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Oct. 28, 2021
Der Vortrag
Ich war heute sehr nervös und wollte fast vor lautem Angst kotzen, habe aber das nicht gemacht. Stattdessen bin ich stolz, da ich heute einen Vortrag auf Deutsch gehalten habe. War ich schlecht oder war meine Präsentation in Ordnung? Das kann ich selber nicht beurteilen, weshalb würde ich nichts über meine eigene Leistung schreiben. Wichtig ist aber, dass ich es geschafft habe und dass es nicht so schwer war.
Oct. 28, 2021
La situation du covid en France
Ma tentative de rédaction d'un rapport fictif sur la situation du covid en France
"Une honte pour (sur?) notre pays," a dit le président Emmanuel Macron.
Les soignants sont au bout du rouleau à cause de l'augmentation soudaine de cas de covid-19 qui ont avoisiné les 30 000 pendant la fin de semaine, dans le sillage du relâchement de restrictions autorisé par Macron. Le suivi est pratiquement impossible de réaliser, quand les hôpitaux publiques ont excédé leur capacité, et aucune infirmière peut contrôler la salut de chaque patient. Il ne faut pas dire que la qualité de la prise en charge est détériorée, et que les patientes sont remuants.
En toile de fond, on aperçoit des tombereaux en cours de disposer les vêtements contaminés, tandis qu’il y a des officiers de police anti-émeutes armés de lacrymogènes tournicotant et patrouillant les dalles du bâtiment, formant une présence menaçante pour empêcher la congestion.
Les experts médicaux préconisent le public de ne pas visiter les centres médicaux, sauf si ont besoin de traitement médical urgent.
Oct. 28, 2021
A Smile Please.
Yesterday, my girlfriend and me were watching the news in TV, when they began to talking about a parade of models. The most interessant was to see the face of all models. The look of all faces was seria, hard and angry. For some reason, the models never laugh, it is as if seem they do not like the clothing they wear. It is a bit quirky. I think that for possible customer is more attractive to see a models smiling when her wear a fashion clothing in a parade.
Oct. 28, 2021
Education
When I was a primiry school student, the tuition was over 300 yuan each semester. My father is a teacher, his salary was similar with my tuition. When I was in grade 3, my brother was in grade 1. At the beginning of the semester, the teacher in charge would ask me in public for my tuition. I was very embarrased but I could't say anything. I dislike the teacher for her behaviour, because she could ask me privately. Furthermore, she knew my father and knew that he wouldn't be bilking. I could't understand why the teacher did that, since she also had a kid.
I studied in town, I seldom heard that somebody drop out because of poverty.
When I went to middle school, which is the only one in town, I experienced my classmate drop out because of poverty. I was the monitor, and my father happened to be the teacher. In the second semeter, there were five students in my class had dropped out. My father told me to call them by phone, but when we sat in the office, he gave up and said it wouldn't work because he had experienced this so many times. I wanted to try, but I thought that maybe my father was right, and even though I called, what can I do? There were some students dropped out every semester, one of the main reasons was they didn't like studying. There were so many factories in the province, and it wasn't very strict to work in the factories. So most of them would go to work after quitting.
The difference came out in grade 9, the year between middle school and senior high school. If you wanted to college, you had to graduate from high school. And the tuition of high school was over 1000 yuan while the mobile phone just started to be used in the small city.
I still can clearly remember that I got two admission letters of my girl classmates after the senior high school entrance examination. They were accepted by the No. 4 high school, whose students were able to accepted by the colleges rather than university. In China, most colleges have 6 semesters while the universities have 8-10 semesters. The two girls never showed up, so I called one of them because I had her number. Her father answered the phone and told me that she had went to a factory. He could't afford the expense of the high school because his son was going to get married. In most traditional families, sons were the most important, because the parents think that they can rely on their sons then they become old. In the same time, daughters were regarded as water because they would get married and moved out in the end. There is a saying goes: when you splashe the water out, you can't never get them back. Yep, the welfare was
so poor that people had to rely on themselves. Ironically, some boys were spoiled too much that they became so rude and behaved badly, and their parents could't rely on them but had to support them in turn.
