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Die Hauptuntersuchung von meinem Auto
Ich bin mit meinem Auto zur Werkstatt, weil die Hauptuntersuchung fällig war. Nachdem ich mein Auto abgegeben habe, bin Ich mit der S-Bahn ans Meer zu erkunden gereist. Jedoch war es sehr heiẞ, und ich war nicht angemessen gekleidet. Leider habt die Werkstatt zu sagen geklingelt, dass mein Auto nicht die Vorprüfung gepasst habt, weil eine Tür nicht geöffnet habt. Ich habe sofort die S-Bahn zurückbekommen, um ihnen zu zeigen, dass es geöffnet war, also das meine Zeit verschwendet hat.
May 30, 2025
Ich habe leider ein großes Problem...
Sehr geehrte Damen und Herren,
ich habe leider ein großes Problem mit meiner Wohnung. Vor zwei Tagen gab es kein heißes Wasser in der Dusche. Das Problem ist dass, es heißes Wasser im Waschbecken gibt. Deswegen habe ich gedacht, dass ich wahrscheinlich die Dusche putzen sollte. Daher habe ich sie mit heißen Wasser aus dem Herd und Essig geputzt, aber es gibt noch kaltes Wasser. Ich würde gerne, wenn sie mir bitte helfen könnten. Bitte anrufen sie jemand schnell, weil wissen sie, dass zurzeit Winter ist und man heißes Wasser braucht. Ich bedanke mich im Voraus.
Mit freundlichen grüßen
Ishika
May 30, 2025
Just a random heart-wrenching scene from my imagination
Discordant fragments of lost memories rushed through the back of her mind: a poignant scene from nowhere— a girl crying for help, her hands firmly wrapped around the head of another girl who was lying motionlessly on her lap. The poor girl was yelling desperately for help—"Please. Somebody. Help us! Help us, please…” She yelled until her voice cracked and ended up coughing as she choked, hot tears streaming down her face. The girl in her arms was completely frozen in time. She showed no sign of breathing or life, sticky blood trickling down her messy red hair.
An excruciating pain promptly struck her chest. It was strange —she had no idea where these unknown memories came from, but the sensations were too real to be just a hallucination. But all these puzzling things occurring repeatedly in her head appeared to be indicating something: a haunting past? The traumatic memories that were lost in her childhood?
Fighting against these foolish thoughts, Jade touched the cold, rusty doorknob in front of her. Suddenly, she sensed an unsettling energy at the back, prompting her to turn swiftly. There, her eyes met a silhouette of a young girl, standing stiffly near the crumbling wall, her ginger hair billowing in the wind, its striking red hue was the same as Jade’s. She was looking at her, but with the jubilant smile of a child. Then she seemed to whisper, "Nice to meet you again, sister,” and she dissipated right before her eyes like mist.
Jade's eyes widened, and flashes of distressing scenes flickered in her head again, but this time vividly, with brute force. A heated wave of anguish surged through her heart; every lurid detail of that forgotten tragedy gave her unbearable migraines. The pain felt so raw and searing that it became hard to breathe, like someone was choking her neck. Promptly, she fell onto the ground, grittily fighting against the agony, and tried to grasp for air. All her scattered senses made her feel like she was trapped in a nightmarish dream.
May 30, 2025
My health problem
I have a chest pain for about fifteen days. There is no pain while I am sitting or resting but it starts everytime when I do hard working, climb up stairs or walk uphill. I am worried about a heart disease. Can it be heart attack? I am fourty and I has smoked twenty years between fifteen and thirty five. I quited smoking five years ago. I do not use any drugs or have any other disease. But my dad death of heart disease ten years ago and my mom has hypertansion and diabetes.
May 30, 2025
Happy Dragon Boat Festival
Starting this afternoon, we began our holiday for the Chinese Dragon Boat Festival. It will last till next Monday, June 2nd.
Usually, I would go hiking with my friends during holidays, but this time I'll stay in Shanghai for the whole three days because it's expected to rain starting tomorrow night.
There is a rowing team in the river near my home. I'll go to watch their training tomorrow morning. If their boats are decorated for the Dragon Boat Festival, I'll take some videos for you.
