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Löwenmähne
Der Löwenmähne ist eine Pilzart, von dem angenommen wird, dass er viele gesundheitliche Vorteile hat. Laut manche Studien kann der Pilz die neuronale Gesundheit fördern, und in anderen wurde es sogar gezeigt, dass er Krebs verhindern kann. Ich war etwas skeptisch wegen der Assoziation mit der sogenannt "traditionellen Medizin", aber nachdem ich ein bisschen mehr gelesen habe, habe ich mich entschieden, dass die gesundheitlichen Vorteile von Pilzen wahrscheinlich wahr sind, und es wäre gut, meine Ernährung damit zu ergänzen. Ich habe seitdem Ergänzungen von Löwenmähne, Reishi und Chaga gekauft. Ich hoffe, dass sie auf die eine oder andere Weise meiner Gesundheit zu verbessern werden.
March 1, 2021
My experience
I have strong confidence that I am capable of further learning of this major. One significant driver is that I am a qualified member to your program in terms of social practice accumulation. Taking some concrete instances, I have significant leadership experience as a deputy store manager of a makeup shop. During my tenure, I led our sales team to achieve first place in terms of sales volume. I am also a good team player and independent problem solver as a sales assistant of Kenji department in Decathlon. I assisted the manager and solved many challenging problems through time management, via establishing a clear division of work and with the whole-hearted cooperation of every team member, during which I was awarded the Outstanding Member of Staff and was chosen as the Service Star for my excellent performance. Moreover, my experiences as a member of multiple school clubs and an organizer in arranging the Star of Outlook English Talent Competition have greatly enriched my college life and also helped to improve my communication and organizational skills. Another key factor involves my keen interest in luxury goods, fashion and sales management expertise. I have dabbled in a wide range of books and took business-related online courses and completed these course with certificates in my spare time, which definitely widened my knowledge preserve. For instance, the online course-Financial Markets of Yale University offered me an overview of the ideas, methods, and institutions that permit human society to manage risks and foster enterprise; Successful Negotiation: Essential Strategies and Skills of University of Michigan greatly improved my ability to negotiate. To successfully complete these online courses, I was required to take tests and carry out thesis.
March 1, 2021
Hot Springs
Today, I went to a hot spring facility with my friends and experienced a salt sauna for the first time. The salt sauna uses salt to apply on the skin, removing waste products within the body. I don't know salt saunas are more effective than normal ones, but it was fun to rub salt on my skin. In addition to this, there were a lot of kinds of hot springs there. For instance, there was a carbonate spring that included CO2 in the water and was a bit stimulating. It was relaxing to enjoy a bath for a long time.
March 1, 2021
Diary: Save Art From Oblivion
Today I watched a TED about record collectors. Compared with the current release of music through streaming, in the last century, a lot of music was distributed on records; those music existed in analog signals and were not digitalized. Record collectors hunted for valuable records in the past. Give art a second chance; save art from oblivion. This thought really touched me. It reminds me that a staff of a library. Once I visited the Chinese periodical management department of a library. When I first entered the door, I was taken aback. This staff has some disability, is very hunched, and her chest is almost close to her stomach. As the demand for paper books continues to decrease and the demand for electronic editions continues to increase, this library has decided not to subscribe to Chinese periodicals anymore, this department will be closed, and she will retire this year. She was binding the past issues. She said that these magazines are so good, and hope that someone will find them in the future and let them play their value. I have always felt that the dilemma encountered by the library is very similar to the music industry; both are problems caused by media changes. One of my research topics is also about giving new vitality to these "old" things through the community, hoping that these beautiful things will not be completely forgotten.
March 1, 2021
Journal
Trust me, you did a good job. Every Chinese character is pronounced accurately. Someone just said "pay more attention" but she didn't say you were wrong. And that is just a saying. I assume maybe she just means you do not pronounce it fluently. Anyway, well done, there is nothing wrong with your tone. You just need to practice more so that you can get fluency.
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Journal
What is the most annoying thing when you are driving a car?
