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Hello!
Hello My name is Arisa.
I am from Japan and I live in Tokyo. My hobbies are to read, play games, travel.
I am start again my English study so I can go to working holiday visa in England.
I want to live in London and I want to work there one day.
Please become my friend and I can help you with Japanese!! Please help me with my English!
What else should I put in introduction? help me please! :D
Oct. 22, 2024
Oct. 22, 2024
Hi there! It's my first text in English.
My name is Artemiy. I study English for 3 years. I used many different apps for learning English. A Duolingo app was the most easier to me. Next step was watching Youtube movies on English language. Also I brought a book, the book was named "Dandelion wine". That book was too hard to understanding, so I take it off for good times.
Oct. 22, 2024
A strange day
Yesterday, I had a strange day, because in home there was a problem.
As I have a boy with autism, my dad and my mom help me with the care of him. However, some ocations my brother became angry with this help for my parents to me.
I hope can go to my house the next year, although this decition come some economic problems or logystics problems.
I have faith in God that everything in my life will improve, so I need to practice the skills of being patiente more.
At the end, the day has gone and the calm return to home althought in my mind still there are thoughs about the problem.
Thanks for read my post.
Oct. 22, 2024
Arabic language
If I were asked to choose a main language which I refuse to learn is Arabic. It is said that this language has 28 alphabets, but with 336 different pronunciations, which is a quite challenge for me. Interestingly, most people don't suggest females from other countries learn this language, because it would be some extent embarrassment for foreign women living in Muslim countries.
Oct. 22, 2024
Oct. 22, 2024
T2-passerez deux semaines de vacances chez moi.
Coucou Alex et Anna,
Je suis ravi(e) d’apprendre que vous passerez deux semaines de vacances chez moi. Voici quelques suggestions d’endroits à visiter pendant votre séjour.
Tout d’abord, si vous aimez l’histoire, vous devriez absolument visiter le Musée des Vestiges de Guerre à Hô Chi Minh-Ville. Ce lieu vous permettra d’en apprendre davantage sur l’histoire fascinante du Vietnam.
En ce qui concerne les spécialités locales, je vous recommande vivement de déguster des plats délicieux au Petit Bistro. Si vous préférez une expérience gastronomique, le restaurant Le Muc est parfait pour un dîner raffiné.
Pour vous détendre, pourquoi ne pas faire une excursion à Dalat ? Cet endroit est idéal pour s’immerger dans la nature et retrouver un véritable apaisement. Vous pourrez oublier le stress quotidien en profitant des paysages magnifiques et en faisant du camping.
Dites-moi ce qui vous intéresse le plus, et nous pourrons organiser tout cela ensemble ! J’ai hâte de vous revoir.
À très bientôt,
X
Oct. 22, 2024
Oct. 22, 2024
Nous rend humaine
Qu'est-ce que nous rend humaine? C'est une question aussi philisophique que biologique. À mon avis ce sont surtout nos sentiments et nos desirs. Je ne suis pas une experte mais je crois que les gens ont la tendance de confondre les deux ou plutôt les voient comme une seule chose. Je ne me sens pas capable de les décrire donc je contuinera avec autres choses. Personellement je trouve que notre aptitude d'apprécier la vie et qu'on est conscient de notre part à l'universe nous rend humaine. Chaque humaine qui a jamais vécu était unique il y avait surement assez de similarités entres certaines individus mais une personne un à un.
Oct. 22, 2024
The Twelfth Step to Improving my Academic Writing
How can I manage my time effectively?
