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July 13, 2025
I really love sunrise.
Maybe I prefer sunrice than sunset. Because for example you are walking all day and in the end you`re going home and see sunset, a lot of people can see sunset but if you want to see sunrise you will get up so early and for me sunrise is privater than sunset. You see how night ends and a new day starts. Morning is so quiet, you can think about something but evening has a lot of people, sounds of cars.
July 13, 2025
Ché mi evoca l'italiano?
Questa domanda interessante in tedesco parla delle relazioni tra le lingue che parlo e i sentimenti o pensieri che mi evocano. Parlo qualche lingua, perciò qui mi concenrerò solo sull'italiano.
Dire che l'italiano è la lingua della bellezza e della leggerezza è un luogo comune. Mi sembra vero, ma l'italiano, e soprattutto alcuni dei propri dialetti, sono anche le lingue romanze più silimari al latino. Dalla lingua di Cicerone hanno ereditato una dignità e una gravità (nel senso romano) rimarcabili. In generale, l'italiano mi evoca qualcosa di bello, raffinato, di molto civilizzato.
La mia madrelingua è anche romanza, quindi è interessante per me osservare le differenze. Per esemio, in italiano c'è l'aggettivo "scolastico". In francese, tutte le cose collegate con una scuola sono "scolaires". "Scolastique" esiste, ma si riferisce alla filosofia medievale basata sull'insegnamento di Aristotele! Ogni volta che vedo "trasporto scolastico", mi immagino un vecchio dalla barba bianca che sale sul bus per spiegare la teoria aristotelica delle quattro cause, con i poveri giovani strappati dal telefono pensando: "ma ché minchia sta dicendo il nonno!?"
Una parte della domanda siginfica "ti piaccino il cibo o la gente (collegati con la cultura di questa lingua)?", e la risposta è sì, naturalmente! Non conosco una persona nel mondo che non ami la cocina italiana. Personalmente, non sono un appassionato del minestrone (preferisco le zuppe francesi) e della polenta... Bene, posso mangiare della polenta, ma non è mi cosa preferita. Tuttavia, tutto il resto mi pare una delizia!
Per quanto riguarda alla gente, devo dire che globalmente, i miei contatti con gli italiani sono stati moltissimo positivi e cordiali.
July 13, 2025
今一番欲しいもの
今一番欲しいものは、Kindle Colorsoftです。
去年からずっと発売を待っています。普段、Kindle はアメリカで発売されてから半年後にインドで発売されます。でも、同時に発売されたPaperwhiteモデルは買えますがColorsoftはまだ買えません。理由は知りません。でも去年の12月に、アメリカで製造上の不具合が報告されたという記事を読みました。そのせいで製造が遅れているのかもしれません。
海外から買う選択肢もありますが、保証が心配です。
次のセール時期は8月で、独立記念日に関係しています。できれば、その頃までに発売されてほしいです。今使っている10年前のvoyageはかなり古くなっています。
July 13, 2025
Se relâcher
Je regarde le ciel bleu. De grands nuages passent lentement, plus lentement encore que la marche. Sur mon balcon, trois abeilles viennent me rendre visite. Elles sont dodues, recouvertes d’un duvet épais, comme si elles portaient un gilet de velours jaune. Je prends une grande inspiration, puis j’expire lentement, savourant cet instant de vide.
Nous sommes doués pour nous concentrer, mais ne sommes-nous pas un peu maladroits quand il s’agit de nous détendre ? Si une corde est toujours tendue, elle finit par se casser. Il en va de même pour nous.
Au Japon, il existe des expressions comme « ki wo yashinau » (nourrir son énergie vitale), « eiki wo yashinau » (reprendre des forces). Des mots anciens… et pourtant, aujourd’hui, ils semblent avoir perdu leur place. Notre énergie est limitée, et nous devons apprendre à la régénérer. Il nous faut aussi la sagesse d’en prendre soin, de l’utiliser avec délicatesse, et d’éviter ce qui l’épuise. À l’école, on ne nous apprend pas à créer un cercle vertueux de notre propre énergie.
Et vous, comment faites-vous pour relâcher la pression ?
July 13, 2025
Domenica 13 luglio
Mi godo gli ultimi giorni di ferie. Sono stati meravigliosi e mi sento davvero come se fossi un'altra persona. Ho finito di leggere tre libri e ne ho iniziato un altro.
Sono cresciuta un po' più di prima e ho trovato una forma di pace. Ho imparato che se non mi prendo cura di me stessa, non posso prendermi cura di altre cose.
Ho anche iniziato un nuovo hobby manuale: il ricamo. C'è qualcosa di sereno nel cucire senza pensieri.
