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Schreiben B1 Teil 1 Film beschreiben
Lieber Hoang,
wie geht es dir? Hoffentlich geht es dir gut. Wie du weißt, bin ich letzte Woche ins Kino gegangen. Deswegen schreibe ich dir diese E-Mail, um dir von dem Film zu erzählen. Du kannst dir nicht vorstellen, wie interessant der Film war. Aufgrund des letzten Teiles der Avengers-Filmreihe waren die Tickets sehr schnell ausverkauft. Ich musste warten, um das Ticket online zu buchen. Natürlich hat es sich gelohnt, da ich völlig in den Inhalt des Films vertieft war. Darüber hinaus waren die Effekte und Charaktere im Film sehr attraktiv, was zum Erfolg des Films beigetragen hat. Aus diesem Grund habe ich vor, nächste Woche einen ähnlichen Film anzusehen. Hast du Lust darauf? Ich freue mich sehr darauf, es mit dir anzusehen.
Antworte mir bald!
Viele Grüße
Hoang
June 15, 2024
Venerdì 31 maggio 2024
Martedì 28 maggio 2024
Stamattina mia figlia e la sua classe del liceo sono andate all'Università di Yamanashi. Non è troppo lontano, ma sono dovuto portarla alla stazione alle cinque e mezza.
Mercoledì 29 maggio 2024
Il processo di Donald Trump è finalmente finito. Adesso aspettiamo solo il verdetto della giuria. Mi sembra di leggere la storia della Bibbia in cui Abramo negozia con il Signore: "Se riesco a trovare 20 uomini virtuosi risparmierai Sodoma et Gomorra? Che ne dici di 15 uomini? . . . Che ne dici di 12 newyorchesi?" Odiava la mia educazione religiose, ma almeno ho imparato le storie della Bibbia.
Venerdì 31 maggio 2024
Colpevole! Colpevole! Colpevole! La giuria di New York ha trovato il mafioso presidente Donald Trump colpevole su tutti i 34 capi d'imputazione! Wow! Non avrei mai pensato che questa sarebbe mai successo.
June 15, 2024
Schönheitsoperationen
Das Thema Schönheitsoperationen wird heutzutage in der Gesellschaft und in den Medien viel diskutiert und umstritten ist.
Ich habe vor, in Folgendem eine persönliche Ansicht dazu darzustellen und weitere Möglichkeiten zu erwähnen.
Zuerst möchte ich darauf hinweisen, dass viele Menschen heutzutage Schönheitsoperationen machen, weil sie denken, dass mit dieser sowohl schöner als auch junger werden.
Meiner Meinung nach führen die steigende Zahl von Schönheitsoperation auf verschiedene Faktoren und Gründe zurück.
Einerseits lassen viele Menschen sich operieren, weil sie mit ihrem Körper oder ihrem Gesicht nicht zufrieden.
Andererseits spielt der gesellschaftliche Druck eine Rolle, der durch soziale Medien und unrealistische Ideal verstärkt wird.
Außerdem tragen technologische Fortschritte und die zunehmende Verfügbarkeit von Operation dazu bei.
Meiner Meinung nach gibt es jedoch andere Möglichkeiten, um das eigene Aussehen zu verbessern, ohne sich einer Operation zu lassen. Beispielsweise könnte man eine gesunde Ernährung, regelmäßige Bewegung und Natur Kosmetik verwenden.
Der Vorteil von Sport und einer gesunden Ernährung liegt auf der Hand, bleibt man fit und gesund, weil das Immunsystem gestärkt wird.
Zum Schluss möchte ich sagen, dass man auf jeden Fall der Vorteile mit den Nachteilen berücksichtigen sollte, bevor eine Operation machen lässt.
June 15, 2024
Netflix
I canceled my Netflix subscription because I couldn't find anything truly interesting for me. The only new series I enjoyed was the Japanese animation "Delicious in Dungeon."
