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한국어로 말하기에 대한 두려움과 불안함이 있기 때문에 일기를 쓰는 것을 결정했어요.
제가 말하기에 대한 두려움이 있을 뿐만 아니라 요즘 석사 논문을 준비하니까 많이 불안했어요. 작년 석사 입문 수업에 논문을 구상하고 연구제안서를 써야 됐는데 그때부터 그 논문에 관련된 연구경로를 상상하고 마음 속을 떠나지 않았어요. 저는 새로운 아이디어들이 계속 넘쳐흘리고 그 주제에 대해 읽으면 할수록 다른 기론과 개념을 더욱 많이 연상시켰어요.
요즘 모든 상념, 개념, 이론과 연구 방법에 대한 생각을 일관된 계획을 맞추고, 직조할도록 노력했는데도 이류학 교수께서 석사 논몬에 관한 지도교수를 부탁할 생각만 해도 긴장돼요. 자세히 준비하더라도 항상 두려워요.
March 28, 2023
Manga
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It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!
A: Have you read Kingdom?
B: No. What is the story about?
A: It is a story about the Spring and Autumn period in China, when China was divided into seven countries, and then first Qin Emperor and Shin who young boy, became generals later unified China by wars.
B: Sounds interesting.
A: It is very interesting. But there is one problem.
B: What's that?
A: It moves very slowly. In short, they have to win over countries one by one and unify them one by one, but right now the series has been running for 17 years and about 70 volumes have been published, but not even one has been unified yet. I think they will be able to unify one of them by the 20th year, so by this calculation, it will take another 100 years to complete the series. So you can enjoy it for a long time! Please read it.
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Grammar Practice 20
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Grammar Practice 20
両者とも今現在までの時間感覚のため過去を表すagoや何かが完了した時間などは使えず、使うならただの過去形を使う。
Have you seen her?
Yeah. But she went out just a while ago.
Did you see her this morning?
Yeah. But she went out just a while ago.
I lived in Chiba for about 10 years.
I lived in Chiba until the third grade, then moved to Saitama for about 13 years. And then I’ve been living in Tokyo since then./ And then I live here now.
What time did you go to bed last night?
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Grammar Practice 18, 19
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Grammar Practice 18, 19
Present perfect 2
まだ勉強してる状態だし、結婚はもうしてる状態だからareではなくhave been.要はそれを完了しし続けてる状態。
現在完了形 have[has] ＋過去分詞。これかもずっとのイメージ。もしくは過去から現在までの継続した時間。「継続」「経験」「完了」状態動詞はこっちにすることが多い。元々進行形にならない動詞（like、beなど）なら、普通はこれ。
-現在完了進行形 have[has] been ＋ 〜 ingか形容詞。一時的なイメージ。現在まだ完了してなくて進行中。「動き」、「動画的」な意味合いを含むことから、「〜し続けている」という感覚が非常に強くなるのがこのhave been doingの表現です。何かをやっている期間は大体これ。
have doneは「（過去の出来事、経験を）今も持っている」、have been doingは「（連続している動作）をやってきている」
How long have they been married?（結婚して何年？ marriedは形容詞だからbeen
How long have you been studying Japanese?
For about two years
彼女（彼氏）いない歴どれくらい？
How long have you been single?
For about 5 years
いつ頃から体調悪いの？
How long have you been feeling this way?
Since about when I was in high school.
What are you doing?
I've been cleaning my house.
Since when?
Yesterday morning.
I haven't known you for a long time, but I think I should know you very well. Maybe. I hope so.
Are you waiting for someone/something?
誰か/何かを待ってるの？特に現在のことを聞いてるからare you
How long have you been waiting?= How long have you been here?前からの現在までの時間を聞いてるからhave you。
最後にご飯食べたのいつ？
5時間くらい前かな
When was the last time you had meal?
About five hours ago.
生まれた時からそこに住んでる？
ちがう。まだ一年くらいだよ。
Have you lived there since birth?