For me, I hate to receive phone calls when I am driving. If you answer the call, you have to stop the car first. If you decide not to answer the call, you will be afraid that someone may have an emergency, so it's really annoying when you receive a phone call while driving a car. Another annoying thing is that you drive at night. Although car lights are very bright at night, driving is not as convenient as it is during the daytime. You have to be very careful when driving a car at night, and you easily get tired. The third annoying thing is that you drive on rainy days. Although it's daytime and the windscreen wipers work efficiently, driving during rainy days you will get bad sight, and also, the roads are so slippery that it's easy to get accidents. Ok, that is all the annoying things when people are driving a car so far I can consider.
March 1, 2021
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<2021 KMA>
MOGWAA and ASEUL have won the Best Dance & Electronic Album and Song category, respectively, in the 2021 Korean Music Awards held yesterday.
MOGWAA received the award for “Open Mind,” his EP album from last August, and ASEUL for “Bye Bye Summer,” one of the double title tracks of her studio album “Slow Dance,” which was released last March.
In response to winning the award, MOGWAA took to Instagram yesterday to say, “I am really grateful for everyone who cares, loves and supports me. I will buy many quality instruments and work harder on making better tracks.”
ASEUL also thanked people on her Instagram yesterday. The caption says, “I am really grateful for my friends, fellow artists and selection committee members who congratulated me as if it were their achievements.”
You can check out the winners in the other categories here.
<ASEUL>
ASEUL’s "Bye Bye Summer" is like a grade-B SF movie produced by an indie movie director.
ASEUL won the Best Dance & Electronic Song category in the 2021 Korean Music Award yesterday. Since I hadn’t listened to it before, I gave it a shot today.
From the very intro, I got the ominous feeling that her vocal style and melodies might remind me of Neon Bunny. And I was right.
Leaving her debatable vocal abilities aside, I couldn’t get my head around the mixing quality and arrangement of “Bye Bye Summer.” I guess I could get by with the off-mark drone sound in the intro and too much reverb on her voice, which was probably ramped up to hide her incompetent vocals. But the chorus was definitely too much for me. Its instrumentation was bad, so many instruments clashing with each other, and unpleasant resonances popped up everywhere from the upper-mid to the high-end parts.
I even see the nomination of this track is unfair to the other nominees (IDOTAPE, MOGWAA, Jangmyungsun and Two Tone Shape), who produced solid tracks. For me, when it comes to dance music in particular, the sonic quality of a song should be taken more seriously than whatever messages behind it. I mean, who would’ve enjoyed watching “Avengers: Endgame” if its visual effects and aesthetics had reminded viewers of “Godzilla” from 1998?
Listen to ASEUL’s “Bye Bye Summer” and maybe share your thoughts as well.
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Journal
I can thoroughly feel you. The reason you think so is because you are still young, which means you have a lot of time to spend. If you reach a certain age, like in your fifties, you will definitely change your mind, and I bet you will never do those so-called "relaxing and enjoyable" things again or at least you will decline it to the minimum. Of course, it is just my assumption and it is not necessarily right. However, everyone has his own attitude towards hobbies, no matter what hobbies they have, as long as those hobbies are legal, they are all right.
March 1, 2021
Journal
Everybody has different hobbies. Playing cards, drinking alcohol, exercising, traveling and so on, and these may all become hobbies of some people. In short, what hobbies are more beneficial and positive? I think there are two kinds of hobbies we should take priority the most. One is beneficial to our health, another is to improve our knowledge and skills, because these two kinds of hobbies are both meaningful things. So please be careful about your hobbies. If they are not able to bring you benefits to your body and your knowledge and skills, you better think about whether you should quit it.
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Journal
Everybody has different hobbies. Playing cards, drinking alcohol, exercising, traveling and so on, and these may all become hobbies of some people. In short, what hobbies are more beneficial and positive? I think there are two kinds of hobbies we should take priority the most. One is beneficial to our health, another is to improve our knowledge and skills, because these two kinds of hobbies are both meaningful things. So please be careful about your hobbies. If they are not able to bring you benefits to your body and your knowledge and skills, you better think about whether you should quit it.
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Der Präsident von Brasilien
Bolsonaro ist der größte Fehler, das Brasilien durch Auswählen machte.
Er ist besonders Dumm. Wir erreichten am der letzten Woche die traurige Marke von 250.000 toten und er sprach noch, dass die Pandemie eine falsche Geschichte ist.