The deal breaker for me was when they removed "The IT Crowd," one of my favorite comedy shows. I have already finished the series, but classics like this are worth revisiting. They also removed "Hannibal" and "How I Met Your Mother."
Maybe this is the downside of streaming platforms—we never truly own our favorite shows.
June 15, 2024
Sabato 15 giugno
Mi sono svegliata più tardi del solito. In fondo, è sabato e non ho bisogno di una sveglia. Ho letto finché non mi sono addormentata.
Sto bevendo una tazza di caffè e sto pianificando la giornata. Fra poco farò colazione e poi studierò un po'. Voglio fare alcune prove online in italiano e divertirmi mentre le faccio.
All'inizio impararlo era un hobby, ma dopo qualche tempo è diventato un obiettivo. Purtroppo sono perfezionista e studio spesso la stessa cosa finché non la so benissimo. Ovviamente il progresso è più lento, ma da oggi voglio imparare l'italiano di più.
In fondo, sbaglio anche nella mia lingua madre e tutte le persone sbagliano quando parlo la seconda o terza lingua. Non c'è nessun problema, non siamo robot.
Mi dimentico sempre che imparare qualsiasi cosa è una maratona, non uno sprint e bisogna che mi prenda il mio tempo.
June 15, 2024
冷凍庫を解凍すること
昨日は冷蔵庫を解凍することに決めた。僕が知る限りでは氷の大きい分量とき、冷気が氷を保つことに費やされるから、食べ物自体には冷気が減らす。だから、昨日冷凍庫では氷菓が凍る代わりに、逆に溶けた。冷凍庫を解凍するのが良いと思ったけど、その前に問題の規模が存しなかった。冷凍庫は自動そうすると教えてもらって、信じた。その沢山の水が冷蔵庫から流れたが、冷蔵庫の後ろに住む蟲は自分たちのタイタニックの版があったかもしれない。僕も苦しんだ。床を拭き取る後に立ち上がりながら頭でほぼ僕の身長にある冷凍庫の扉の角を打った。簡単な試験だけが残ることは良いと思った。食べ物は一応で隣人の冷凍庫に運んだ。僕の寝る時間の前に冷凍庫が解凍されてしまうと考えたけど、これが違った。冷凍庫が解凍されることは全て夜に放った。起こった後にはまたそこで氷があった。氷は当然夕べより小さい分量で、この状態自体に驚いた。
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June 15, 2024
Les locutions concernant l'actualité
Comment dit-on 救援物資 (ce qu'on envoie aux zones touchées, d'objets nécessaires, de la nourriture, de l'eau etc.) en français ? Dans mon dictionnaire, je trouve « matériel de secours » mais je suppose qu'il y a une autre tournure.
Au fait, demain, je vais passer un examen de français dans lequel il y aura les questions à propos de locutions liées à l'actualité. Il me faudrait donc m'y connaître en vocabulaire en matière de guerre, de séisme et d'olympiques.
June 15, 2024
Fanatismus
Tatsache ist, dass eine Leidenschaft für ein Thema zu haben vorteilhaft sein kann. Ihr besitz führt uns eigentlich dazu, eine überflussige Motivation für die Auseinandersetzung mit einem Thema zu entwickeln. Infolgedessen wird beilspielseise der Lernenprozess weitaus erleichtert. Die Entwicklung einer Leidenschaft ist also im Studiumbereich sowie im beruflichen Bereich zu befürworten.
Dennoch gibt es ebenfalls Lebensbereiche, in denen intensive Begeisterung Probleme verusachen kann. In diesen Umfelden mag eine ungeheure Leidenschaft in einen Fanatismus umwandeln. Besonders betroffen sind in der Politik und in der Religion. Politiker und religiöse Leiter neigen dazu, über ein asschlaggebendes Charisma zu verfügen, das ihre Anhänger berauscht. Zudem ist dieser Sachverhalt in Kunst zu beobachten, wo künstler auf ihre Audienz viel Einfluss nehmen.
