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IT HAS BEEN SIX YEARS
It has been six years since I started learning English. It has been the most enjoyable period of my life. Every day, I do many things to improve my English skills. Although I live in a country where there are no English speakers, I try very hard to practice my English online. I know nothing is impossible, but one has to be patient and ambitious. Until now, I am still working very hard to become a writer in English through self-education, and I am sure someday I will achieve my goal.
May 9, 2021
Mi joya favorita
La joya que llevo más a menudo es un anillo de plata con elefantes, que siempre tengo puesto en el dedo corazón de mi mano izquierda. Lo quito casi nunca porque el metal no se daña en el agua, no me molesta cuando duermo (como los aretes) y no tengo miedo de perderlo porque me queda tan bien. Además, me parece muy elegante en la mano. No recuerdo cuándo empecé a llevarlo, pero un día lo encontré en la habitación de mi hermana. Mi padre se lo había comprado, pero nunca se lo puso.
May 9, 2021
Journal
Today is Mother's Day, but my mother is in hospital now. A couple of days ago, at dinner she ate a piece of cake, then she had diarrhea that night. The next morning I bought some medicine for her. She didn't continue to have diarrhea after taking the medicine. At night on that day, she suddenly felt unwell. Her hands and mouth shook hard and she couldn't explain herself. I called an ambulance to take her to the hospital. She was diagnosed with an acute intestinal infection and fever. It's been four days since she was in hospital. And every day she has to take some medicine and infusion. Fortunately, there is no big problem with her health. Maybe, after a few days of treatment, she can be discharged from the hospital.
May 9, 2021
May 8, 2021
18/30 ma ville idéale
Qu'est-ce ça semble, ta ville idéale ?
Il y a beaucoup de critères qui mesurent la qualité de vie qu'offre une ville. Par exemple le prix de l'immobilier, de nécessité quotidienne, et aussi le carde de vie, comme la météo, la qualité de l'air, l'offre culturelle, et l'espace vert ... etc. Bien sûr, elle prend en compte la qualité de l'infrastructure, comme l'éducation, les soins, la sécurité... pour n'en nommer que quelques-unes. Il y a une longue liste de critères qui en entrent en compte.
Pour moi, il y a 3 choses qui sont les plus importantes.
D'abord, c'est la qualité de l'infrastructure parce qu'elle fait le fondement de vie, c'est la nécessité. Si une ville nous offre une système de santé avancée et accessible, il ne faut pas s'inquiéter quand on est malade. Et avec de bonne éducation, ça rassure la qualité de la prochaine generation. En plus, c'est très important d'avoir de rues, ponts bien constminés pour l'accessibilité.
Ensuite, je concern le carde de vie. Je pense que c'est très important d'avoir de l'air frais, beaucoup d'espaces vertes et un météo agréable pour pas seulement d'être en bonne santé mais aussi s'y profiler et s'amuser.
Enfin, ma dernière critère, c'est de pouvoir rester en contact avec les proches ! La meilleure ville, selon moi, c'est là où on peut trouver nos proches et on peut rester ensemble ! Le contact physique est meilleur que le concert en ligne.
Donc ma ville idéale, c'est où j'y peux trouver une petite maison ou un appartement au bord de la mer avec de l'air frais, de soleil brillant et de vent doux, entourné par beaucoup de l'herbe verte. Et c'est où on peut voir nos proches très souvent !
May 8, 2021
May 8, 2021
How I have learned English
Since I was very young I had always wanted to learn English, but I couldn't afford to study the language. Later on, when I reached the age of 20, I decided to start learning English on my own. It was the most important decision that I had ever made. When I started learning English on my own, I had learned it incorrectly, because I didn't know how to start. Then, after a lot of trial and error, I found some ways to learn English through self-study, and all of them are very useful in studying the language. And they are:
.1 Using ESL Podcasts:
Podcasts are one of the best tools to learn English, they have so many episodes that will teach you something new every day, and with them, you can improve your English listening skills in no time.
.2 Graded Readers:
Graded Readers books are the best choice for learning the language; because some English learners would read something difficult that is not suitable for their levels. There come Graded Readers Books, they will help you to expand your vocabulary and to enjoy reading due to their simple language. They are written in simplified language for ESL learners. I use them personally to improve my English.
.3 You have to have an English Environment:
Since I started learning English, I have changed everything that I use to English like my smartphone, laptop, and the people whom I follow on social media. Sometimes, I would rather listen or search about products or anything important in English than my native language.
