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Oh Christmas
I used to be thrilled to death about Christmas. Because Christmas, no matter what it was, would always come with a long holiday. Waiting for Santa Claus dropping presents through the chimney which didn't exist in my house, I would look through the window, praying for something I didn't really understand. Such blissful innocence didn't last long as I grew up, but I'm still happy now, as out of the church come lots of beautiful and lovely songs reverberating among people. They were famous back in the day but not so nowadays, perhaps it's because people are much more into the virtual world as opposed to the real one. Sadly I have been gradually losing my passion on Christmas. If It was possible, I would go back to the day I was still innocent, and tell the younger me, "what a wonderful pain in the arse."
Dec. 20, 2020
Mi familia en Navidad
Te cuento algo sobre mi familia en Navidad y nuestras tradiciones. Yo vivo con mi novio, pero en Navidad no estamos en casa, sino vamos a visitar a nuestras familias. La Nochebuena normalmente la pasamos con la familia de mi novio. Hay una cena de Navidad, a la cual vienen los padres de mi novio, sus abuelos y su tío con su esposa. Para cenar, los padres de mi novio preparan un fondue. Después de la cena, encendemos las velas del árbol de Navidad y abrimos los regalos.
Normalmente, el 25 de diciembre vamos a visitar a mi familia. Nos encontramos en un ristorante y comemos pescado allí. Vienen mis padres, mi tía y mi tío y mis abuelos. Después de la comida, damos un paseo por el pueblo porque hemos comido demasiado y nos sirve!
Este año, por Covid, todo es diferente. Hace algunos días, mi novio se puso enfermo con Covid. Yo no tuve un test pero creo que yo también estaba enferma. Tenemos que quedarnos en cuarentena durante Navidad. No podemos salir de casa y no podemos ver a nuestras familias. Vamos a hablar con ellos a través de Skype. Espero que mis abuelos entiendan cómo funciona. Dejamos los regalos fuera de la puerta y nuestra familia viene a tomarlos y a dejar sus regalos.
Dec. 20, 2020
Journal 20/12/20
I looked at the picture you sent me carefully. I can see the blue sky and the distant woods, and the snow on the ground. The scene is definitely shot in the wild. But I have two questions that I want to know, if it is convenient for you to answer. First, is your office in the wild? What is the thing that is on the left of the picture? Is it a bridge? But it looks unlike a bridge. So I am very curious about that.
Dec. 20, 2020
Dimanche 20 décembre 2020
À Noël, nous mangions beaucoup de chocolat. J’étais souvent malade parce que j’ai trop mangé. Maintenant je suis une adulte, je ne veux plus manger autant. Maintenant, je préfère manger (ou boire) quelque chose d’autre comme de la viande, des patates rôties, du vin. L’année dernière je n’ai mangée que le déjeuner, j’étais rassasiée.
Hier je lisais ‘Les Seigneurs des Anneaux’ (cette fois en anglais car c’est ma première lecture) et dans ce livre il parle quelque fois de la nourriture délicieuse - surtout quand les Hobbits, Frodo, Sam, Merry et Pippin, mangent autour du feu de camp, ou une dans auberge. C’est très charmant - je ne connais personne qui n’aime pas cette trilogie. Personnellement, je ne peux pas m’arrêter de lire. Vendredi soir, je l’ai lu de sept heures à dix heures moins le quart. Je crois que je finirais la moitié de la livre bientôt.
Dec. 20, 2020
Christmas letter
Yesterday I walked all day long looking for Santa Claus with my 3 years old son. To follow the tradition, children need to write a letter to Santa Claus and give it in hand whithin the days before christmas. But Barcelona has changed a lot on last year. The impact of covid in a tourism based city has been huge: closed shops and empty streets are now the picture of the city. However Christmas is magical and there are lots of activities to enjoy with childrens. We spent 3 hours looking for a Santa’s letter, we wrote it and finally we give it in hand to Santa Claus. A beautiful experience for a 3 years old kid who don’t understand nothing about covid.
Happy Christmas
Dec. 20, 2020
Playing Ring Fit Adventure
I bought Ring Fit Adventure at last Christmas. It's been out of stock for a long time, but I luckily found it on the way back home from grocery shopping. Playing Ring Fit Adventure is pretty tough. I was thinking of play it every day, but I couldn't. I mostly play two stages a day. At the beginning, my muscles were sore the next day. I played it 106 times until today. I've played it for 6 days in a row recently because I started playing rhythm dance mode. It's very fun to do it. I'm sure that I will play it tomorrow too.
