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ankitrn

Oct. 31, 2020

Ein Brief für eine Freundin

31.10.2020

Liebe Sarah,

Vielen dank für deinen letzten Brief! I hatte so gefreut darüber.

Weißt du, dass ich Deutsch selbst gelernt habe? Ja, Ich weiß, die letzte Briefe auf Englisch geschrieben wären. Ich weiß noch nicht, ob mein Deutsch sehr blödlich ist, aber ich hoffe, dass das ist doch nicht so! Nun, möchte ich dir meinen Weg auf die Deutschen Sprache erzählen.

Zuerst hatte ich die Kurs auf Duolingo gemacht und hatte meine ausprache und Grammatik gelernt. Dann, habe ich eine paare Bücher über Deutschgrammatik und viele Artikeln gelesen. Ich habe auch viele Youtube videos gesehen und ein paare Deutschepodkasten gehört. Nun, kann ich viele videos auf Deutsch ohne Untertiteln sehen :)

Wie ist ihre Oma? Ich hoffe, dass Sie gesundlich ist. Ich werde für deinen nächsten Brief warten. Schreibst mir bitte bald.

Tschüss!

A

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tommy

Oct. 31, 2020

Kingsman

I watched the movie "Kingsman" on Amazon Prime according to a recommendation from a friend of mine. She said that the movie is really exciting but is little bit grotesque, and was worried if I feel bad or not.
After watching it, I totally agreed with her opinion. The story was exciting and worthy of being remembered. However, I think that grotesque scenes are unnecessary and moreover spoils smart story.
I wondered if British movies have already been full of smart story such as James Bond and Sherlock Holmes so that people prefer to such a movie.

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Frank

Oct. 31, 2020

数学は本当は計算についてじゃない！

理由が分からないけど、たくさんの人は、速く計算できる人は数学が得意と思われるらしい。
でも、数学家でも計算の速度は（たいてい）そんなに早くはない。もし数学力は速く計算できるに等しいとしたら、もう数学家が要らなくて、計算機だけでいい。

数学の中の一番大切な物は、実は証明だ。だから、数字が苦手な人でも、数学を学んだり、楽しめたりできる。（例えば、僕です）。そして、たくさんの人は中学とか高校で勉強した数学がつまらなくて、「余生は数学と離れて生きたい」と思うかもしれない。

それは残念だと思う。数学のかっこいところはいっぱいあるから。なので、数学は最も理解されてない分野の一つかもしれない。

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rasata

Oct. 31, 2020

新找到的读、听资源

我今天探索了新找到的网站，叫popupchinese。里面的所有内容其中，我最喜欢短故事的部分。一共有20篇短故事。它们都录音得很好听。我今天学的是Red Harvest小说的节选。节选里发生的事件不多。侦探跟老头子讨论关于他儿子死亡的事情。老头子相信杀儿子的人肯定是儿媳妇，可是侦探还没有收集足够的证据。

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ben_flasta

Oct. 31, 2020

Aggiornamento sul post di ieri

Iieri ho scritto un breve testo sul lockdown che arriverà lunedí. In realtá oggi il numero dei casi degli infetti è ancora aumentato. Abbiamo quasi ventimilla casi in più (rispetto a ieri).

Inoltre, devo ammettere che mi sono sbagliato ieri sulla citazione della Merkel. Non l'aveva detto a fine agosto ma solo quattro settimane fa (all'inizio di ottobre).

Non sono un suo grandissimo fan, ma aveva ragione sulla evoluzione della seconda ondata in Germania. A differenza di quello che hanno detto molti critici, le sue dichiarazioni non hanno causato panico inutile, ma erano ancora troppo prudenti (a posteriori, ovviamente).

ps. Ieri Joshua_ ha commentato (qui: https://langcorrect.com/journal/post/12842/) che la parola quarantena sia più utilizzata in Italia di "lockdown". Scrivendo questo testo mi sono chiesto se "quarantena" sia una descrizione correta per le misure adottate in Germania: Saremo liberi a uscire delle case, ma saranno chiusi i bar, i ristoranti, i cinema, i teatri etc.

pps. Ho letto l'articolo di Wikipedia sulla quarantena. Lì c'è scritto che l"quarantena" si riferisce semplicemente a un isolamento "per limitare la diffusione di uno stato pericoloso". Considerando che le misure adottate hanno il scopo di isolare le persone (ma non necessariamente in casa), il termine "quarantena" è giusto.