.4 Writing And Speaking:
When I started learning English I had neglected to practice these skills. So I tried to improve them by speaking with other people on the Hallo app and writing about my experience in learning English or about myself.
Finally, learning languages is easier than ever before. I still use all that I have mentioned above, and I see progress in my English.
May 8, 2021
Journal
This evening, I watched a video on Douyin. The poster recalled his life when he was in high school. 12 students shared one room, no shower system, pouring themselves with cold water in the winter to save 3 yuan bathhouse fee, and so on. His experience reminded me of my life when I was in middle school. Our dormitory was a big room, and all my classmates slept there. There were no beds, only floor bunks. I still remember that there were two big holes in the northern wall of my dormitory. During the windy night, we could hear the wind whistle and we always unconsciously grabbed our quilt in case it was blown away by the strong winds. At least for me, I didn't have a pillow, and I just put two bricks under my head instead of that. Our school didn't have electricity, so we had to use a gas lamp to do our early self-studies. We also didn't have hot water in the morning. When I got up and washed my face, I just went down the river that surrounded my school and broke the ice with a hard brick to wash my face. So every time I go to my classroom to do my early self-study, my hair is always iced. We didn't have good food back then. All we ate for three meals a day was just buns made of sweet potato flour and the soup that was also made of sweet potato flour. The only big dish was pickles and I remember that a small piece of that cost 5 cents rmb, but I couldn't afford it. Although the living conditions were very bad at that time, my grades were very good because I wanted to get a decent job by studying hard. These are the overall situations when I was in middle school. Next I will share my elementary school life with you guys. One thing that I want to tell you early is that we made our stools and desks. Can you imagine what materials we use?
May 8, 2021
Le français
À part la France, le français se parle dans beaucoup de pays dans le continent africain: la Tunisie, le Cameroon, le Maroc, etc. Je dois avouer que je ne faisais pas vraiment attention à ces pays africains. Au Japon, quand on parle de l'Afrique, c'est toujours l'emsemble d'Afrique et pas les pays individus. Mais depuis que j'ai commencé à habiter ici en France, je me sens beaucoup proche à ces pays : les infos faire passer des nouvelles sur chaque pays quand il y a des incidents. Je reconnais mieux chaque pays qu'avant, et je me suis rendu compte que les pays s'différent profondément.
Pour la deuxième question, j'habite en France alors je vais parler d'un pays africain auquel je voudrais aller un jour, et c'est le Maroc. C'est déjà une destination populaire par les Japonais récemment en raison de leurs beaux paysages et de leurs ustensiles de ménages très mignons. Le tajine est aussi devenue populaire parmi les Japonaises. En plus, maintenant avec ma capacité au français qui s'est amélioré un peu, je crois que je puisse communiquer avec les marocains.
May 8, 2021
Sterne
Ich hatte ein spannendes Gespräch mit jemandem über Sternbilder und dachte, ich könnte heute ein bisschen über Sterne schreiben. Sterne sind riesige Plasmakugeln, die aus Nebel gebildet werden. Die Klassifizierung von Sterne basiert auf ihrer Temperatur und sieht wie folgt aus (in absteigender Folge): OBAFGKSM, eine Folge von Buchstaben, die Astronomen eine witzige Weise zu erinnern haben. Entgegen der landläufigen Meinung sind die wärmsten Sterne eigentlich die blauen, die auch die jüngsten sind und nicht die roten, die älter und kühler sind. Unsere Sonne ist ein Typ G Stern, was bedeutet, dass sie zwischen beiden Extremen liegt. Viele Sterne sind Teil der sogenannten Sternhaufen, wie die berühmten Hyaden und die schönen Plejaden, die seit der Antike bekannt waren.
May 8, 2021
De sju skalliga rikemännen
De säger att i den gamla goda tiden i khan Åsnaörons rike, det fanns sju skalliga rikemännen och en fattig man - Sigsegir. De sju rikemännen hatade den fattiga mannen. De kände sig förolämpade för att han hade tjockt hår medan deras huvuden var nakna och skinande som flodstenar. Men mest hatade de honom för att han hånade deras fånighet.
En gång när Sigesir var ute på bete med andra människors hästar, riksmännen utan att tänka på det för mycket, tände på hans hus.
May 8, 2021
Esercizio 18-3, la punteggiatura
Scrivi una frase che contiene:
1) due punti:
Il sistema funziona così: non premere "inizia" prima di "accende".
2) il punto interrogativo:
Non mi hai detto la verità?
3) il punto esclamativo:
Dimmi tutto quello che successo ora in quella stanza!
