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Ein guter Freund...
Ein guter Freund oder eine gute Freundin ist jemand, dem sich über man kümmert. Sie hören deine Gefühle und geben vielleicht Ratschläge. Man kann auch, dem spät an der Nacht telefonieren. Sie wurden wahrscheinlich den Anruf annehmen. Ihr könnt mit dem deine Sorgen teilen. Ich denke jetzt, dass es schwierig eine gute Freundin zu suchen ist.
May 14, 2025
My grammar
I've been speaking English for years now but it doesn't mean my English is perfect.
Actually I reached a point where I'll just talk the way I think it sounds good, but unfortunately it doesn't mean it's natural for native speakers' ears. So I want to fix that.
A little bit about myself: I'm a translator (not to English, but from English) and I learned most of my vocab from reading books and watching YouTube.
I watched A LOT of cringe stuff back in the day. And people say my accent is a mix of different countries which I agree since I also watch a lot of foreigners talk and got their speech pattern overtime.
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May 14, 2025
Il tempo di oggi
Qui il tempo è bello. Il sole splende, il cielo è azzurro con alcune nuvole, e la temperatura è piacente. Abbiamo un proverbio che si può tradurre letteralmente como "in aprile, non scopriti di un filo (= non togliti un adumento), ma in maio, fai ciò che vuoi". Significa che in aprile, il tempo è ancora incerto, con cali di temperatura e acquazzioni frequenti, e le belle giornate iniziano realmente in maio. Non è sempre vero, perché a volte abbiamo bellissimi aprili, ma questo anno, sembra che il proverbio sia giusto.
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May 14, 2025
my wind down routine after a long day
When i get home , I change into comfortable pijamas , I make wuduu to pray el asr , empty my bag and organise my desk .
After that , I go to the kitchen to eat something , and then relax in my bad and watch an episode of my current serie , if I did a workout earlier that day , I will then put a hair oil and take a relaxing bath , around 8pm I'm gonna review what we had earlier in school , have dinner , pray el ichaa . and I always try to make a tomorrow to do list to keep track of my goals , if i felt well and a little energized , I make a cup of hot vervain tea and read few pages of my book , around 11pm I do my skincare (very simple , a cleanser and a moisterizer ) and brush my teeth to jump into my bed ( my fav part ).
Well i guess that's my perfect evening routine , of course sometimes I don't do it all , it depends much about my energy levels and my mood (well to be transparent , if I felt shitty i'm going to binge watch or sleep veryy early ) , but I have the must do, like my prayers , one hour study session and reviewing my day and my weekly plan , that's all , simple right? what do you think?
May 14, 2025
It's my first time to come here
I had a job interview today and got back to my place earlier than normal
took only a few minutes rest, went to couple of bicycle shops to fix my own one.
rest of them said they couldn't help me cause they don't have spokes fits to my bicycle
but the last shop owner found another way to solve this problem which is just changing the whole wheel
I was pretty tired of visiting shops in a row and like okay please change the wheel
this is the story about how I spent money today thank you
May 14, 2025
MY PROJECT
i have completed my undergraduation and in our last semister , we have to submit a project and my course is bachelor of technology and my branch is electronics communication engineering and my project is on unmanned aerial vehicles, intially the title of my project is vehicle tracking using UAV but later we changed it to vehicle detection using UAV, we changed our project because vehicle detection is easy when compared to vehicle tracking , the main reason is to change our project is , in vehicle tracking we should take many classifications like car, truck,bus,pedestrains etc but in case of vehicle detection there is only two cases, that is vehicle or no vehicle.the thing is we haven't consulted our project guide to change our project title, we ourselves have changed our project title. thank god, our project guide haven't found it. anyway in our project we detect vehicles , we train a dataset in matlab application by using code, our dataset name is VISDRONE, after training the dataset we get testing accuracy and training accuracy and we used a technique called GOOGLENET, the reason for using googlenet is ,it gives high accuracy, that is above 90%, anyway the final review of my project is still pending and it will happen in the month of june.
