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Algo que me molesta
Algo que me molesta es cuando estoy con otra persona y esta persona está usando su teléfono móvil cuando estoy intentando hablar o interactuar con él o ellal Creo que es una actividad muy maleducada. Usualmente no es un problema para mi porque no tengo muchos amigos o familia que lo hacen o si lo hacen, hacerlo por un tiempo corto y ellos siempre dan una disculpa. Sin embargo, de vez en cuando encuentro a las personas como así. En estas situaciones yo espero hasta que las persona termine sus actividades por su móvil antes de seguir la conversación. Si la persona repite sus acciones otra vez y otra vez, y si no necesito continuar la amistad con esta persona, evitaré él o ella porque esta maleducada.
Dec. 7, 2020
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
"Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people."
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is critically important that we be clear and honest with anyone we want to deal with. No one can deny that either telling the truth or not has both positive and negative effects. Personally, I agree with the argument that telling is the most important consideration in any relationship. There are two reasons why I feel this way, both of which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, If we want successful relationships with anyone, we have to be honest and always telling them the truth part, rather than deny or lie to them. My opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own experience. Two years ago, I was in a relationship with a girl. We had been perfect in all ways, we had to spend all our day together after school, going to eat our favorite food and having fun. One day, I realized that she lied to me about her life, and she was not clear with me in the details. As a result, that took us to break up, because the main point that, if she from the beginning lied to me, what will happen in the future if we are planning to continue our life together. If she had never lied to me, I would never leave her.
Furthermore, telling the truth can save us from serious situations, my personal example is a compelling illustration of this. Last year, my friend went on a trip for several hours with his friends. For me, I couldn't go with them because I had many things to do with my family. He told me that if anyone from my family members asked about me, tell them that I'm with you in your house, and that's what I did. It was supposed that they come back by 7 p.m. After it reached 10 p.m., they didn't come back. Therefore his parents started to call and ask for him, at that time I didn't know what to do. They were very scared; as a result, I told them that he went on a trip with friends. The sad part, we received a call from the police telling us that they got an accident on the road, and they are in the hospital, my friend had a severe injury on his head. If I had never lied to his parents, they would have the chance to save their son.
In light of the above reasons, I strongly believe that always telling the truth is far better. This because you will be clear and fair with others, and not to put yourself in trouble.
Dec. 7, 2020
Meu dia 7/12
Hoje eu acordei cedinho, ás 6 da manhã, para treinar com a minha irmã. Como a gente ainda tem medo de ir para uma academia, ficamos treinando em casa.
Depois de uma hora e vente minutos preparamos os nossos shakes de proteína para que músculo cresça.
Hoje senti um pouco de ansiedade, acho que o fato de ficar o tempo todo em casa está me fazendo uma pessoa mais fechada, não quero sair com amigos e falar com outros cara a cara me põe um pouco nervoso.
Vou tentar sair um pouco para interagir com mais pessoas fora do meu circulo familiar.
Dec. 7, 2020
Weihnachtengeschenke
Kürzlich habe ich Geschenke für meine Familie zum Weihnachten gekauft. Ich habe Bücher für beide Großmütter gekauft, weil sie bieden gern lesen. Für meine Mutter habe ich ein Kochbuch gekauft. Ich werde meinem Vater ein Armband aus Leder schenken, weil sein Armband kaputt ist. Ich habe für meinen Bruder ein Comicheft gekauft.
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Dec. 7, 2020
再來練習
六年多以前我開始學習中文。那時候我定了一個有點高的目標：我中文跟英文一樣好才停學習。雖然當時連我的英文都沒有特別好，但是我還沒成功了。幾百小時我上中文課、一共我住在台灣幾乎十個月，也去中國旅行、我有跟幾個語伴練習講中文。儘管這種的努力，我中文非常慢得進步。為什麽呢？應該是因為滿努力練習中文的階段之前也有比較懶的階段。比如説今年我不但有點忙，而且因為 Corona 我沒有很多機會去台灣或者跟華人見面。最近我發現我很久沒有講、寫中文，就決定又開始了。我去上網找自學的教材。本網站看起來滿有趣的那種教材。我很喜歡想象超級多人都互相幫忙學習語言，我就想參加。所以我現在坐這裏寫文章。希望你們喜歡 😄
Dec. 7, 2020
Winter day
Today It is a cold day.
We are in December. The last month of the year. Normally, this month, the days are short
and the sun or the light is only a few hours in the sky
Today also It rained . On TV news say that the snow appears on mountains.
I think that people have problems with his encouragement level.
In summer, the sun is joy. In winter clouds a lot so people have sadness.