No. It's only been about a year.
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Grammar Practice 16, 17
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Grammar Practice 16, 17
already, yet, just
It is mostly done already
もうほとんど終わったよ
まだ実感がない。
It hasn't hit me yet.
まだまだ安心はできない。
We’re not out of the woods yet.
まだまだです。
Not there yet.
I haven't had lunch yet.
私はまだ昼食を食べていません。
もうおれにとったらすでにめっちゃ暑い
It's already too hot to me here.
Just
用法１：（ちょっと）だけ
Please add just a little bit of salt. No more than one pinch.（塩をほんのちょっとだけ足してくれる？ほんのひとつまみやで。
用法２：ただ〜（をしたかった）
It’s just a spider. Calm down.（ただのくもじゃないか。落ち着けよ）
What happened to your finger?
I’m OK. It’s just a small cut. It’s not a big deal.
その指どうしたの？
（大丈夫。ただの切り傷だし、大したことないよ
用法３：とにかく〜（する・やる）
Just sing! Why are you so embarrassed?（ええから歌いーさー。何がそんなに恥ずかしいねん？
用法４：（ちょうど）〜したばかり・〜したところ
I just left the house. I should be there in 30 minutes.（今、家を出たところなので、到着は30分後くらいです。
用法５：そっくり・そのまんま
He looks just like Johnny Depp.
（彼、ジョニーデップにそっくりだね。
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Grammar Practice 13 14 15
I'd like to speak English naturally, and not like a textbook, so please correct me as accurately as possible so that I can speak like a native!
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Grammar Practice 13 14
Past continuous
昨日は寝言を言ってたよ。
You were talking in your sleep last night.
Really? What was I saying?
Sorry, I was talking to myself.
ごめん、独り言だった
彼は上司の悪口を言っていた。
He was badmouthing his boss.
Really? What was he saying?
彼は覚悟の上で挑んだ。
He knew what he was getting into.
Yeah. I'm proud of him.
ちょうど今同じことを考えていた。
I was just thinking that.
We were just talking about that.（ちょうど今その話をしていた
I was hoping you wouldn’t say that.
（それを言わないで欲しかったな
そのことが気になっていた。
I was wondering about that.
ただちょっと見て回っていたところです。
I was just looking around.
ごめん、さっきなんて言ってたの？聞き取れなかった、
I'm sorry, what were you saying earlier? I didn't catch it. Please come again?
Grammar Practice 15
Present perfect1
私たちは最近なんか気まずい感じ。
Things have been awkward between us somehow.
What happened?
最近、彼女が冷たい。
She's been distant.
What happened?
It’s been raining.
最近は雨が多いね
史上初のことです。（誰もやったことがないことだ）
It's never been done before.
そこに行ってみたいなとずっと思っていた。
I’ve been meaning to check it out.
mean to」は「~するつもり
彼のシラフを見たことがない。
I've never seen him sober.
私も経験したからその気持ちは分かります。
I've been there. I know how you feel.
最近ちゃんと食べている？
Have you been eating properly?
Yes. Thank you. How about you?
彼女は上手に歳をとっている。
She has aged really well.
For sure.
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Toeic 1-10
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Toeic
1-10
Anyway
Let’s try, anyway.
Following
以下の問いに答えて。
Answer the following questions.
Refer
知り合いを紹介すると1品限定50％引き。
You can get a 50% discount on one item only when you refer someone you know to me!
Available
これはまだ手に入りますか？
Is this still available?
Department
どこの売り場にそれはありますか？
On which departments is it displayed?
Conference
これはカンファレンスとコンベンションどっち？
Is this a conference or a convention?
According to
厚生労働省によると、
According to the Ministry of Health, Labor and Welfare,
Likely
残念ながらおそらくその日には間に合わないかと思います。
I’m afraid we probably won't be able to make it on that date.
Offer
君にこの仕事をオファーしたい。
I would like to offer you this job.