Wie erwähnt mag ein Besessein von einer Idee Angelegenheiten hervorufen. Dazu gehört die Einschränkung der Rationalität. Wenn man total von einer Idee besessen ist, muss alles sich nach der angenommen Auffassung ausrichten. Außerdem wird der verinnerlichte Glaube oftmals zu einem Paradigma, außerhalbdessen ein Räsonement nicht erlaubt wird.
Wegen dieser negativen Aspekte mussen entgegenwirkende Maßnahmen ergriffen werden. Ein gutes Besilspiel dafür ist eine ausfürhliche Verarbeitung erhaltener Information. Diese Vorkehrung bringt davon ab, leichtgläubig zu sein. Weiterhin sollte die Regierung danach streben, Bildung der gesamten Bevölkerung zur Verfügung zu stellen. Weil es eine negative Korrelation zwischen dem Bildungsgrad und der Leichtgläubigkeit gibt.
June 15, 2024
14.06.24
È passato un po’ di tempo da quando ho fatto la mia composizione scorsa, mi dispiace. È stato un paio di settimane impegnate per me. Due settimane fa mi sono candidata per un corso di laurea magistrale in Italia, e dopo essere stata offerta un colloquio di ammissione avevo solo una settimana per studiare un sacco di testi inerenti il contenuto del colloquio. Durante questo periodo anche ho dovuto prepararmi per la mia cerimonia di laurea: trovare qualcosa da indossare, prendere il tocco e la toga, etc. Felicemente è andato tutto bene; ho avuto un bel weekend per celebrare la fine dell’esperienza universitaria, e la mia domanda per la laurea magistrale è riuscita. Ora prendo un po’ di tempo per riposarmi avanti di prendere il prossimo passo.
June 15, 2024
June 15, 2024
14/06 Unhealthy Food: opinion essay :)
After solving the problem of producing enough food for the planet, modern societies are struggling with eating nutritious food. Manufactured food with its high levels of sugar are increasing the rate of people with obesity and over weight. Some people think that making processed food more expensive will be a solution to encourage people to consume less sugar. Although I partially agree, I also think that other complementary measures are needed.
To begin, in some countries, the cost of eating healthy is so expense that making the price of processing food higher will have a minimal effect on consumer's decisions. In Canada, for example, a hamburger and a soda cost less than half the price of buying healthy prepared food. For that reason, I think that besides increasing the price of manufactured food and drink products with high levels of sugar, it is also necessary to reduce the price of healthy food.
Furthermore, people need to understand the importance of changing their food habits to improve their health, otherwise prices won't have any relevant effect. The government need to increase efforts to create campaigns in favor of eating nutritive food in schools and work places. When people understand that eating better have a lot of advantages, they will spend more money in those products that helps them to have the life they want.
In conclusion, reducing the consumer of food and drinks with high levels of sugar require far more than increasing prices. It also needs education and healthy food more accessible.
June 15, 2024
本の表紙と感情
読書をすることがあんまりないのに、綺麗な表紙を目にしたらついその本を買ってしまう傾向があります。
人生の中でも、表側が綺麗だったら一目で実体のわからないことを選んでしまう傾向があるかもしれません。（僕は）
もしそうなら、考え方を変えたほうがいいんですよね。まだそのせいで悪いことは何も起こっていませんけど、「まだ」起こっていないからといって「起こらない」わけではありません。
複数の道があればしっかり考えてから選ばないと。
しっかり考えた（考えすぎた）方が損するようなこともあると思いますけどね。例えば、感情。対応の仕方はしっかり考えた方がいいかもしれませんけど、感情自体は深く考えれば考えるほど逆にモヤモヤになってしまって分からなくなります。
ホワイトボードがあったとしましょう。ホワイトボードが汚れていて、そこに書いてある文字がよく読めない状態であっても、それ以上手を加えることで文字が明らかになることはありません。マーカーで線を引いては汚れになり、汚れを消しては文字も消されてしまいます。慎重にやれば汚れだけ消して元の文字のかけらをもとに文字にすることができたとしても、それからなる文字が本当に元の文字なのか、線がいいように重なっただけなのかわかりようがありません。そもそも汚れと文字を簡単に分けることができません。
感情も同様に、見つけるヒントが脳自体にあるので、見つけようとしては見つからなくなります。今はそう思うけど、昔から感情のよくわからないほうだったので、初めはより信頼できると感じていた「考えること」で見つけようとしました。でも、それで感情が明らかになることはなく、（例えばことへの反応の記憶から論づけようとしたら、記憶の正確さも証明しようともできなかったし）逆に元よりも分からなかったのが結構あって、辞めることにしました。
June 14, 2024
Oilseed Rape
When I was a child, I lived in a small village.