I like rain so this day for me is good
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Dec. 7, 2020
Die Wäsche
In Deutschland gibt es fast keine Trockenmaschine, um die Wäsche zu trocknen. Ich habe das nur in einem Hostel schon gesehen. Normale Haushalte benutzen einen Wäscheständer, oder eine kleine Zahnstange, die öffnet, bis es sehr breit ist, um viele Wäsche darauf zu halten. Da hängen die Wäsche einige Stunden bis Tagen.
Da eine typische Wohnung in Deutschland ein bisschen klein ist, muss man merken, wo genau man seine Wäsche liegen kann. Man muss immer ein oder zwei Quadratmeter dafür lassen. In meiner ehemaligen Wohnung gab es kaum genug Platz umzulaufen und wenn man auf dem Sofa setzten mochte, müsste man einen Arm des Wäschehängers aufheben, so dass es wie eine Tür öffnen würde.
Dec. 7, 2020
Dec, 7th, 2020
My friend told me that she'll give me some gardening thing last day. She said she want to surprise me. Actually, I do surprise,even though I haven't got it yet. Because there's winter now. You know, the highest temperature is under 0 degree, and all my garden is covered by snow. What will it be?
I will get it at this afteroon. Let's see.
Dec. 7, 2020
Dec. 7, 2020
Introduction of Universal Grammar
Recently, I've been interested in Second Language Acquisition, a subfield of linguistic. Universal Grammar, which proposed by Noam Chomsky, is a fascinating and influential theory among SLA topics.
The concept of UG is that every human being, no matter what first language they speak, has the same innate language system in their mind. When people learn their first or second language, they would perceive the languages they hear and fit it into the innate system.
Noam Chomsky claims that humans need UG to learn language due to the complexity of human language. It explains why children can learn a language in a relatively short period of time compared to other complex skills. Also, children learn the language in similar stages. For example, children would learn negation in the early stages regardless of which language they speak.
So, here is a brief introduction of UG. Hopes you like it. I'm not a linguistic major so I might have some misunderstanding of UG and would appreciate any correction if I make a wrong explanation.
Thanks for your reading and correction.
Dec. 7, 2020
Helping people directly or by charities
The way to give a helping hand varies from person to person. Some people reckon that they should help the local community or give people direct help, while others argue that the best way to give a favor is to give money to charities. In my opinion, I agree with the former view.
On the one hand, people who believe in charitable organizations may hold that they can allocate public money equally and effectively. For example, some non-profit institutions may help schools from deprived areas with teaching facilities like building multi-functional classrooms, and recruiting well-qualified faculties. In this way, children from less well-off families can have access to sound a education, therefore they can break the poverty circle to be contributing members of society.
However, some individuals argue that lending a hand directly to people in need is the best way. With the wave of corruption nowadays, donations sometimes are not able to reach the right place and the right people. For instance, in China, there are numerous organizations that raise money from the public in the name of extending a helping hand to those under the poverty line. But actually what they did was put this money into their own pocket, leaving the poor to die. For this reason, citizens should give a favor to those people in a straight way, instead of by agencies.
In conclusion, although some non-profit agencies can allocate money effectively and quickly, I still opine that people should help destitute people directly in case of corruption.
Dec. 7, 2020
Dec. 7, 2020
Schreiben
Hier sind ein paar Einleitungen zu bestimmte Themen
Wohnsituation von Studierenden:
Man sagt, dass unsere Umgebung uns beinflust. Für mich ist es wirklich wahr. Ich muss immer mein Zimmer putzen, bevor ich lernen, sonst kann ich nicht konzentrieren. Jeder hat natürlich verschiedene Wohnsituation und manche kann nicht ein optimaler platz zum Lernen im Haus finden. Und in einem welt, wo wir verbringen uns etwa 70%-90% unsere Zeit in unsere Wohnung, wird es ein großes problem.
Helmpflicht fur Radfahrer:
Wann war die letzte Zeit, die Sie ein Helm tragen, wenn Sie redfahren? Fühlen Sie sicher, wenn Sie ein Helm tragen? Sie sollen sein. Eine Forschung zeigt, dass Helme die Chance von Verletzungen bei 60% reduzieren. Aber ist es die am beste Weise, um Fahradverletzungen zu behandeln? Sollte es vorgeschreiben? Und gibt es andere alternativen von Helme?
Dec. 7, 2020
Writing Class
Following is an essay I wrote for my writing class,, Thank you so much always .
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An environmental crisis has recently have become a major concern to environmentalists around the world. Each came up with his/her own theories on the origination and the implications of it. Kempf, a French environmental journalist, author of the book, "How the Rich are Destroying the Earth" (2008), too, attempted to illuminate the source of this emergency. His reasoning is clear: oligarchy and consumption derived by the social structure caused this crisis, and are making the issue worse and worse. While he supports socialism and democracy, he is opposing capitalism, economic oligarchy, and overconsumption. I clearly agree with his position that oligarchy is what exacerbates the matter. Indeed, oligarchy and overconsumption engendered the current environmental disaster.