Equipment
今1番欲しい設備はなに？
What equipment do you want most now?
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Word 2
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Word Practice 2
10-20
1 How to Use “By”
As time goes by, life begins to feel very short.
Some of the electricity is provided by cables which are buried underground.
Please sort them by file size.
No problem. I will do it by myself.
B: Can I ask you a personal question?
A: Yes, by all means.
B: Are you going to be finished by then?
A: No, but I think I can do it by 9 pm.
Did you run it by Hasegawa?
I didn’t mean anything by it.
There's a supermarket by my house.
I like eat by myself.
2 how to use “am”
Yes, I am.
3 how to use “father”
複数形fathers
You're so kind! Like father, like son.
4 how to use “apple”
* 複数形apples
Apple products are stylish and cool.
This apple is so sweet.
I didn't fight with him. He and I were originally like apples and oranges. It’s as simple as that.
This isn't an apple-to-apple.
5 how to use “banana”
複数形bananas
Unfortunately, Mexico has become like Banana Republic.
He was a top banana in high school.
If I have to do this work all day, I'm gonna go bananas.
6 how to use “beef”
* 複数形beef
This beef is too hard to chew.
You should beef up the typhoon defenses before the next one comes.
You got a beef with me?
7 how to use “bread”
複数形bread
It comes with bread or rice.
Their smiles are my daily bread.
This is my bread and butter.
8 how to use “butter”
複数形butter
It's even tastier with butter.
9 how to use “candy”
複数形candies
I'm like a kid in a candy store now.
Does this store also fall under the definition of a candy store?
This is the best eye candy that I have ever seen.
10 how to use “breakfast”
複数形breakfasts
Does continental breakfast include bacon?
This is a B&B. Is that okay with you?
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Word 3-10
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1-3 How to Use "Money"
複数形は「monies/moneys」ですが、最近では「monies」の方が一般的です。 複数形のmoniesは「ある金額のお金の合計＝資金
He's making money hand over fist.
He gets good money, I guess.
She married into money.
They wired the money to my bank right away.
I've never done a money order before. There isn't a culture of it in Japan.
1-4 How to Use the Word, "Book"
複数形books
*
* 三人称単数現在形books
* 過去形booked
* 過去分詞形booked
* 現在分詞形booking
I'm wondering whether I should study bookkeeping.
It's the oldest trick in the book in Japan.
You can’t judge a book by its cover.
B: Did you already book?
A: Not yet, why?
That's a lot of books. Did you buy all of them?
1-5 How to Use the Word, "Uncle"
複数形uncles
Is he Uncle Sam himself?
Is he an uncle? I don't know much define of uncle, in the first place, though. What kind of person do you mean by uncle?
1-6 How to Use the Word, "Farm"
複数形farms
*
* 三人称単数現在形farms
* 過去形farmed
* 過去分詞形farmed
* 現在分詞形farming
I wonder what kind of farm this is.
What role does a farm bureau play?
I'd also like to do a little farming.
1-7 How to Use the Preposition, "in"
What's in in Japan?
I'm in the manufacturing sector.
B: Are you ready for the TOEIC exam tomorrow?
A: Yeah, it's in the bag.
Sorry, I’m in a meeting right now.
I’m not in the mood for that.
1-8 How to Use the Auxiliary Verb, "Must"
This book is a must-read book in this area of study.
This item is a must-have in daily life.
He must not have known.
1-9 How to Use the Verb of Existence, "Be"
I want to be rich and famous.
Next April it'll be a year since I graduated.
She’s a wanna-be model.
He’s an Elon Musk wanna-be.
It's late. Let's talk again.
It can only be a good thing for me.
Don’t be such a downer. Let's think positively.
1-10 How to Use the Word, "Hungry"
* 比較級hungrier
* 最上級hungriest
You hungry? We just ate an hour ago.
I'm hungry for learning.
I think my beloved little birds are getting hungry, so please feed them right away.
