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去超市迷路了
錄音：https://voca.ro/1eq06OI3kHY3
大家好，我今天來把一部我有看過的影片摘要一下。影片是適合中文學者，所以它的情節比較簡單。今天我也想開始講述我寫的文章，因爲我有聽説過講述會對語言學者很有幫助發展自己的發音準確度。也可以讓人更流利自然地説話。
在第一個場景的開始，我們結識兩個在聊天朋友。我可以把他們稱爲 “A” 跟 “B”。A說：“我很餓”，然後就決定出去。B問他他會出去哪裏。 A回答他想去超市買吃的。他出去之前，B提醒A他想要一瓶可樂，然後給A現金。當A在走出門，他意識到他其實不知道超市在哪裏。他問他的朋友。朋友回答：“超市在郵局旁邊，郵局在銀行對面。” A注意到了這個信息就出去。
A走在路上很久之後，就逐漸意識到他迷路了。所以，他決定問一下一個陌生人怎麽走到超市。他先問 ”附近有沒有銀行“。 然後問 “對面是不是有郵局？”。不幸的是，他問的人只知道銀行在哪裏，而不知道銀行對面有沒有郵局。A決定繼續走。然後，他碰到一個走在路上的小姐。他問她： “你知道，銀行在哪裏”。 小姐讓他知道他站在一家銀行的面前。意識到了這個，A問她她知不知道附近有沒有郵局。她回答： “不好意思，我不知道。 我什麽地方都不知道，我不是本地人。
最後，他跟一個叔叔說： “請問一下，你知道最近的郵局在哪裏”。 叔叔說，前面有一家郵局。但是，他也説，超市在郵局的對面。不是像他朋友說的。超市不是在郵局的旁邊，而是在郵局的對面。A到家的時候跟他的朋友說，朋友說的超市很不近。朋友道歉了問A “我的可樂呢？”。才發現，他完全忘了買可樂。
（這是我錄聲音的第一次，所以我的發音速度還是很斷斷續續。請你要耐心一點 ：））
Jan. 7, 2021
Jan. 7, 2021
Jan. 7, 2021
Jan. 7, 2021
Rorschach-Test
Ich habe einmal einen Rorschach-Test gemacht. Das Ergebnis sagte, dass ich nicht sehr aufmerksam bin. Immerhin war das ein online Rorschach-Test und ich habe viele Bilder als unkenntlich markiert. Die Geschichte dieses Testes ist etwa seltsam, Rorschach hat bemerkt, dass viele schizophrene Patienten würden dem Bild eine ungewöhnliche Bedeutung beimessen und deshalb glaubte er, dass der Test ein gutes Diagnosewerkzeug wäre. Aber was passiert, wenn der Patient nur sehr imaginativ oder sehr objektiv ist? Im letzten Fall bekommen wir die üblichen Antworten: Fledermaus, Motte, Schmetterling und so weiter. Auf diese Weise ist eine mögliche psychische Störung verbogen. Es gibt auch die subjektive Interpretation des Arztes. Es ist natürlich mehr kompliziert als ich hier schreibe aber am Ende ist der Rorschach-Test kein sehr präziser Test, würde ich sagen.
Jan. 7, 2021
Ville ou campagne
Faudrait-il vivre en ville ou à la campagne? Telle est la problématique soulevée par beaucoup de personnes aujourd’hui. Pour certaines, la vie en ville leur permet de vivre confortablement. Pour d’autres, celle à la campagne a plein de promesses et d’opportunités qui leur aident à développer eux-mêmes. Maintenant, j’habite en ville avec ma famille et j’apprécie beaucoup ce cadre de vie du fait de ses grands avantages.
Tout d’abord, il me semble que la qualité de vie en ville fait partie des facteurs primordials séduisant la plupart des personnes aujourd’hui. Le dévelopement des services sanitaires, l’évolution technologique, l’éducation de qualité, etc tout cela permet des gens de vivre confortablement et de découvrir de meilleurs services. Nous pouvons le montrer en prenant l’exemple de la majorité des ruraux qui ont à aller en ville pour leur examen médical lorsqu’ils attrapent des maladies dangeureuses.
