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Les caractére forts
Dans les histoires des fictions j'aime les caractére forts qui ont travaillé pour leur force. Le genre de caractére qui motive le spectateur à se donner à fond lui aussi et consacrer plus de temps à ses passions. Je me considére comme quelqu'un plutôt paresse de temps en temps j'arrive d'avoir un bon rhytme à ce qui concerne la productivité mais jamais pour trop long néanmoins je n'abonne pas et trouve que j'ai un bon rhytme à ce moment là. Je veux m'améliorer dans plusieurs et regarder ces caractére se donner à donne m'a rappellé que la discipline portera toujours ses fruits.
July 7, 2024
July 7, 2024
Breif 8
Leibe Valentine,
es is schon lange her, ich auf eine Reise gehen konnte.
Defentiv würde ich mitkommen. Bei mir ist alles gut.
Neulich gehe ich joggen und manchmal mit meinen freunden für eine Wochenende auf eines konzert in Vienna gehen.
Ich habe Zeit nächsten whoche am Samstag bis Montag seit ich frei mit der Arbeit bin.
Ich möchte mit dem Fahrrad aufs Land neben unserer Stadt fahren.
Magst du das oder doch?
Wie geht es dir?
Was gibt es bei dir Neus?
Liebe Grüße
Caroline
July 7, 2024
Le mariage avec Louis VII (5)
La France au XIIe siècle n’était pas un État unique comme aujourd’hui. C’est une sorte de mosaïque. Il y avait de grands princes, des ducs, des comtes qui se partageaient ce qui sont les provinces actuelles. L’Aquitaine, grosso modo, s’étendait de Poitiers jusqu’aux Pyrénées et débordait sur l’Auvergne, ce qui fait d’Aliénor le seigneur le plus puissant occident. Par contre, le royaume de France était une poignée de départements, tout petit, équivalait quasiment à l’île de France tel que l’on la connaît de nos jours. En se mariant avec Aliénor, Louis VII devint donc un seigneur terrien infiniment puissant.
July 7, 2024
July 7, 2024
Café vor der Orchesterprobe 2
Heute will ich über das gleichen Thema schreiben, um mir einige Wörter einzuprägen.
Gertern habe ich vor der Orcherterprobe im Café Zeit verbracht. Ich habe meinen Laptop metgenommen, um dort zu arbeiten. Als ich dort angekommen bin, habe ich den Post, den ich im Zug geschrieben hatte, veröffentlicht. Ich konnte arbeiten, wie meinem Plan, weshalb ich um 17 Uhr ein Brot gegessen. Tatsächlich war das nicht ein Brot, sondern ein stabförmiges Kopenhagener, genommen „Denish bar“.
July 7, 2024
Brief 7
Liebe Caroline,
es ist lange Zeit seit Ich habe nicht an eine Reise fahren.
Ich möchte mit dir aufs Land gehen. Möchstest du mitkommen? ich bin offen mit andere Schlagen. Bitte erzähl mir wohin und womit du gehen möchtest. Und Wann du Zeit hast.
Ich bin zu eine neue Wohnung gezogen and es hast gedauert lange Zeit und braucht viel Energie.
Ich bin jetzt ein bisschen gestresst. Darum, gehe ich gerne ins Fitness Studio.
Wie geht es dir? Was ist bei dir Neues?
Liebe Grüße
Valentine.
July 7, 2024
July 7, 2024
Frugal Shopping
Do you compare deals before buying anything?
Most of the time I don't; I just buy things in the most convenient way. I'm too lazy to make an effort for small price differences. But my parents are very good at shopping around. "Many a little makes a mickle," they always say.
They collect all the coupon codes, register for shop memberships, and wait for anniversary sales—all to get the lowest prices. I'm always impressed by their efforts. But sometimes they bargain in shops, which makes me feel a bit embarrassed.