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Word 1-2
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1-1 How to Use "have"
* 三人称単数現在形has
* 過去形had
* 過去分詞形had
* 現在分詞形having
B: It's been a while! How have you been?
B: Do you have time now?
A: I have some errands to run, but I'm good for a little bit! So what’s up?
A: Do you want it? You can have it, if you want.
A: I want to have fun when things get tough.
B: I went into a bar in Japan, and it was really expensive.
A: Definitely, you've been had.
A: Oh, you had your hair cut! It looks good!
A: I’ll have it done by the time you'll be back.
B: Did you see him the day before yesterday?
A: Yeah. He seems to have been busy.
B: My car scraped against another car. I regret having been so careless.
A: But, I'm really relieved no one got hurt.
B: Do you have a pet?
A: I have two Java sparrows, a killifish, and some shrimps.
A: Do you have change?
B: How much?
A: Give me 33 yen.
I have to at the convenience store to pay bills, so do you want me to get you anything?
You have a sweet voice.
I’d like to have my shirt cleaned.
She had me walking around the whole day trying to find the clothes. But it was a dreamy time.
Again, someone had the air conditioner on.
B: Ready to order?
A: I'll have this.
It seems that I have no choice so to do it.
You should have gone to the doctor.
B: How will you have your steak?
A: I’ll have it rare, please.
B: When did you last have your hair cut?
A: Like, half a year ago.
I won’t have you being so rude to her. Why did you have that attitude?
The world would be closer to equality if all the haves gave a little of their surplus to the have-nots.
A: Can I have this booklet?
B: Of course! Feel free to take one.
I'm wondering if I should have my wisdom teeth taken out.
B: I feel like she hates me.
A: Why? She has to be mistaken.
He has it over me in everything. I'm totally defeated.
I have secrets.
The current situation is natural outcome for all the bad things I've done. I've had it come for me. However, I'll pay for the mistakes I made and I’ll surely make my way up from here.
I should have had the opportunity to do a lot of things, but I missed them. So I don't want to regret anymore.
1-2 How to Use "Enough"
B: Why haven't you read manga much lately?
A: I don’t have enough time to do it.
A: Have you had enough?
B: Yeah. I'm totally full.
A: Are you warm enough?
B: Yeah. Thank you.
A: This isn’t big enough. Do you have anything a little bigger?
I can’t stress enough how important it is to be kind.
I can’t get enough of this movie.
I wanna be rich enough to make animals as happy as possible.
Some people were kind enough to donate to this charity.
You're cute enough just as you are now.
March 28, 2023
Avengers: Endgame
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Avengers: Endgame
Summary Comments
Let's work together, everyone.
Ratings
8.5 /10
Review
It was a very good movie, but I would like to say to Thanos. I guess that if there were stones that could teleport, change matter into something else, and rewind time, the problems Thanos said would have been manageable, I guess so he should have made better use of those stones and properly discussed and cooperated with the Avengers. Then fewer people would have died. I learned the importance of cooperation. But I want to see the world after the population explosion, because I think Thanos' way is also fine if you can die without pain.
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Wie sind die Kündigungsfristen in Ihrem Land geregelt?
Ich schreibe über die Kündigungsfristen in England. Man muss als Arbeitnehmer oder Arbeitgeber Kündigungsfristen einhalten. Die Dauer der Kündigungsfrist ist entweder gesetzlich geregelt oder ist im Arbeitsvertrag.
Die gesetzliche Kündigungsfrist für den Arbeitgeber hält davon ab, wie lang die Arbeitsverhältnis ist. Wenn der Arbeitnehmer von einem Monat bis zu zwei Jahren arbeitet, dauert die Kündigungsfrist eine Woche. Von zwei Jahren bis zwölf Jahren dauert sie eine Woche pro Jahr und von zwölf Jahren zwölf Wochen. Der Arbeitsvertrag kann mehr Kündigungsfrist geben aber nicht weniger. Oft nach der Probezeit dauert die Kündigungsfrist im Arbeitsvertrag mindestens einen Monat.
