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Who do you trust the most in your life?
I trust my family the most in my life. They have always been there for me even when I am sick. Of course, there have been some troubles in my family, but we’ve discussed face to face and get over many time. I’m very proud of them, and I hope they proud of me too.
July 30, 2025
自己紹介ー１日目の日記
こんにちは！私はいまプログラマーで働いている人です。日本で就職するために、JLPT N2 を目標で熱心にまなべています。今日はやりなかった方法で勉強するために、このサイトに来ました。最近、「どうすれば早くに日本語がうまく出来るんだろうかな」見たいな悩みが凄くありましたが、ここで私が良く使う言語で助言している時に、逆に「私もそんな負担を捨てて熱心にやれば大丈夫なんだ。」な思いが出ました。
ただのアドバイスだとしても本当にありがたいんですが、もし、地盤に余裕がいるならば簡単な学習アイヂアも教えてくださってば、もっとも嬉しいになると思います！
私の下手な文章だっても読んでいただいて本当にありがとございます！
July 30, 2025
My excitement to know a biography of Nightingale
I went to watch a musical, “Ghost and Lady” which was about a story of Florence Nightingale.
She faced many challenges when she worked to cure lots of sick and wounded solders in Crimea.
I cried many times during the show especially when I touched her strong belief toward the occupation of a nurse.
July 30, 2025
Mein Tokoroteneis
Ich habe über Tokoroten im Internet nachgeschlagen. Ich hatte gedacht, dass mit Sirup der Kantostil war und mit Essig der Kansaistil, aber wirklich war das das Gegenteil.
Die Weise meines Desserts „Tokoroteneis“ stand nirgends. Ich graube, dass das wirklich gut schmeckt. Ein Eis mit Kuromitsu schmeckt normalerweise zu süß, aber Tokoroten neutralisiert das wunderbar. Soll ich das Patent anmelden?
July 30, 2025
July 30, 2025
The Rackenboats Band
Jimmy is a student. He does everyday all the same - going to the university and then coming back home. He has three friends - they all like to hang out together but it's become rare last months. Jimmy in his free time absorbs by playing the guitar, it clears his mind, make him calm and opens the heart of creativity. He want to make songs, not just singing covers, but he doesn't has members for his band. His best friends don't really like playing music, they love another types of activities. Making a music alone - it's a challenge without motivation, joy and support. He started trying to find a new members, but according to his modesty and introversion, he gained no succes.
Time was ticking. One day, Jimmy met with Kayla by chance and surpsingly they started to communicate. Jimmy played to her his demos and suggested Kayla to join making music together. She rejected at first cause she didn't know how to play on music instruments. But Jimmy didn't give up, he gave Kayla his bass guitar and promised to help her.
Since then, Jimmy started making a dream come true. With Kayla he found a drummer, Alexandra. Three young musicians rehearsed their strange and heartbreaking songs every week. They called yourself "The Rackenboats", weird name that Jimmy came up with. Jimmy, Kayla and Alexandra hopes that one day someone will hear their music and his heart will full of sincere emotions that music gives to people.
July 30, 2025
Eine Ausstellung
Heute habe ich vor, eine bekannte Galerie zu besuchen. Obwohl ich nur vor ein paar Monaten dort war, möchte ich eine neue vorübergehende Ausstellung besichtigen. Ich kann nicht behaupten, dass ich eine echte Leidenschaft dafür habe, Gemälde zu betrachten. Nichtsdestotrotz genieße ich es manchmal, solche Veranstaltungen zu besuchen.
July 30, 2025
première écrite
Salut à touts
J'espère que touts vous allez bien !
Donc je m'appelle Ayoub et je suis un nouveau sur cette plateforme je voudrais progresser et évaluer mon langue français
Et donc je vous propose à vous m'aider moi dans cette apprentissage et aussi si vous avez le temps on va prendre des diférents sujets et on va discuter les ensembles et aussi je vais écrire des productions écrite et je vous souhaite de me proposer des plusieurs sujets quotidienne ,et si je trompe ou je fais des erreurs corrige moi pour le ratrapper
July 30, 2025
July 30, 2025
Buscando Trabajo en la Universidad
Actualmente, vivo en Los Angeles, California, pero asisto universidad en Michigan, y el semestre empieza en tres semanas. Antes de salgo, quiero buscar para un trabajo en el hospital de la universidad porque necesito experencia para escuela de medicina. Ahora, voy a escribir mi carta de presentación y mi currículuma vitae. También compré las ropas nueva para cuando tengo que hacer una entrevista de trabajo. Espero que todo ______ (goes well?), y tengo un trabajo para el semestre. Deséame suerte!
July 30, 2025
July 30, 2025
Mercoledì 30 luglio
Siamo già a metà settimana e i giorni passati mi sono sembrati come fossero mesi. Sapevo che sarebbe stato tutto più stimolante e difficile, ma non così tanto.
Oggi ho un test al lavoro e spero di superarlo. Anche se dovessi prendere un punteggio basso, lo supererò comunque, però alla fine mi creerà dei problemi.
Provo a pensare di essere troppo vecchia per lamentarmene, ma per quanto ci provi, non riesco a farcela.
Temo che sia troppo difficile superare i test (ne abbiamo molti), ma devo farcela.