Dec. 20, 2020
Journal 20/12/20
In China, cities are similar to each other except for some minority cities. For this trip, the destination Hangzhou City is economically developed in China and it’s also the top one city among new first-tier cities. When you look at the appearances of Hangzhou and my hometown Fuyang, there seems no big difference except that Hangzhou has more tall buildings. But in fact, there are big differences between these two cities. First, Hangzhou is a deputy ministerial city, but Fuyang is just a prefectural city. Second, Hangzhou has an urban population of 7.45 million and covers 700 square kilometers, but Fuyang only has an urban population of 2 million and covers an area of 2 hundred square kilometers. Third, the GDP of Hangzhou in 2019 is 1,537,3 billion yuan, but Fuyang only has 270 billion yuan in the same year. Fourth, Hangzhou is the most developed area in its private enterprises in China, but Fuyang’s industry and private enterprises are very weak. Fifth, the natural scenery in Hangzhou is very beautiful and Hangzhou is called heaven on the earth, but Fuyang is just a medium city in plain areas and it doesn’t have those beautiful natural sceneries. So although the cities in China look similar in their appearances, they have significant differences.
Dec. 20, 2020
HIIT
Do you know HIIT? HIIT is the initials of High-Intensity Interval Traning. This is one method of training, and it's effective particularly for cardiopulmonary function. HIIT is sets of high-intensity workouts and incomplete recoveries such as jogging or walking. One of the upsides is this training needs only a few moments. However, it means the density and hardness is very high. I sometimes do HIIT, and I feel I want to quit this torture as soon as possible, but when I finish the program I'm proud of my patience. Freeletics is a good app for practicing HIIT.
Dec. 20, 2020
My biggest regret!
It will be probably when I was 7, and I was playing on my ps2, with a new friend I made.
He was 15 and we was playing wwe game and i was wining he said he was gonna show me
a new technique so i handed him my controller and he made my player approach his then he used his ultimate move making lose i started crying to mom this kid was living with us because his mom abandoned him when he was a child and he living with his dad and his dad brought him to us while he go to works and he could work on for my auntie convenient store anyway when mom heard i was crying she started freaking out i didn't thought she was gonna get like that
and he was very apologetic and he was just pulling prank on him but she didn't listen and kicked him out at midnight That night i felt very guilty because i knew i overreacted and i was thinking i will apologies to him in the morning when he comes back but he never did that was 14 years ago
last week i heard that he died in yemen in he sleep he left he is dad to go look for his mom leaving younger brother alone and all this from 15 just started flooding back i wished i could've
meet once more time so i can say i was sorry for acting childish
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Dec. 20, 2020
Куда пойдём? (упражнение из учебника)
Какая выставка проходит в Центре современного искусства “Винзавод”? Какая тема выставки?
В Центре современного искусства проходит выставка “Лучшие фотографии России”. На выставке представлены популярные тем фотолюбителей Россиской Федерации: закаты, рассветы, детски улыбки и счастливые старики.
Что идёт в Московском драматическом Театре на Малой Бронной? Кто режиссёр? Кто играет в спектакль?
В Московском драматическом Театре идёт спектакль “Три сестры”. В нём играют Марина Александрова, Алёна Бабенко, Владислав Ветров и другие. Режиссёр – Александр Савостьянов.
Кто принимает участие в концерте “Моцарт-квартет”? Что в программе концерта?
В концерте “Мозарт-квартет” принимают участие Ирина Павлихина, Антон Кулапов, Вячеслав Маринюк и Сергей Мазаев. В программе концерта – Танеев, Моцарт, Сальери, Вебер и Мендельсон.
Dec. 20, 2020
J'ai réussi mon test de français
Comme je l'ai dit dans mon post d'hier, j'avais un test de français aujourd'hui. Je crois que j'ai réussi le test et donc ce niveau. Pour être diplômé en mon université il faut réussir quatre niveaux d'un langue étrangère, soit l'anglais, le français ou l'italien. Je parle anglais déjà et j'adore le français, donc pourquoi j'ai choisi le cours de français. C'est mon troisième niveau, alors je n'ai qu'un niveau de plus pour réussir ce critère. Je suis dans mon quatrième semestre, ce qui veut dire que j'avais beaucoup de temps pour faire le programme de langues, mais c'est mieux de le faire bien avant. Sinon, c'est assez difficile ! Je vais m'inscrire au niveau final dans les prochaines vacances.
