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Do you like to order takeout?
Recently, all the food selling platforms are having a buzi war against each other, which benefits us consumers a lot—We get so many coupons for ordering takeouts. Not that I'm a fan of eating takeout, but it did save me some money. And most importantly, time. I don't cook, so I eat out. But it takes me more than 10 minutes to get to the restaurant I usually eat at. Back and forth, that adds up to nearly half an hour. Nevertheless, I believe every free luch(?) has a consequence. When the war is over and the backdrop goes down, maybe it's the time we pay double.
Aug. 18, 2025
Japans Nachlichten
Seit der letzten Tragödie spricht der ganz Japan nur von Bären. Oft sehe ich unabsichtlich die Videos, in den Menschen, die von Bären angegrifft wurden, ihre Erfahren erzählen. Ihre Geschichten sind sehr grausam, sodass ich hier darüber nicht schreiben kann. Ehrlich gesagt möchte ich solche Geschichten gar nicht hören.
Aug. 18, 2025
Daily Life: Part 7
Today, I want to share some tips about how to abolish your bad habit. Yesterday, one kind friend who communicates here taught me some shimmery advice. I'm just following one of advice. It's worked! I just studied English without my phone, and the result is that I divided my study time by 2 times than before. While I had been studying, I never wanted to grab my phone, because it was in another room. In conclusion, it's a good way for me to avoid scrolling phone during studying. By the way, just want to say thanks you! My pal!
Aug. 18, 2025
How long is the game?
Hello! I would like share my opinion about the games pricing in realtion to lenghts. Many computer games have beautiful graphics and maybe intresting plot, but they are short. New games cost sometimes even 60USD. It's not just about a price but lenght this games. If games cost that much they should be at least on hundred hours of gamplay, but instead we get games which last for several hours... Of course graphics and plot are very important, but which such short game I can't even enjoy this, because many game are simply not create to replay. That's why I like strategy games. I can play multiple campanies and don't get bored.
Aug. 18, 2025
Sentence practice 03
1 We need to take into account the society and the economic circumstances.
We have to consider the society and the economic environment.
2 High-density planting is threatening the biodiversity.
High-density planting has constituted a threat to the biodiversity.
3 Receiving education equally helps students slove the problem of getting low grades.
Equal access to education can help students with their problems of not performing well in study.
4 Access to different culture can stimulate innovation.
Exposure to different culture can promote innovation.
5 Governments should attach more importance to social welfare, especially the medical benifits.
Aug. 18, 2025
Aug. 18, 2025
My favorite core
I like watching TikTok. Since there are many "Core". Do you know core? It is explained as aesthetic or kind of beauty. For example, my favorite core is autumn core. According to fandom, autumn core is "Autumncore, or Fallcore is an aesthetic focusing on the season known as Autumn." I like it. Deep color, deep atmosphere and a slight chill make me comfortable and emotional. And as a person who live in most humid and warm country in the world, autumn's dry and sadness seems so romantic. I can't stop scrolling the autumn core page on TikTok.
Aug. 18, 2025
Aug. 18, 2025
Aug. 18, 2025
Using an Exercise Ball as a Chair バランスボールを椅子にする
I have been using an exercise ball as my chair for a long time. Originally, it was just a tentative idea, but since it worked well, I haven’t replaced it with a regular chair for years. Of course, it’s less stable than an ordinary chair, but that’s the fun of it! I can balance myself with my legs while sitting, which feels a bit like light exercise. I’ve noticed that I can focus better when I’m gently moving because I’m naturally a bit fidgety.
Since I work from home, I don’t get much exercise on a daily basis. I hope that the time I spend sitting at my desk can at least do some good for my body. Thanks to the exercise ball, I believe I’m engaging my core muscles and improving my blood circulation. Also, since there’s no backrest, I’m probably using my back muscles to maintain good posture.
That said, it’s overly optimistic to think that just sitting on the ball is enough exercise. I know I need to increase the duration and intensity of my workouts to stay fit.
Aug. 18, 2025
80 Years After The War
I recently watched a TV documentary about the Total War Research Institute, which was established in the summer of 1941 to predict the war between Japan and the United States. The Institute, composed of young, elite group at an average age of 33, concluded that Japan was certain to lose due to the overwhelming difference in power between the countries. However, Prime Minister Hideki Tojo, the former head of the army, denied the research result and presented the fabricated data about the amount of stocked oil at a conference with the Emperor, convincing the Emperor to commit war, even though the Emperor had never wanted the war. Unfortunately, four years later Japan suffered a crushing defeat, as predicted by the majority of people, including the research members.