Spero che la sensazione di tranquillità che ho inseguito continui anche dopo il mio ritorno al lavoro.
July 13, 2025
Why people are longer live now than past ?
People want to longer live for past years.For this,they always try various methods.However they sometimes success,they sometimes unsuccess. As a result of this try methods,people are longer live now than past years
There are two main reasons of why people are longer live now are improving and developing health systems and increasing number of riches person.
The first main reason of wyh people are longer live now is that improving and developing health systems. People was try various methods for living longer . As a result of this methods , people improve new and very big health systems. These health systems so benefical for people health and longer live. I think that these systems the most important cause of people are longer live now.However people are so careful while they use these systems because if bad people use health systems for own purposes,these systems very dangerous and harmful for world.
The second main reson of why are longer live now is that increasing comfort and number of riches person.Nowadays,world is improving and growing various areas.For example technology,science,politics... As a result of these developments, people are getting riches. İncreasing number of riches person is causing people think about living longer. People are more comfortable spent their money for living longer.İf they are get richer, they are more spent money.Consequently increasing number of riches person and growing world’s economy is causing people are longer live now.
İn conclusion,people everytime want to longer live.They are very worked for this situation and they are working contiunes(past,now,future).Now, people are longer live than past years.There have two main and importanr reasons;first reason is developing and improving health systems. These systems are supported by people want to idea of living longer. Second reason is increasing number of riches person. This situation is causing people think about living longer. The due to situation, people are so careful about living longer because these reasons can damage people's life.
July 13, 2025
Gym club
Write an email to a friend. Write your feelings about the notice and suggest possible alternatives.
Hi Pauline,
How are you these days? I hope you’re going well. Have you heard about the newest club’s notice? Honestly, i felt suprised and frustrated that they decide to increse membership fees and close the gym than usual for the next weeks! I don’t like it at all because you know i’m a busy woman and just available afte 5p.m. Besides, i have just inscript to their new yoga course just one week ago. If i knew it sooner, i’d rather choose the gym near to my house than this.
Your friend,
Harriet.
July 13, 2025
Lieblingsort in meiner Stadt
Mein Lieblingsort in meiner Stadt ist der Stadtpark.
Er ist sehr schön und ruhig.
Es gibt viele Bäume, Blumen und einen kleinen See.
Ich gehe oft dorthin, um spazieren zu gehen oder ein Buch zu lesen.
Der Park ist nicht weit von meinem Haus.
Ich mag diesen Ort, weil ich dort entspannen kann, und die Natur liebe.
Manchmal treffe ich auch meine Freunde dort.
July 13, 2025
They're Trying, I Resist!
I got my first computer when I was 8, so I started gathering experience with IT stuff pretty early and because I met so many people I learned there's a scammer around every corner. Fake emails, fake links, fake people, and of course there are scammers not just on the internet. So I learned the ultimate rule: don't touch it if you don't know it. Because of this they couldn't scam me and others around me. So the answer is no, I have never been scammed. Or maybe I have? It depends on what we mean by scamming.
Here's the thing. Over time I realized that not all scams come with fake emails or strange links. Some of them smile at you, shake your hand, and look you in the eye.
People can be scams too. They pretend to care, to be honest, to be someone they’re not. That’s a different kind of scam, I know. It's emotional, human, and way more damaging. And the worst part? It's so much harder to recognize.
So maybe I've been scammed after all. Depends.
July 13, 2025
Garden club group's chat
Hi welcome to the club. Can you tell me something about your garden?
Absolutely, our garden is located at the east of X college. Everyone can come and visit us at 7am to 6pm every Tuesday and Friday. We have planted flowers and turn it to a very beautiful botanical garden, which you can come and have some pictures with it. Everyone’s welcomed!
Welcome! Is gardening very popular in your country?
Of course, my coutnry is known as country of plating where all natural factors (Climat, temperature, soil, etc) are suitable for creating new form of nature life. Me and my friends, we all have our own little garden at home to take care of.
What’s your favorite season, and why do you like it?
Spring is my all-time favorite season ever! Since i’m a gardener, i always consider spring as a perfect time for flowers to bloom. This creates a very beautiful scenery that i have to take a thousand of pictures about my little garden at this season.
July 13, 2025
Free time and interests
Please write here about your free time and interests?
In my free time, i usually spend hours to draw and crochet. These activities can be considered as creative and relaxing , since i can challenge myseld to create new things. Beside, i’m also interested in listenting to the music, especially Japanese music. Its melody and rythm are very uniques and differents, so i always like listening to it whenever possible.
