Recently corrected public entries
👉 Register to view more posts, get corrections on your writing and correct others.Aug. 7, 2025
Aug. 7, 2025
A Holiday in my Country
Shout out to everyone.
Today is Holiday in my country. in this day, we remind one battle which is called Batalla de Boyaca.
That battle was decisive in the independence war of Colombia.
Near my building apartment there is a soccer field, in that place there are some people playing soccer, others are listening music.
In my city Medellin people usually listening music with a hight level volume so I can heard that music since my window.
Music is mixed with loud of people that cheer from the stands.
Also I heard the same every sunday. Here in Medellin, people loves soccer and salsa music.
Otherwise, we have a quiet afternoon a few cold for this season. I hope it doesn't rain because in sunset I want go to do some physicall exercise and that could mess up my plans.
Well, that is all for today
Bye
Aug. 7, 2025
Aug. 7, 2025
Eerste tekst: Over mij
Mijn naam is SaSoa. Ik ben zesendertig jaar oud. Ik ben een vrouw.
I kom uit Brazilië. ik woont al twee jaar in België.
Ik werk in het hotel. Elke dag na het werk leer ik Nederlands.
Ik woon samen met mijn vriendin en mijn kat.
I houd van reizen en lezen.
Ik kan niet goed tennis spelen maar kan ik goed lopen.
Vandaag ben ik blij omdat schijnt het zon.
Aug. 7, 2025
Aug. 7, 2025
Aug. 7, 2025
Trip to Switzerland: 1st day, afternoon
It was around 1pm when I arrived in Interlake by train. It was cloudy and also rained occasionally. We, my wife and I, headed to a hotel we would stay that were located at nearby the station. When we arrived there, nothing looked special: The building was just slightly bigger than nearby houses and its outwards appearance was also bland. But the ambience of the inside of the building was wonderful. The room design seemed being kept same as the old time and there were many kinds of antiques such as furniture, clocks and lamps. Along the staircases, there were also some old arcade game machines hooked on the walls. The elevator was also very old: Its door was a manual door, not an automatic sliding door seen everywhere today.
After we put our luggage in our room, we went out and walked around the town. But within shorter than 30 minutes, we found ourselves in a restaurant because we had heavy rain (and were also hungry.) The restaurant was full of guests and vibrant. The service of staffs was quick and very nice. Among them, one staff was very talkative and friendly. Every few minutes he moved to a different table, talked to the guests and made them laugh. He also brought out an alphorn, a traditional Swiss wind instrument, from a room of the restaurant and played it. To be honest, I couldn't get how well he played it, but it was a pleasant experience and this would have not been experienced if we haven't decide to go to this restaurant, because we hadn't book any concerts of alphorns. After we had a dinner, we went back to the hotel and prepared for a hike scheduled on the second day.
Aug. 7, 2025
Meine Einführung
Hallo!
Ich heiße Daria und komme aus der Ukraine. Meine Hobbys sind Klavier und Geige spielen, Freiwilligenarbeit, Lesen und Fotografie. Außerdem studiere ich Philosophie an der Universität. Ich spreche Ukrainisch, English und ein bisschen Deutsch. Ich denke, diese Website wäre eine gute Übung für mich.
Lass uns einander besser kennenlernen :)
Danke!
Aug. 7, 2025
Aug. 7, 2025
سفارة
أحب السفارة. البلد الأخير الذيه زرت هو المغرب. لست عربية ولكنني أحب أن أسافر إلى البلدان حيث يتكلم الشعب بالعربية. لا أريد أن أقول (( بلدان عربية )) لأنني أعرف أن أناس البلدان الأفريقية يقولون إنهم ليسوا عربا. زرت الأردن والمصر قبل بداية دراستي لللغة العربية إذا لم أستتع تمرين الحديث مع الناس محلي وعندما زرت المغرب لم أستتع تمرين الحديث لأن الناس يتكلمون العربية آخرا والفرنسية والبربري. في المستقبل يجب علي أن أسكن في بلد عربي لمدة نصف سنة أو أطول لدراستي الجامعتي وأريد أن أفعل هذا في الأردن لأنني أريد تعلم لهجة الشام. أرغب في أن أستتيع إقامتي في سوريا أو فلسطين أيضأ ولكن من اليمكن أن هذه البلدان سليسا آمن.
شكرا على التصحيح
Aug. 7, 2025
Should education be free at all levels?
The topic we are discussing today is whether education should be free at all levels -elementary and middle school, college, university...
