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Döner Kebab
Was ist ein Döner Kebap? Ein Döner Kebap oder Kebab, ist ein ursprüngliches türkischen Essen, das in Deutschland sehr populär ist, vor allem als Streetfood bzw. Imbiss. Kebaps bestehen manchmal aus Puten- oder Hähnchenfleisch, das später mit Obst und Soße gemischt ist. Am Ende ist alles in eine Art von Pitabrot gelegt. Ich weiß, dass meine Beschreibung sehr mangeln ist! Es fehlt mir schwer, passende Wörter einzufallen...
Kebaps sind lecker, günstig und vielleich am wichtigsten man kann sie überall finden. Wo ich herkomme gibt es eine große Menge von Streetfood und Kebaps sind das beste Ersatzessen die ich bisher gefunden habe, deswegen gehört ihnen zu meinem Lieblingsessen.
Jetzt frage ich mich, was ist ihr Liebslingessen?
Aug. 8, 2020
andare d'accordo
Il mio compagno di stanza è molto lunatico. Non riesco a capirlo nonostante che abbiamo abitato tutto l'anno scorso insieme. Succede spesso che vuole pulire l'appartamento all'improviso senza
avere mi detto prima, e si arrabia poi , quando gli dico che non posso farlo al momento.
Lui mi fa impazzire !!
Aug. 8, 2020
文化複習2
1. 好像要下雨，恐怕我們不可以去沙灘玩。
2. 作天的考試很難了，你不恐怕成績不好？
3. 我的電腦太慢了，恐怕需要買新的。
4. 我最近很忙，恐怕我沒有時間來你的生日派對。
5. 他還沒吃我給他的蛋糕，恐怕他覺得不好吃。
6. 她好不容易省錢，就可以買新型手機。
7. 我幾年每天都學習韓語，好不容易就說韓語說得流利。
8. 他每個夜都失眠，好不容易才睡著。
9. 老闆說他小時候很窮，好不容易找工作賺錢就變成非常有錢了。
10. 做馬卡龍很難，我幾次盡量練習，好不容易才做又好吃又好看的。
11. 他非常浮躁，說想做什麼就馬上出去做。
12. 你沒有錢買菜，怎麼說買新電腦就買？
13. 我不喜歡她的男朋友，他說生氣就生氣。
14. 育兒不容易，特別嬰兒很吵，說哭就哭。
15. 這隻狗太吵，說吠叫就吠叫。
16. 他很愛他妻子，不管她做什麼，他都鼓勵。
17. 不管動物可不可愛，他都討厭。
18. 不管是什麼，她都想吃看一次。
19. 那個孩子很無理，不管他跟誰說話，他都不聽。
20. 不管飛機票貴不貴，他都想給你買。
Aug. 8, 2020
Poor Student Behaviour at School
Many schools these days have problems with poor student behaviour. Why do you think these problems occur? What could be done to tackle these problems?
Nowadays, student behaviour at school is becoming worse and worse with every year. School administrations and parents continue to argue about sources of this deteriorating process. In this essay I will discuss some of the reasons for students disobey their teachers and propose solutions for schools and parents to deal with this situation.
The first and foremost reason is the loss of respect in society. Generally speaking, people these days don’t have such sense of respect for elder generations like it was in the past. Growing ups tend to adopt easily this way of behaviour. In this situation, parents should pay more attention to their own behaviour and encourage their children by example.
The next problem is the influence of social networks. Today, social networks is integrated into children’s lives, making them vulnerable to example of poor behaviour translated on the net. For instance, looking at videos on YouTube, Instagram or TikTok, that might contain acts of violence or foul and hate speech. The solution can be for parents to restrict their children from inappropriate content.
Another issue related to technologies is that the Internet is replacing school as a source of knowledge. Search engines allows children to quickly get any answers they need. As a result, teachers lose their authority in front of their students. To address this problem, governments ought to make the education more technologically modern.
To sum up, poor student behaviour is an increasingly worrying issue affecting the quality of modern school education. Sometimes parents cannot cope alone with the bad influence coming from social networks and TV. The society must pay more attention to this problem, otherwise the fear of dealing with uncontrollable students will put off potential teachers from schools.
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Aug. 8, 2020
저는 수업에 한국어로 말해야 돼요 // I have to speak Korean in class
도와줄 수 있어요? 다음 주, 저는 한국어로만 말할 수 있어요. 저는 한국어로 별로 말 잘 못 해요. 그레서 common phrases을 준비해야 돼요.
Can you help me? Next week, I can only speak using Korean. I'm not very good at speaking in Korean, so I have to prepare common phrases.