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May 14, 2025
A família
Como é sua relação com sua família? Amo minha família exceto meus pais 😂 Não conheço bem meu pai, mas minha mãe é meio desequilibrada mentalmente, e ela torna nossa vida um inferno 😢 Planejo trabalhar no exterior então para poder me afastar de casa. Fico feliz por gostar do resto da minha família, porque assim não é completamente insuportável kkkk
May 14, 2025
El uso de la tecnología en la vida
Cuando pienso en mi vida, y cuanto uso la technologia, llego a la conclusión de que estoy dependiente en ello. La verdad es que desde despertarme hasta irme a la cama siempre lo estoy usando. Por ejemplo, por la mañana suelo aprobar mis correos electrónicos, leo las noticias en una aplicación en mi teléfono móvil. Uso las macinas de café para preparar la bebida, uso mi móvil para jugar musicar en la coche cuando conduzco al trabajo. Luego durante todo el día uso un ordenador para hacer mi trabajo por ejemplo hacer llamadas de vídeo, para enviar correos electrónicos, para analizar números. Cuando vuelva a casa veo la tele, o pongo un vídeo en YouTube, envío mensajes an amigos en las redes sociales o en otras aplicaciones. Busco recetas en internet cuando es la hora de preparar la cena, uso AI para buscar información etc. no se como he llegado a ser así porque durante el primer 17 años de mi vida no tenía internet en casa ni un teléfono móvil. Quizás con el desarrollos de la tecnología y como que ahora es tan accesible a todos, fue inevitable que llegara dependeré te en usarlo. Aunque me hace la vida más fácil también discutiría que también me ha hecho más aislada porque paso mucho del tiempo detrás de una pantalla. Tengo que hacer un esfuerza para que no sea tan obsesionada en usar la technologia.
May 14, 2025
May 14, 2025
My first post
Hello. This is my first post. From this autum, I will be a bachelor student of foregin( the country is secret:) ) univercsity student. The level of english in university will be pretty much high. However my english is kind of trush so i am so afraid of not followling (like cannot ) class. Ever since AI is improved, non native english people tend not make the engloish sentence by myself. Obviously I am the one too. Nevertheless, I do not want to rely AI anymore. I want to have real power to make wondeful sentence in English. That why I deceided to start this daily. I hope someone look my daily.
May 14, 2025
杀羊羔（Killing Lambs）
An old game we played during childhood was called “杀羊羔” (shā yáng gāo). “杀” means “kill”, and “羊羔” means “lambs”.
When playing the game, one child would play a wolf who would try his or her best to capture the lambs.
Another child would play a mother goat who would try her best to prevent the “wolf” from catching her children.
Several smaller children would play the lambs of the mother goat.
The lambs would hide behind their mother and adjust their position quickly at any time to prevent being caught.
The mother goat would stretch out her hands to prevent the “wolf” from getting behind her and catching her children.
Therefore, it would always be a fierce battle where the “wolf” would try his or her best to get behind the mother goat while the “mother” would try her best to prevent him from doing that.
In the meantime, the “lambs” behind their mother would swiftly keep moving in order not to be caught by the “wolf”, and the lambs would shout out loudly if there were any risky situations.
So this is a highly competitive game, extremely thrilling and exciting.
May 14, 2025
May 14, 2025
Outline the conditions of Black people in the 13 colonies
The second excerpt of the article “The Idea of America”, published by Nikole Hannah-Jones in the New York Times on August 14th, 2019, it exposes the double standards of the American colonists, who blamed the British colonials for the cruel crime of slavery they had committed when declaring independence and demanding equal rights for everyone.
The situation of the Black people in the colonies is described terribly. Though being an actual human being, enslaves passed a set of laws resulting their human status. Because, by law, they were objects, they were not protected by laws. They could be traded, bought, sold, gifted or even raped and murdered. They were denied marriage and keeping their children either. In order to earn the most profit for their owners, they would sell what they didn’t want.