Wir haben keinen Präsident aber einen wahnsinnigen Esel, der an die Macht kam.
Er habe zum Beispiel gestern gesagt, dass Masken keine wichtige Maßnahme gegen die Pandemie ist..! Für ihn ist Cloroquina der Heiland und andere FakeNews er mag teilen. Aber ohne Trump ist er nun allein und ich hoffe, er kommt niemals wieder an die Macht.
March 1, 2021
Writing Prompt - ability
Den wasn't your ordinary high schooler. He had a special ability to see when and how people would die. This was helpful because he could help save the lives of the people around him. However, there was a catch to this ability. Some deaths aren't preventable. This was quite rare, as Den has never come across someone with an unpreventable death. But little did poor Den know, today would be the day he would meet the person who he wouldn't be able to save.
Den walked down the wooden stairs, meeting his younger sister at the dining table. Today is her first day of kindergarten, so she is very nervous. But Den assured her she would be fine. However, he noticed something wrong. Her body was glowing red, causing him to gulp. This meant that she would die today. Den took a deep breath. He won't let that happen to her; he promised himself that he would always keep his younger sister safe. Glancing at her glowing body once more, he learned that she would get hit by a car. Okay, that's easy to prevent. Just watch over her carefully as she crosses the street. "Ready to go, kids?" Their dad asks, and the siblings nod, getting their jackets.
Den and his sister walked down the sidewalk in the cold breeze until they had to cross. They made sure there were no cars nearby and walked across. But right in the middle, they hear the loud screeching of tires and a scream that would change Den's life.
March 1, 2021
Quiero hacer chilaquiles
Durante casi una semana he querido probar una receta para hacer chilaquiles pero cada día resulta mejor comer las sobras de los días anteriores. Siempre prefiero comer lo que ya tengo preparado para no olvidarlo y echarlo a perder.
Nunca he comido chilaquiles pero esta receta tiene buena pinta y creo que sería muy divertido comer algo nuevo con mi familia.
March 1, 2021
Smoking risks
Smoking is harmful to health and the environment, causing many diseases in smokers and people in their countries and polluting the environment.<br>
What are its disadvantages? How can it be prevented?<br>
Smoking is harmful to health and the environment; <br>
it causes many diseases for smokers and those around them, and causes pollution of the environment. WHO studies indicate that smoking causes about 6 million deaths per year, more than 83% of which are caused by direct smoking, while more than 16% of deaths are caused by secondhand smoke.<br>
Studies show that few people are aware of the health risks of tobacco use. A 2009 study in China found that only 38% of smokers realize that smoking causes coronary heart disease, and only (27%) know it causes stroke,On the other hand, only 15% of the world's population has comprehensive national cessation services to give up smoking.<br>
smoking risks<br>
1- Causes bad breath, discoloration of teeth, yellowing of nails, and wrinkling of the skin.<br>
2- The heart rate increases by 10-25 beats per minute, increasing the risk of fatal heart attacks and strokes by 15%.<br>
3- It causes many diseases for the digestive system, such as: peptic ulcers, gallstones, stomach burns, Crohn's disease, and finally stomach cancer.<br>
4- Disrupts the distribution of oxygen-rich blood to parts of the body and increases the risk of peripheral vascular disease.<br>
5- Smoking during pregnancy increases the risk of miscarriage, premature birth, small birth size, congenital malformations.<br>
6- Increases the risk of osteoporosis in women<br>
7- Exposure to smoke residues causes damage to DNA, fats, and proteins in the body, causing high blood glucose and insulin resistance, which in turn increases the risk of type 2 diabetes.<br>
Giving up smoking:<br>
There are several ways help the smoker to give up smoking:<br>
1- Get rid of all cigarettes, lighters<br>
2- Wash all clothing to get rid of the smell of smoke stuck out.<br>
3- Breaking the habit, for example, if a person is used to smoking after meals, he can engage himself in walking or a friend's conversation.<br>
4- Replace the cigarette with sugar-free chewing gum, mint or any other alternative when you feel like smoking.<br>
5- Ask for help and support from those around the smoker, such as friends and family, and join the many online support groups.<br>
6- Set a specific date for quitting smoking, and inform your friends and family of this appointment.<br>
At last, the fumes cause a lot of diseases and lead to death, so they should stay away from it for smokers and not approach it for for those who haven't tried the tasting.
