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昨日の夢
昨日はクラッカーの夢を見ました。 クラッカーは何年も前にペットとして飼っていた優しいバフ・オーピントン鶏です。現実ではヒナの頃から育て、やがて母の知人の知人の家に譲り渡しました。そこにはペットの鶏の群れがいて、広い庭があり、彼女がもっと幸せに暮らせると思ったからです。
夢の中では、私は彼女を野生に任せて見捨ててしまっていました。もう三年も経っていました。外に座ってる彼女を見つけた瞬間、すぐに彼女だと気付きました。痩せて、足元には血がポタポタ落ちていました。逃げられないように素早く抱き上げ、家の中に連れて帰りました。彼女にあげるおやつを探して冷蔵庫の中を見ました。クラッカーはケール、トマト、ブルーベリーなどの果菜類を食べて嬉しそうでした。現実ではブルーベリーと蝸牛が好きでした。彼女がよく食べて健康を取り戻してほしいと願いました。そして、もう危険な外で暮らすことのないよう、良い家に届けたいと思いました。
時折、こういう夢を見ます。クラッカーが私の家の隣で野生を歩く姿を見かけるのです。時には元気そうで他の鳥たちと過ごし、時には弱って、飢えていることもあります。 現実の世界では、彼女は今どんな日々を過ごしているのでしょうか…
Aug. 21, 2025
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tried to use these words in sentences
Blue, Between, Annoyed, Amusing, Bizarre.
Everyone chooses between these two colours mostly according to matching with their genders: blue and pink. If a guy chooses the pink from those, people won't look this situation in a good way. They will think about his sexual orientation directly and there will be two options; he's gay or he's about to being gay. On the other hand, a girl can choose the blue comfortably. It means she's masculine or she is a hopeful person. It's not equal, is it? I hate being sexist, it makes me annoyed. Colour is just a colour, there is nothing more than that. Also, I believe the power of colours. They are certainly meaningful. If everyone wears colourful clothes instead of only black and whites, they will have more amusing life for sure. Their clothes' colours will affect their energy. I will keep thinking like that even if my opinion sounds bizarre..
Aug. 21, 2025
Grandpa Is an Old Man
As far as I can remember, grandpa had been an old man.
He was so old, as if never had been young.
He was so old, as if was born to be my grandpa.
Although I never contemplated that he would die eventually.
I always thought: one could alway linger one year more, despite their oldness.
Yet he died anyway.
As mud walls:
with enough storms, the demise is guaranteed.
Gone.
Finished.
I know few about his past life.
He mentioned some; I forgot most.
Just like he loves me much,
I call him 'Grandpa' in return.
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Aug. 20, 2025
Aug. 20, 2025
My Day
Hello, Today was a day of relax, I was learning somethings about my area of study (Technology) from different sources, and I put my focus in concepts that in the past was many confuses. In addition, I had a session of english, where I realized exercise of sentences in impersonal passive and personal passive. I have some problems because I don't understand absolutely this concepts and is a little difficult apply them in a real context
Aug. 20, 2025
Aug. 20, 2025
Vorstellungsgespräch
Heute hatte ich ein Vorstellungsgespräch, um in einem Bäckerei zu arbeiten. Dies war mein viertes Vorstellungsgespräch, seit ich in Deutschland lebe. Letzte Jahr hatte ich meine erstes Vorstellungsgespräch, um in der Allgemeinchirurgie-Abteilung zu hospitieren und später als Ärztin zu arbeiten. Ich war damals echt nervös, trotzdem habe ich es geschafft, ich habe die Stelle als Hospitantin bekomen. Leider konnte ich dort nicht bleiben. Warum? Das ist andere Geschichte. Mein zweites und drittes Vorstellungsgespräch war am April dieses Jahr, um eine Stelle als Medizinfachangstellte zu bekommen, und später als Pflegerhelferin.
Wegen meiner vorheriger Erfahrungen war ich heute nicht zu nervös. Trotzdem fühlte ich mich unter Drück gesetzt, weil ich fast arbeiten musste. Ich musste überzeugend klingen, zumal ich eine kleine Berschränkung mit meiner Aufenhaltserlaubnis habe.
Am Ende ist es für mich gut gelaufen! :D
Aug. 20, 2025
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Rutin
Hi, this is first post me . I started to new learn. I just speak and write basic levels. Today is great day. Full tıme I worked and cooked then I walked seashore. I wanted to eat a taste and give an order. It is name KAPAKTA. ıt s very delicius and basic. I recommend it. Then I readed a book and I will sleep soon.