One of the most important skills for being successful student is time management. Watching on the task as a project is a strong ability, but do not forget to manage it. Lots of strategies are existed and it is easy to find necessary information on the Internet. What students should look at if they are not good enough dealing with the time management? What kind of difficulties could they face? Sometimes I think that do not have time for achieving results in my academic writing. Some reasons could be a cause of it. When I try to achieve too many targets I do not focus on the quality, only on the quantity. I should be more realistic and choose the most important task with the closest deadline. Time-to time I cannot recon what part of task I have to concentrate, especially if I do not know a subject well. In other words understanding that you do not attain anything could be a really frustrating. I want to know what is happen when people do not meet deadlines. Looking at subject in a short-term basis could be a big mistake. Students should focus not only for the days, but for the week, month or even years. During this period of time I straggle with problem. I am spending major part of time for reading and for this reason I have time to write my texts in the evenings. This is not productive time for me. The time management system suggests that only forty percent of time should be available for reading and sixty percent for writing accordingly. So, I think it is time to change something in my life. Time management systems provide some tips that make life easier and the goal is achievable. Firstly, just focus on measurable outcomes rather that just at activities. Secondly, decide when and where you are most effective. Besides change the activity when start to feel uncomfortable with it. Moreover be flexible, your plan is just a plan and it works only like a guide. Never forget to refresh, you brain needs rest.
Oct. 22, 2024
Oct. 22, 2024
Aufzeichnungen
Heute war ein besonderer Tag.Ich nehme an einer wichtigen Konferenz teil,die Konferenz berät über die künftigen Finanzen unserer Stadt.Das ist sehr interessant, denn wir beraten über inwiefern wir den Haushaltsplan besser verwalten können, auf unterschiedliche Weise. Nach der Konferenz diskutierten meine Kollegen und ich darüber,wie diese Gedanken umgesetzt werden können.
Oct. 22, 2024
Martedì 22 ottobre
Mi sono svegliata un po' più tardi del solito. Volevo continuare a dormire quando è suonata la sveglia.
Ho fatto una breve passeggiata e poi sono ritornata a casa per godermi un cornetto al burro delizioso. L'ho comprato per fare uno spuntino.
Mi sento meglio riguardo al lavoro. È cambiato molto in questo posto da quando sono stata assunta molti anni fa.
Ovviamente nessun posto rimane per sempre come era all'inizio, però non mi lamenterei più così troppo se avessi una retribuzione migliore. Ci ho riflettuto a lungo lo scorso weekend e ho iniziato a credere che le cose vadano meglio se faccio gli affari miei.
Fra poco pranzo e poi lavo i piatti. C'è qualcosa di rilassante nel lavarli, anche se sono grata di avere una lavastoviglie.
Oct. 22, 2024
Oct. 22, 2024
遊園地に行くと、どんなバッグを持ったほうがいいかな。
来年の四月に、私は彼女と彼女の三人の友達とシンガポールに旅行します。観光する時に、私はいつもスリングバッグを持ちます。ちょうどいいサイズで、全部の要るものが入れられて、便利なトラベルバッグです。でもこの度、彼女の友達がUSSという遊園地に行きたいみたいです。遊園地だったら、もっと大きい鞄を持ったほうがいいかもね。バックパックとか、トートバッグとか。でもさすがに大きいサイズなバッグを持つなら面倒でおしゃれじゃないでしょ。これはめっちゃくだらない話ですが私だって旅行する時におしゃれにしたいです。すみません。今日、何について話すのか、この話しか考えられませんでした。昨日から「どんなバッグがいいかな」とずっと考えてた。
とにかく、「大きいスリング」をググってみました。（ネイティブは本当に「ググる」という言葉を使いますか？」これはなかなかいけるかも：https://www.tomtoc.com/products/navigator-t24-sling-bag-7l-for-14-inch-macbook-pro-khaki
そんなにおしゃれではないけど、コスパがよさそうです。小さいバックパックと同じ大きさで、バックパックよりおしゃれかもしれません。そしてトートバッグほどの面倒ではないですね。トートバッグは置き忘れやすそうで、それを持ったら不安になってしまいます。
くだらない話で迷惑かけて、改めて謝ります。でも読んでくれてありがとうございます。
では、今夜も良い夜を！
Oct. 22, 2024
Pros and Cons at This Stage
-- Please don't question me about the numbers and resources like last time when I wrote something to do with my work. This is just an English writing exercise, not a thesis or a presentation.--
From 2016 to 2023, e-commerce transactions grew at an average annual rate of 10.0% in China. The share of e-commerce in the women's clothing retail market is particularly remarkable. It was said that if you don't know e-commerce, then you don't need to do business in the women's clothing industry
Now things are changing in this industry.