De plus, le principal avantage d'un centre-ville est la facilité d'accéder à toutes sortes de services juste à côté de chez soi. Restaurants, cinéma, commerces, transports etc…les centres-villes offrent un confort évident pour tout ceux qui aiment sortir et faire du shopping ou faire d’autres choses qu’on veut tandis que la campagne ne dispose pas encore de tels services en réponse à leur besoin de loisir.
Pourtant, ce cadre de vie présente également des inconvénients qui rendent les citadins stressés. En premier lieu, les dépenses de vie en ville pourrait alourdir le budget des foyers aux revenus moyennes et modestes. En effet, les loyers ainsi que les coûts de transports,etc sont plus élevés que ceux de campagne. En outre, comme il y a beaucoup de personnes qui vivent en ville, on pourrait faire face à plusieurs problèmes ennuyeux tels que la pollution de l’environnement, les bruits, l’embouteillage, les fléaux sociaux qui se passent souvent chaque jour. C’est pourquoi, de plus en plus de personnes, notamment les jeunes aspirent à quitter leur vie en ville et à s’intaller au vert.
En conclusion, de mon point de vue, chaque cadre de vie possède des points forts et des points faibles. Habiter en ville est un bon choix pour les personnes qui veulent accéder facilement aux commodités alors que vivre à la campagne destinés à ceux qui souhaitent une vie tranquille et moins stressée.
Jan. 7, 2021
Il Ristorante (4)
Ieri, stavo lavorando nel ristorante quando ho sentito un rumore. Mi sono voltato istintivamente e ho visto un topo che stava correndo verso la sala di produzione! La sua coda era attacata a un vassoio che sembrava appiccicoso; forse la ragione che il topo fosse così nervoso. Allo stesso tempo, una nuova cuoca di vent'anni l'ha visto anche e ha urlato che c'era un topo. Il capocuoco, un grande italiano con i diti come salsicce, è venuto lentamente.
"Dov'è?" Mi ha chiesto. Ho indicato la sala di produzione e il cuoco ha acceso le luci. Abbiamo visto il topo che si stava nascondendo in un angolo senza un posto di fuga. Il cuoco ha sospirato.
"Dammi una scopa." Mi ha ordinato. In fretta, ho trovato una scopa e gliel'ho portata. Dopo, ho sentito alcuni rumori e ho visto il cuoco uscire. Ce l'ha fatta.
"Non ho mai ucciso un animale così piccolo. Suppongo che abbiamo un piatto speciale stasera, no?" Lui mi ha fatto l'occhiolino.
Jan. 7, 2021
Das Café
Ich mag Cafés, die besondere gute Arbeitsumwelte haben. Im Café kann man viele dinge machen, z.B. lernen, Bücher lesen, mit Fremdeleuten reden, und natürlich, eine gute Tasse Kaffee trinken.
Kleine Cafés sind besondere gut. Es wird weniger Leute, die natürlich ruhiger seien. Dann kann ich mehr auf meinen Arbeit konzentrieren. Aber manchmal, kommt ein Mensch, der die ungesprochende Regelen der Cafés nicht aufpasst würde. Er/Sie hätte sehr laut auf sein/ihr Handy spricht, dass die Ruhingkeit des Cafés total zerstört worden.
Aber keine sorge, deswegen bringe ich immer meine Kopfhören mit!