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mariajo

Oct. 31, 2020

Astorga

Mein letzter Urlaub war in Astorga. Ich reiste mit eine Gruppe Freunden von Madrid und wir haben in das Haus unserer Freund Alvaro geblieben. Wir haben von 12 bis 22 August gefahren. Wir sind alle sehr guten Freunden, leider wohnen wir ziemlich weit, deshalb machen wir jedes Jahr eine Reise oder ein Kurs so wir kann uns treffen und viel Spaß haben. Jedes Mal, wenn wir treffen es ist großartig, alle sind sehr nett und ein bisschen verrückt, aber sehr gute Leute! Normalerweise, wir kommen zusammen zu singen. Wir sind alle Musiker und wir machen Renaissancemusik, weil wir die Geschichte und die Kultur von dieser Zeit leben.
Wenn wir nicht singen wir mag viel essen oder in der Stadt spaziergehen, ein paar Bier trinken und viel reden. Der Vorteil von Astorga ist das wir kann überall laufen, weil ist ein kleiner Ort, aber es gibt sehr viel zu sehen, zum Beispiel der Gaudí Palast oder die Kathedrale.
Astorga ist ein sehr besonders Ort für mich. Es ist wie zu Hause.

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k750i

Oct. 31, 2020

비 오는 날

내가 가장 좋아하는 날은 비가 오는 날이다. 우리 나라는 적도에 있어서 날씨가 꽤 덥다. 사계가 없고 일 년 내내 경치 변화도 없다. 굉장히 유일하게 많은 것은 햇빛이다.

비가 오는 날만 빼고 대부분의 기온이 덥다. 비가 오면 기온이 시원해졌다. 그래서 그때 기분도 유괘하고 좋아졌다. 집 마당에서 앉으면서 빗소리를 듣고 비 내리는 경치를 바라보는 걸 즐겨 한다. 지금도 다음 비가 올 날을 기대할 것이다.

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Ritchel

Oct. 31, 2020

práctica de gramática a través de la traducción 1

English:
Jimmy started reading a book three hours ago. He is still reading it and now he is on page 55. Jimmy has been reading for three hours. He has read 55 pages so far.

Question:
1. How long has he been reading?
2. How many hours has he already spent in reading?
3. What page is Jimmy on?
4. If Jimmy has been reading a book for three hours and the time now is 5 o'clock in the afternoon. At what time did he start reading it?

Traducción al español:

Jimmy empezó a leer un libro hace dos horas. Aún lo sigue leyendo y ahora está en la página 55. Jimmy
lleva tres horas leyendo/hace tres horas que lee. Desde hace tres horas que lee. Ha leido 55 páginas hasta ahora.

Preguntas:

1. Cuánto tiempo hace que lee?
Hace cuánto tiempo que lee?
Cuánto tiempo llevas leyendo?
Desde cuándo lee?

>Hace tres horas que lee un libro.
>Lee un libro hace tres horas.
>Llevo tres horas leyendo.
>Desde hace tres horas lee.

2. Cuántas horas ya ha pasado al leer?
>Ha pasado tres horas al leer.
>Pasó tres horas al leer.

3. En qué página está Jimmy?
>Jimmy está en la página 55.

4. Si Jimmy lleva tres horas leyendo un libro y ahora son las cinco de la tarde, a qué hora él empezó a leerlo?

>Él empezó a leer a las dos de la tarde.