A few well-known brands that used to be good at e-commerce closed recently. The increase for most brands seemed to be becoming difficult.
As I mentioned in the title, there are pros and cons at this stage.
To be continued...
Oct. 22, 2024
地平線の向こう
出船から今日は6か月になった。2ヶ月前にリスタには到着する言われたけど、陸がまだ見つけない。船員は噂話を始めた、「船長が迷った」っていう。船長はその噂を聞いた後に安心させようとした。彼は「海流は逆られっていて、船の進路からどんどん外されていって、ちょっと遅くさせた。海流を避けるのため進路変った。少し長くなるけど、二か月で到着するはずだ。」っていた。皆がちょっと安心したと思うけど、俺は船長の友達として、彼の困っている顔を気づいた。その晩、船長が操舵室に見に行った。「迷っているでしょうか？」って俺はハッキリ聞いた。一言も言わずに自分と俺にウイスキーを注いだ。彼は沈黙でウイスキーを飲んでるながら、わざと目を逸らしていた気がする。商人として、俺は彼と彼の船員に俺と商品を海を運んでもらった。俺たちは一緒に地獄を見たが、この行動が最初見た。正直言うと、怖かった。「俺たちの居場所が全く分からない。」と彼は空になったカップを見ながら言った。「どういうことフランク。何か起こった？」と俺は声に恐怖を出さないように言った。「アレックス、俺の１８年で航海していて、一度も迷るなんてことがなかったが、今度は星と星座が認識出来ない。一匹にも認識出来ない。何かがおかしいぞ、船員にも分かるから、その噂が流れてきた。」と船長が困る顔していて言った。ショックにいて、俺は一言を言わずに考えた。ためらいながら、「今からどうする？」と俺は聞いた。「とりあえず、残っている食品は配給する。そうすれば、１ヶ月分は十分になる。その上に魚を釣るのがすると配給が2ヶ月で伸ばすことができるかもしれない。」とフランクは言った。「食品は終わったらどうするか？」と俺は聞いた。フランクは何も言わなかった。
Oct. 21, 2024
Oct. 21, 2024
Eleventh Step to Improving my Academic Writing
How does my mother tongue affect writing?
Difference mistakes in English can be caused by effect of native language. The situation can be deepened in case when students try to avoid particular unknown grammar. Students have been making mistakes a long time and cannot recognize them as well. This process is called fossilization. All those difficulties do not contribute to development of language skills. For counteracting these problems students should to analyze which parts of mother tongue are similar to English and which are not. The first area where those types of mistakes are manifested is grammar. For example, the articles do not exist in my mother tongue. We do not have such big variety of tenses, we have only three: simple, past, future. People do not attach any importance to the particular word order in my country. I have found data. According to them seventy five percent of world language have a base ‘Subject – Verb – Object’ order (it is not my case obviously). So, ones my text was corrected with recommendation “create a strong sentence, using ‘Subject + predicate’ order” (I really appreciate to author for this). However, in my country we use inflection to show ‘who is doing what to whom, how and why’. All words are collected in one sentence. As a result I recognize that use very long sentences when I am writing in English. If I want to make them much more natural, I have to cut or separate them. The second area is a vocabulary. I am not a linguist and cannot explain how my native and English languages are connected. Time-to-time I look up words with similar mining in a dictionaries. It would be much easy to memorize new words if there were more such words. I guess that foreign students have lots of confuse with spelling. English language has incredible amount of words where spelling is not the same as pronunciation. At the end I want to add that applying of collocation could be a very useful instrument for making well created sentences. It allows not translating every single word. By using collocation students can make their texts more natural.