How do I say:
"Which chapter were we on?"
"We finished chapter __."
"We are on chapter __."
Also, please check if I wrote this correctly!
다시 말해 주세요? = Can you say that again for me please?
적어 주세요 = Please write it down for me.
감사합니다!
Aug. 8, 2020
Aug. 8, 2020
Wie würden Sie Ihnen Abschied feiern?
Ich würde mich von möglichst vielen Menschen verabschieden. Deshalb würde ich meine Verwandten und Freunde zu Hause einladen. Ich vermute, dass sie fröhlich sein werden. Ich werde einigen Brief an sie all schreiben. Ich würde gern für sie kochen. Und werde ich einen Vase mit Blumen auf der Tisch standen. Am ende würde ich der party ihnen eine kleines Geschenk schenken.
Aug. 8, 2020
Die Atombombe und Jazz
Ich bin ein Superfan von Jazz, besonders Bebop. Dieser Musikstil ist schneller under lauter als die Musik der Big-Band-Ära. Es gefällt mir gut.
Der bekannteste Spieler von der Bebop-Ära ist Charlie Parker. "Bird", der hatte ihm so genannt, hat das Saxophon gespielt. Er könnte ganz schnell spielen. Seine Noten laufen so schnell aus. Allerdings ist es gleichzeitig verwirrend und aufregend, ihm noch Heute zu hören.
Ich schreibe über Bebop weil Heute der 75er Jahrestag der Atombombe ist. Bebop hat im Schatten der Bombe entwickelt. Wie ein Spiegel hat die Musik, die Angst der Zeitgeist reflektierte. Nach der Bombe hatte jeder Angst. Was würde passieren? Die welt war verrückt geworden. Also dieser Stil von verrückte Musik, so beliebt geworden war. Falls ich denke an die Atombombe, ich denke immer an Jazz Musik. Damit hat das Zeitgeist reagiert auf die Krise des Zeitalters.
Welches Musikgenre reflektiert am Besten auf die Krise unserem Zeitalter?
Aug. 8, 2020
Aug. 8, 2020
L'usage de mon ordinatuer
J’utilise mon ordinateur pour travailler, regarder des vidéos sur Youtube, lire des tweets sur Twitter, lire des livres et apprendre des language étrangères. J’envoie des e-mails aux clients et tape des documents. Par exemple, hier, à cause d’une coupure internet, je ne pouvais pas travailler. Normalement, quand je regarde des vidéos sur Youtube, je regarde vidéos des chansons, la forme physique et l’apprentissage des langue étrangères. J’aime bien lire des tweets sur Twitter parce que je suis des comptes des économistes, des politologues et des historien et j’apprends de beaucoup des faits intéressants. Parfois, je regarde des vidéos d’apprentissage des langue étrangère pour s’améliorer mon vocabulaire et grammaire. Enfin, j’utilise mon ordinateur pour lire des livres. Je préfère des livres électronique que les livres en papier. Également, on a besoin de moins espace. Je garde des centaines des livre en mon ordinateur.
Aug. 7, 2020
Un voyage à la plage
Normalment c'été, je reste à la maison et je étudie, mais aujourd'hui j'ai fait un voyage à la plage. Ma sœur m'a dit qu'elle recontre une amie au café à la plage. Je connais cette amie très bien, donc je aussi sortais de la maison pour aller je degourdir mes jambes !
Parce que j'ai resté chez moi pour des mois, c'est une journée super ! À la plage, nous avons arrêté à une table dehors un café, et nous avons parlé avec la serveuse. J'ai mangé un croissant et boire du thé, et ma sœur a mangé du gâteau. On a marché sur la plage avec sa amie, et à sept heure on a rentré à la maison.
Parce que j'ai joué c'apès-midi, je vais devoir étudier cette soirée. Mes examens vont être la semaine prochaine. Chaque jours, je suis plus confiant, mais ils sont très diffciles.
Merci !
Aug. 7, 2020
Mein Täglicher Weg
Ich wohne an eine Allee. Zu die Universität gehen, muss ich zuerst mit dem Bus fahren. Dann, steige ich an der Bushaltestelle auf und nehme anderen Bus. An der nächsten Bushaltestelle, gehe ich zu Fuß nach links und dann geradeaus weiter. Nach circa fünfhundert Metern gehe ich die erste Straße links und dort ist schon die Universität, auf der rechten Seite.
Aug. 7, 2020
Aug. 7, 2020
Freitag im August
Heute bin ich echt müde, aber ich weiß nicht warum. Das Wochenende ist schon da und ich habe habe nächste Woche als Urlaub genommen.