Für den Arbeitnehmer ist die gesetzliche Kündigungsfrist eine Woche, wenn die Arbeitsverhältnis länger als ein Monat ist. Der Arbeitsvertrag kann eine längere Kündigungsfrist haben. Er sagt auch, wenn man schriftliche Kündigungsfrist geben muss.
March 28, 2023
Statistiken
Diese Arbeit kommt aus einem Kursbuch. Die Statistiken sind am Ende des Teiles.
1.
Ich berichte über Statistik über den Anteil von Personen, die in Deutschland allein leben.
Insgesamt lebt etwa 20% der Bevölkerung allein. Der größte Anteil der Personen, die allein leben, sind diejenigen, die 65 Jahre und älter sind. Recht ein Drittel (33,3%) von ihnen leben allein. Etwa ein Viertel (23,5%) von 18-34 Jähriger leben allein, und knapp ein Fünftel (18,6%) von 35-64 Jähriger.
Ich glaube, dass mehr ältere Menschen allein leben als jüngere, weil jüngere Menschen mit ihre Familie leben. Sie haben Kinder oder Eltern, mit denen sie leben, oder sie wohnen z.B. in einer Wohngemeinschaft, um Geld zu sparen. Die Menschen, die 65 und älter sind, wohnen nicht mehr mit ihren Kindern, weil die Kinder ausgezogen sind, und vielleicht ist ihr Ehemann oder Ehefrau gestorben.
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In Deutschland lebt dieser Anteil von Personen allein:
Bevölkerung insgesamt – 19,6%
18-34 Jahre – 23,5%
35-64 Jahre – 18,6%
65 Jahre und älter – 33,3%
2.
Ich berichte über Statistik über den Anteil von Personen, die in deutschen Großstädten (500 000 und mehr Einwohner) leben. Etwa jeder sechste Deutsche wohnt in einer Großstadt. Jüngere Menschen wohnen öfter in einer Großstadt als älter. Knapp ein fünftel von 18-34 Jähriger wohnt in einer Großstadt, etwa 16% von 35-64 Jähriger und recht 15%, derjenigen, die 65 Jahre und älter sind.
Ich glaube, dass mehr jüngere Leute in Leute in der Großstadt leben, weil eine Stadt hat mehr Universitäten und Jobs für einen jungen Menschen und es leichter ist, eine berufliche Karriere anzufangen. Wenn ein Mensch älter wird, will er ein ruhigeres Leben und das Leben im Grünen oder in einer kleinen Stadt ruhiger ist. Oft ist ist auch billiger, wenn man ein Haus kaufen will, um Kinder zu bekommen. Ich glaube auch, dass mehr Menschen wohnen jetzt in Städte als früher.
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In Deutschland lebt dieser Anteil von Personen in Großstädten (500 000 und mehr Einwohner):
Bevölkerung insgesamt – 16,3%
18-34 Jahre – 19,7 %
35-64 Jahre – 15,6%
65 Jahre und älter – 15,0%
March 28, 2023
Prometheus
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Prometheus
Summary Comments
In short, that God was a dick.
Ratings
8.5⭐︎ /10
Review
I understand that the more you like the Alien series, the more you will hate this movie, but I don't, so I love this movie. In a nutshell, this movie is about God being a dick. It is a common idea that the creator of mankind was actually a highly evolved alien, but this movie is a little different. Why does the fact that he is the creator of the human race mean that he is as good as God? What guarantee do we have that they are someone we can talk to in the first place? We can't talk to the creatures that mankind has created by artificially breeding animals like God. And many people do not see their lives as equal to mankind's. That is why what is depicted in this film is so resonating with me. I also liked the way the engineers were portrayed as David-like, like the sculptures that Western civilization has looked up to, with their god-like presence.
I liked the next film, Covenant, but I like this one better.
I really want to see the third one.
