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July 23, 2025
Hybrid Work
I've been enjoying my new work-life balance. I'm spending more time with my family and less time in the traffic. Whether this for a decade or only a few years, I'm trying to get the most out of my privilege. Yesterday I was looking for a quote from ex-president Theodore Roosevelt, and I ended up downloading a book written by him called " Ranch Life and the Hunting trail".
July 23, 2025
This is first time for me to use langcorrect.
Hello! I want to learn english more (especially for writing and talking, but writing is first for now). I am living in South Korea and I learned english since I was a child. My reading and listening skills are okay (as I think), but I have weaknesses in vocabulary and real-time talking. I want to overcome this. I will write anything for my personal practice, but it would be grateful if anyone write any feedback to me. Thank you :D
July 23, 2025
¿Prefieres comprar en línea o en persona?
Sin duda prefiero comprar en persona, especialmente ropa, porque la puedo probar y evaluar si de verdad me gusta lo que quiero comprar. La gran parte de cosas que vemos en tiendas en línea se ve completamente diferente en la vida real. Cuándo compro algo en línea, siempre veo las opiniones de otras personas. Sin embargo, lo que me gusta comprar en línea son libros. Me lo parece más conveniente y efectivo en términos de libros a diferencia de otros productos. Las recomendaciones me ayudan mucho a elegir el libro adecuado para mí, y en persona, si fuera a librería, no sabría qué esperar y tendría que elegir juzgando a las descripciones del libro.
July 23, 2025
July 23, 2025
Day-6
Today I woke up at 6:00 a.m and began my day taking a bath and having breakfast. At 7:45, I began my study session that continue for 2 hours, after that, I wrote my daily journal . After that, I learned five new English words and use them in sentences. Later, I prepared my lunch and ate it.
July 23, 2025
My first day at university
I was 18 years old. When the clock rang, I waked up. I was excited and happy. I hate wake up early.
I went to my school with my motocycle. I had a very fast motocycle.
How did I buy that motocycle when I was only 18 years? Those days, my mother promised me. I passed university exam and she bought a motocycle.
My motocycle name is Honda CBR 600RR. This was my dream.
There was breakfast restaurant opposite my school. I sat there and sent a message to my old school teacher.
The first day at university in Turkiye, teacher don’t teach. Students take care of paper works. I went to orientation meeting. Some students looked nervous and some student looked happy like me.
Day off, let be honest, which one of us married with first looked girl at university?
July 23, 2025
Was ist die beste Lösung zum Leiden in der Welt?
Zu diesem Problem gibt es keine absolute Lösung. Solange es Menschen gibt, gibt es auch Ausbeutung, Grausamkeit, Narzissismus, Verderbung, Unehrlichkeit und alle diese Dinge, die zu Schmerz und Leiden führen. Wir können nur verändern, was wir können. Wir können nur die besten Versionen von uns selbst werden und darzu beitragen, Gesellschaften, die so gut wie möglich sind, zu bilden. Das ist aller. Natürlich kann man sich eine Utopie vorstellen. Sogar ich, unter meinen Zynismusschichten, wenne ich meine Fantasie herumwandern lasse, hege ich den Traum von einer perfekten Welt. Man muss aber sich daran erinnern, dass „Utopie“ etymologisch „Ort, der nicht existiert“ bedeutet!
July 23, 2025
July 23, 2025
The Beauty Of Music
I love music so much its like a lifestlye for me. I listen music all of the time as possible as I can, it doesnt disturbs me when I am doing any chores or any other activites like: doing homework, playing game, reading a book, chatting with my friend… When I listen any music I feel like I am in the atmosphere and feeling all the voice, instruments in my inside. This feeling makes me really happy because of this personal trait of mine I do not have a specific genre music. I love all the kinds and when a listen a genre it feels like that is the best genre so I do not force myselft to stuck into specific genres but if I had to say a genre that I like the most would probably jazz or pop. Do not misunderstand me for saying these genres I love all of them except hard metal. It is like a chaos who enjoys screaming with a lot of noise in the background.
July 23, 2025
July 23, 2025
July 23, 2025
My favourite seasion
in the year has 12 months,4 seasion. Every seasions have its months. 4 seasion have autumn,winter,spring and summer. My favourite seasion is winter. because i don't like hot month. i sweat a lot, and that felt discomfort me. in Winter rains snow and rain. I like cold weather, especially wind weather.
July 23, 2025
Los jóvenes pasan demasiado tiempo con el teléfono móvil
Creo que los jóvenes hoy en día pasan demasiado tiempo en sus teléfono móviles. Esto ocurre desde la aparición del primer “smartphone”. Con estos nuevos teléfono móviles, las personas pueden más tiempo y hacer más cosas con ellos.
Las empresas que fabrican los teléfono móviles lo saben, y saben que cuanto más tiempo pasa la gente con sus teléfono móviles, más dinero pueden ganar. Por eso, las empresas de teléfono móviles comenzaron a fabricar teléfono móviles más adictivos e integraron tiendas de aplicaciones para vender apps adictivas también. Cuanto más tiempo pasa una persona en el teléfono móvil, más dinero ganan las empresas.