Oligarchy represents a form of government in which power effectively rests with a small elite segment of society distinguished by royalty, wealth, family ties, military might, or religious hegemony. This book defines oligarchy as the few number of wealthy elites. According to the book, the gap between the rich and the poor is widening and the moneyed are effectively creating a social ladder that the needy people cannot overcome. Meanwhile the overconsumption and material growth pursued by the rich and the attempts to emulate it by the lower-class are contaminating the earth. He includes a number of surprising statistics on how the gross income of the wealth far exceeds the income of the humble class. This is indeed true, according to the U.S. Census Bureau, “Income Earners by Quantile", retrieved in 2006, in which the top quantile occupies the 77.16 percent of income while the very bottom occupies a mere 2.67 percent. The leisure class at the head cuts itself off from the society by constructing a social ladder that is hard to climb.
Kempf uses Veblen’s theory to explain “ostentation and imitation,” the derive for emulation and consumption: the economy is dominated by the principle: “the propensity for emulation – for invidious comparison – is of ancient growth and is a pervading trait of human nature.” Although human nature contributes somewhat to consumption and the environmental degradation, it may not be the sole cause of the problem. He could have related this to the pressure that society exerts on the people, such as TV shows or advertisements.
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Dec. 7, 2020
Journal 12/07/20
I don’t think COVID-19 has changed my life. During the lockdown, it indeed caused some problems. For example: one family can only one person to go out to buy necessary life goods every two days. Most shops were closed, and all transportation stopped running. In short, the only thing you can do was stay at home to wait for the hard time to pass. But now in China, everything has come to normal. COVID-19 seems like a remote memory, though there are a few confirmed cases here and there, but it is already a big deal.
Dec. 7, 2020
Hausaufgabe
Aufgrund einer Warnung des Innenministeriums vor terroristischen Anschlägen wurden die Sicherheitsvorkehrungen auf allen Bahnhöfen verstärkt: Die Sicherheitsvorkehrungen wurden auf allen Bahnhöfen verstärkt, weil es eine Warnung des Innenministeriums vor terroristischen Anschlägen gab.
Oder
Es gab eine Warnung des Innenministeriums vor terroristischen Anschlägen, folglich wurden die Sicherheitsvorkehrungen auf allen Bahnhöfen verstärkt.
Vor der morgigen Sitzung müssen noch alle Teilnehmer über die Änderung der Tagesordnung informiert werden: Die Tagesordnung könnte jeden Morgen sich ändern, infolgedessen müssen alle Teilnehmer vor der morgigen Sitzung informiert werden.
Während der Tagung des Vorstands am Mittwoch findet im Konferenzraum 2 eine Belegschaftsversammlung statt: Die Tagung des Vorstands ist am Mittwoch, währenddessen findet im Konferenzraum 2 eine Belegschaftsversammlung statt.
Trotz viele Besucher klagen die Museen in diesem Jahr über Einnahmeverluste: Obwohl es in diesem Jahr viele Besucher gab, klagen die Museen über Einnahmeverluste.
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Dec. 7, 2020
Journal 12/07/20
When I left the hospital to go to work this afternoon, I happened to meet some of my leaders. They were going to visit my colleagues at the hospital. (My colleague was hospitalized because he had cerebral hemorrhage. I wrote this in my former post). But they were not allowed to enter the patients’ building. You know why? Because some time ago, one of our locals had the COVID-19 (although this patient was already cured two weeks ago) our government was very nervous, and demanded each hospital to be ensured to manage the visiting personnel strictly. The hospital stipulated a rule that a patient can only have one escort, and an escort certificate was issued. No one can enter the ward without an escort certificate. They had to leave the gift and left the hospital. I took care of these gifts and informed my colleagues’ families to pick them up.
Dec. 7, 2020
relationship
A relationship, in my opinion, is a definition of a communication connection between one person and another. For me, friendship is the most indispensable relationship from primary school to university. When we were in primary school, we played games with our friends, when we were in middle school, we helped each other with homework problems, and when we were in college, we took part in club activities with our friends. All this is brought by friendship.
Friendship is the foundation of all good relationships. It is a beautiful word. It contains gentleness, understanding, approval, tolerance, mutual warmth... These are all connotations that I would like to give. I've always felt like I had a problem. It's easy to start a new relationship, but it doesn't seem to last. Sometimes think anyway are quite familiar, too lazy to do the icing on the cake thing feel too deliberate too artificial. It turns out that relationships are like gardening. If you don't take care of them regularly, the weeds will grow thick and even the most intimate relationships will grow thin.
In the past, I did not know how to express embarrassed and do not know how to express. My friends disappeared one by one. So in the future, I will strengthen this aspect so that the person I love and the person who loves me can clearly and clearly feel my heart.
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