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I'd like to speak English naturally, and not like a textbook, so please correct me as accurately as possible so that I can speak like a native!
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!
She's popular, right?
Is he a scary teacher? I'm the type of person who improves by being praised, so please.
I have been wanting to be told those words for my life.
He just doesn't seem to want to deny himself the life he has lived.
Did you hear a loud noise?
I was too lazy to fold the basket. Sorry.
Oh, it's delicious.
Really? I think it says tasteless on my face. I'd love to hear your honest opinion.
Do you want to get married?
I would like to, but I don't think I want to get married as much as other people do. I feel like if I meet the right person someday, then that would be good.
March 28, 2023
Food1
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Shin Ramyun. For finishing off, I put rice, sausage, cabbage, and a beaten egg in the soup, and put cheese on top, and ate it.
Pork with salt-based sauce. I made the sauce with lemon, sesame oil, salt, ground garlic and green onion, poured it over the grilled pork, and ate it.
March 28, 2023
Un petit journal 28 mars 2023
J’ai regardé un documentaire qui s’appelle : « Limitless with Chris Hemsworth » Je le trouve vraiment magnifique. Sans doute que vous me présentez. Je suis un gros fan de documentaire, dans les domaines différents, comme la science, l’environnement, la santé. Ce documentaire m’a donné beaucoup d’inspiration. Il y a 4 séances, chaque séance est à merveille. La première séance, Chris Hemsworth parle le stress, son coach a lui expliqué que parfois, pour avoir la négociation avec te stresser, la meilleure façon est de l’estimer comme « A date with stress », autrement dit, comment tu prends un rendez-vous avec votre copine ou copain, donc faites comme le même modèle, « date with stress ». Ainsi, ce documentaire nous a révélé beaucoup de points intéressants, en outre, je me sens très profondément, l’émotion personnelle du personnage principal, Chris Hemsworth. Je ne dis pas que, ok, il est un acteur de renom, mais un autre point intéressant est que sous l’angle de Chris, on pourrait nous observez-vous même à l’intérieur, comment nous pourrions nous analyser plus efficace, transparent et le mystère du corps de l’humanité. Dans la dernière séance, je trouve que le plus ému, sa femme et lui, ils ont imité la situation quand ils seront vieilles. Vous seriez rendu compte que vivre en saint, pas d’obstacle physique, la vie, c’est de toujours garder un cœur redevable. Comme certaines personnes qui ont d’habitude de faire cette action : « Je marque trois choses pour lesquelles j’exprime de la gratitude, trois choses pour lesquelles je suis heureux, trois belles choses de ma vie » . Si, j’aime se plaindre dans la vie quotidienne. Comme ma chère amie m’a préconisé LV :) cela devrait être « I am trying » not « I tried »
Je vous merci pour votre correction!
March 28, 2023
Jour 3 - Je ne veux pas ressentir ces sentiments
Je me suis sentie anxieuse et étouffée il y a quelques jours. Ces sentiments ne sont pas inconnus pour moi, je les avais ressentis avant.
Donc, bien si je sais que je vais passer des mauvais moments, ils ne sont pas des sentiments inutiles, parce qu'ils sont comme un système d'alerte, qui disent si vous allez bien ou pas, même si je ne les veux pas, ils sont nécessaires.