Entonces, los jóvenes pasan demasiado tiempo en sus teléfono móviles porque las empresas han creado un producto demasiado adictivo. Han construido algo más adictivo que las drogas. No es culpa de los jóvenes, sino de las empresas.
July 23, 2025
Un nouveau courant politique
Un jeune politicien s’est levé il y a trois ans pour changer le Japon. Lors de cette élection, le parti qu’il a fondé a connu une percée remarquable.
Beauque des politiciens actuels se tournent vers la Chine, et de nombreux Chinois viennent au Japon et rachetient nos terres.
De plus, il y a bien trop d’immigrés illégaux. Les gens ressentent un profond sentiment de crise.
En outre, la vie des citoyens ne s’est pas du tout améliorée, et aucune mesure n’est prise.
La plupart des Japonais n’éprouvent plus que colère et méfiance envers les politiciens actuels.
July 23, 2025
July 23, 2025
July 23, 2025
Day 18: The Myth of “Wasted Time”
If something has no tangible benefit, we tend to think it's pointless. A short nap, taking a bath instead of a shower or even just not working nonstop all day. Everything has to have an exact purpose that justifies its value. If it seems worthless, many people feel dread about it. This pressure can be really hard to manage, so we often start avoiding these things, even though they have benefits, just not the ones we would expect from them.
"Every minute counts," they say. But what if it's a lie? Maybe it's just a big paperweight that puts pressure on our shoulders and chest, and forces us to scribble plans on napkins at breakfast or feel resentment if something what we do doesn't materially worth it. And that's it, we get duped.
One thing is true: time is really valuable. That's what we never gain, we only lose. But we cannot view it as only actions with material value that are worth our time. There are so many "worthless" things that we need to do, because they have immaterial benefits for us, our physical or mental health or simply just because they are fun. And fun things are valid. Maybe we should muster the courage to review our value system and free up some time for those things that simply feels good to us because maybe they're the ones that actually recharge us. If we give time to ourselves for these things, they'll help us spend the rest of our time more productively. And maybe we won't collapse after a hard day like a sack of potatoes.
July 23, 2025
Charles Trenet
Pour moi, il est ce tendre amoureux du cœur qui me fait toujours sourire. Ses chansons débordent d’humour, d’imagination, et surtout de ce sentiment si précieux : l’éphémère. Il chante indéniablement bien, et pourtant, il ne cherche jamais à chanter « joliment ». C’est là une grande part de son charme.
Il semble parfois tourner en dérision ceux qui abordent la vie avec trop de gravité, comme s’il me chuchotait, d’un air complice : « Il y a mieux à faire que de se prendre au sérieux… et si on s’amusait de la vie ? »
Je suis profondément touchée par sa capacité à faire revivre les souvenirs, à peindre les paysages intérieurs avec une telle clarté. Les vagues de ses émotions : pures, harmonieuses, bouleversantes, se déversent en moi. Et dès qu’elles m’atteignent, je ne peux plus m’en défaire.
Est-ce parce qu’il n’a en lui que de la pureté ? Non, je crois que c’est parce qu’il a connu aussi des zones d’ombre, et que c’est précisément cette part de douleur qui lui permet de faire briller la lumière dans ses poèmes. Quand j’écoute ses chansons pleines d’amour, je ressens en même temps les blessures de son âme, ces douleurs silencieuses qui rendent sa tendresse d’autant plus bouleversante.
July 23, 2025
July 23, 2025
My library routine
I've come to the library. I come library everyday except Monday because the library closes on Monday. Also, I usually prepare my meals at home this is healthier because I've reflux so I must avoid eat packaged food and I must to do GERD diet. I usually study English and improve my project on software and read book this is my study routine. By the way I've been reading Dostoyevsky's The Double. Have you read this book? If you have, did you like it?... I hope you can give me feedback to how to I make these sentences more naturally and suggest alternatives modals or sentences.
July 23, 2025
July 23, 2025
July 23, 2025
improving eng
HELLO this is my first text. I study for my english will be good for medical. Because this year i will started medical faculty unfourtanely this faculty just learn in english and my english isnt good for it yet. I know reading a english text and answered multiple choices questions but i'm not good at listening or writing. I am watching english series. these are himym and prison break. But i have to watched with subtitle. Anyway.. i liked it :)
Do you know turkish educational system? i am sure you heard it. i studied for two years with dicipline and seriously. But after all i cannot go to the university i want. Improving my english wasn't in my plans. anyway there's nothing to do. That's all..
July 23, 2025
My ordinary holiday morning
I introduce my ordinary holiday morning.
It means normal and doesn’t happen any surprising.
Actually, I love that because I spent much time following my planning!
I often wake up at almost 8 am and do walking around my home.
Walking is refreshed and relaxed to me.
I spent approximately 25 minutes.
After walking, I take breakfast.
Generally, I prefer rice to bread.
By the way, I don’t know why I often chose rice, but I love rice at morning!