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La nouvelle année
Cette année, j'ai des objectifs que je voudrais faire:
- Practiques mon écriture en français. J'avais practiquer mon écoute/discours et ma lecture, mais pas vraiment mon écriture.
- Trouves une amie avec qui je peut parler seulement le français.
- Utilizes le français d'apprendre une autre langue étranger (comme l'allemend ou le coréen).
- Fais beaucoup de "shadowing" oú je répète la phrase que j'écoute en français.
Jan. 3, 2025
Jan. 3, 2025
Jan. 3, 2025
New Year resolutions
I'm aware I should make some New Year resolutions, but to this moment I just think I should slow down a little bit by relaxing on my college's summer vacation. Btw, I study computer engineering, so I'm always quite busy and tired, even though I'm still going to my 5th semester.
What I want to do on a daily basis is to finish my Business English course and to make correcting and writing here a habit. If so, I'm pretty sure my anxiety and constant feeling at the end of the day that "i didn't do anything all day long" will be slowed down. And that is because I really like reading and writing in English, but never did I study english on paid classes (whatever is the form), other than playing games, talking to people online or on classes at school. Other than that, I'm tired of making resolutions and plans I'm not able to accomplish.
Do you think I'm on my way to feel a little better as days go on?
What are your New Year resolutions?
Jan. 3, 2025
Jan. 3, 2025
Cleaning day
I cleaned my room today. Actually, I wanted to clean my room in last month. Because, cleaning house before new year is custom in Japan. We clean house to invite god of year. But I had plan that are meet my friends and go to my parent’s house the end of year so I can’t clean my house. Maybe God did not come to my house…But I want to start new year in clear room so I cleaned my room today. It was late.
Jan. 3, 2025
A Video about My Hike Last Saturday
I finally finished a video about the whole hike I had last Saturday. You can watch it here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=O6nx7Rwubds
The image part was not difficult, but the dubbing part was not easy for me.
I wrote a text for the video three days ago but was not satisfied with it. Then I rewrote it yesterday.
However, when I dubbed the video, I noticed the text was so long that I just used 1/3 of it because I thought if I was continuously talking in the video, it felt like hijacking people's attention from the images.
As usual, please let me know if you have any questions or suggestions.
Thanks in advance.
Jan. 3, 2025
（N1のために）文法練習
今日、「あっての」と「いかんで・いかんだ・いかんによって」勉強してきましたので、練習したほうがいいと思いました。CHATGPT は「自分の文章のためにイデアプロンプトをあげてくれませんか？」っと聞いて、英語でこういうふうなプロンプトが出てきました。（日本語の文章は私の文章です）
Whether or not a student passes depends on their effort.
－学生は合格するかどうかは、自分の努力（に）いかんだから、毎日一所懸命頑張ったほうがいいですよ！
The outcome of the project depends on the team’s leadership.
ープロジェクトの結果はチームの指揮にいかんです。なぜかというと、頭はない体は動けない体だからです。
The future of a company is determined by its ability to innovate.
ー改善活動の実施いかんで、会社の将来が決まる。
Whether or not a product sells depends on the market demand.
ー市場の需要いかんによって、商品の売れ行きは決まる。
The quality of a presentation depends on the speaker’s preparation.
ー講演者はどうやって準備したいかんによって、プレゼンの結果も変わる。
A healthy environment that depends on sustainable practices.
ー持続可能な活動あっての豊富な環境
A family that depends on mutual respect
ーお互い信頼性あっての繁盛している家族
Jan. 3, 2025
Jan. 3, 2025
Jan. 3, 2025
A building in my city
The building I'd like to talk about today was built in 1858 and was originally used as a locomotive shed.
The building is a semi-circular construction made of red briks with nineteen sheds, in which the trains used to be stored.
Due to the rapide expansion of the train network, the city decieded to move the trainstation to the current place and bought the original station two years later.
Since the old trainstation is build on the opposite side of the town hall, the city used it as a giant storage room and archiv for several years.
In 1998 the building was used for a exhibiton about "bajuwaren" (an old form of the word "bavarian" which applies to people from old bavaria, austria and south tirol).
Since then the property functions as a museum and has so far hosted 36 different exhibitions on various topics including culture, history, nature and some specials.
As the building is under monument protection, I do believe and hope that it will still remain in 50+ years regardless of the use.
I do hope it will stay a public facility.
If it really doesn't exist anymore, I am certain people will remember it.
Jan. 3, 2025
Une description
En face de moi est notre sapin de Noël. Il est artificiel avec des branches vertes et des boules de Noël bleues clair et argents.
Je suis dans le bureau, les mures sont crème, le sol est constitué de carreaux couleur sable.