4) le virgolette:
Maria disse: "Quell'informazione deve rimanere un segreto per sempre".
5) i puntini di sospensione:
Luigi disse: "Non so tutto che accade in quel negozio dopo chiasura, c'è qualcosa altra..."
6) tre asterischi:
L'anello era la proprietà del misterioso Professore ***.
7) le parentesi:
La ragione per la sua rabbia (oltre di disposizione solito) era a causa delle azioni di Roberta.
8) Il trattino:
La corsa in bicicletta Milano-Sanremo corre quasi 300 chilometri.
May 8, 2021
到着
明日はパリに戻りますので、荷物を詰める必要がありました。彼氏と私は車を持っていないから、彼氏の両親が車で連れて行きます。毎回、不安になります。多い荷物を持っているし、彼氏のお父さんは自分で車の中に荷物を積み込みたいし、とても怖いお父さんだから私がミスしてしまう場合は、恥ずかしくなります。
ですが、数回に両親の家に行って一緒にパリに戻ったことがあります。毎回、大丈夫になりますので、心配過ぎない方がいいですね。パリに戻って、学校にも戻るのは悲しいです。両親の家は広くて、家族でボードゲームを楽しめて、一緒に食べるのは面白いです。すると、ここには習慣がありますよ！一方、アパートに住んでいると、二人でもさみしくなります。
やっぱり、休みは楽しいですよね。でも授業は一ヶ月だけが残りますよ！ 後で戻ると思うと嬉しくなります。そして、自分のアパートは自分のところだから、戻るといい感情も感じます。
May 8, 2021
May 8, 2021
Para & porque - La practica
1. Quedé con mi jefe para hablar del sueldo.
2. No puedo ir porque tengo una entrevista de trabajo.
3. Quiero convertirse en artista y trabajar independientemente. Es mi sueño porque amo dibujar y soy una persona creativa.
4. La empresa necesita un reunión para revisar el presupuesto.
5. Selina no puede venir porque necesita ir al iglesia cada domingo.
6. Los atletas comen poca azúcar para estar en forma.
7. El grupo de gente madruga porque son en un experimento sobre dormir.
8. ¿Vosotros tenéis cuántos perros? Necesito el nombre para comprar bastante comida.
9. Escribo mucho diarios en español para practicar y incrementar mi vocabulario.
10. Nosotros leemos este libro porque el autor es talentoso.
May 8, 2021
Idag
Idag var en ganska trevlig dag. Jag lekte med min partner och sin mamma på de två kortspelet som jag köpte till hans födelsedag. Sen jag och min partner gjorde dumplings tillsammans. Det brukar ta mig ungefär sex timmar från början till slutet men med sin hjälp tog det mindre än fyra timmar. Jag vill honom att hjälpa mig så att vi kan göra mer tillsammans än jag på min egen själv. Jag har inte än räknat hur många dumplings vi har gjort men det är förmodligen mer än 50.
May 8, 2021
May 8, 2021
Bad day yesterday.
Yesterday was a bad day. I had to make a presentation for the University, well It was a mess. I slept 4 hours in two days in order to prepare it, but it wasn't enough. But for some reason I don't feel sad or dissapointed. I feel that I have to work harder to know the theory and the practice requeried in the real life. Because at the univerity we only learn from books, and for that reason I didn't feel prepared to face the real world. Now I discovered the key to be more prepared for my futures jobs.
May 8, 2021
Los roles de género en la sociedad
Los roles de género definen cómo deberían comportarse las personas en función de su sexo. No es científico, sino que son comportamientos que la sociedad describe como adecuados para cada sexo. Por ejemplo, se espera que los niños juegen con carros y las niñas con muñecas. Desde niño, la gente aprende sobre los roles de género cuando los padres castigan y fomentan ciertos comportamientos. Esto puede convertirse en un problema cuando los roles o los estereotipos de género restringen la expresión de la gente.
La sociedad asocia ciertos rasgos de personalidad a cada sexo, lo que causa problemas para las personas. Por ejemplo, se espera que los hombres sean fuertes y la mujeres sean complacientes. Hay que tener en cuenta que cada persona es diferente y no tiene que conformar a las expectativas de la sociedad, especialmente si impiden su expresión completa.