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nsegal

Oct. 31, 2020

「アメリカザリガニ」というの話し

最近私は、「アメリカザリガニ」というの話を読みました。その話のナレーターは自分の子供の頃のことを思い出して話しました。隣のおばさんは小さいエビを見せてくれて、そのエビを「アメリカザリガニ」と呼びました。それで、彼は親に「アメリカに行きたい」と言いました。しかし、彼のお父さんは彼をアメリカにじゃなくて、田んぼに連れて行きました。そこでお父さんは大きいアメリカザリガニを捕ってくれました。ナレーターは、その生き物がアメリカザリガニじゃないと思いました。理由は二つです。一つは、彼がエビをザリガニにと誤解したことです。もう一つは、それらがアメリカではなく、日本にいたことです。アメリカザリガニはアメリカだけにいるはずだと思いました。

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ponta

Oct. 31, 2020

October 31st, 2020

Today, I went out with my three friends and enjoyed all day. The beginning was very early; I woke up at 4 AM and left my home 30 minutes later. I use a motorbike for transportation, so there were no cars at such an early time, then it was brisk for me to drive.
At first, we visited a fish market at 6 AM. We went to see the morning sun, and the seawater surface was fantastic and beautiful. After that, we enjoyed breakfast; we choose some kinds of fish and bought rice, and made an assorted seafood rice bowl. Of course, it was amazingly delicious.
Next, we went to Matsushima, where is said one of the three most scenic spots in Japan. Matsushima has a unique coastline with pine trees. We climbed a small mountain and the sightseeing was really nice from there. The road was along with the coast, so it was also pleasant to drive there.
Afterward, we enjoyed playing table tennis and eating lunch. It was surprising that it was still in the morning even we had done the activities. Today is the day that I realized "The early bird gets the worm".

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nueli

Oct. 31, 2020

커피

커피는 안 좋아해요. 나에게 너무 쓴있어요,
그런데 커피는 좋아요. 따기하고 로스팅하고 준비가 흥미 있어요. 드맆 커피를 만들 줄 알아요.
그리고 서을은 앤트라사이트 카페에 갔어요! 그기에 예쁜다.

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alamomme

Oct. 31, 2020

Antônia e Manuella – 31 de outubro

Antônia e Manuella são colegas de trabalho em um escritório.
A: Não se esqueça a reunião quinzenal às dez hoje com o João.
M: Meu Deus. Ponha fim a minha miséria agora. Como você fica acordada durante essas reuniões aborrecidas?
A: Bebo muito café forte de antemão.
M: Normalmente finjo fazer anotações. Na verdade, faço desenhos.

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anish

Oct. 31, 2020

もっともっと新しい単語の練習

好きな歌を選んでくれませんか。

A: なんで別のコーヒーを買ってか。
B: さきが冷たぎかったんです。

うちにようこそ。

その彼女はいい例のOLです。

あんなに美人がいないよ。

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leappleeater

Oct. 31, 2020

Vad tror jag kommer att ske på valdagen?

Hej allihopa. Det är färre än en vecka kvar till valet, så jag tänkte berätta om alla möjligheter som kunde ske på valdagen, enligt mig.

Idag så hörde jag att deltagandet i Texas är större nu med förrtidsröstning än under hela 2016, och att deltagandet av ungar här har nått väldigt höga siffror. Om det här stämmer så ser det ganska bra ut för Biden, men ingenting är garanterad i det nuvarande läget. En sak som jag har hört talas om och som oroar många forskare är en så kallad "red mirage". Eftersom det tar ju tid att räkna alla röster som skickas in via post men tar mindre tid att räkna personliga röster, så kan det se ut att Trump kommer att vinna på valdagen (eftersom republikaner antas rösta personligt mer än demokrater), även om Biden vinner när alla röster räknas. Om Trump deklarerar seger på valnatten innan alla röster räknas (som är låter mer troligt nu än någonsin), so kan vår demokrati hotas. Jag har ingen aning vad som kommer att hända, men jag är säkert att det kommer att bli läskigt.