March 28, 2023
Kinder und Internet
Heuzutage spielt das Internet in unserem Leben eine große Rolle. Das hilft uns in fast alle Bereichen und in fast jeder Generation und den Kindern auch so. Wie wir wissen, gibt es im Internet viele Bildungs- und Unterhaltungsprogramme für Kinder. Die richtige Nutzung des Internets hilft Kindern dabei, schneller zu lernen und sich intellektuell zu entwickeln. Aber alles hat zwei Seite und das Thema auch so. Kinder, die das Internet unkontrolliert nutzen, haben viele schlimme Folgen, wie Abhängigkeit vom Internet, Kontakt mit unangemessenen Inhalten wie Gewalt, Betrug. Außerdem ist die langfristige Nutzung elektronischer Geräte nicht gut für die Gesundheit und Spielzeit von Kindern. Kinder können also meines Erachtens sowohl inhaltlich als auch zeitlich unter elterlicher Kontrolle dem Internet ausgesetzt werden. Das ist meine ehrliche Meinung. Ich hoffe, es kann dir ein bisschen zu helfen und ich freue mich auch über alle Kommentare zu meinen Beiträgen. Vielen Dank 😊
March 28, 2023
Autofrei in der Stadt
Während der Studienzeit habe ich regelmäßig mit dem Bus genommen und immerhin die Fahrzeit zum Lesen oder Handy benutzt. Jetzt gehe ich meist zu Fuß zur Arbeit, das für mich sehr toll ist.
Ich denke, wenn Autos verboten werden, gibt es viele Vorteile, wie Luft in der Stadt wird dann frischer. Das ist nicht nur für Umweltschutz, sondern auch wirklich gut für die Gesundheit von Menschen. Besonders ist, die Lärme, Verkehrsstaus und Unfälle dadurch zu reduzieren. Es gibt auch jedoch manchmal Probleme mit den schweren Transporten oder mit der Abhängigkeit vom Fahrplan der öffentlichen Verkehrsmittel. Trotzdem finde ich, wegen der genannten Vorteile ist eine Stadt ohne Auto echt nötig, um Lebensqualität zu verbessern. Das ist meine ehrliche Meinung zu diesem Thema.
March 28, 2023
28 mars 2023 - Exercice de suspension de judgement
Écrivez pendant 10 minutes sans vous arrêter et sans vous soucier de l’orthographe, laissez exprimer votre imagination
Au bout de quelques secondes, il avait peur, peur d’être perdu, peur d’être abandonné, alors il a pleuré avec force : “Non, maman, ne me quitte pas, s’il te plaît. Je serais sage … non non ne me quitte pas …” Mais la femme qui portait un sac de luxe, perfumé de fleurs est partie de la salle sans regardant en arriere. Le petit garçon a crié et quand la silhouette de cette femme a été disparu dans l’air, il continuait de se sangloter, les yeux étaient rouges et gonflés, empliés de larmes.
“ Okay, petit, on va avoir une belle journée ici. Tu vois les garçons qui jouent là-bas ? Ce seront tes camarades. Tu veux jouer avec eux ?”dit une jeune femme dont la main était en train de tenter celle du petit garçon. Elle lui a sourit.
Le garçon a arrêté de se sangloter et a regardé dans la direction d’un groupe d'enfants. Ils portaient le même uniforme que lui et ils avaient l’air d’être vraiment s’amuser. Le garçon a hoché la tête et a suivi les pas de la jeune mademoiselle.
“Mike, est-ce que tu peux introduire le groupe à ce petit garçon ? c’est son premier jour de l’école.” dit-elle en faisant signe à un beau garçon de sept ans, avec une ambiance amicale.
“Oui, mademoiselle.” dit-Mike en tenant la main vers le petit garçon.
Le petit garçon lui a offert la main timidement et quand Mike l’a sourit avec les yeux, le petit garçon lui a montré son premier sourire dans cette école.
March 28, 2023
Sollte man früh heiraten?
Das ist eine interessante Frage, weshalb ich meine Meinung dazu äußern möchte. Ich leuge nicht die Vorteile vom frühen Heiraten, dass man das Glück von den Ehen und Kindern bekommt. Das ist auch die Motivation, um das Leben zu verbessern. Aber alles hat zwei Seite und das Thema ist auch so. Wenn man so jung ist und früh heiratet, hat man oft wenige Erfahrungen in der Kinderbetreuung und Kinderbeziehung. Außerdem ist es sehr schlecht, wenn man nicht genug die Zeit und das Geld für seine Bedürfnisse hat. Daher kann man dann einfach stressig, müde und sogar sich streiten. Deshalb möchte ich abschließend sagen, dass man heiraten sollte, wenn man echt ausgewachsen ist und einen festen Job mit einem gutem Einkommen hat. Das ist meine ehrliche Meinung.