July 30, 2025
July 30, 2025
July 30, 2025
July 30, 2025
日記０２ーサマーキャンプ
カジュアルに練習しようと思う！
今月の先週、一週間くらい子供のためのサマーキャンプに行ったんだ！初めてキャンプのカウンセラーになったから、最初緊張していたけど楽しくなった。プログラムは地元と日本文化について話していて、色んなアクティビティを参加できるし、日本の文化を習うことができた。カウンセラーとして子供たちは見守らなきゃらなくて、楽しい経験をあげらなきゃいけなかった。プログラム間に、毎日うちに帰ってきた時に、新しいアイデアを考えていた。それで次の日、頑張ってしようとした。子供におもしろくて簡単なアクティビティをしたけどそれぞれにテーマがある。例えば、寿司の作り方、餅の作り方、習字の書き方、とかなどのアクティビティ参加した。子供たちと仲良くしたかったので、相談できるな先生になりたかった。プログラムが終わったうちに、子供がプレゼントをくれて、ありがたかった。このプログロムの難しかったこと毎日朝5時起きだったけど、楽しかったと思う。初めてなんだけど、また今度したい！
July 30, 2025
أفلام الرعب
أفلام الرعب
نستمتع أنا وصديقي بمشاهدة أفلام الرعب لأنّها لا ترعينا، خصوص وأنّ الافلام تحاول جدا أن تكن مفزعة. في نسبتي، افلام الرعب التي فيها وحش احسن من هذا النوع، ومن الممكن أن هناك شخص لائم يريد أن يجرح لي، لا، في حقيقة الامر هناك كثير من الشخص كهذا في عالمنا، مع أنّ وحش شئ مختلف عنه.
لن أقل إنّني لا آمن بالوحوش او بالأشباح، فتلك فكرة تبدوني أسواء. ولكن تبدوني الوحوش أقل لائمة. أستيقظ كل يوم وتخبرني النباء عن الحروب والأزمات والوجع في كل الإنحاء العالم. في صفوفي، أدرس جرائم تستمرّ في الحدث، كإستئصال اللغات والثقافات الأصلية. أتسأل دائما نحن الأشخاص الوحوش الحقيقية.
July 30, 2025
July 30, 2025
TestDaF Aufsatz Einleitung
Obwohl es für uns ein relativ neues Phänomen ist, wird keine künftige Kindergeneration ein Leben ohne Handys, Bildschirme oder künstliche Intelligenz kennen. Mit der fortschreitenden Digitalisierung, die heutzutage alle Aspekte des Lebens prägt, lässt sich die Frage stellen, ob digitale Geräte in der Schule verpflichtend sein sollen. Während viele Vorteile durch diesen Ansatz entstehen, sollten die Schattenseiten nicht verharlost werden. Im Folgenden werden beide Argumente bezüglich der Umsetzung digitaler Geräte im Bildungsbereich ausführlich vorgestellt.
July 30, 2025
Oggi
Mi sono appena svegliata di un pisolino. Ero molto stanca, oggi devo dormire più ore. Ultimamente vado a dormire tardi. Adesso devo anche studiare un po’ tedesco, italiano , un po’ russo e leggere. Ormai voglio iniziare a leggere un libro in tedesco, molte volte ho iniziato un libro e non lo finisco. Mentre sto leggendo un libro in inglese di Patti Smith, si chiama “just kids”. Ormai mi piace piú leggere biografie, ma prima solo leggo (fiction books).
July 30, 2025
You have to take cold waters
Ok, maybe you don't have to, but you should.
I just read an article about the topic and I'm going write here what I remember from it and try to relate it with my personal experience.
The two most important benefits from this habit are personal satisfaction and improving the inmune system.
This is not going to work for everyone, of course, but if feeling kind of sad or disoriented is totally recommend to hit straight to your cold bath. In fact, this is part of what's called "hydrotherapy" (please, google it if interested).
Cold showers work well for me. It's a sort of a ritual to take a cold shower before doing something hard/demanding, like public speaking. It's a kind of "source of confidence"; I'm scoring my first points in this challenging day and I'm eager for more now.
The part of the immune system is also true, I rarely catch a cold.
I'm wondering how many people are leveraging this, in my opinion, powerful habit.
Did you have the habit of taking cold showers regularly? If yes, how was it at the beginning?
July 30, 2025
Correo a mi amigo
Hola José,
Gracias por me ayudó ayer con la ordenador, no sé qué lo hago sin tu. Sé es muy temprano cuando te llamé. En el siguiente mes, voy a viajar a su país y estoy muy emocionante. Pienso que Costa Rica es que hermosa y no espero para verlo. Cuando llegaré, me gustaría ver los diferentes animales salvajes. Especialmente los pájaros porque me encanta los pájaros desde era un niño. ¡Qué emoción! Voy a llegar a la aeropuerto a las siete y media en la mañana, nos vemos allí.
July 30, 2025
July 30, 2025
When I Go to a Friend’s House 友達のうちに行く
I guess it’s not just me, but I always get butterflies in my stomach when I go to a friend’s house for the first time.
I’m planning to bring a little snack — just to be a polite guest.
Apparently, some other people will be there too, so I hope I can get along with everyone.
I’ve noticed I tend to talk a lot about myself in these situations, more than other people do, and I usually end up regretting it.
Not sure if I’m putting this clearly, but… You know what I mean?
July 30, 2025
Hello, world! :)
Hi there. This is my first post on LangCorrect. I'm a software engineer with 20 years of experience and wide range of hobbies (i.e. audio engineering). Now I am on the way to move out from my country to some better place. Unfortunately, I spent a lot of years enhancing my professional skills, but not English. I can read books in English but become embarrassed when I just need to say "Hey, how do you do?". Today I've found LangCorrect in Google and thought: wow, this can really help me! Which is even better, I can also help people to teach Russian. So, let's try!