Oct. 28, 2021
Oct. 28, 2021
29. La magique de rester jeune
On dit souvent que l'age de 20 ans est le plus beau moment de la vie, grâce à la jeunesse qui porte. Donc beaucoup de femmes recourirent à la « médecine » anti-âge, comme l'extrait de fleurs, d'or, ou bien l'injection de botox, ou même à la chirurgie esthétique. ça se semble vraiment séduissant, mais en se refléchant bien, est-ce que ça vaut de la chandelle ? Selon moi, la response est non.
Tout d'abord, je doute de son efficacité. Si ces médecines anti-ages étaient si efficaces, on ne voyait plus les personnes qui semblaient vielles dans les rues. Depuis l'ancienne génération, l'humaine a déjà conscaré énormement de temps pour trouver des formules magiques pour rester jeune mais dès maintenant, personne ne peut le faire. Pourquoi ? Parce que la vieillesse est un processus naturel, on peut donc simplement le ralentir mais pas le renverser.
De plus, il porte des risques sanitaires. On peut parler d'abord les risques de l'automédications, comme la toxification. Et puis, comme toutes les chirurgies, il include les risques d'avoir les effets sécondaires graves, ou bien l'échec. Il y a un accident locaux où une patiente est morte à cause de l'infection après faire fait injecté de botox (une sorte de poison néurologie pour réduire la contraction musculée) qui avait été contaminé par les bactéries. Bien sûr, pas toutes les chirurgies se sont finis comme ça, mais les clients peuvent aussi subir des effets négatifs plus fréquents, comme l'allégie, le malaise en général, ou bien le reprise après quelque temps. Par conséquent, il faut équilibrer les risques cachées et les bienfaits potentials de traitements anti-âges.
En outre, les médecines anti-âges et chirurgies esthétiques coûtent chers. En ce sens, ceux ne sont réservés qu'aux riches, mais pas à la portée de tout le monde.
D'après moi, la meilleure façon de « rester » jeune physiquement, c'est de rester jeune mentalement. Quand on garde un bon esprit de vivre le present, on va se sentir mieux et notre cerveau va produire plus de chemique pour luttre contre l'oxidant, un élément important pour viellier ! Bien sûr, il nous faut aussi de faire de l'exercise, de manger sainement et d'avoir assez de repos. Et ça, c'est la formule magique de jeunesse !
Oct. 28, 2021
Oct. 28, 2021
Paul, tu veux aller au cinéma ?
Bonjour Paul ! Aujourd'hui, je vais aller au cinéma pour voir le nouveau film <<Dune>>. Tu veux aller au cinéma avec moi ? C'est amusant. Nous pouvons manger de popcorn et boire un grand verre de soda. Aprés le film, nous pouvons aller au restaurant pour manger le dîner. Tu aimes de poisson ou non ? À bientôt !
Oct. 28, 2021
My name is better
When everyone talking about the number one Korean drama.
Some people think this one should be the number one Korean drama.
I watched both.
My choice will be this one too.
Only because the female protagonist looks so cool.
Otherwise, both dramas are just ok! (Sorry)
Because there just too many good dramas.
I haven’t watch Korean drama for long time.
Hopefully, I will watch more Korean drama because of these 2 excellent dramas.
Maybe I will start learning Korean?
Oct. 28, 2021
some bad feelings
I tend to escape from my feelings at most of time in my life, which is a very terrible habit.
Two week ago, I lost my job. The company fired the whole department in my city. I, joined with another approximately 400 people lost job.
At the same time, I was applying to a university in Canada. The admission decision had been delayed and I haven't received the result.
I tried to repress my fear and anxiety to the uncertainty, and pretended that I was totally fine and everything was okay.
As a result, I began procrastinating. I took days to update my resume and another some day to apply jobs.
The interview I attended yesterday was not good. The interviewer thought I was not good at all and my level was not good enough compared to my work experience. I was hurt by his behavior although I knew that some of his points was right. I am not that good at the job. I am scared to have more interviews.
Oct. 28, 2021
My Famorite Composer
My favorite music is the original sound track of movies.
When listening to the music, I can remind the scene of the movie as well as remember feelings at the moment.
My favorite composer is Ennio Morricone who is the greatest composer in the movie world.
You might listen to his songs if you have watched ET, mission, Once upon a time in America and so on.
When tuning into a ratio, I listened to his songs on every program.
And I listened to the songs over and over again in my childhood.
Now he passed away, but his songs will last forever, I think.
Oct. 28, 2021
O agricultor
O agricultor estava labutando no campo como sempre, usando sua enxada para recolher o trigo que abundava na terra fértil. De repente, uma nuvem se formou em cima dele. Parecia outro caso da intempérie; no fim de contas, era a estação das monções.