March 28, 2023
CHATGPT DISSÉQUÉ
Ces derniers temps, ChatGPT continue à faire le buzz sur les réseaux sociaux. Présenté comme la prochaine grande chose, une hype énorme est en train de se former autour de cet agent conversationnel. Beaucoup de gens sont enthousiastes de partager les histoires sur la grandiose de ChatGPT. Il y a quelques jours, je suis tombé sur un poste dans lequel un influenceur LinkedIn a montré comment il avait allié ChatGPT et Google Sheets pour générer une multitude d’idées novatrices de publication Linkedin en un clic ! J’ai aussi vu de nombreux élèves se vanter d’avoir fait faire leurs devoirs par ChatGPT, encore en un coup d'œil.
Malgré toutes les merveilles que ChatGPT a créées, il y a également beaucoup de monde qui s’en méfie. Il y a toujours des chances que ChatGPT vous fournisse des informations erronées en toute confiance. Je me rappelle lui avoir fait répondre à une question de l’examen JLPT N5, l’examen de maîtrise du japonais du niveau le plus bas. Cependant, ChatGPT m’a donné une réponse incorrecte avec confiance. Il m’avait fallu deux « Vérifiez votre réponse ! » avant de recevoir la bonne réponse. En outre, il convient de rappeler que ChatGPT a un système de sécurité défectueux. J’ai lu que ChatGPT avait par inadvertance divulgué des informations sensibles comme des contenus de courriels et des numéros de cartes de crédit. Il est inquiétant que ChatGPT ait des failles dont les irresponsables peuvent abuser.
Moi, j’utilise ChatGPT au quotidien pour différentes choses. Par exemple, je l’ai utilisé afin de m’apprendre à méditer. La méditation, c'était une nouvelle habitude que je voulais incorporer à ma vie. Je ne savais pas comment le faire, mais ChatGPT m’a guidé, étape par étape. Si vous travaillez dans le domaine de l'écriture UX, comme moi, ChatGPT peut vraiment vous prêter main-forte. Je l’utilise pour perfectionner les messages d’erreur que j’ai écrits. En fait, j’avais pu en profiter pour générer les messages entiers de zéro. Néanmoins, je crains que ça émousse mon cerveau. De plus, ChatGPT m’aide aussi à développer la construction du monde de l‘histoire fictive sur laquelle je travaille pendant mon temps libre.
ChatGPT, tel que je le conçois, est encore loin de pouvoir révolutionner notre monde. Bien que l’IA derrière ChatGPT semble consciente et intelligente, on ne peut pas lui tout déléguer. Comme elle est vraiment sujette aux erreurs stupides, on doit toujours examiner toutes les informations qu’elle nous donne.
Toutefois, je pense que ChatGPT pourrait être notre assistant personnel. Puisqu'on se trouve dans une communauté d’apprentissage des langues, je vais vous raconter comment j’utilise ChatGPT pour booster mon apprentissage du français. Disons que je connais le terme « mainmise totale », mais je ne sais pas comment l’utiliser dans une phrase. Je vais aller à ChatGPT et lui écrire :
Mainmise totale. Donnez-moi des exemples de phrases qui se trouvent dans les articles des journaux réputés en français. Expliquez-moi les utilisations de ce terme dans leurs contextes. Donnez-moi aussi les liens vers les articles.
C'est ainsi que vous pouvez obtenir des exemples de phrases écrites par les humains et aussi leurs contextes !
L'avez-vous fait ? Si vous avez, vous trouverez que les articles et les liens que ChatGPT vous avez donnés sont... faux. ChatGPT les a inventés. Maintenant, qu'est-ce que vous en dites ?
March 28, 2023
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