Wie ich vorher geschrieben habe, habe ich meinen Zeh aus versehen gegen die Wand meines Bades gestoßen. Der Zeh tut immer noch weh und ich kann noch nicht gut gehen. Ich bin traurig, weil ich das Laufen vermisse. Na ja, ich muss vorsichtig sein, um meinen Zeh gesund zu bekommen.
Aug. 7, 2020
Aug. 7, 2020
My dream
I believe that all of us have dream a lot when we fall asleep especially in childhood, but most context of our dreams will be forgotten eventually. Recently, I have some strange drams in the night despite the fact that I rarely dream since I grow up. However, I would like to share with you an odd dream I remember.
Being disturbed by creepy noise, I opened my eyes slowly from faint and attended to figure out the situation. A few male dead bodies whose heads were bleeding beside me and I stood up from the ground and looked around. There were four thick gray concrete walls formed as a big square. The corpses and skinny people dressed in dirty and torn clothes including me like servants or prisoners, were limited and stuck by these walls . Strangely, I did not feel a thing. No question like what happen now and who killed the poor guys who laid down on the blood ground appeared in my mind as I could not think as fast as I usually do. I felt some creep noise such as crying, screaming and whisper around but I could not listen clearly what these skinny talked about and where the screaming came from. I realized that maybe I was in my dream, a lucid dream. I lost control of my character in the dream. I was more like a outsider to watch a show.
All of sudden, a strong guy with bulging muscles whose body size was twice as normal people magically appeared in the jail. I had intuition that this guy was the bully and did murders. Someone wanted to challenge his authority and became corpses after fights. I did not know why but I decided to do a fight with the bully. And did I win? The answer is mystery since I woke up.
I thought that this dream is very thrilling and very unusual. In the dream, I lost my physical abilities of hearing, touching and tasting. I also could not feel the space and the time.
Do you have any similar experience like me? And thank you for reading and correcting.
Aug. 7, 2020
Food poisoning
These days, I couldn't keep my diary because I was really busy with my final exams and reports. From today, I'll keep my diary as much as I can. By the way, I got food poisoning about three weeks ago. The cause of pood poisoning is probably eatieg raw chicken meat. I had a fever, stomach ache, and diarrhea for like three days. I was in a bad shape. My mother says that my family easily get food poisoning by eatieg raw meat, so I'll never eat raw meat.
Aug. 7, 2020
Aug. 7, 2020
jour 10
Aujourd'hui je suis allée au marché des fermiers. J'ai acheté beaucoup des légumes, par exemple du broccoli, du choufleur, des épinards, de la laitue, des carottes et des haricots verts. J'ai aussi acheté des fruits: des framboises, des poires et des nectarines. En plus, j'ai trouvé un beau bouquet de fleurs. J'adore les légumes frais du marché. Je pense qu'ils sont plus savoureux que ceux du supermarché. Cependant, je pense qu'il y a trop de sacs en plastiqueutilisés là-bas. Je prends toujours mes propres sacs pour minimiser le plastique.
Aug. 7, 2020
Aug. 7, 2020
自己紹介 – Jikoshoukai – Self-introduction
こんにちは、アンバです。二十八才で，医者です。
konnichiwa, Anba desu. nijuuhachi sai de, isha desu.
Hello, I’m Amber. I’m 28 years old and a doctor.
兄弟がいません、こうして一人っ子です。
kyoudai ga imasen, koushite hitorikko desu.
I have no siblings, thus I am an only child.
イギリスで育ちました，ここで二十八年間住んでいます。
Igirisu de sodachimashita, koko de nijuuhachi nenkan sundeimasu.
I was brought up in the UK, I have lived here for 28 years.
イギリスに生まれましたから、英語を話します。
Igirisu ni umaremashita kara, eigo wo hanashimasu.
Because I was born in the UK, I speak English.
でも、英語しか話せません。大家族で、でも祖父母がいません。
demo, eigo shika hanasemasen. daikazoku de、demo sofubo ga imasen.
But, I can speak English only. I have a big family, but I have no grandparents.
私にはたくさんのいとこと叔父と叔母がいます。両親と住んでいます。
watashi ni wa takusan no itoko to oji to oba ga imasu. ryoushin to sundeimasu.
I have many cousins, uncles and aunts. I live with my parents.
彼らはインド来ました。結婚していません、も彼氏がいません。
karera wa Indo kimashita. kekkon shiteimasen, mo kareshi ga imasen.
They came from India. I am not married, nor do I have a boyfriend.
独身です。ほんとんどの友達がイングランドのロンドンに住んでいます。
dokushin desu. hontondo no tomodachi ga Ingurando no Rondon ni sundeimasu.