July 7, 2024
Domenica 7 luglio
Giorno di relax! Quanto è bella la giornata libera, quando mi sono eliberata delle faccende. Mi sono abituata a svegliarmi presto anche nel weekend. Vado a letto alle 22 invece che a mezzanotte.
Ieri siamo andati da papà invece che al ristorante all'aperto. Ho preferito l'idea di andare da lui piuttosto che andare al ristorante.
Mi ha telefonato un'ora prima di incontrarci, per farci sapere a che ora ci dovremmo vedere.
Sono già le 11 e ho già fatto una breve passeggiata e la spesa. Ho dovuto comprare solo cereali. Fino all'estate passeggiavo molto, ma fa sempre troppo caldo, quindi non esco molto.
Fra quasi 2 ore pranzeremo e poi farò un pisolino. Voglio leggere un libro horror prima di dormire. Ho iniziato a leggerlo 3 mesi fa e non l'ho ancora finito perché ho letto altre 5 libri nel frattempo.
Anche se è molto tempo che lo leggo, non ho dimenticato niente di quello che ho letto.
July 7, 2024
July 7, 2024
July 7, 2024
Cheese powder production
Cheese is very easy-to-use food. It can be produced in many delicious food, if not perfect product. And cheese powder is one of those byproduct.
What is cheese powder?
Cheese powder is made from cheese by milling it into smooth powder through several steps. The product will have taste and flavor as good as the original cheese. Sometimes, in order to enhance the flavor, the producer may add some extra ingredients into the process. This powdered product is used for sprinkling on food or as a direct food ingredient,...
The scientist discovered how to extend the shelf life of cheese in the 20th century. They found that the life of cheese would be longer after adding salt, sugar, and other spices. This kind of storage has led to the cheese powder we have nowadays.
Cheese powder has high nutrition value. It is estimated to contain protein (approximately 6.7g), and amino acids, which supports digestion and provide probiotics that are good for health. Moreover, it still contains a variety of fats ( about 1% to 34%), serving as a carbohydrate source, lactose, and glucose,...
Nowadays, cheese powder has 2 types:
- Traditional type: contains a little cheese. Simultaneously, other compounds will be added to maintain the cheese flavor of final products. This type is suitable for snacks such as potato chips, rice cakes,...
- Original type: won't have many other compounds added. Therefore, the cheese amount will be higher, and the final product will be more flavorful and more valuable. This type is suitable for high-end companies and households to use.
July 7, 2024
My thought after a movie
Saturday was a free day that I had
nothing to do, so I went to see a movie.
That's a Japanese movie whose title is "90歳。何がめでたい" .
I try to translate it in English, and that might be "Turned ninety years old. Is there anything happy to me? "
An elderly woman, 90, is the main character and likes complaining about daily events and smartphones from the view of elderly people.
It's very funny but very making us think deeply.
She said that people can get easily and quickly any information they want without thinking well.
This is making people dull and stealing their thinking ability, and eventually, people would be a fool and weak physically.
Therefore, it doesn't need to develop modern conveniences anymore.
I agree with her.
We certainly need to develop technology because of environmental problems and so on, however, I think the technology that makes our life convenient isn't needed anymore.
Because of the convenience, people don't move gradually.
I think if you don't move, your body would become stiff. In the end, you can't move as you like even though you are young.
This is the first step that would make people weak.
What do you think about this?
Do you want to have a more convenient life?
July 7, 2024
July 7, 2024
July 7, 2024
Bella
For no reason, sometimes I enjoy watching videos of polyglots showing their unbelievable abilities to then analyze them. However, this time I didn´t feel dumbfounded about Bella, a Russian girl that can speak eight languages. I know that kids have a great potential to learn, as if they were sponges that can absorb plenty of knowledge. Instead, I felt curious about how she learnt all those languages: her mother hired foreign nannies and professors to teach her languages by doing engaging activities. These activities included dancing, having conversations, cooking, reading, listening to music, and so on.
There are some remarkable points about her way of learning:
- She learns through gaming.