There are some pros and cons on both sodes: in the first place, if studying is a right, why do we have to pay? Not everyone can afford school supplies and can eventually drop education and consequently their dreams. Then, more people would have a better knowledge, since new generations are leaking of it.
However, the state needs money to create great study programs all over the country. Plus, in my country, you pay your son's university bill based on what you earn every year, or you can win tons of scholarships based on your grades.
These are very great method to balance free education and support to universities, to mantain a stable situation in programs.
Aug. 7, 2025
Ma visite à New York
Il y a deux ans, je suis allée à New York. Il y a beaucoup de choses à voir et à faire là-bas. J’ai marché dans Central Park, traversé le pont de Brooklyn, et pris le ferry pour Staten Island pour apercevoir la Statue de la Liberté . J’ai visité le Mémorial du 11 septembre. Malheureusement, 2,971 personnes ont perdu leurs vies lors de l’attaque terroriste du September 11, 2001. Mon activité préféré était de voir les Rockettes au Radio City Music Hall. Le spectacle était spectaculaire. C’était ma deuxième visite à New York et j’espère que ne sera pas la dernière.
Aug. 7, 2025
Aug. 7, 2025
Aug. 7, 2025
Aug. 7, 2025
Aug. 7, 2025
The World Games 2025
The World Games 2025 is opening in Chengdu tonight.
This is the first time I've ever noticed this sports show.
The opening ceremony is amazing. I highly suggest you find some videos on YouTube or TikTok.
There are some cute panda dolls, stunning fireworks, and cheerful people from all over the world.
Aug. 7, 2025
Aug. 7, 2025
Foreign travel
Travelling abroad has a significant impact on the individual.
Engaging with a new culture helps people expand their knowledge of other cultures, in addition discovering new cuisines gives them a deep insight into that country's eating habits and finally foreign travels offerd the opportunity to encounter with people from different ethnicities.
Aug. 7, 2025
Aug. 7, 2025
Aug. 7, 2025
Do you like to shop online shopping or in person? Give reaso
Generally, I don't usually shop online and neither in person, because I don't have enough money to wast it buying clothes that I do not need. However, if I had to choose, I'd say shopping in person. The best thing of this option is that you can try every size of the clothes in the shop.
If you shop online and you choose accidentally a wrong size, you have to do a boring proccess for the return and wait a long time for the refund.
Aug. 7, 2025
what is my favorite animal, and why?
Since I was a kid, I've always wanted to have a dog, because I had a nintendo game that was based on taking care of a golden retriever. He was so loyal and loving. Moreover, I know lot of people who have dogs and they are really happy with them.
However, I began to love cats 4 years ago, because my girlfriend has to of them and they are adorable. I feel like their cats are mine too, and their independence make easier to take care of them, so I don't know what I will do in the future.
Aug. 7, 2025
Story of Ratnag part-9
After killing King Akram, Layla also killed all the family members of Akram and started his ritual on their dead bodies, with the help of his mother Kamli, who was a very powerful witch.
During the ritual, Kamli started to feel that something was going wrong, so she stopped the ritual and said to Layla, “I think something is wrong. The ritual process is having some issues.”
Layla said, “What are you saying, mother? I have done everything the right way!”
Kamli replied, “How can you be sure that there's no issue in the ritual? Look at our goddess statue her eyes are becoming red. I think our goddess is not happy.”
Then, the goddess appeared in front of Layla and Kamli. The goddess said, “Are you both fools?”
Layla asked, “What happened? Did we do something wrong in the ritual?!”
The goddess replied, “No. You did the ritual very perfectly. But Akram and his brothers whose blood you served me are not royal blood!”
Kamli said, “What? How is it possible?”
The goddess said, “King Akram and his brothers do not belong to this royal family. He is the son of a minister. The previous king of Ratnag, Abhay, has only one daughter. She is the only royal blood. You must serve her blood to me so that the ritual can be completed.”
Layla asked, “But goddess, where is King Abhay’s daughter now? What is her name?”
The goddess replied, “Her name is Annu, and she lives in the East Gurukul.”
Aug. 7, 2025
SOME SUGGESTIONS FOR YOUR B2
Are you going to do it with Cambridge? This one is the most difficult one. If you need some recommendations, you should be calm in the exam, because it's not as hard as teachers tell us. Moreover, it's a really important title because if you want to get a university title, you must have at least a B1.
Reading is the worst part for me, because it feels like you take more time than the reality.
For my part, listening went really well, because when I did this exam, teachers gave us headphones to do this part. That miracle made it easier to understand every single word I had to listen.
I would like to tell you more things about my exam, but I've forgotten everything about writing and speaking.
I wish you get that desired B2.