July 13, 2025
Do you like your bosses and supervisors at work?
Actually I don't like my boss because his sense is still old. He believes that all people who work in office should go to drink alcohol together so that they get along well. However I can't drink at all. I'm often said by him to go to drink, and it's very bothersome.
July 13, 2025
''Perfect Days''
Vor 8 Monaten habe ich mir einen japanischen Film angesehen, der ''Perfect Days'' heißt.
Die Handlung erzählt über Hirajama, ein fünfzigjähriger Toilettenreiniger aus Tokio. Obwohl er keinen Traumberuf hat, genießt er seinen Job und schätzt jede Kleinigkeit in seinem Leben. Hirajama hat einen festen Alltag. Jeden Morgen gießt er seine Blumen und bereitet sich auf den Arbeitstag vor. Er fährt mit einem kleinen Auto zur Arbeit und hört gerne Musik. Abends fährt Hirajama rad und besucht seinen Lieblingsrestaurant. Er liebt Fotografie und liest Bücher vor dem Schlafgehen. Im Laufe der Geschichte gibt es keine gravienderen Handlungen. Stattdessen fokussiert sich der Film daran, ruhige Momente des Alltags zu zeigen.
Ich werde nicht behaupten, dass dieser Film mein Leben geändert hat, weil es stark übertrieben wäre. Nichtsdestotrotz fand ich ''Perfect Days'' inspirierend. Der Film hat mich daran erinnert, dass sogar tägliche Nichtigkeiten wirklich schön sind und dass man sie nicht übersehen sollte. Nachdem ich mir den Film angesehen hatte, habe ich angefangen, die Ruhe mehr wertzuschätzen und meinen Alltag mehr zu genießen.
July 13, 2025
Som intentions and plans
I have the intention to move way to Canada through the express entry program but their is some obstacles in front of me now.
I have that my age is good enough to make me selected from the program’s, my education and job experience is also good enough to make me getting the invitation or the selection.
But, the only problem I have is that my level in French and English.
So, I need to improve myself in both languages to reach at least c1 one level.
Moreover, I need your recommendations and advices to help solve this problem in my life so please help me all of you by giving me all sources and advices to reach my goal.
July 13, 2025
Podomoro Technique
I think I found that technique when I was at secondary school (7-9 grade)
Basically, it's one of the most useful, effective way to manage time and study/work for me.
It's a time management which has 25 minutes to focus, 5 minutes break.
Firstly, to avoid being overwhelmed, instead of focusing in 2-6 long hours work sessions.
You can set the timer, focus for a period of time, then have a break, do whatever you want, then go back a another session.
Secondly, you can break it down into small tasks.
Instead of a big task like "learning English", break into maybe: study 50 flashcards, create 20 flashcards, write a paragraph to post onto LangCorrect, watch English series, read 10 pages of a fiction book.
You can either put these into each 25 minutes, or if a task is consume more than that, do that task for 2-3 sessions.
Tips: You can adjust the timer of focus and break, e.g. 50' focus 10' break, or 10' work 10' break.
Try whatever works for you.
Or if you find that not suitable, forget it. It's just one of the tools, and tools is to make value, give more producitve to people.
(I'm using "focus" too much, do you have any alternative words instead?)
July 13, 2025
¿Que se necesita hacer para aprender una lengua extranjera?
Se necesita sumergirse en esa lengua tanto como posible, ver películas, leer libros, escuchar música, escribir diario y practicar con los nativos. Mucha gente olvida de hablar así que no pueden construir oraciones con fluidez, eso es muy importante. Por ejemplo me gusta grabar mi voz y hablar sobre cosas varias y contestar preguntas aleatorias. Se puede escucharlo después y también mejorar el acento.
July 13, 2025
文法の練習
1. 今日は朝だけ涼しいで、昼も夜も暑すぎだ。
2. この飴はおいしいだけでなく、値段も安い。
3. この辺の物件は静かなだけでなく、景色も美しい。
4. スポーツは見るだけでは、技術を上がるわけではない。
5. 今回の試験は合格したことにしますが、今度はちゃんと勉強してください。
6. 散歩したつもりで、買い物してもらいませんか。
7. こんな難しい仕事は、だれだって失敗しても珍しいことじゃないよ。
8. カレーライスだってこんなにまずいなら、お客さんが来ないのはとうぜんのことだ。
9. たとえいくら大変でも、私は必ずこの問題をやり続きます。
10. 先生ならさっき出かけたばかりなので、今近いところにいるんだと思います。
11. そんな暑い日に、外出のたびに汗がいっぱい出る。
12. タバコを吸わないほうがいいよ、ここは禁煙エリアですから。
July 13, 2025
Mi estación favorita V.2
Me gusta el nvierno porque es frío y tiene muchas nubes. me encanta la lluvia de invierno, pero nunca nevará porque estoy vivo en california. En el invierno no hay muchas frescas frutas ni vegetales como en primavera. pero tampoco tiene alergias. aún así, el invierno no es mi estación favorita.