Dec. 20, 2020
Dec. 20, 2020
Festival de luces de Navidad
Mañana iré al jardín botánico con mi hermana pequeña y su mejor amiga porque hay un festival de luces de Navidad. ¡Estoy emocionada! Fui con mi familia y mis primos hace casi diez años y me gustó mucho perderme entre los árboles y las luces. Recuerdo que compramos tazas de chocolate caliente y que después fuimos a un restaurante Amish donde comimos puré de papas, verduras frescas, pan blando, y pollo asado (comida casera).
Espero hacer recuerdos tan buenos con ellas mañana.
Dec. 20, 2020
L’entrée troisième
Bonjour ! Bienvenue à ma deuxième entrée du journal. Je suis très heureux que j’écris encore après j’ai écrit hier aussi, j’espère que je vais continuer écrire en français tous les jours depuis longtemps.
Aujourd’hui je me suis levé très tard encore, mais je me suis couché tôt hier (à vingt-deux heures !). J’espère que c’est parce que je n’ai pas dormi bien depuis longtemps avant ces vacances, et je vais n’avoir besoin de ça pour les vacations entières.
J’ai lit beaucoup hier soir, qui est très sympa. J’ai aussi parlé avec mes amis en ligne – nous sommes très proches à ce moment, et j’espère que ce va continuer, en partie parce que nous sommes à le début de les vacances.
Je trouve qu’apprendre le français était très plait pour moi. Ce m’occupe bien, et c’est vraiment intéressant. J’ai appris beaucoup du vocabulaire, mais maintenant je veux améliorer ma grammaire en partie, parce que c’est très mauvais et je veux écrire meilleur. Merci pour l’auto-correct !
Aussi - c'est marrant que c'est les espaces entre des virgules et des mots en français.
En tout cas, merci pour lit mon entrée et à bientôt !
Dec. 20, 2020
Buy PS3 in 2020?
Is that even a question to ask?
If you are a game fans, you must know PS5 is on sale now.
But you will be lucky to buy one even you have the money.
So, why buy a PS3 now?
Because after PS2 I stop play games.
I never have PS3, PS4 or another console like XBOX.
So, I did a quick research in internet.
Really surprise me that some people still suggest you buy such old console. (PS3)
But after they fully explain the specifications.
I do agree that even at 2020, If you don’t have a gaming console.
And thinking a cheap present for yourself.
Buy a PS3.
Dec. 20, 2020
Journal 20/12/20
Although I don't know which city you live in, the weather sounds similar to that of northeast China because the temperature there in winter is also minus thirty to forty degrees Celsius. To be honest, I prefer mild weather. I have been to southern China like Guangzhou, Shenzhen, Sanya, as well as northern China like Hulunbeier, Manzhouli, so I know a little bit the weather difference between the north and the south. My home town Fuyang is located in the Mideast part of China and we have four different seasons. In the summer, it rains a lot and it is a little bit moist and the highest temperature range is between thirty-five to forty degrees Celsius. In the winter, the lowest temperature range is between minus ten to twenty degrees. In spring and autumn, the weather is pretty nice, though it is a bit dry in autumn. During these two seasons, the temperature range is usually between ten to twenty-five degrees Celsius. But I still have a dream that when I retire I want to find a small southern coastal town with mountains to live in. I don't know if this dream can come true.
Dec. 20, 2020
我推荐的书
My teacher wants me to record myself speaking and gave me a list of prompts. My fourth prompt is to talk about a book I recommend. This is what I intend to say, please correct me! Thank you!
今天我将谈论我推荐的一本书。 我推荐的书叫《The Spirit Catches You and You Fall Down: A Hmong Child, Her American Doctors, and the Collision of Two Cultures》。 我在大学读过这本书。 它讨论了老挝和美国之间医疗保健的文化差异。 他们是两个截然不同的国家。 这是一本很好的书。 这本书告诉我们有关医生和家庭之间语言交流和文化差异的误解。 这本书启发了我开始学习语言，从而可以帮助不会说英语的人。 我希望你能读这本书。
Dec. 19, 2020
童年的爱好
My teacher wants me to record myself speaking and gave me a list of prompts. My third one is to talk about a hobby I had as a child. This is what I intend to say, please correct me! Thank you!