In the first paragraph, the author critiques Thomas Jefferson. He enslaved the brother of his wife, and took him to draft the declaration that was promising individual rights for everyone. In the following, conditions the Black people endured during the era of slavery. Slaves were revoked of their human status, enabling the opportunity for their owners to trade, buy and sell them. Additionally, they were denied marriage and couldn’t keep their own kids.
May 14, 2025
Ma premiere entrée
Aujourd'hui, j'écris ma premiere entrée d'ici. J'essaie d'ameliorer mon Français, et j'ai une programme que je suis. Chaque mercredi, j'ecrirai une entrée d'ici. Je ferai beaucoup d'erreurs, et j'ai besoin de votre aide pour les corriger.
Hier, J'ai essaié un AI pour pratiquer mon parler, mais il y a beaucoup de probleme avec ce plan. Pas lisse. J'ai essaié avec Gemini aujourd'hui, mais c'est la meme chose.
Je pense que j'ai trouvé une personne avec qui je peux pratiquer en Discord, donc c'est positif.
Oh oh... j'ecoute a un bon podcast sur Spotify. S'appele Little Talk in Slow French. Je ne comprends pas tous les choses qu'elle dit, mais je ne suis pas totalement perdu. Petit a petit, non?
C'est tout maintenant. Je suis ouvert aux corrections, et des recommendation de films ou serie a regarder.
Merci beaucoup. c'était un peu difficile au fait. Comment ai-je fait?
May 14, 2025
Sujet : Les parents n’ont aucune autorité sur leurs enfants
Madame la Rédactrice en chef,
Je vous écris en réaction à un article publié récemment dans votre journal concernant l'autorité des parents sur leurs enfants. En tant que jeune homme de 28 ans je me permets de partager avec vous un avis différent et mes réflexions ci-dessous.
Tout d'abord, les enfants ne sont pas capable de prendre leurs décisions leurs-mêmes. Notamment, les bébés entre une à cinq ans ont besoin d'une personne pour la nourriture et leurs tâches quotidiennes. À titre d'un exemple, selon une rapport de « Nations Unies », plus de 95 % des pays développés exigent la présence d'une adulte pour prendre soin d'un enfant.
Par ailleurs, les enfants ne sont pas des moyens financiers afin de les soutiennent. Néanmoins, il est impossible qu'un enfant puisse gagner autant d'argent qu'une adulte pour payer des factures et le logement. En effet, dans la plupart du monde développé, il est illégale d'employer un enfant de moins de 15 ans dans n'importe quel secteur.
Même si les enfants avaient des moyens, ils manquent du soutien êmotionnel de leurs parents. Par conséquent, les parents sont là non seulement pour le soutien financier, mais aussi pour que les enfants puissent ressentir acceptés dans la société et auprès leurs amis.
En fin de compte, je voudrais souligner que les parents occupent une place non seulement indispensable, mais irréplacable dans la vie de leurs enfants. Je vous remercie de l'attention que vous portez à ce sujet crucial et j'espère que votre journal continuera à sensibiliser le public sur l'importance des parents dans la vie des enfants.
Veuillez agréer, Madame la Rédactrice en chef, l'expression de mes salutations distinguées.
May 14, 2025
Mittagessen am Mittwoch
Am Mittwoch muss ich draußen zu Mittag essen. Ich esse oft in einem „Tachigui-soba“, in dem Leute stehend essen, der es oft im Bahnhot gibt. Ich bestelle immer die „Kakesoba“, das das billigesten Gericht ist. Es kostet 330 Yen. Es schmeckt zu gut, sodass ich alle Suppe trinken möchte.
May 14, 2025
Die Arten vom Lernen
Ich habe schon immer gehört, dass manchen, um ihre Sprachkenntnisse zu verbessern. Leider habe ich diese Methode noch nie ausprobiert. Ich glaube, dass man seinen eigenen Weg fürs Fremdsprachenlernen finden muss, weil ese sehr individuell ist. Einige Leute können nicht die Grammatik absichtlich lernen, deswegen lernen sie nur mit Lesen oder nur mit Hören. Andere zocken gerne und können mit Spielen lernen. Persönlich bevorzuge ich eine kombinierte Art vom Lernen.
May 14, 2025