What made the Japanese leaders decide to go to war? They couldn't comprehend reality and simply crazy. Or perhaps, they understood Japan's fate but they could not overcome their passion for fighting. In any case, the leaders were too powerless to save millions of Japanese citizens. Even now, 80 years after the war, we should still rethink the war and what we should do in the future, especially about the responsibilities of leaders who we can elect.
Aug. 18, 2025
Peindre la maison
Ma mère a décidé de peindre sa maison. Sa maison a 30 ans et elle n’a jamais été repeinte. Les murs sont blancs et ils ne sembleraient pas trop sales. Cependant, lorsque nous avons déplacé les meubles et décroché les tableaux, c’était évident qu’il faudra repeindre les murs.
Maintenant, la décision est prise et la première étape consiste à trouver un peintre. Nous cherchons un peintre qualifié dont le travail est de bonne qualité. Bien que nous cherchions sur internet, ma préférence est d’obtenir une recommandation, par le bouche à l’oreille.
La tâche sera grande, fatigante et stressante. Bien que la maison ne soit pas grande, ma mère a beaucoup de peintures et de meubles. Je consacrerai quasiment 2 semaines pour effectuer la tâche. J’espère que cela suffira.
Aug. 18, 2025
Aug. 18, 2025
Lire pour la plaisir
Quand j’étais petite, comme adolescente même comme une jeune adulte, j’ai lu beaucoup. Pour mon anniversaire, pour Noël, j’ai reçu des livres et je les adorais. Pendant mon enfance, mes parents me lisaient des histoires. Peu à peu, je suis passée à des livres comme Tom Sawyer et Charlie et la chocolaterie. Ces livres ont stimulé mon imagination et curiosité. Même aujourd’hui, j’adore voyager, découvrir des lieux insolites et des cultures étrangères.
Malheureusement de nos jours, je remarque de plus en plus des adolescents penchés sur leurs iPhones. L’internet leur offre tous les divertissements désirés et la lecture n’est plus aussi populaire. Cette jeune génération manque tellement de choses comme l’aventure. En plus de cela, les jeunes n’ont pas l’occasion de découvrir la beauté de l’écriture. Est-il possible de renverser cette tendance ?
Une étude mène en 2024 suggère que des adolescents ne consacrent plus que 19 minutes par jour à la lecture. En revanche, ils restent quasiment 5h devant leurs écrans. C’est vraiment dommage. Il vaut la peine d’encourager la lecture chez les jeunes car à mon avis cela ouvrira leur esprit à de nouvelles choses.
Aug. 18, 2025
Courir
Hier, j’ai décrit la course « Sydney City2Surf ». Cela m’a fait penser du sport de courir. Il paraît qu’il devient de plus en plus populaire. Je connais des personnes qui l’ont adopter comme passe-temps et pour eux, c’est un nouveau mode de vie. J’avoue qu’ils sont obsédés.
Je me demande pourquoi et quelles sont les raisons. Je suppose que c’est un sport qu’on peut effectuer n’importe où. En plus de cela, c’est moins cher car il n’est pas nécessaire d’avoir beaucoup d’équipement, seulement des bonnes baskets. Ou peut-être, veulent les coureurs être au pleine air et apprécier la nature ?
Je remarque qu’il existe de nombreux événements australiens pour les coureurs comme le semi-marathon, le marathon et plusieurs autres types de courses ludiques. Je les apprécie puisque ces événements sont des événements pour la communauté, sont bons pour la santé et bien-être et de plus ils récoltent des fonds pour les associations caritatives.
Aug. 18, 2025
Aug. 18, 2025
Sydney City2Surf
Connaissez-vous la course « Sydney City2Surf » ? C’est une course emblématique qui est organisée à Sydney chaque année. Cette course a débuté il y a 55 ans et elle est extrêmement populaire. Figurez-vous, cette année 90 000 coureurs vont participer.
