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Pourquoi ne pas faire pousser plus de fruits ?
Parfois, je sauvegarde des graines de fruits que j'achète au supermarché. Je n'ai pas d'expérience en tant que jardinière, mais maintenant que j'ai le temps et l'espace, je commence d'apprendre. De plus, j'achète des fruits qui sont exotiques (pour moi) que je trouve à Grand Frais. J'ai lu que c'est bien de mettre des graines dans le frigo pour 1 à 2 mois, le temps qu'il faut pour déclencher la germination de la graine. Je l'ai fait par envelopper les graines dans un sopalin humide et fermer dans un sac à fermeture à glissière.
Aujourd'hui, cela fait un mois que je les ai mis dans le frigo. J'étais très curieuse de les voir. Parmi environ cinq fruits différents, il y en avait seulement un qui a germé. Plus précisément, il s'agit de toutes les graines (environ six) provenant du même fruit. Je ne me rappelle pas quel est le fruit, mais je crois qu'ils viennent d'une pomme cannelle. J'ai beaucoup aimé ce fruit. Rien n'est promis pour les étapes prochaines, mais je vais bientôt acheter du terreau pour les mettre dans de petits pots.
July 25, 2025
résumé d’un vidéo YouTube
J’ai vu un vidéo sur YouTube sur le sujet de devenir la personne qui on veut être. La fille dans le vidéo a dit que le moment où on exprime le souhait d’améliorer sa vie c’est quand la transformation a déjà commencé. On ne dois pas accepter sa situation. On dois avoir le courage de changer soi-même ou sa vie. Changement n’est jamais agréable et n’est jamais facile. Mais après de temps, cette difficulté deviendra moins crevante mais plus fluide et naturelle. En plus, le gens qu’on idolâtre et qu’on en envie, ils font de travail dur que tu ne vois pas et qui devenait tellement fluide et naturelle que personne ne le remarque plus. Malgré tout ce que pensent les autres, il faut qu’on réalise ses buts et devient la personne qui on veut être parce qu’on n’a pas qu’une vie.
Mérci d’avoir corrigé
July 25, 2025
July 25, 2025
El comienzo de mi aventura con español:)
Empecé a estudiar español hace más de 3 años antes de entrar a secundaria. Estaba estudiando con Duolingo para conocer a unas frases básicas antes mis primeras clases de español. Estaba muy emocionada, porque en mi primaria estudié alemán, y eso no me gustó nada (irónicamente, hoy en día estoy aprendiendo alemán jajaja). De todos modos, me gustaba mucho estudiar español, y honestamente me enamoré totalmente en este idioma. Quería aprender más y más cada día, y aquí estoy, siendo mucho mejor que toda mi clase (que no puede decir nada en español). Todavía tengo muchas cosas que aprender, pero pienso que mi español no es muy mal. Me encanta este idioma:)
July 25, 2025
"Milkman" - Anna Burns
La protagonista de este libro es una chica cuyo nombre no está mencionado. Esa chica vive en una ciudad en Irlanda del Norte, durante el conflicto que se llama "the Troubles" (o "los problemas" en español). No tiene una vida fácil. De niña perdió su padre, no tiene buena relación con su madre, y parece un poco rara para sus vecinos, porque está leyendo y caminando a la vez. Además, le está siguiendo un hombre que está conocido como Lechero. Sabe todo sobre ella y está hablando con ella, aunque la mujer no quiere tener nada que ver con él.
Honestamente ya no he leído todo el libro, pero ser la protagonista sería muy interesante y estresante a la vez. No puedo imaginarme en esta situación. Además de no tener buena relación con la familia, estar siguiendo de algún hombre aleatorio que sabe todo de mí me da miedo.
July 25, 2025
July 25, 2025
My latest English reading
I come back to write in english about m'y readings.
I read a news about AI drone.
It a good news for the planete and nature.
Now, farmers can use the AI drones to stop weeds on their fields. They can spray only on wild plants and they does'not spray on a safe nature. It is a good idea to save nature and to discrease chemicals use.
Moreover, it more profitable than big agricultural's machines. These machines are very expansives.
It's a good for our future.
Thank you reading me.
July 25, 2025
July 25, 2025
The Alchemist Book Entry 3: Sheep and a Repeated Life
Hello! I started again to read The Alchemist. I really think this book is a real work of art for dreaming people. Each word has a lot of meaning.
At the beginning of the book, Santiago lives a peaceful life as a shepherd. He himself said that his sheep don't need to think, they only need food and water. They don't question anything. He guides them, and they just follow him.