Je suis assis sur un fauteil vert sombre avec les accoudoires marrons.
Sur mes genoux est mon chat noir.
Il ya aussi une table avec différentes nuances de brun.
À la fenêtre, il y a des rideaux avec un motif floral rose.
Au dessus de moi eSt un plafonnier en argent.
Sur l'autre côté de la chambre est une plante d'intérieur verte.
Finalement, à droite de moi est la porte, elle est blanche.
Jan. 3, 2025
Don't have smell and taste
I don't realized what it was like to lose smell or smell before. I used to remember that state.
When I ate today morning,l realized l don't have smell or smell,I ate the beef,it felt like a cow big,and when I ate Shachima felt like sponge.It's very strange!
I can't smell the aroma of apples. And I start to feel dizzy by bus and cars because the unpleasant smell of cars. Although it's good in this way, I still hope that I can recover as soon as possible.
Jan. 3, 2025
Venerdì 3 gennaio
Mi piace tantissimo sapere che ho questo giorno libero. Non solo oggi, ma se avessi sempre tutti i venerdì liberi e anche il weekend, sarei felicissima.
Dal 2 gennaio ho iniziato a concentrarmi sugli obiettivi di quest'anno. Mi sveglio sentendomi già esausta mentalmente. Dopo una passeggiata al freddo mi riprendo e sono pronta per continuare a studiare.
Sono andata di nuovo all'ipermercato per comprare del pane, ma non ne ho trovato neanche un po', proprio come ieri. Credo che tutti abbiano comprato del pane, per averne a sufficienza per tutto il resto dell'anno.
Dicono alla TV che i rumeni non abbiano i soldi, però ho visto delle file nei negozi in questi giorni. Sono felice per loro però. La realtà è che molti lavorano in nero per mancanza di alternative, quindi le statistiche non sono del tutto accurate.
Jan. 3, 2025
BRICS
A BRICS nem nyugati szervezet, de nem is Nyugat-ellenes. Nem arra született, hogy a benne résztvevők válasszanak, kinek az oldalán állnak, hanem arra hogy együttműködjenek saját és kölcsönös fejledésük érdekében. Többoldalú együttműködési modellje elkerüli a nagyhatalmok közötti fölesleges játékot és helyette befogadó megoldást kínál a nemzetközi kapcsolatokban. Ez a befogadó magatartás késztette a Globális Dél számos országát arra, hogy siessen felvételt kérni a BRICS-családba. 2025 január elsejétől kilenc ország lépett partneri viszonyra a BRICS-szel: Fehéroroszország, Bolívia, Indonézia, Kazahsztán, Kuba, Malájzia, Thaiföld, Uganda és Üzbegisztán.
Jan. 3, 2025
Jan. 3, 2025
Jan. 3, 2025
Mein Ziel
Ich habe Deutsch zuerst gelernt am Uni, weil ich mit erasmus nach Deutschland gefahren bin. Aber jetzt brauche ich es zu Arbeit, für die berufliche Stellund das interessiert mich muss ich flussig Deutsch sprechen. Ich lerne alleine zu Hause weil ich warte für eine Sprachekursbeginn. Ich finde deutsche Grammatik schwerig aber es macht mir Spass wenn ich neue dinge lerne.
Jan. 3, 2025
Jan. 3, 2025
Au mec dont les yeux tristes
Pourquoi etes vous venu ici? Tu n'aimes pas chez toi? Tu penses en quoi dans ce moment? Il n'y a pas de plages ici. Ta famille n'est pas ici. Le tresor que tu cherches n'est pas ici. C'est l'heure que tu retournes chez toi. Je sais que tu n'es pas heureux ici. Tu sais quel passera en avril.
Jan. 3, 2025
Jour 26
De temps en temps, je vais répondre à un devoir ici.
J'utilise un manuel qui s'appelle Cosmopolite pour les règles de grammaire, et en ce moment, je suis au niveau A2.
Le livre contient huit dossiers, et chaque dossier a six leçons.
À la fin de chaque leçon, je peux faire des devoirs en préparation au DELF : production écrite, production orale et compréhension de l'oral.
Maintenant, je suis à la fin du dossier 1, et il y a deux exercices à écrire.
Donc, demain et après-demain, je vais faire ces deux exercices ici.
Jan. 3, 2025
Jan. 3, 2025
Jan. 3, 2025
I'll start french
Today I decided to start leaning french by my own. I think french is a beautiful language, it's also satisfying to talk. The first step is learn some vocabulary, after that I'll start to write simple things here.At the moment my biggest difficult is hear the words and differentiate them.
Jan. 3, 2025