Speaking of videos, I noticed that some of the videos on my YouTube channel were gaining more and more views, which made me feel a little bit stressed.
But I think it's a good stress for me.
I need to capture Higher-quality videos and improve my English to a higher level.
That's all for today.
I hope you all have a happy Dragon Boat Festival, wherever you are.
May 30, 2025
May 30, 2025
May 30, 2025
TV Shows Or Films?
Although I am more of a TV show person, watching movies was always an interest of mine. I like that the author needs to express his whole idea in just a few hours. Due to these limitations, one does not have an opportunity to intentionally extend the plot for superfluous dozens of hours. This requires a great finesse, which many filmmakers nowadays lack. Just as Quentin Tarantino, one of my favorite directors of all time, I am not a huge fan of soap opera, which is a popular genre in contemporary cinematography. Nevertheless, there are plethora of outstanding TV shows, which I perceive as long, unabridged versions of hypothetical films. For instance, it is almost impossible to show a proper character development in a movie format. Hence, it would be sensible to lengthen the story. I am also a huge fan of TV miniseries (e.g. Chernobyl, Ripley, etc.), which combines both formats, making it less probable for the show to have filler episodes.
I already have an array of ideas to write about: my favorite movies and books, filmmakers and authors, genres. I believe that writing a film or a book review can not only significantly improve one's writing skills, but also make the work more memorable.
May 30, 2025
Food texture: An important factor in culinary experience
Experiments have shown that even babies have preferences regarding texture. Texture can have an even stronger impact than smell or color when it comes to food, which is why picky children often refuse to eat certain things. In early childhood, texture preferences are believed to be mainly influenced by physiological factor. However, by adolesence, we become more aware of the quality of food texture and start to be affected by social, cultural, and psychological factors.
May 30, 2025
May 30, 2025
仕事中に寝てしまった話
今日、すごく恥ずかしいことがありました。仕事中にうっかり寝てしまったんです。疲れていたのか、気づいたら目が閉じていて…。自分が寝ている間に、同僚たちが私の分の仕事をしてくれました。しかも、起こしてくれませんでした。本当に申し訳なくて、心から感謝しています。
目が覚めてから、とても罪悪感がありました。自分のせいでみんなに迷惑をかけてしまったと思い、とにかく何かお返しをしようと、仕事を手伝おうとしました。でも、同僚たちは「まずは体を大事にして、家に帰ってゆっくり休んで」と言って、止めてくれました。
彼らの優しさに胸がいっぱいになりました。仕事は大事だけど、自分の健康ももっと大切にしなければいけないと改めて感じました。無理をしても、いい仕事はできないですからね。
今回のことで、自分の体調管理の重要さを強く実感しました。これからはもっと体の声を聞いて、無理をしすぎないように気をつけたいと思います。そして、同僚たちにもっと恩返しができるように、しっかり頑張りたいです。
May 30, 2025
Il concorso Eurovisione della canzone questo anno
La traccia si riferische all'ultimo concorso Eurovisione della canzione.
Ero sceso alla cocina per bevere qualcosa. Visto che la mamma stava guardando nel soggiorno vicino, anch'io ho guardato un po'. Naturalmente mi sono rimpianto presto. Ogni anno sono colpito dalla vulgarità e dall'aspetto politico tendenzioso di questo concorso, ma questo anno gli organisatori si sono ovviamente superati! La partecipazione di Israel per esempio era enteramente politica, e dopo tutto il mondo ha finto l'indignazione davanti alle reazioni politiche causate da quella partecipazione... politica. Totalmente buffo!
La parte più stupida del concorso è sicuramente che così tanti candidati cantano in inglese. All'inizio, il concorso Eurovisione della canzione è stato creato per celebrare la diversità culturale dei paesi europei. Che moltissimi oggi si presentino con lo stesso schifo di euro-pop/eurodance standardizzato in inglese la dice lunga sulla globalizzaazione che incombe sul continente.