Sheep represent a predictable, repetitive, secure life… but one that often doesn't challenge us. A comfortable routine that doesn't force us to ask if this is really what we want. Santiago loves them, but he also notices that if he continues with them, he will never discover what the world has for him.
This makes me think about my own "sheep": those activities, people, or habits that give me stability, but at the same time don’t allow me to grow. How many times do we follow a path just because we know it?
Sometimes, we must leave behind what gives us security and go search for what gives us meaning.
July 25, 2025
July 25, 2025
Mi opinión sobre IA
Inteligencia artificial está influyendo nuestras vidas más y más cada día. Tiene unas ventajas, pero para mí tiene muchas más desventajas.
Bueno, a veces uso ChatGPT en vez de buscar lo que quiero por el internet. Dicho esto, si IA nunca existiera sería mejor. Además de ser adictivo (especialmente para las generaciones más jovenes), es mucho más conveniente y rápido preguntar algo a ChatGPT y recibir una buena, clara y rápida respuesta a cualquiera pregunta, literalmente cualquiera. Eso no es posible con buscadoras de internet, es que la gente ya no tiene ganas de buscar las respuestas por su cuenta.
De todos modos, IA también tiene unas ventajas como dije antes. Me ayuda mucho la opción de llamada con IA on ChatGPT cuando estoy estudiando español. No tengo nadie para practicarlo, así que hablar con IA me ha ayudado muchísimo. Eso es una maravillosa solución para estudiantes de cualquier idioma.
Honestamente no puedo pensar en más ventajas, para mí, IA es un gran peligroso para nuestro futuro. Se puede generar fotos, videos y voces que parecen muy autenticos, no es tan difícil estafar a alguien, y la gente no podrá pensar por su cuenta. Vivimos en el mundo en que IA todavía está desarrollando, sino muy peligroso, y aún la gente ya se adicte a eso. La pregunta es, ¿cómo será IA en unos años? ¿Cómo va a influir a las generaciones más jovenes si está tan poderoso hoy en día? Todos sabemos muy bien las respuestas.
July 25, 2025
My thoughts about learning
I often think about what is the best way to learn something. My personal conclusion of this question is just doing a lot. As I face more failure, I can recognize what I miss or lack more. What make a concrete skill are experience and time. If I only learn hard about theories and knowledges but do not experience in a real situations, I might think I am good at something but when I really do it I will end up facing a lot of difficulties.
Also I think self-study is good, but it has a clear limitation. I cannot figure out what is wrong in what I did when I learn something by myself. I still think that for beginners self study can be a good method to learn, (because when the skill level is in a 'beginner' section, there are a lot of things to learn so even self study can be very effective.) but after getting into an 'intermediate' level, correcting mistakes becomes an important process. In this perspective, a chance to be fixed is valuable.
Well, what I wrote above is just my personal opinion. Btw what I like about this site is that in English section, this site seems very well activated. When I watch Korean section (which is my native language) there are not many writings. Probably it will be same for many other languages. But for English a lot of people write something and fixing is done frequently. I like that users of this site are almost learners and they can help each other, making good interactions.
July 25, 2025
July 25, 2025
Ravels Lebensende
Die letzte einige Jahren von Maurice Ravel waren eine Tragödie. Er litt am Symptom wie einer Demenz. Er brauchte mehr als eine Woche, einen kurzen Brief zu schreiben. Er konnt kein Stück komponieren. In seinem Kopf gab es Musik, aber er konnte welche auf der Partitur nicht schreiben.
July 25, 2025
July 25, 2025
Long time no journaling
After a long time of stopping journaling, I found that hmm, nothing.
Perhaps it was kind of difficult to me because since I was a kid, I always feel like no one would to listen to me.
All they would do is mocking, judge, even they wouldn’t listen to me at all.
So I found myself recently - few months - I couldn’t sleep well, I always get tired, miserable, if lucky, I can sleep after 30’ of bedtime, if it’s not, it could be 2-3 hours in my bed, some night I don’t sleep at all, like literally up to 5am, then maybe I can sleep, then after waking up, it would have been afternoon, and I feel dizzy all day.
After saw a guy post his/her journaling on LangCorrect, my head popped up: “maybe I should try to start journaling again.”
Yeah, after writing a few sentences, I feel a bit better to be honest. Hopefully I can find even just a little bit of peace somewhere in my life, in a busy, a tough life.
July 25, 2025
Social media and Internet
Think about your own childhood, how we used to play outside, read books and engage in creative activity. Now, compare that with the lifestyle of today's teenagers. you'll notice a huge difference. One of the biggest difference is their dependency on the internet and social media.
