミたいところだが、僕も友達と楽しく喋っているうちに爆弾をすっかり忘れていた。
ほぼ半日が終わったら、通報は虚偽だったという知らせが届き、学校に戻られた。でも、前のようにこの状況に飽きた生徒達は先生達の視線もかまわず、学校ではなく駅へ向かった。生徒の気持ちを汲み取ったようで、先生達は学校から逆方向へ行く生徒を咎めたりもしなかった。振り返ってみると、僕も避難の後でサボったらいいなと思う。結局、生徒の３分の１しか学校に帰らなかった。
では、ここで話を終わらせようと思う。言語力の足りなさであまり書きたかったほど詳しく書けなかったけど、面白く書けたらいいなと思う。親友によると、このような虚偽通報は彼のお姉さんが僕達の学校にまだ通っていた時にもあったようだった。ちょっと悪い言い方だと思うけど、本当に虚偽通報は僕達の高校の伝統のような事だった。
Jan. 20, 2023
My Life in SZ (2)
Two days later, I moved from my friend's home to a dormitory in a six-storey Staff Building without an elevator. There were several other comparatively older and bad-state low-rise buildings nearby, which were called Worker Houses.
There were 6 metal bunk beds in my dormitory. I forget which floor I was living on and how much I paid for it each month. An HR staff ushered me in pointing to a top bunk and saying, "It's your bed, you can take relax and rejuvenate at noon from 12:00 to one o'clock in the afternoon, of course, you can sleep here at night." In fact, I never touched my bed at noon.
I sat by an assembly line, some ornaments like elves, Christmas trees, smashed snow, reindeer, and more others toward to my hands through a motor-driven conveyor. First, I must put them into a crystal sphere which had already piled on my place. Then, put it on the conveyor belt again, some other workers were waiting for it and prepared to do the next process.
The ornaments were so beautiful in my eyes when I first saw them put on the tables; hanging on the walls; piling on the ground. So many various ornaments filled every corner of the workshop. They will go to thousands of families in the world through our hands, making them sing, dance, and sing on the great days by the end of December.
No matter how much I loved these kinds of Christmas accessories before, I looked at them as disgusting after one hour of working by the assembly line.
Jan. 20, 2023
Jan. 19, 2023
Jan. 19, 2023
Self Introduction for "About me" Section on LangCorrect
I am an English learner and a video game oriented content creator who often posts videos and does live-streams on Twitch and YouTube.
I also do language learning related live-streams on Twitch sometimes.
I have used another language corrections website Lang-8 for a long time.
Since it doesn’t accept new users anymore and its community is kind of dead, so I started to mainly use LangCorrect.
My immediate goal is to improve my English, especially speaking and writing.
Check out the related links in the note section.
Jan. 19, 2023
Jan. 19, 2023
Ils se battent pour rien
C'est impossible de ne jamais se battre mais je sais. Mais il y a des occasions où les raisons pour se disputer sont ridicules.
Aujourd'hui je suis témoin d'une querelle ridicule. Le sujet? la météo.
Il y avait deux camarades de classe qui étaient crié. J'ai demandé ce qui s'est passé et vous ne devinerez jamais¡
( on va leur appeler Pancho et Trancho)
Tout était parce que Trancho avait dit qu'il préférait la chaleur et Pancho préférait le froid.
Et Pancho disait que le froid était mieux donc Trancho répondait que non que la chaleur était la meilleure du monde.
Moi, je crois qu'il n'y a pas de raison pour se disputer d'une chose comme ça.
À la fin si quelqu'un préfère la chaleur ou le froid ça ne change pas la météo et les saisons.
Jan. 19, 2023
Jan. 19, 2023
Gratitude
I want to write some things I'm grateful for. Most of the time I ruminate on things I don't have or on failed plans, but for now on I want to be thankful for good things I have in my life and for small things I have accomplished. I'm grateful for having a roof over my head, and healthy food everyday, for being physically healthy and having a stable job. I don't have so many friends but I have one who is worth than many of them. And a family, though is crazy sometimes, is always supportive. I'm happy for being able to write this entry in English by myself and for reading English news on the internet easily, watching some videos without subtitles. I think theses things are great accomplishment.
Jan. 19, 2023
The Big Fraud: MMM Cooperative of Sergey Mavrodi
The fraudster Sergey Mavrodi created one of the largest Ponzi schemes across the world and deceived millions of people. His story was a bit of shock for me since I don’t think that kind of fraud would be possible today in the first place. I mean, today we at least can quickly google the information about anyone and didn’t buy into the promises of a stranger. However, in the USSR people couldn’t just open Google Search and make sure that some weird guy doesn’t try to steal from them. It seems that people’s ignorance was a major reason of Mavrodi's success.
Mavrodi definitely wasn’t born with a silver spoon in his mouth. In fact, he was quite an odd man with an odd jobs. First he worked as a software engineer, then used to sell pirate audio cassettes. He collected butterflies and bred fishes, worn spectacles and scruffy clothes. It’s thought to be that he was the first who imported the personal computers to the USSR. To be honest, he didn’t give an impression of someone who would became a highly successful millionaire down the road at all.
It wasn’t until 1990s that Mavrodi’s company, MMM Cooperative, got it start. At first, the company sold only personal computers. However, shortly after, the business was on the rise, and Sergey decided to launch a huge PR campaign. For example, he made a New Year’s Christmas TV ad in which he addressed to the average Russians. That kind of add before him had made only a Russian President but it seems Mavrodi didn’t concern himself with business etiquette.
On February 1994, Sergey started to sell MMM shares. Thanks to PR campaign on TV, which is proved to be highly effective, the Russians already knew who Mavrodi was and at once began to buy shares. There was no shortage of enthusiastic investors, and it’s said that about 15 millions of the Russians participated in MMM Cooperation. Why is it that people were ready to give Mavrodi their money in the first place? Well, because in the USSR people lived in poverty, and they simply wanted to have any hope for the future.
MMM Cooperation became so popular that Sergey and his assistants hadn’t time to count all the money, so they measured them simply by eye or by the size of a room. At a certain point, Mavrodi even created his own currency with his portrait on banknotes — that money were called MMM coupons and were in circulation with ruble, dollar and other currencies.
It was utterly ridiculous that on August 1994, Sergey was accused with tax evasion instead of a fraud. He was sent to jail for 70 days. Soon thereafter he was released, MMM Cooperation was closed, and Mavrodi disappeared and was put on the international most wanted list. He was arrested in 2003 in his Moscow apartment where he had been hiding. He was sentenced for four years and six months, but soon was again released because at the time he had already spent most of his custody time in pre-trial custody. By comparison, the fraudster Bernie Madoff four years later was sentenced to 150 years in prison by the similar Ponzi fraud.
MMM was one of the biggest financial pyramid scheme in history. According to calculations, people invested from $100 million to a billion dollars in Mavrodi’s company and lost all their savings. Investors weren’t really wealthy — rather, they were poor people with their last savings. More than 50 people committed suicide when they realised they lost everything. Money was never found, and it’s believed that Mavrodi send them out of the Russia through offshore companies.
Jan. 19, 2023
Mis vacaciones
En el verano, iré con mi amiga a Corea, su país natal. Visitaremos su familia y disfrutaremos el país. Nunca he visitado Corea, pero creo que será una experiencia muy buena. Quizás fuere un poco difícil para encontraré los platos sin carne porque me prefiero esos, pero trataré de vivir como los lugareños tanto como pueda. Estoy nerviosa de conocer con su familia, especialmente sus padres jajaja
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