To the south of my village, there was a small river flowing eastward.
To south of the river, there was a village named Dali village.
Between each village and the river there was farmland. The distance from each village to the river was about 600 meters.
The river separated the farmland of the two villages. The farmland on the south side of the river belonged to Dali village. The farmland on the north side belonged to my village.
One year in spring, we children found that a new kind of plant that looked like vegetables was planted in the farmland on the south of the river. Soon we got to know it was oilseed rape and were told it tasted good if you cooked it with noodles.
At that time, people's living conditions in the countryside were very bad. We couldn't even eat fresh vegetables.
One day, a few other children and I decided to get some of the oilseed rape to see how delicious it would be.
We crawled into the oilseed rape field near the south side of the river. Only after we had picked one or two of the oilseed rape, we suddenly heard some adults shouting from a far place, "don't run, we will catch you, little thief!"
We immediately ran to our village as soon as we heard the shouting. I felt my heart almost beating out of my chest.
In the end, we were all safe. We didn't see any adults chasing after us. Maybe, they just wanted to frighten us.
Before we sneaked into the oilseed rape field, we had done enough reconnaissance work and made sure that no one was guarding the oilseed rape field.
Even now, I sometimes wonder where the adults were and how they spotted us.
June 14, 2024
My Challenging Ninth Post
This post is the most challenging so far because I’m really tired, It’s very late, I have just a few minutes to get away with it and I had to correct 15 posts at least to get a sufficient ratio to be allowed to post a new text.
And I really need to take a shower before going to bed!
So I’m sorry for my gentle correctors, I’m not giving you anything interesting to read today! The thing is: I received a lot of new corrections for my previous posts today and because I have to correct twice as many posts before I can write a new one, I didn’t event take time to read these new corrections!!! That’s so insane!
But today was a very special day. I was uncommonly busy. I’ll take time to read everything later.
The most important thing is that my streak is safe !!
:D Have a good day, you all!
June 14, 2024
最近の出来事
今年の秋から大学一年生になります。授業はまだ始まっていません。
課程は大学に決められていて、スケジュールが不便です。
最近、毎日日本語で書くことにしています。
喋り方、書き方の不自然なところに気づく時が結構あるけど、直し方が分からなくて。つまり、この表現は不自然だ！となんとなく感じることができるけど、代わりになれる自然な表現はわからないということだと思います。ですので（自然な表現をする能力は中々自分だけでは身につけないことなので）、今日からはLangCorrectを使おうと。
火曜日は大学に日本語の試験があります。問題の種類や難度さえわからなくて、どんな準備をすればいいのかわかりません。初めは、下手な漢字の書き方を覚えようとしましたが、この試験なら多分全然書けなくてもいいと友達に言われた（大学が教わらないらしい）ので、その代わりに会話の練習をしています。まぁ、その、えっと、つもりでしたけど。昨日からは胃の具合が良くなくてあんまり会話をする気にはなれません。まだ試験日まで時間があります。
June 14, 2024
インバウン丼
Last Wednesday, my husband and I went to豊洲 and visited a tourist spot called 千客万来, which opened last March and has been attracting a lot of tourists from both home and abroad. Shortly before, we watched a TV program featuring high-priced seafood dishes, called インバウン丼, which are served at 千客万来. It is very popular for foreign visitors who are eager to eat 海鮮丼 in Japan. However, it’s appalling that just a bowl of sushi-rice with slices of raw tuna, some sea urchin and ikura costs several thousand yen. Nevertheless, we thought that it was worth trying. Also, I was impressed by its namingインバウン丼 (inbound + donburi). The shop was not so spacious, with only 10 seats by the counter. We entered the shop as soon as it opened at 10 o’clock, but it quickly became full. We ordered the one with second highest price at 6,400yen, and we had half each. The portion was not enough, but it was enough in terms of our house budget, and I found it amazingly tasty. The couple next to us ordered the most expensive dish on the menu at 18,000 yen, in which 大トロ and a lot of sea urchin were piled up high. They were incessantly taking photos. It must look great on Instagram.