July 25, 2025
都市伝説
今日は何について書くのかを決められなくて、LangCorrectのプロンプトを見ていました。そこで、この「都市伝説」というプロンプトを選びました。考えたら、私が住んでいる州の知っている話は、都市伝説というより民間伝承のようなものです。だから、私の祖父母が住んでいる別の町の都市伝説について書こうと思います。
（ちなみに、街と町の違いはなんですか？ここは、「city」と言うつもりでした。）
この噂は90年代に始まったと言われているようです。その町では、夜に悪い魔女が来ると信じられています。魔女は扉にノックして、知っている人の声で呼びかけるんです。もし魔女に騙されて、扉を開けてしまったら、血を吐いて死んでしまうそうです。
でも、家を救う方法もあります。扉の前に「ナーレ・バー」と書いておくと、魔女は立ち去るそうです。意味は、「明日来てください」です。意外と品がある化け物ですね。
日本にも、「口裂け女」や「トイレの花子さん」などの有名な都市伝説がありますね。ネット上では、歩く拡声器のような「サイレンヘッド」や、細くて顔のない「スレンダーマン」のような怪物も有名です。
私にとって、このような現代の伝承はとても面白いです。「私たちは、昔の人たちと同じように、今も伝説を作り続けている」と思うと、なんとなく安心します。
July 25, 2025
Don't Know what to Do
The company that I work for was acquired.
Many executives have been fired, and everyone is worried about the future.
My bosses are waiting for the ultimatum to know who stays or go in September I've been creating tools to automate some tasks, I don't know if I should show them to the manager.
What do you think?
July 25, 2025
July 25, 2025
July 25, 2025
İs an İstanbul dengerous city
I things İstanbul is not dengerous city . Yes being some bad events there but this is could be everywhere. There are people helpful and nice and kind. They are together work without familiar. I like very İstanbul. The people are very kind about tourist there. Of course have bad events but this not do there dengerous city
July 25, 2025
I like doing exercise in summer
İ like exercise in summer so l go to the gym. But gym is very far so l goes by car. I doing treadmil and lift weigt and plates but sweaty finally.After then swimming l am like swimming in summer because is very hot outside. İ m form Erzurum. There are not as hot as İstanbul. I like doing exersice because lose weight and There are have a friend from fakulty.
July 25, 2025
My universıty period
I began to universıty at 2023 year. 2023 is difficult years for me because l have A exam. I have worked 10 hours a days generally. İt is very hard. But l love it. I am dream is living in İstanbul so very studied. Elhamdülillah. I won to Fakulty of medicine. I like a my school but. İt is a small school. Very smal. But İstanbul is very beatiful ı like it. There are have A lot of place to visit for example Ayasofya mosque , Süleymaniye mosque, Üsküdar ….
İ have a few friends. Hatice,Aysu,Hüdanur,Hümeyra …. They are very nice people. We are dream is abroad for example italy,France,Mekke ….
I meet someone there. He is a very nice and handsome. I guess like to he. I have dream about he. I guess takas places.
My part is very hard so l don’t like it. There is a lot of memorazion. İ dont like a memorazion.
July 25, 2025
The world has too much steel (NY times article)
The article is about the overproduction of steel products world wide. Nowadays a lot for countries sustain their own local steel mills, because of national securities reasons. Steel can be used in many ways, like for building cars, bridges and all kinds of civil commodities. But it's also used for building tanks, aircrafts and bombs.
Therefore no nations wants to give up their own steel productions. The result of the overproduction of steel products are falling prices, cutoffs of employies and shrinking companies revenues.
On top of that, imposed the US american president - Donald Trump - new import penalties for non-US steel products. But not only the US tries to protect their markets from foreign - and most important, cheaper steel - also die EU imposed import penalties for chinese steel aswell.
New enviorment regulations forces more and more companies to go for green(er) ways to manufacturing steel. But the problem is, that less enviorment intense manufactoring methods - like melting iron ore with electricity - increases the prices for steel products. Rising prices causes less demand and more overproduction, because potential buyers will wait until the marktet prices are falling.
Btw: There is one detail that is not explained in the article, but it's important to know. To melt iron ore you need a special kind of furnace. As soon as the melting process has startet, you cannot turnout the furnace or lower the outcome. So you must keep going, because otherwise the furnace get's destroyed and needs to be rebuild completly from scratch as soon as the fire turns out.
Source: https://www.nytimes.com/2025/07/25/business/steel-overcapacity-china.html