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heavensblade13

Oct. 31, 2020

日本語日記　10月30日

今日は経済のテストがあった。簡単だったけど2時間を掛かった。それから「スクールランブル」を観た。面白いコメディのアニメだ。二人の主人公は片思い相手がいる。ほとんど場面はこの片思いと告白の恥ずかしいから生まれた。でもそれぞれの関係の事情が絶対変わらないからロマンスなアニメではないと思う。

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jfelipes

Oct. 31, 2020

Was ich heute gelernt habe

Samstag,
Tag thirty one. month zehn, Jahr zwanzig

Hallo. Ich heiße Felipe. Ich komme aus Brasilien. Ich sprachen nicht Deutsch (yet)

I've learned - ich lernte - some vocab und eine phrase:
- Draf ich mel diese Beere probiere?
- Ich versprech

Wörten:
- Gefährlich
- die Insel
- der Prüfung
- Bild
- Mensch
- gehen

Guten Nacht,
Tschüss

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alexwong2164

Oct. 31, 2020

80's Movie Music - White Night

Back in 1986 I was watched this movie in UK! (Long time!)

Just watch a lot of 80’s teeth movies clips in You Tube.

80’s music, kids are so cool!

Question: Are you a fans of “so you think you can dance”.

Can you imagine two man dance will be so cool to watch?

This 35 years ago movie.

You can watch many top class dance plus a good story.

35 years later when I watch they dance again.

They are still cool!

Street of fire, dirty dance, St Elmo's fire…Today’s kid do check it out.

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alexwong2164

Oct. 31, 2020

White Night 1986

1986年に私はイギリスへこの映画を観ました。（長い間！）
Back in 1986 I was watched this movie in UK! (Long time!)

先、You Tubeに８０年代ワカモノ映画のクリップを大量が観た。
Just watch a lot of 80’s teeth movies clips in You Tube.

８０年代の音楽、ワカモノがチョウカッコイイですね！
80’s music, kids are so cool!

質問：「so you think you can dance」番組のファンですか？
Question: Are you a fans of “so you think you can dance”.

男子二人をダンスすれば、カッコイイと思いますか？
Can you imagine two man dance will be so cool to watch?

この３５年前にの映画だ。
This 35 years ago movie.

沢山高水準なダンスが見えますし、脚本も素晴らしでした。
You can watch many top class dance plus a good story.

３５年後も彼らのダンス・シーンは一度見た。
35 years later when I watch they dance again.

チョウカッコイイ！
They are still cool!

Street of fire, dirty dance, St Elmo's fire…今のワカモノが是非見てください。
Street of fire, dirty dance, St Elmo's fire…Today’s kid do check it out.

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jfelipes

Oct. 31, 2020

My day

I'm happy because I complete all my tasks, basically learn german. I study in all my free course apps the only thing is missing from my schedule is "Akkusativ pronomen" but don't have a problem with that, I'm tired for now. I watch a little bit of Peppa Pig in german too.
Today I watch Borat. Very funny movie but the sad thing is the movie shows an ugly face from USA. I make some popcorn. I love popcorn, I eat popcorn almost every day.
I chat with my girlfriend. She wants to leave your old job because she finds another one which pays more and works less. I still unemployed but today I looking for work in some schools. I'm a teacher. I'm very hopeful.
I'll listen to some podcast in English until sleep.

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shiera

Oct. 31, 2020

🎃 A Story for Halloween 🎃

I live in a corner apartment on the top floor. There is a balcony attached to the room. Two year have passed since I moved here. I like this room, but yesterday, an annoying person seemed to be moved to my next-door room.
The neighbor's alarm went off at 2 a.m. and continued sounding until 4 a.m. and what is worse, the person often hit the wall. I couldn't sleep last night. I was very sleepy today, so I went to bed earlier than usual. Again, the alarm went off at 2 a.m. I got so angry that I went out and knocked the door of the neighbor. No one came out. No replied. I came back in my room and hit the wall with anger. Then, the neighbor hit back the wall much harder. I got furious so I kicked the wall, yet the neighbor didn't stop it. I gave up and listened to the music with my headphones on.
Morning has come. I called the real estate management company on the phone and complained about the neighbor. Then, he said wonderingly,
"It's strange because no one lives in that room. We don't have any contract with anyone for that room. Maybe you've mistaken it for what the resident on the floor below you did?"
I shouted,
"Impossible! I hit the wall and the neighbor hit it back. Absolutely someone is in the next room!"
Then, the staff said,
"I got it. I'll check through security cameras if someone tresspassed into the room. I'll let you know after our investigation"

I was looking forward to a call from him. I got a call this evening.
"We've checked out and found no one broke into the room. Also, we entered the room actually today, but we couldn't find anything like an alarm watch or a mobile phone"

I thought they cut corners at their investigation.
"Alright! I'll get any evidence by myself!!"