Tuttavia devo dire che la performance vocale del candidato austriaco era molto bene. Meritava la vittoria! Ho anche trovato la messa in scena di alcuni paesi come l'Armenia interessante e originale. Di solito il mio paese (la Francia) non presenta canzoni eccelenti, ma questa volta non era il caso. Non sono un fan della cantante (Louane) ma aveva una bellissima canzone commovente.
May 30, 2025
Ma routine quotidienne
Je me réveille à 6h. Alors je me prépare pour le travail. Je prends le train à l'école où je travaille. J’enseigne les mathématiques aux enfants. J’ai fini de travailler à 15h. Je rentre chez moi à 16h. Je me détends l’après-midi et le soir. Parfois je fais de l'exercice. Je lis un livre ou regarde la télévision. Je vais dormir à 22h.
May 30, 2025
Mein erstes Forschungsprojekt
In diesem Jahr habe ich gelernt, dass ich ein Forschungsdokument schreiben kann. Es ist mein erstes Mal, dass ich an einem Psychologie-Forschungsprojekt arbeite, und ich bin sehr gespannt auf das Thema: Autismus, Geschlechtsidentität und Freundschaften. Natürlich gab es einige Herausforderungen während des Projekts.
Am Anfang hatte ich keine Ahnung, welchem Thema ich mich in meinem Projekt widmen wollte. Ich dachte zuerst an soziale Medien und psychische Gesundheit oder an Autismus und Alkoholismus. Diese Themen fand ich interessant, weil ich mich für soziale Medien und Autismus interessiere. Aber ich merkte, dass ich für diese Kombination nicht genug Leidenschaft hatte. Außerdem wusste ich nicht genau, warum viele autistische Menschen mehr Schwierigkeiten mit Alkoholismus haben.
Nach der COVID-19-Pandemie habe ich viel über Freundschaften nachgedacht. Ich habe viele YouTube-Videos darüber gesehen, wie schwierig es ist, als Erwachsene neue Freundschaften zu schließen. Wenn Erwachsene Familie und Arbeit haben, bleibt oft wenig Zeit, um neue Menschen kennenzulernen. In den USA treffen sich viele Erwachsene in Bars – aber ich interessiere mich mehr für Gespräche über Bücher oder Technologie. Nach drei Wochen kam mir dann die passende Forschungsfrage:
„Wie beeinflussen Autismus und Geschlechtsidentität die Freundschaften im Erwachsenenalter?“
Ich habe viel gelernt – besonders über Survey Design, Statistik, Python-Programmierung zur Datenanalyse und akademisches Schreiben. Vor diesem Projekt hatte ich keine Ahnung, wie man ein wissenschaftliches Dokument schreibt. Ich kannte zwar einige Forscher:innen aus der Autismusforschung, aber ich habe in diesem Jahr viele neue Theorien kennengelernt.
Zum Beispiel hat der autistische Forscher Damian Milton im Jahr 2012 die Theorie des „Double Empathy Problem“ entwickelt. Diese Theorie beschreibt die Kommunikationsprobleme zwischen neurotypischen und autistischen Menschen. Beide Gruppen verstehen sich oft gegenseitig nicht, weil sie unterschiedliche Arten von Körpersprache und Subtext verwenden. Studien zeigen auch, dass autistische Menschen oft direkter kommunizieren, aber Schwierigkeiten mit Körpersprache und Augenkontakt haben.
Nach der Datenanalyse habe ich herausgefunden, dass nicht-autistische Menschen mehr Freundschaften und emotionale Unterstützung haben als autistische Menschen. Ich weiß, dass viele autistische Menschen eher allein sind oder weniger soziale Kontakte haben. Trotzdem weiß ich noch nicht genau, wie ich meine Forschungsergebnisse interpretieren soll.
May 30, 2025
May 30, 2025
Gumitzel
My boss gave me a candy called “Gumitzel”. It was shaped like a traditional small pretzel 🥨 but made of jelly coated with hard and thin sugar layer. We call jelly “gumi” or “gumi candy” in my country, that is where its name (Gumitzel) comes from. The jelly inside was extremely soft and melty, which contrasted nicely with the texture of the crispy surface.