今天，我将谈论我小时候的爱好。 我小时候喜欢踢足球。 我并加入了一支足球队。 我踢了八年足球。 当我十四岁的时候，我踢足球时受伤了。 我弄伤了臀部的肌肉。 在那之后我不得不停止踢足球。 我很悲了。 一年后，我试图再次在一个队中比赛，但我又一次受伤了。 所以现在我只是偶尔玩一次。 我现在喜欢在电视上看足球。
Dec. 19, 2020
童年的记忆
My teacher wants me to record myself speaking and gave me a list of prompts. My second one is to talk about a childhood memory. This is what I intend to say, please correct me! Thank you!
我今天要谈论的童年记忆是我第一次吃披萨。 我直到五岁才吃披萨！ 我不知道为什么，但是我以为即使我从未吃过披萨，披萨也很不好吃。 我记得我说过难闻的气味。 有一天，我忘记了我在家里的饭盒。 我不得不吃我学校做的午餐。 那天他们做了比萨。 我很害怕，因为我不喜欢披萨，但我不想挨饿！ 所以我咬了一口，以为我会讨厌它，但是我喜欢它！ 我记得那之后我感到多么高兴。 我都吃了 放学后，我回家告诉我妈妈。 她很高兴！ 那天晚上我们也吃了比萨作为晚餐。
Dec. 19, 2020
我最喜爱的食物
My teacher wants me to record myself speaking and gave me a list of prompts. My first one was to talk about my favorite food. This is what I intend to say, please correct me! Thank you!
我最喜欢的食物是很多东西。 这取决于我的心情。 有时我渴望面条，米饭或面食。 我非常喜欢碳水化合物，哈哈哈。 我不喜欢大多数辣菜。 我希望能够品尝我的食物哈哈。 我喜欢香的菜。 我喜欢奶油意大利面。 我喜欢米饭加酱油和肉。 我也喜欢炖菜和拉面！ 我以前从没吃过冷面，所以不确定我是否要冷面。
Dec. 19, 2020
Los volcanes
Por culpa de las placas tectónicas, hay volcanes todo alrededor del mundo. Desde las costas de los Estados Unidos hasta Nuevo Zelanda los puedes encontrar. Hay muchos beneficios de los volcanos. Fertilizan los suelos alrededor de ellos, así que a menudo las laderas son buenos para cultivar. También en los climas más fríos puedes esquiar a los lados. Sin embargo, todo esto es si estás preparado vivir cerca de un volcán.
Mucha gente vive alrededor de los volcanes. Por ejemplo, la ciudad de Naples, en Italia, está al lado del volcán Vesubio, (aunque quizá no sea el mejor ejemplo porque también está al lado de Pompeya). De hecho, en muchos lugares por todo del mundo, los volcanes, o a menos unos de ellos, son sagrados. Uno de los mejores ejemplos es la montaña Fuji, en Japón, en que hay templos y senderos para los peregrinos y visitantes. Otros ejemplos de la "coexistencia" entre los volcanes y los seres humanos son Ilopango, Bas Don Nai y Harrat Rahat.
Aunque hay muchos beneficios de los volcanes y mucha gente que vive cerca de ellos, siempre hay un riesgo de una erupción. Había erupciones desde hace los dinosaurios y continuan incluso en nuestros días. Hace alrededor de 75 000 años, un volcán indonesio estalló y las consecuencias eran graves para la humanidad. Incluso hay expertos que dicen que habría podido destruirnos. A pesar de eso, es evidente que había gente que sobrevivieron la destrucción, porque nosotros estamos aquí, miles de años más tarde.
Dos oraciones con "con lo que".
1. Intentaré con lo que todas las cosas que me hayas dicho.
2. Con lo que la critiques, aún ellos la promocionan.
Dec. 19, 2020
If you had all the money in the world to invest in (part 1)
If you had all the money in the world to invest in a business, what would you do? Part 1
I’m a teacher , and I always have thought that getting rid of textbooks would be good for humankind :-). I’m thinking about the ‘traditional’ textbook, naturally. I would like to create a publishing company for change the traditional textbook.
For many years I have seen hundreds of textbooks forgotten by students who hardly use them.
The problem is always the same. The publishing company asks one or two teachers to write a textbook for an entire subject. But usually you have good material for one or two subjects, the rest is usually quite bad. The result is that each teacher uses a small part of the book and forgets about the rest.
In many cases he photocopies 'illegally' :-) parts of other books to complete his class material.
The case is particularly serious in regions like mine, where the government pays for all the books. So more and more books with little use are accumulating in schools and we all end up paying for them with our taxes.
What can we do to change that?
Dec. 19, 2020
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