I am single. Most of my friends live in London, England.
よく彼らに会います。
yoku karera ni aimasu.
I often meet up with them.
Aug. 7, 2020
Attitude to subjects
When I was at middle school, I liked geography the most. We learnt something like how many big mountains, rivers, deserts and so on in China. Our geography teacher Chen loved to draw a big China map on blackboard then told us above things. The reason why I liked geography the most was because it was visible and touchable. Because I had a good grades in geography, teacher Chen always let me revised our classmate's geography test paper with a few other students after every test. I thought this should be the most glorious thing I had do in middle school. But things didn't always go well like this, in my impression, I had got a score just overing forty in a mathematics quiz and I don't even know what's going on until now. History was the subject I hated the most because I thought it was very boring and I had to remember a lot of contents about it. Physical was the subject we loved the most; we regarded it just as a playing activity. It means we don't have to take textbook and just do some playing games; If you don't want to do it, you can just relax you self at will. The other subjects are fine, and I can't say I like it or dislike it. These are my attitudes toward the all subjects when I was in middle school.
Aug. 7, 2020
Obesity in Modern Life
All over the world, societies are facing a growing problem with obesity. This problem affects both children and adults. What are the reasons for this rise in obesity? How could it be tackled?
Over the last few years, population of many countries have become overweight and obese. Today, this issue concerns adults and children alike. In Russia, 40 per cent of adult population is overweight. In this essay I will look at the main reasons for growing of obesity and propose some solutions.
One of the reasons is eating junk food. People often don’t have time to cook proper meal, therefore they make do with pre-prepared meals from grocery stores and supermarkets. In my city, every store offers a variety of snacks, burgers and other fast-food for customers. The solution is for the government to bring a law that will increase a tax fees for fast-food. As a result, people choose to buy healthier food for the same price.
Secondly, another reason is a poor eating culture in general. That is to say, many of us pick snacks on the run, dine in front of the television and eat too frequently during the day. For example, in yoga, it is recommended to have at least a eight- or 16-hour gap between meals. To tackle this problem, each individual must be aware of their eating habits. If it happens, we will have a society of healthier and more conscious people.
The last important reason is the lack of movement in our daily lives. It is common in modern world that most of the work requires people to sit on their chair. To compare, during evolution of man, our ancestors spend most of the time on feet hunting, looking for food and migrating. This difference in modern life consequently makes human body suffer from bunch of diseases, including obese as well. Addressing this issue involves people to make effort to add a bit physical activity. A short, 20-minute walk, gymnastics or yoga will be enough and hopefully is going to solve this problem.
To sum up, obesity is great problem of modern societies. Junk food and immoderate eating, along with the lack of activity in daily life, pose risks of gaining weight for many people. Unless people start to look after their diet, most of the population is going to become obese. I believe that peoples’ health in their hand and everyone should take steps to solve issue for themselves.
PS. When I finished, I realized that I didn't mention children in the essay at all...
Aug. 7, 2020
3. 三...Remembering the Kanji
3. 三
(ドン)
この番組では他の知識が必要なので、説明する。
日本語では「つ」は時々、「っ」になる。「つ」次字は声はない子音（か）であれば、多分「っ」になると思う。
（ドン）
三の読み方は「さん」と「みつ」だ。
前の数字の同じく、普通の漢字の読み方の様子が違うけど、前の数字を比べて、三の読み方の様子がちょっと推測することができる。結婚した形（音読み）は「さん」ので、三日、三つ、三日月では訓読みが表れる。残り様子では「さん」が表れる。一つ結婚した様子では「みつ」が表れる。例えば、三枚と、三人と、三月の「三」の読み方は「さん」だ。数はそなに難しくない！ぜひ、「三」がある言葉があれば、読み方を推測してください。
Aug. 7, 2020
Segeln auf dem Meer
Heute ware ich auf dem Meer mit meiner Tochter segeln.
Es war ihre erstes Mal in einem Segelboot. Wir waren mit meinem Schwiegervater.
Für mich ist segeln fantastisch. Aber es hat ihr nicht so gut gefallen. Sie hat Angst gehabt und sie wollte zu Hause zurückgehen. Sie hat gesagt dass, es wirklich schrecklich ist, im Boot zu sein.
Es war ganz ruhig, kein hohes Wasser und die Sonne scheint. Ich fühlte mich sehr glücklich, um diese Erfahrung mit meiner Tochter zu Teilen. Aber meine Tochter war ganz traurig und sie hat es furchtbar gefunden.
Ich hoffe dass, meine Tochter in der Zukunft segeln probieren wird.
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