Actually I don’t like jellies very much, but they are very popular and most convenience stores always have at least 10 kinds of “gumi”s on their shelves. My son loves them very much.
So I didn’t eat it myself and took it home as a souvenir for my son. He loved it and ate them slowly, by breaking them into small pieces and picking them one by one, then cautiously put it into his mouth.
May 30, 2025
Première expérience professionnelle
Mon tout premier travail a consisté à assembler un moteur Nissan SR20DET.
La personne qui a accepté de devenir mon formateur avait travaillé pendant de nombreuses années dans les stands de sport automobile. Il m’a expliqué de manière claire et détaillée les différences entre un moteur de voiture classique et un moteur destiné à la compétition, ainsi que le savoir-faire et les précautions nécessaires à l’assemblage d’un moteur.
Premièrement, il m’a appris que l’environnement de travail devait être parfaitement propre : la moindre saleté, voire un seul cheveu, pouvait nuire au bon fonctionnement du moteur.
Deuxièmement, il m’a montré comment reconnaître et gérer les petites pièces avec rigueur.
Troisièmement, il m’a indiqué qu’au moment de l’ajustement par pressage, il ne suffisait pas de vérifier l’angle à l’œil nu, mais que l’on pouvait également s’appuyer sur un changement subtil du son pour savoir que la profondeur idéale avait été atteinte.
Je suis restée à ses côtés pour observer sa manière de procéder, et bien que je venais tout juste d’apprendre certaines techniques, il m’a permis de les appliquer directement sur un véritable moteur.
Je ressens une profonde gratitude pour une opportunité aussi précieuse. Je souhaite donner le meilleur de moi-même et m’investir pleinement, avec sérieux et humilité.
May 30, 2025
日常日記（５月３０日）
僕は千葉県に引っ越したばかりで、最近は家具をたくさん組み立てていたので、少し疲れた日々を過ごしていました。しかし幸運なことに、今日は組み立て作業がなかったので、日本語の勉強に時間を注ぐことができました。そのために、勉強のプランを立てることにしました。でも、どのようなプランを作ればいいか迷っていたので、結局ChatGPTに作ってもらうことにしました。まず、自分の希望を入力してエンターキーを押しました。すると、情報が豊富なプランが表示されました。最後に、そのプランを少し自分に合うように調整して、完成させました。
これからは、そのプランに従って勉強していきたいと思います。そのためには、毎日1.5〜2.5時間勉強しなければならないので、頑張ります！
May 30, 2025
Sentences
Text 1: Thanks to revolution, each person of nation has right to be President. But in Ottoman era, only sultans's son was successor who nobody knew whether he is skilled or smart to be Head of Country. It was a tribe. That's why we are appreciated Mustafa Kemal Ataturk to bring Republic to our country. Now we can elect who gets 50%+1 as President. This way, Turkey's people improve themself.
Text 2: Erdoğan is afraid of Imamoğlu to lose next election. He won four election over Erdoğan. Therefore, a made-up accusations were created in order to avoid Imamoğlu to run for president. Every court session, they suggests baseless evidences for blaming him. Many students and Imamoğlu supporters have been arrested just for supporting him. It is ridiculous. Demostration is a constutional right.
May 30, 2025
May 30, 2025
Tradução 09: Vapes
No domingo, os vapes descartáveis serão banidos em tudo o Reino Unido.
As medidas foram introduzidas no janeiro de 2024 pelo governo anterior e têm o objectivo de proteger a saúde dos jovens e evitar danos ambientais.
Lojas e estabelecimentos não poderão mais estocar e vender vapes descartáveis, pois o governo afirmou que esse tipo de vape é um "uso ineficiente de recursos críticos" que são frequentemente descartados como lixo, ou jogados de forma inadequada no lixo não reciclável.
May 30, 2025
May 30, 2025
What do you think is the greatest movie of all time?
Even though it's very hard to pick up only one movie, I love "Spirited Away" of Ghibli. I like Ghibli's movies, among them I love "Spirited Away" especially because of world design and scenario. I've watched it many time, but it might be hard to watch in countries other than Japan.
May 30, 2025
May 30, 2025