O homem apertou os olhos. Não, pareciam mais mosquitos. Nada de se preocupar, então, pois já havia acumulado uma quantidade suficiente de pomada para aguentar a invasão dos pernilongos. Não, não podia ser. A verdura da nuvem não dava para acreditar que fossem eles. Não estava chapado; era um flagelo de gafanhotos!
No meio do entrevero, o homem se pelou e usou suas vestimentas para afugentar os insectos. Foi em vão; as malditas pragas o encurralaram. A situação ficava pior do que empoçar os pés na lama; ao menos em tal cenário não haveria milhões de criaturas obstruindo sua visão. Diabos, preferia estar aleijado. Por que não escolheu um trabalho mais simples, como um dos manobristas?
Como se Deus houvesse falado a ele, retorquiu, gaguejando: "O que fiz para merecer isto?"
As palavras que aprendi hoje:
pernilongo
encurralar
chapado
pelar-se
entrevero
empoçar
Oct. 28, 2021
workaholic
Somebody says I'm a workaholic but I don't think so and, as an evidence, here's a talk between me and my good friend Sloth Lazyboy.
Sloth : couldn't you go to the movies this evening , could you ?
Me : I'm afraid I couldn't, could I ? because I'm too buzy, I've to work overtime.
S : you're kidding me, aren't you ? You never take time to relax, don't you ? You always answer « I need to work overtime », don't you again ?
M : you cannot understand. I have good working conditions, my boss is a nice fellow and when he says « meet your deadlines ! » I know it's fair, isn't it ?
S : never mind, forget, but I think you spend a lot of time at work, you never take time off work, don't you ?
M : yes, you're right, aren't you ? But I have time to relax, I can take time for a nap in the afternoon if I want, so, please, make your own business, would you ?
S : beware, nonetheless, you should care of yourself, shouldn't you? I knew a lot of good men who were real hard workers but all these men , anyway , get the same address « Graveyard number something », RIP, I hope you wouldn't rejoin them , would you ?
M : maybe, you're right, aren't you ? I'm gonna think about it and try to find time to relax, maybe in 2022, thanks for the advice my dear friend !
S: anyway, you should stop taking work home, shouldn't you ?
M: of course, I will, in 2023.
S : It's up to you, so now, let me relax 'cause it's time for to go to my lovely nice morning nap.
Oct. 28, 2021
October 28th, 2021
There is a professional baseball team called "Nihon Ham". Mr. Shinjo will be appointed as the manager of the team next year. He is a hot-blooded man. I remembered his play about 22 years ago. A pitcher tried to give him an intentional walk, but he got a walk-off hit.
Here is the video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HJhnEZmDU1g
Oct. 28, 2021
Oct. 28, 2021
Oct. 28, 2021
Der Strand!
Gestern Abend sind wir an den Strand gefahren! Es hat uns sehr viel Spaß gemacht, vor allem, weil das Wetter Kälte als sonst war. Es ist schon Ende Oktober und doch ist es noch heiß. Ich bin sehr gestresst mit meiner Schule und Arbeit, daher war diese "Reise" notwendig B) Ich möchte wieder dorthin gehen und kann es nicht erwarten, den Strand noch einmal zu sehen!
Oct. 28, 2021
self introduction
Ich bin Alegrasz. Ich habe einen Bruder, eine Schwester, einen Vater und eine Mutter. Ich komme aus Kalifornien. Meine Hobbys sind Klavierspielen und zeichnen. Ich lerne Japanisch und Deutsch. Ich studiere wirtschaftswissenschaften an Universität. Ich denke auch darüber nach, nach Deutschland zu ziehen.
Oct. 28, 2021
La sala operativa
Nella sala operativa:
L'ispettore stava sgranocchiando pop corn, vedendo lo scontro che stava accadendo fra il capo e il suo subordinato.
"Paraculo! Non hai diritto a bestemmiarmi così. Se non fosse per me, staresti ancora vivendo una vita grama. Smussa le tue parole (abbassa il tono)! Vedi cosa hai fatto. Hai affastellato un sacco di informazione senza arrivare al punto. Come possiamo fare una retata così? Ti ho ordinato di fare un'analisi, e hai fatto invece questa merda. Che casino! Non ho capito un tubo. Eravamo una squadra blasonata, finché al tuo arrivo."