- She interacts with natives.
. The language becomes a secondary activity. Learning a language is not the goal for her, but a tool that allows her to interact with the world.
- She learns by context, instead of memorizing isolated words.
July 7, 2024
July 7, 2024
July 7, 2024
Entrée du Journal 05/01/2024
Aujourd'hui, j'ai regardé à des vidéos du jeu vidéo Team Fortress 2 en français sur YouTube. Je jouais beaucoup à Team Fortress 2 quand j'avais 15 ans. En ce moment, je joue à des jeux vidéo sur mon ordinateur portable de temps en temps. Actuellement, j'apprends le français et le tagalog, je joue du violon, je lis des livres et j'écris des articles d'informatique et de psychologie pour un journal, Reinvented Magazine. Tous les articles que j'écris sont en anglais, honnêtement. Parfois, je me demande pourquoi j'écris des articles en français.
Malheureusement, j'ai un niveau intermédiaire en français. Il est trop difficile d'écrire seulement en français, en tagalog ou en anglais. J'apprends beaucoup de français tous les jours. Par exemple, j'écoute plusieurs podcasts sur Spotify et je regarde des vidéos sur YouTube. J'aime beaucoup ces chaînes : Easy French, InnerFrench, Piece of French et French Mornings with Elisa sur YouTube. Ils enseignent très bien (« Je recherche des synonymes du mot « bien » en français. ») et ils sont très gentils. J'ai découvert beaucoup de chaînes françaises comme Cyprien, mybetterself, Hugo Décrypte, Norman, psychologie pour tous, et Squeezie. Quand je voyageais en France (à Nice et Cannes) il y a environ cinq ans, j'oubliais tous les mots en français et j'avais peur de parler français. Mais maintenant, je n'ai pas peur de parler et je fais tellement d'erreurs en français, alors j'ai plus confiance avec la langue française.
Quand je parle français, je me sens plus formelle et élégante qu'en parlant anglais, ma langue maternelle. Je ne suis pas à l'aise avec l'argot français et je parle avec les francophones de différents pays : France, Suisse, Belgique et beaucoup de pays africains.
Ma faiblesse en français est la grammaire. La grammaire française est légèrement différente de la grammaire anglaise, et je suis perdue.
J'espère rentrer chez moi ce samedi avec mon petit ami. Il me manque. Il s'occupe d'un chat noir à Ithaca. Il a conduit jusqu'à Cornell University parce que la maison est trop loin.
Ciao !
July 6, 2024
July 6, 2024
July 6, 2024
July 6, 2024
July 6, 2024
06.07.24 - "Purple Noon"
Ieri sera ho guardato “Purple Noon”, un altro film francese che include alcuni degli attori di “La Piscine”—in particolare Alain Delon come protagonista. Sembra che quest’attore interpreti sempre un assassino! Il film, adatto dal romanzo statunitense “The Talented Mr. Ripley”, racconta la storia dell'erede viziato di un magnate americano che fa una vacanza in Italia, e il cui padre vorrebbe che torni a San Francisco per prendere il controllo dell’impresa. Lui promette un compenso considerevole a un vecchio amico di suo figlio se riesca a recuperarlo e farlo tornare negli Stati Uniti. Ma l’amico furbo, il personaggio eponimo Tom Ripley, ha delle aspirazioni più grandi e progetta di assumere l’identità del erede per sfruttare la sua ricchezza ancora più grande del compenso e anche per iniziare un rapporto con l’oggetto del suo cotto nascosto, la fidanzata del amico. Devo dire che non mi è piaciuto questo film tanto quanto che “La Piscine". Per prima cosa, è un adattamento totalmente in francese, ma non va mai spiegato perché l’erede è americano e deve tornare a San Francisco invece di una città francese come Parigi. Inoltre la trama è diventata un po’ stantia dopo il suo omicidio, il quale è capitato entro la prima metà del film.
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