Jan. 7, 2021
Jan. 7, 2021
脳を診れば何を考えているかは分かるだろう
今の科学では、テニスを考えればMRIをすると、運動に関する脳の部分の動きが見える。同じように、自分の家について考えれば、脳の空間的な部分の動きも見える。それを使って、科学者たちは植物人間のために、意識のテストを作った。（「最初はテニスについて考えて、次は家について考えなさい」）
そのテストをすると、植物人間と思われる患者は、実は意識があることがあった。つまり、患者は体が動けないけれども、まだ意識がある。（これは怖いと思う）
だから、もしその過程を逆にすれば、将来読心術ができるだろう。まず、脳を診て動きがある部分によって、人間は何を考えているかが分かるだろう。
Jan. 7, 2021
Jan. 7, 2021
Jan. 7, 2021
Journal 1/6/2021
I am very sorry for replying to you so late. I don’t know what I have been busy these days, but it’s actually some trifles. The iced lake surface looks like snow fields. If you didn’t tell me, I would not know it’s a lake. Because of global warming, lakes in my area are rarely iced. But in recent days, I suppose it did, because the temperature dropped to minus 7-8 degrees. Even if it’s frozen, it doesn’t look like that in your picture. Its surface is just thin ice, and does not look similar to the snow land in your picture. The last time I walked through an iced lake surface was in 1996 at Chengde Summer Resort. I have forgotten the lake’s name, but I remember exactly I was very scared because I was afraid that the ice would break and I would fall into the lake. If it happened, the result would be extremely dangerous. Finally, the tour guide pulled me to walk through the lake. From what you told me, I think your hometown is poetical: living by the lake; the lake and the town are mutual fusion. This reminds me of Shuanglang old town, Dali, China.
Jan. 7, 2021
Morning
I woke up at five today and, despite wanting to sleep, I enjoy the silence a lot. My family is asleep and a part of the city is too.
I had breakfast in my room while watching a sitcom. After writing this, I have to study. At noon, I have driving lessons. Later, I'll have to keep studying.
I don't know why, but when I'm busy I think of lots of fun or interesting things to do. However, when I'm free, I get bored because I don't know what to do.
Jan. 7, 2021
Jan. 7, 2021
Jan. 7, 2021
Translation Practice
Liufu had grown up and could work making money. He started to find his hometown. He only knew his hometown was in Sichuan, but he didn’t know the exact location. One time, he saved 3000 yuan and was ready to deposit the money in a bank, but it was the right time of donating money to Wenchuan for the earthquake. He straight put the money into the donation box. There was just several ten yuan left, so he was only able to buy a bunch of noodles and every meal eating the noodles.
Jan. 7, 2021
A Question
Do you use a sellotape dispenser? I have to create an original tape dispenser and draw its blueprint as my class assignment. However, I hardly use a sellotape, so I can't come up with what functions are convenient.
Do you have any idea for convenient functions? What is frustrating when you use a sellotape?
Jan. 7, 2021
Jan. 7, 2021
琴棋书画的宇宙（2）
画神把她的毛笔先熟练地画了女人的一幅画，再在她的肚子里添了个男性胎儿。这样，画神毫无费力地能创造了生命。稍后，书神在他的书上写了个故事，描写了一个住在洛阳的女人神奇地受孕。这样，他把画神创造的胎儿，转给人生的一个女人。
书神犹豫地说道：“啊……糟糕。”
画神问道：“怎么了？”
书神回答道：“我猜我犯了错误。”
画神问道：“不可能，我们神不能犯错误。”
书神回答道：“无论如何，我不是故意的……”。
那一刻，棋神发了脾气，谴责了书神和画神。他解释道：“你们俩都格外不耐烦，你们凭什么干涉人生？看看你们造成的这个灾难。”
书神顶嘴地说道：“您曾经不是一样地创造了一个人呢？”
琴神听见了所有的混乱，在棋神回答之前，她冷静地说道：“我们都少说两句吧。”便她向棋神悄悄地问道：“他们虽然犯了错误，但是这一切确认了我们的能量的确已经减弱了。您不是觉得我们必须调查呢？”
棋神对琴神顽固地说道：“最好我们仔细地思考。否则……。其实，您现在可以自己看。”
四位神一齐向现场，看到了爆炸。
Jan. 7, 2021
The Ageing Problem in China
Same as other countries, an ageing era is approaching to China. However, China also has its exclusive problem.