Oct. 21, 2024
Assez de sommeil
Je suis de genre qui ne peut pas fonctionner corectement sans assez de sommeil. Ça m'etonne toujours que certains gens peuvent "functioner" avec que 4 à 5 heures par jour. Je suis conscient que 4 à 5 heures est abusé et que ces gens les tolerent plutôt que supportent mais moi je n'arrive même pas à ça.
Oct. 21, 2024
Mein Tag mit Deutschübungen und Sprachcafé
Hallo, ich habe zwei Vlogs auf YouTube gesehen, um mein Deutsch zu üben. Die Vlogs waren interessant, weil ich viele Wörter gelernt habe. Ich werde einige Wörter mit Language Reactor um 19:00 Uhr trainieren. Ich hoffe, es wird gut gehen.
Ich werde um 17:00 Uhr zum Sprachcafé an der Cornell University gehen. Ich möchte mein Deutsch mit anderen Deutschlernern und deutschen Muttersprachlern üben. Danach möchte ich zu Abend essen. Ich weiß noch nicht, was ich essen soll.
Tschüss.
Oct. 21, 2024
Online education is very important nowadays.
The invention of the Internet had a great influence on the development of our society. Now, we consume much more information thаn people were able to forty years ago. Rhythm of our live is accelerating and modern people are looking for methods to be more productive.
Productivity is a new trend and popular lifestyle. You should be the best version of yourself: achieve success in your career, do sport, constantly learn new things, and easily cope with household duties.
This trend creates a need to find time for all these things.
Online education is one of the tools which can help you save your time. And I think it’s a good solution. During the Covid pandemic, universities and schools all over the world have been teaching online. That gave a powerful impetus to the development of the industry. Now there are many different online schools. You can learn languages or math, design or history and even do sports with coach on your phone!
The main advantage, to my way of thinking, is – you don't need to go anywhere. Your room or car or even garden can be your classroom! Also you may use any devices: smartphone or laptop, regular computer or, who knows, may be more comfortable for you will be to use a smart watch? It’s super convenient!
The main disadvantage are the a technical difficulties, to my point of view. If something with your device or connection goes wrong, you won't be able to attend classes.
Online education has many different advantages and disadvantages, but I’m sure, interest in such classes will only grow.
Oct. 21, 2024
Oct. 21, 2024
My weekend
My weekend began the last Friday, because I had medical permission. I had cough and fever the Thursday night.
Friday, I had taking pills and drinking enough water.
On morning Satudary, I felt better, for this reason I went to the park with my childrens. We was in the park around 2 hours, We was ridding bycicle and Walking around the park. I hope the next Saturday, We can visit the park.
On Sunday, at the morning, We went to supermarket to buy somethings for this week. Also, I had very happy because my team Barcelona won the "Astillero Classic"
Thank you for reading me.
Oct. 21, 2024
T2-Un cours de sport en salle
Chers lecteurs,
Avez-vous déjà suivi un cours de sport en salle ? Récemment, j’ai eu l’opportunité de m’inscrire dans un cours de yoga à la salle de la ville, qui s’appelle “Posé Healthy”.
Tout d’abord, après une bonne journée de travail, il est nécessaire de garder la santé en bon état. Cela m’encourage à faire du yoga trois fois par semaine afin de reformer mon corps. Heureusement, comme cette salle a été ouverte le mois dernier, je pouvais bénéficier d’une réduction de prix de 20%. En général, le prix total ne coûte que 20 euros par mois.
Malgré le tarif bas, les entraîneurs se montrent extrêmement professionnels parce qu’ils me donnent différents conseils alimentaires en vue d’assurer ma forme physique et mon poids. En outre, tous les équipements sont neufs et gratuits ici, ce qui peut m’aider à m’entraîner même de manière facile selon mes besoins.
Enfin, après 2 mois de yoga, j’ai perdu 2 kilogrammes qui m’aident à me sentir plus en confiance quand je porte une robe et sors avec mes amis. En effet, mon état d’esprit s’est également amélioré de manière significative.
Je vous recommande vivement de faire du yoga quand vous avez la chance grâce aux bienfaits qu’ils vous apportent.
À la prochaine !
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