June 14, 2024
家に上がる
僕はサスペンス番組を見て思ったんです。何か事件らしいものが起こった時、関係者が家や建物に入る時は無防備で注意深くない状態で臨むことが多くあります。例えば、妻が家に戻って「ただいま」と言うと同時に、血の滴りが散らかっている状態に気づいて、夫に何かあったのかという疑いを持って家へ入り込みます。妻は夫を見つけるように行動します。しかし、実在の話でしたら犯人がまだいるという可能性がかなり高いです。それでも、妻は武器とかを一応手に入れて、慎重に夫を探すなんて真似はまずしないんです。多くの場合、番組では（この例では妻という）発見者の身に何も起こらないけど、作者はただそういう細かいところを略すために、その危険性を都合よく無視していると思います。実際の話でしたら、注意深く犯人がまだいるという可能性をよく考えて行動するようお勧めします。
June 14, 2024
J'ai paniqué à parler français ce matin
Salut à tous,
J'ai paniqué à parler français ce matin parce que je n'avais pas acheté le bon billet de train pour aller au Château de Versailles. Alors, j'ai demandé à ChatGPT et aux membres d'Easy French quelques conseils pour m'en sortir.
ChatGPT m'a donné plusieurs phrases pour cette situation :
1. Donnez-moi un moment.
2. Je suis un peu nerveuse.
3. Pouvez-vous répéter, s'il vous plaît ?
4. Donnez-moi un moment, s'il vous plaît ?
5. Je suis désolée, je perds mes mots.
6. Merci de votre patience.
7. Je ne comprends pas bien, pouvez-vous expliquer ?
8. Un instant, s'il vous plaît ?
9. Je réfléchis.
10. Je suis un peu perdue.
11. Je n'ai pas saisi.
12. Pouvez-vous m'aider ?
13. Je cherche le mot juste.
14. Je suis désolée pour l'erreur.
15. Pardon, je me suis trompée.
Un membre d'Easy French m'a dit, "Je pense qu'on avait paniqué parler français avec les natifs ; c'est normal. Je suis coupable absolument de cela."
J'essaierai de parler ces phrases quand j'irai à l'auberge de jeunesse ce soir. D'ailleurs, j'ai parlé français avec plus de confiance avec les natifs à Versailles, même s'ils ont voulu me parler en anglais au début. J'ai réussi à commander une quiche lorraine et c'était excellent.
J'ai également pris des photos au Château de Versailles. À 15 h 00, je prendrai le train pour aller au Louvre. J'espère utiliser le bon billet de train cette fois-ci.
À la prochaine !
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Como aproveitar as pontes?
Eu acho que pode ser meio difícil aproveitar as pontes porque, realmente, não são muito tempo. Você só tem um, talvez dois, dias adicionais no fim-de-semana e é muito fácil desperdiçar esse tempo. Então, a primeira coisa é ter um plano. Você quer uma ponte relaxada em casa para recarregar ou você quer fazer alguma coisa, tipo uma viagem ou trabalhinho especial? Uma vez que você decide, então é questão de criar e seguir um horário ou um itinerário. Meu grande problema é que eu falo que vou fazer alguma coisa durante as pontes mas não tenho nem itinerário nem plano, então fico desperdiçando o tempo até voltar ao trabalho.
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