Il subordinato, un uomo ugualmente grezzo, scandì i suoi dintorni, e poi rispose: "Vaffanculo! La mia intenzione era quella di ragguagliarvi sulla posizione del fuggitivo, ma prima di scodellare tutto in giro, dovete sapere che il sospetto è un uomo furtivo, lanciandosi da una tana all'altra; perciò ho scritto un resoconto così disorganizzato."
L'ispettore prese due falcate verso la porta, e disse: "Sono sul punto di assentarmi. Volevo che ci radunassimo per poter tamponare questa situazione che abbiamo a mano, ma l'unica cosa che avete fatto è indispettirmi e prendermi per sfinimento. Possiamo tornare agli affari?"
Le parole che ho imparato oggi:
Prendere per sfinimento
Sgranocchiare
Scodellare
Blasonato
Smussare
Paraculo
Ragguagliare
Tamponare
Falcata
Vita grama
Indispettire
Retata
Oct. 28, 2021
星期
我又怎么在一个晚上写两个日记！
星期天我想不来发生了什么事。
星期一只有一门课，反正翘课了。
星期二我早上9:30来到了中文课的教室，同学并不在。我心想，怎么了，人们都不在，怎么办？然后我看了老师早上7:10发出的邮件：“今天雨太大，要上网课。”我那个时候就吃点惊。今天下雨下得不大，我走路走了25个分钟就没问题。不幸的是我今天没带电脑，需要重返公寓，才能上课。但是，回来的时候，已经是9:50，我已经算是缺席，什么attendance credit都得不到，上不上课没有什么影响。我当时有点生气。老师怎么这么晚通知我们要上网课？因为我走路以前没看邮件箱，所以就扣了不少分。
星期三考了一个很难的期中考试。考完以后跟同学们聊天，他们告诉我考试很难，老师应该会curve以下成绩，让我省心一点。回家以后手写了一个小文章（500字），学习了生词的笔画，现在放松写日记。
星期四要考中文，没有什么别的特别的事情。
星期五早上9点会去附近的流浪宠物之家收培训来为他们义工。他们保护的动物只有猫，我觉得在那儿义工会又轻松又好玩。
星期天应该睡很多觉！
Oct. 28, 2021
Oct. 28, 2021
你的名字的来源是什么？父母为何给你这个名字？
我刚才看到了一个英文日记回答这个问题， 我决定也会回答。
我的“英文”名字是Sivan。把“英文”放在引号中就是因为它其实是一个从希伯来语音译的。在以色列，我的名字比较常见，但是在美国我从没遇到过另一个Sivan。希伯来语也有一个字母表，用它写我的名字就看起来סיוון，但是我用一个有点奇怪的spelling，סיון。Sivan也平常是一个女性的名字。在犹太的阴历，Sivan是一个月份，里面最重要的节日庆祝摩西收到旧约的时候。我的父母给我这个名字的原因有三个：一是它很特别，上课的时候不会遇见30个Sivans。二是因为我们是犹太人，选一个来自希伯来语的名字帮我跟我的身份靠近。三是我的已故的外公的名字是Steven。我妈妈13岁的时候他就去世了，我没有机会跟他见面让我很难过。犹太传统之一是把去世的家人的名字命名（这个词的用法还不太清楚）孩子。Sivan和Steven的发音比较像，所以我的名字也就是为了尊重他了。我对我的名字感到很多骄傲，一点都不后悔。
在中文名字方面，我觉得我的感觉类似中国人对他们的英文名字的感觉，你们要告诉我英文名字对你有没有什么特别的关系。
谢谢，再见！
Oct. 28, 2021
Wie kann man am besten kochen lernen?
Wie lernt man zum Kochen? Manche lernen zum Kochen bei ihren Eltern. Meine Mutter hat selbst beim Schauen gelernt. Das war doch meiner Großmutter nicht spannend. Sie wollte niemand in der Küche, während sie kochte. Wie auch immer ist meine Mutter eine ausgezeichnete Köchin.
Anscheinend ist Geheimnis zuhause am liebsten. Meine Mutter will auch nicht, dass ich zu kochen lerne. Das hat sie nicht explizit gesagt, aber sie scheint irritiert zu sein, wenn ich bei der Küche herumlaufe. Tja, glücklicherweise haben wir heutzutage viel Youtube zum Lernen.
Oct. 28, 2021