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Feb. 28, 2021
Demerit of normal life.
Our world is back to normal step by step?
Start from last week all the restaurants, bars…allow closed at 10pm.
The very first week of our almost “normal life”.
What have happened?
Things I hated so much!
First, traffic jam!
Last 3 months a lot of people need to working at home, students no need go to school…
The road condition is amazingly smooth.
But this week is horrible.
Second, Drunk Person at street.
Usually, you will see many drunk person at around 12pm or later.
Since restaurants and bars closed at 10pm.
Last night when I walking to the train station from a bar.
I saw at 3 drunk persons sleep on the street.
Now, I like our un-normal life more than the current normal life.
Feb. 28, 2021
El azúcar
Aunque ahora solo se asocie con los dulces y las dietas, el azúcar tiene una historia muy complicada. Originalmente, la planta que lo produce se hallaba en India y el Sur de Asia. Hace mucho tiempo, los granjeros encontraron cómo extraerlo de la planta, pues parcialmente. Averiguaron cómo extraer el jugo de azúcar de la planta. Aún este jugo es bebida popular en algunos lugares del mundo. Gracias a Alexander Magno, llegó al Medio Oriente y Europa. Plantaciones de azúcar se establecieron donde se puede, principalmente en el sur. Con la exploración y colonización de África y las Americas por los europeos, se llegó a esos lugares también. Ya que se valía mucho, el azúcar era muy caro, al menos en Europa, durante este tiempo. Con la industrialización, el precio de azúcar se ha declinado dramáticamente. A pesar de esto, incluso durante el siglo XX, la melaza estaba más disponible que el azúcar.
Todos nosotros sabemos que el azúcar está bien en moderación. Sin embargo, ¿qué significa moderación? La respuesta no es tan clara, al menos en mi opinión. Me parece que cada institución tiene su propio número de lo que considera "saludable". Al final, he adoptado la estrategia de comer lo mínimo de azúcar posible. Esta no es muy fácil. En nuestros días, se pone en un montón de cosas. ¡Hay muchos que no te das cuenta de que lo tienen hasta que miras al paquete! Por ejemplo, muchas sopas de tomate lo tienen. Además, ¿cuál se identifica como azúcar? La fruta tiene azúcar natural, pero te es saludable.
Al fin y al cabo, tenemos que cuidarlos a nuestros cuerpos. La historia de azúcar es larga, triste y complicada, y ha demostrado lo bueno y lo malo de los seres humanos. A lo largo del tiempo, nos ha atraído. Tenemos que equilibrar nuestras dietas, pero no significa que es necesario que lo elimine.
Dos oraciones con "tal como/tal y como".
1. Es tal como te dije ayer.
2. ¡Será tal y como nos explicó Julia, pero lo dudo mucho!
Feb. 28, 2021
我的生日
我的生日是五月十五日。我已经多次庆祝生日，但我仍然爱着我的生日。一切都是绿色的，外面有很多花。去年是我的生日星期五的，这是庆祝我生日的完美日子。我通常邀请很多家人和很多朋友庆祝我的生日，可是去年是冠状病毒来的。我的妈妈没有能来，我的岳父母也没有能来。我没有能邀请很多人。我邀请了妹妹和我的朋友以及他们的家人。星期四晚上，妹妹给我打电话。她说她的小儿子生病了，他们不能来。我好难过，这么糟糕的生日！
早上我女儿来到我们的卧室。我的丈夫和女儿唱歌我“生日快乐”！因为我有空闲的一天，我没需要上班。爸爸妈妈给我打电话。我岳父母给我打电话。我的朋友在Facebook上写生日快乐。我喜欢生日礼物,可是今天我决定自己买礼物。我上星期买的黑色钢琴在客厅。我从早餐开始，然后弹钢琴。我去超市买食物。我做了很多食物：沙拉，肉菜，蛋糕。我女儿从学校回家，帮我做饭。我丈夫给我送了漂亮的花。晚上我的朋友和她的家人一起来了。我们吃了非常好吃的晚饭，喝了好喝的酒。我们聊了几个小时，跳舞。生日快乐！
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