May 8, 2021
May 8, 2021
Umgang mit digitalen Medien
Heutzutage nutzen wir kaum traditionalle Medien, weil jeder von uns entweder ein Handy oder einen Computer hat. Die digitalen Medien übernahm die traditionallen Medien. Digitalen Medien bringt sich sehr viele Vorteile mit. Ein Vorteil ist soziale Interaktion. Durch verschiedene Webseiten und soziale Medien kann man sich mit Menschen überall auf der Welt interagieren. Wir können die neuen Nachrichten auch sofort erhalten. Vor digitalen Medien war das nicht möglich. Man musste manchmal vielleicht monatelang warten von einem Freund zu hören. Eine Sache, die negativ sein kann, ist Zeitverlust. Viele Jugendliche und sogar Erwachsene verschwinden so viel Zeit mit Internet, sozialen Netzwerken usw. Sie verlieren den Kontakt zur Realität.
May 8, 2021
Comunicazione e dispozitivi di comunicazione
I dispositivi di comunicazione svolgono un ruolo enorme nell'era odierna. Quasi tutti ora hanno uno smartphone, anche le generazioni più anziane. L'alfabetizzazione informatica è un'abilità di base ora. Devi sapere come cercare cose su Internet, inviare file, allegare documenti alle e-mail. È anche necessario per la ricerca di lavoro perché la maggior parte delle aziende assume tramite Internet e devi inviare il tuo CV e la lettera di motivazione come email.
Inoltre utilizziamo questi dispositivi anche per uso personale. Possiamo restare in contatto con la famiglia e gli amici più facilmente. Non dobbiamo tornare a casa per fare una telefonata o ricordare i numeri di telefono. Non dobbiamo aspettare giorni o settimane per l'arrivo delle lettere. Mandiamo semplicemente un messaggio a qualcuno e loro possono rispondere appena lo vedono.
Ovviamente questi cambiamenti tecnologici hanno anche lati negativi. Siamo diventati disponibili per gli altri tutto il giorno e può sembrare stancante. Possiamo parlare tutto il tempo, ma chattare non può sostituire il tempo di qualità reale. Ora nella pandemia non abbiamo molta scelta se non quella di usare la chat. Tuttavia è bello quando sei con gli amici e nessuno di voi è al telefono e state semplicemente insieme.
Purtroppo uso troppo il telefono ma cerco di limitarmi. È facile continuare a scorrere per ore senza accorgersene. Uso anche il mio laptop quasi ogni giorno, ma è per studiare e guardare film. Gioco ai videogiochi sul mio laptop solo una o due volte a settimana. Oppure gioco molto in una volta, poi me ne dimentico e non gioco per settimane.
In conclusione, penso che prendersi una pausa dall'uso di Internet sia rinfrescante. Non succederà nulla se perdi qualche notifica o se non rispondi immediatamente a un messaggio. Cerco di seguire il mio consiglio e di concentrarmi più su me stesso che su ciò che sta accadendo su Internet.
May 8, 2021
打疫苗以后的感情
不知道是疫苗还是半夜醒来让我觉得有点儿困。今天早上，我刚醒来以后觉得有一点儿难受。我睡了个回笼觉，九点又醒了。
我开始准备跟我辅导课的教授开会。我在我大学的写作中心工作。
我们要讨论我的小组项目的PPT。我们的报告是关于如何改进我们的写作中心。写作中心是一个可以给我们提供写作辅导的地方。辅导内容包括：英语作文、医学院申请、研究院申请、职业提案、求职信和简历。
我也学了别的新东西：
“我想延长呈交我作文的截止日期，可以吗?“
延长和呈交这些词我没学过。看起来挺实用得，因为我的日记经常讲我的大学生活。
我想学怎么说local bakery。我在一个学中文伺服器上问怎么说local bakery。有一位人回答我，说可以翻译到“一家当地面包店”
“烘焙店” 和 “糕点店” 也可以来说bakery。
May 8, 2021
A memory of my late dog.
Around 4 years ago ,an incident happened on my dog while we were strolling near my house. Suddenly I found him to swallow
something and from his mouse a kid of fishing line dropping. I was upset and tried to pull it out strongly. Sorry to say he was bleeding
a lot. Since then he wouldn't eat anything. I hurried to take him to a veterinarian and knew the fact from his blood test that he had an acute pancreatitis. The vet told me that there was no effective treatment but only one medicament. However it was only recently developed so he was not confident that it works or not. Clutching at straws I asked him to do it right now.
Surprisingly it performed wonders. It was a wonderful day for me and him.
May 8, 2021
Sentences 103: Hard-Done By, Slip-Up, To Come To Terms With
He feels hard-done by because it was not him who broke the window, but he reported it and got the dressing down.
You must not make another slip-up or else you will get fired.
She's finally coming to terms with the fact that she can't afford to study in the US.
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