Me gusta la primavera porque ofrece mejor comida. Tiene el inicio de temporada de mangos y piñas. Ofrece vegetales frescos y bonitas flores. La primavera es una excelente tiempo para caminar in el montanas. primavera tiene muchas garrapatas, especialmente este primavera. pero no es mi estación favorita.
En verano, no hay escuela. tengo mucho tiempo divertido con mis amigos. voy a la playa, el lago, y la piscina. Pero esta muy caliente. en mi región, el verano se alcanzan tempuraturas muy altas durante este tiempo. esto significa estoy adentro mucho porque tengo sensibilidad a el calor. para este razon, verano no es mi estación favorita. Actualmente, es mi estación menos favorita.
Pero otoño es mi estación favorita. es muy bonita, su tempuratura perfecto, y tiene comida deliciousa.
Me encanta la calabaza de otono, las peras, y los pomelos. En el otono puedo cocinar mis comidas favoritos con vegetales y carnes. ¡También es la estación perfecta para el curry!
El otoño es la estación perfecta para caminar en cualquier lugar. me encanta la lluvia y especialmente, me encanta caminar bajo lluvia. los dias de lluvia son perfectos para leer, hacer senderismo, y beber café o té.
Claro, los colores de otoño es bonito tambien. mientras los arboles perennes nunca cambian sus colores, los arboles caducos cambian sus colores a los bonitos rojos, anaranjados, y amarillos. Estos son mis colores favoritos. Los colores del otono se parecen a las llamas. Me siento naturaleza es vivo en este estación.
Edit:
como usar los accentos? no tengo accentos en mi computadora. Que puedo hacer para usar accentos en mi computadora?
July 13, 2025
Necesito un descanso
Sé que dije escribiré sobre mi viaje, pero mi salud mental no es el mejor ahora mismo, porque de razones que no quiero decir sobre en un lugar público así. No creo que puedo publicar estas publicaciones por ahora, y tal vez necesito un descanso de español por ahora. Tal vez necesito algunos días o una semana, pero no quiero hacer publicaciones hasta siento mejor. Adiós por ahora.
July 13, 2025
教科書：文化の壁
アメリカは移住者の国だと知られています。確かにアメリカは多文化の国なのにもかかわらず、文化の壁があります。僕の町ではその文化の壁を取り払うために、Hispanics of Today and Tomorrow（HOTT）という現地の団体は毎年ダウンタウンで「Cinco de Mayo」と「Dia de los Muertos」という祝日のイベントを行います。町でもベトナムの料理は人気がありつつあります。父はアメリカ人にとってベトナムの料理が苦手だと思っているけど、僕はむしろ最近アメリカ人が「Bánh Mì」や「Phở」というなどの料理が食べらるのを気が付きました。そのイベントや食事を通じて、繋いでお互いを理解し合えます。多様性からこそ強くなります。嬉しいことに、僕の国では色々な文化を体験できます。
July 13, 2025
July 13, 2025
Ultimo giorno in mare
Oggi non abbiamo molto energia, eravamo un po' stanchi. Stamattina mia zia e io siamo andati in palestra (gym?), e prima abbiamo corso sulla spiaggia. Dopo abbiamo fatto colazione, e dopo nuotiamo in piscina fino al pomeriggio. Dopo siamo andati alla spiaggia e finalmente abbiamo trovato posto di fronte alla spiaggia. siamo appena andati a prendere un caffè e dopo andremo a giocare a padel e tennis. Non voglio andarmene.
July 13, 2025
July 13, 2025
7月12日 (土)
(音楽が大好き)
一日中に音楽しか聞かなかった。音楽の型はおもにJ/K-RNBだからBAEKHYUNとNCT 127などのアーティストが大好き。でもたまにロックとコンテンポラリーロックのアーティストが好き、Cö Shu Nieなどのようだ。少し長い間Cö Shu Nieが大好きなんだけど。BAEKHYUNから一番好きな曲は「Woo」と「Bambi」と「Bungee」と「Underwater」と「Cry For Love」だと思う。NCT 127は、今「Space」や「Real Life」や「Sun & Moon」や「Fact Check」だ。最近ATEEZも気に入ってるんだけど聞きすぎる曲は「Lemon Drop」だ。ガチで聞き止めないw。