I bound a mirror on the stick for selfie. When the alarm started, I went out to the balcony and saw the room light on. As I expected, someone should be there! I stretched my arm with the stick and looked into the room through the mirror and found no one was there.
I also found the window unlocked. Probably, the management company's staff forgot locking it and turning off the light. I put my phone into a pocket on my jeans to take photos of evidence. I bound the one end of the rope on the fence of my balcony and bound the other on myself. I jumped into the balcony of the next room. I made it and took off the rope. I entered the room and hunted all over the room for the alarm, but I couldn't find it. When I looked back to the window where I entered, I was aware of the outside different from the one I always see.
I went out to the balcony and saw the darkness, all over the outside.
There should be some buildings in front of our apartment, but nothing is there. I can't see anything but darkness. I turned to my room but it disappeared and left the darkness. I turned to the other side. It's the same. Nothing but darkness. Even though looking up and down, I just learn it's darkness. I went to the entrance door and opened. The corridors disappeared and became dark. Looks like I'm in a room floating in an endless outer space.
The rope from my balcony disappeared. I can't go back to my room, to the real world. I took out my phone and tried to call but couldn't. I have no signal. I was at a loss what to do and seated myself on the floor.
Suddenly, the alarm of my phone sounded. It's six o'clock. I usually get up around this time. Tears come out in despair. Why I came here for a trivial thing? I should've ignored it and moved to another room. The alarm was sounding continuously.
Then, I heard someone hit the wall.
"I'm here! Rescue me!"
I hit the wall harder, and then, the person hit back much harder.
"Yes, I'm here! Rescue me!!"
I continued hitting the wall, but the person stopped hitting.
"I'm here! I'm here!! Please rescue me!! Please!!"
I'm still hitting the wall.

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Aviva

Oct. 31, 2020

30 откября

Завтра я должна добавить некоторые слова в моих карточках. К счастью, я нашла новое приложение, где можно читать короткие тексты по-русски и слушать произношение. Я собираюсь выучить выражения и использовать их когда я говорю с Колей. Это будет отличная разговорной речи.

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fabledlamb

Oct. 31, 2020

Tallando un nabo

Hoy después del trabajo llamé mi amigo y pasamos la tarde tallando calabacines. En verdad solo él tuvo un calabacín. Yo estaba cortando un nabo. Mi amigo dibujó “la chica con una arena de perla” de Vermeer, pero yo quería algo más gracioso y elegí hacer un mini cabeza de Shrek. Creo que lo suyo es arte verdadero. Disfruté pasar tiempo con él.

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eimik

Oct. 31, 2020

かぼちゃ

明日、ハロウィンです。私はかぼちゃを有しません。でも、私達はクーキを有します。

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Rose

Oct. 31, 2020

La Semaine Dernière

La semaine dernière était une bonne semaine. Le temps devenais plus froid. J'aime vraiment les saisons froids. Généralement, je n'aime pas l'été parce que il est trop chaud.

J'ai lu un livre très intéressant le semaine dernière. La livre a parlé de géopolitique. J'ai appris beaucoup de choses sur la monde. Il y a des faits intéressants partout. Mon deux chapitres préférés ont parlé la Russie et le Moyen-Orient. Je veux lire plus livres géopolitiques.

J'ai regardé une bonne série française aussi. La série est horreur et j'adore le horreur ! La série s'appelle Marianne and je le regarde sur Netflix. Marianne est une sorcière et la actrice est vraiment effrayante !

J'espère que la semaine prochaine est bonne aussi. Je veux être très productive.

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_andy_

Oct. 31, 2020

Ich habe am Freitag einen Termin im Krankenhaus

Ich habe am Freitag einen Termin im Krankenhaus St Marien, aber Ich kann nicht kommen.
I muss meine Tochter zur Schule bringen.
Kann ich um 10 UHR Kommen?

Ich bitta um Antwort.

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