In the fast-paced society of China, elderly people tend to live alone, not spontaneously but forcedly. And the reasons are as followed, first of all, on account of the the traditional method of China—yang er fang lao, i.e, raising children for the sake of the old age, many Chinese parents endeavour to rear their children and provide as best condition as they can for children to build up their own life, and leave scarce savings for themselves.
In that case, here comes the second question, their offsprings have to go to the metropolitan where is far from home searching for work. Since it isn’t easy to take seniors with them even they eager to, those elderly people have to stay solely, which is even more solitary for them when their significant other passed away.
Worse still, provisions are absolutely lag behind in China, for the government assumes offsprings will no doubt to take the responsibility of caring the old and sick.
And here are some measures could be taken account of .
Firstly and the most crucial is to establish a more mature policy on pension and retirement income. For instance, to aid people over 65 years old having sufficient living expenses every month, and to add those who is approaching retirement into the list of being helped, people who live alone for particular.
Secondly, the neighbouring service also need to be refined. The government entail to put money on this.
Lastly, considering some seniors would regard no being reared by children as an embarrassing thing and refuse the help, the experts for comforting them are also needed.
To sum up, even though the structure of letting offsprings raise their parents works for thousands of years in China, the system is require to be built to help the left olds ,so that to provide a better life for the old and to ease the guilty of youth for their insufficient ability to render a bright later life to their parents.
Jan. 7, 2021
empathy
There is a make-up shop called SASA near my home. I need their eyebrow pencil there once. A customer fainted suddenly, during my purchase. The clerk kept apologizing to me and the customer was taken away by the ambulance. She sent me a gift, after I paid. She did not actually apologize, because the customer fainting was not her fault , but she wanted to create empathy and a connection with me to show respect. But, she didn’t understand my needs clearly. I already stated that I just need an eyebrow pencil under 60 dollars, but she still recommended an eyebrow pencil around 100 dollars. She finally understood what I meant and recommended another eyebrow pencil. The price was just within my budget. I believe it would have improved the experience, if she could understand faster.
Jan. 7, 2021
Jan. 7, 2021
Una tarde salvadoreña
Estar en El Salvador es un verdadero placer. El pequeño país centroamericano es más que las pandillas que lo aterrorizan. El Salvador es un lugar único, lleno de vida, cultura y una gastronomía que está que te cuentes.
Cuando recuerdo la tarde primera en San Salvador, la ciudad capital, comienzo a oler las tortillas friendo en la calle enfrente de mi apartamento. Oigo las aves cantando por los árboles y el ladrido de los perros de la calle. Cada diez minutos, el timbre de seguridad de un carro suena en la calle y las aves intentan cantar igual. Un vecino está reproduciendo ACDC a todo volumen y puedo entender cada palabra de la letra, aunque no quiera. Veo como el sol baila por las hojas de las plantas situadas en las terrazas. Siento como el sol me toca la piel. Me calienta.
Estoy en un apartamento humilde, con un living, una cocina pequeña, una cama y un baño que funciona de vez en cuando. Las paredes brillantes reflejan la cultura energética del país. Son moradas, rosas y celestes. Estoy riendo por un chiste que Joel ha hecho apenas 5 minutos, pero no puedo parar de reír.
En este momento me enamoré del país. Después de estar doce horas, ya me sentía como si estuviera en casa. He ido seis veces desde entonces y cada vez me enamoro un poquito más de la gente, las pupusas revueltas, los volcanes, la naturaleza y las comunidades amables. Algún día, quisiera mudarme ahí para tener más tardes así de tranquilo.
Jan. 7, 2021
Correo electrónico para el trabajo
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Este servicio cuesta $XXX y tendrás que contratar un electricia para instalar el conducto y la caja de cemento. El día de la conversión, nuestro equipo desconectará tu servicio eléctrico para que tu electricia pueda cambiar el contador eléctrico. Necesitarás un inspector del condado allí para inspeccionar la instalación ese mismo día. Nuestro equipo regresará por la tarde para tirar el cable a través de los tubos y conectar el servicio.
Por favor, responda a este email para confirmar que quieres seguir con la conversión.
Gracias,
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