Aug. 20, 2025
Painting my bedroom
Three weeks ago, my mother was laying on my bed next to me because we were talking about something not really important. When we ended up the conversation she started looking all my bedroom really focused and she found out that it was really dirty, specially the walls.
Since that moment, my mother has told me that we would have to paint all my walls soon.
Today was the marked day and she made all my family work for her caprice, why do I have to do it? I can live without having my room perfectly.
My dad play the worse role, he made a really big effort today. Poor of him!
Even so, we finally paint all the room.
If you are interested in the results, my bedroom's walls were yellow and now are white.
Aug. 20, 2025
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¿Qué se necesita hacer para aprender una lengua extranjera?
Hay muchas cosas básicas que se necesitan para empezar a aprender una lengua extranjera, como un libro de texto, un profesor bueno, o simplemente las ganas. Sin embargo, pienso que lo principal es tener mucha paciencia. Todos los que hemos empezado con un nuevo idioma como adultos, sabemos que los principios son muy duros. A pesar de que tenemos muchas ganas y dedicamos mucho tiempo para mejorar, no sabemos muchas palabras y nos cuesta hablar o escribir. Hay muchos videos en youtube que alegan que con un método maravilla los estudiantes llegarán a nivel B2 en un año. Pienso que son exagerados. Todos queremos mejorar rápidamente, pero pienso que no hay manera de acelerar el aprendizaje. Así que se necesita mucha paciencia y regularidad.
Aug. 20, 2025
Что я делаю каждый день?
Каждый день я пишу маленький текст на этом сайте и это мне очень помогает прогрессировать в изучении различных языков, котоыми я хочу овладеть. Обычно я всегда думаю о своем еждневном тексте, но сейчас вечер у меня и я всё ещё не написал ничего! Вот, это мой сегодняшний текст! Я горжусь том, что у меня больше, чем 200 последовательных публкикаций без перерыва. Для языков я всегда очень мотивирован! Вам тоже, уважаемые корректоры, желаю много успеха в изучении ваших языков.
Aug. 20, 2025
Las marimbas
Amoche hubo un concierto en un parque no muy lejos de mi casa. En el verano hace buen tiempo y los días son largos, así que, caminé 30 minutos hasta el parque. Llevé una manta para sentarme en la hierba. Había cuatro músicos tocando dos marimbas. No sé mucho sobre este instrumento, pero según Wikipédia, vien de África y pertenece a la familia de la percusión. Me gustó el sonido que producía. Disfruté la noche.
Aug. 20, 2025
Starting Here
Hello, everyone!
This is my first time writing on this website, my intention with this is to improve my English. I live in Brasil and work from a multinacional company, so I use English a lot. When people are talking in English I undestand almost 100% of what they say, but I'm still insecureted with speaking and writing.
Hope this app can help me with this.
Thank you all!
Aug. 20, 2025
Les marimbas
Hier soir, il y avait un concert dans un parc pas loins de chez moi. En été , il fait beau et les jours sont longs, alors j’ai marché les trente minutes au parc. J’ai apporté une couverture pour m’asseoir sur l’herbe. Il y avait quatre musiciens jouaient deux marimbas. Je ne sais pas grand-chose sur cet instrument, mais d’après Wikipédia, il vient d’Afrique et fait partie de la famille des percussions. J’ai aimé beaucoup le son qu’il produisait. J’ai apprécié la soirée.
Aug. 20, 2025
Story of Ratnag Part 22
The scene shifts to a village named Kadum, where some people are crying beside the dead body of a boy.
The boy had been playing in the garden when suddenly a snake bit his foot. Due to the venom, the boy became unconscious. Unfortunately, by the time he was taken to the hospital, he was declared dead. His family brought back the body, and they were preparing it for cremation.
When they placed the body on the wooden pyre to burn it, something strange happened. Just as the firewood was arranged, the boy’s body suddenly moved. People nearby were shocked.
One person exclaimed, “Oh my God! A dead person came alive, how is this possible?” Another villager, Kumar, said in a frightened voice, “I think he is a ghost!”
But then a lady rushed to the boy and asked, “Rishu, are you alright?” The boy opened his eyes, and everyone, relieved, said, “Thank God!”
Aug. 20, 2025