Le « Sydney City2Surf » n’est pas la même compétition que le marathon de Sydney, bien qu’il existe certaines similitudes. Toutes les deux commencent au centre ville et la ligne d’arrivée se trouve à la fameuse plage de Bondi. Pourtant, le « Sydney City2Surf » n’est que 14 kms. Oui, une course avec une distance plus courte.
Depuis 2008, cette course a récolté plus de 55 millions dollars pour les des associations caritatives. C’est vraiment impressionnant. Cette année, les organisateurs espèrent de récolter au moins 5 millions dollars. Jusqu’à aujourd’hui, le montant collecté est quasiment 3,5 millions. Je me doute bien qu’ils atteindront leur objectif.
Aug. 18, 2025
I don't know
A lot of times in our lives , we feel lost !! like we are at nowhere and the time just continue without we can feel it .
For me i think it's natural to feel like that
But the problem is how to get out of this feeling !
I don't know maybe anyone can answer me and give me a solution , one day
Aug. 18, 2025
「いいえ」とそのフランス語の似ている意味の言葉を比べます
日本語を勉強していると、「いいえ」や「はい」は最初に学ぶ言葉です。それなのに、「いいえ」の使い方は少し難しいだと思います。僕は日本人の友達があります。その友達は僕に「いいえを使うと、無礼になるかもしれませんね」と言われました。でも、どうしてですか？フランス語の似ている意味の言葉は「non」です。この言葉について少し話しましょう。
フランス語なら、何かを断ると、「non」が使えます。「non」の使い方のすべての場合は「oui」（日本語の「はい」です）のような場合です。例えば、「これがほしいですか」、「田中さんはいますか？」、「これが好きですか？」など、「oui」や「non」が返信することができます。
日本語なら、このような文を使うと、「はい」が使えますが「いいえ」を使うと、無礼になるかもしれません。例えば、「ちょっと...」は「いいえ」より丁寧になりますね。本当ですか？どうしてですか？それに、「いいえ」の本当の使い方は何ですか？
このような「同じ言葉でも違い意味」言葉が多いだと思います。だから、日本語はとても面白い言語ですが、難しい言語もあります。何が思っていますか？他のような簡単な言葉でも難しい使い方言葉があると、教えてください。
Aug. 18, 2025
Lunedì 18 agosto
Ho il test finale oggi al lavoro. Ne ho tanta paura e non riesco nemmeno a fare colazione.
L’ho fatta comunque, per avere qualcosa nello stomaco. Pensavo di aver finito con i test quando mi sono diplomata.
Però sembra che nella vita ci siano diversi test e non solo al lavoro. Questo periodo è stato difficilissimo e sono cresciuta.
Ho imparato cose non solo riguardo agli argomenti trattati nel nuovo lavoro, ma anche su me stessa.
Aug. 18, 2025
My first day on Langcorrect
I was searching for a platform to publish my English writing and get feedback on my English learning. Chat-GPT just recommended Langcorrect, which is this site, and this is my first post here.
I am learning to use LaTeX and Obsidian to enhance my learning efficiency by writing math and physics handouts, actually I've constructed two complete systems for taking atomic notes and compile PDF file, I 'll keeping doing this. BTW, I am planning to publish my handouts and system in the future, uhn, maybe.
I had graduated from my college and now I am preparing for a vital exam at home, to be honest, endless tedious practice grinds me and is unhealthy, as I always invert my biological clock, and pressure makes me feel anxious. I know I need to do sports to keep my physical and mental health, so I bought a new bicycle few days ago, I really enjoy it, but the weather nowadays is very hot, I nearly go out at afternoon.
I also learn music and practice violin, but heaven knows what, I've almost lost the passion for them these days, I think I'm experiencing a new phase, and I think I need to take a break.
Aug. 18, 2025
An English Post
In the summer of 2018, I joined a tourist group to Inner Mongolia. I visited Hulun Buir, which is a vast grassland. That was the first time I was on a grassland. So I was shocked to see the grassland for the first time.
When I stood on the grassland and looked around, all I could see was the distant horizon, and grass, sheep, cows and horses. There were not any trees, villages, or even people.
The sky was extremely blue and the clouds were so white and low. It felt like people could grab the clouds just by jumping up.
When I was standing there and looking around, I couldn't help shouting loudly into the distance.
Aug. 18, 2025
Aug. 18, 2025
Aug. 18, 2025