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Aug. 20, 2025
Aug. 20, 2025
I'm a beginner
Hi! is my first time writing here so... I try be clear.
The last months (2-3 around) I started to studying english alone, I know some words and expressions but anything advance. I really want to improve my english's level because I like the language and it's as say the people "The english opens doors". Well, I hope improve my english and help the people with my Spanish xD. Byeee!!
Aug. 20, 2025
The Importance of Starting with a Goal in Mind
A crucial part of having a goal in mind is having a clear understanding of both the current position and the target position. Decisions at any point are based on whether the new step is somehow getting us closer to the specific aim. There is a common pitfall: looking for being extremely occupied (being efficient) but not being effective. The abundance of options can lead to wrong paths; that's why having a defined objective prevents vague divagation.
From my perspective, I cannot agree more with this principle. The times my goal wasn't clear, it was almost guaranteed my failure because I would waste a lot of time going down "rabbit holes", analyzing irrelevant insights, or pursuing unfruitful efforts.
Aug. 19, 2025
Para mejorar la enseñanza
¿Cómo es posible usar más juegos y actividades físicas en la salón de clase?
Todos saben que un estudiante puede aprender mejor si hay oportunidades para responder que involucran una repuesta física. Además, todo el mundo sabe que los niños necesitan diversión y interacciones sociales estructuradas. Sin embargo, aunque he visto diversión en la clase de escuela primaria y enfoque académico intenso también, no he visto un ejemplo que combina los dos. A pesar de eso, estoy seguro de que existen ejemplos, solo tengo que buscarlos y crear mi propia versión.
Aug. 19, 2025
今日の夢
今日はまたスペンサーの夢を見た。ある時ロバートもいて子供の時のように同じテーブルに一緒に座っていた。二人とも、明るくて、楽しそうに話していた。その光景を見ていつものように言葉にできない気持ちが沸き上がった。苦しくて歯を食いしばる。何も言えない。また会えてよかった… とても会いたかった… 元気そうでちょっと救われた気分だ。その後は夢が変わったがずっと彼らを探し続けた。今度は絶対探し出す… 諦めない… ある夢の世界の中のサッカーワールドカップ に出ているのをSNSで見た。そして目覚めた。目覚める瞬間彼らを探し出す覚悟は消える。いつもそうだ。
こういう夢を見るたびに一日中悲しみが続く。絶望。泣きそうになった…
こんな暗い文章を読んでくださって、ありがとうございます
Aug. 19, 2025
Aug. 19, 2025
Apprentisage de la langue française
Bonjour à tous !
Je m'appelle Aadil. J'habite au France depuis 4 ans. J'arrive à faire des conversation avec les natives mais j'ai jamais pris le temps pour lire et écrire en français. Je regrette ça.
Grâce à internet, j'ai trouvé cette platforme "langcorrect". J'éspère que je vais améliorer mes competences de lecture et écriture avec cette communauté.
Bonne semaine!
Aug. 19, 2025
Lemon Tablets, My Placebo レモンタブレット、私のプラセボ
I found my new favorite item at Muji. It's a pack of lemon tablets. A single tablet is about the size of a Frisk and has a tangy taste. Actually, I'm enjoying one right now as I type this. It's perfect for a little pick-me-up or when I have a craving, since it's much smaller than a candy and doesn't give a minty kick.
One pack has 35g and 108kcal. It has no sugar, so the risk of cavities seems low. It doesn't have added nutrients like supplements, but I'd say it's a guilt-free treat.
I've started treating this tablet as "medicine to brighten my skin and lift my mood." Yes, it's a totally personal placebo experiment. It's yellowish, like a vitamin tablet. Plus, I feel lighter after enjoying it. So I'm giving myself a little magic boost. Let's see how it works.
Aug. 19, 2025
Aug. 19, 2025
Aug. 19, 2025
Machiavellistischer Effekt, einer Medizinthriller
Der Tag des Unterrichts, in dem über Literatur besprochen wurde, habe ich mich an ein Buch errinert. In Panama gibt es ein Buch, sogennant "El efecto Maquiavelo" (Machiavellistischer Effect), das von einem panamischen Frauenarzt (Osvaldo Reyes) geschrieben wurde. Ich habe gehört und auch gelesen, dass es ein echt gutes Buch ist. Ich habe es noch nicht gelesen, aber ich werde.
Es ist ein Medizinthriller. Der Roman befindet sich in einem Krankenhaus, in dem ein Arzt seltsamen Vorfälle ermittelt, die möglicherweise mit Morde in Zusammenhang stehen, ausdrücklich mit den Morde der schwangere Frauen.
Aug. 19, 2025
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Aug. 19, 2025
The first language exchange
The first language exchange
I will write daily summary about Harry Potter. Right now, I am reading Harry Potter and the Prisoner of Azkaban in the first chapter: Harry tell us about his summers at his uncle’s house. The Harry’s uncle were very cruel to him, while Harry was in uncle’s house harry couldn’t practice his magic exercises
Aug. 19, 2025
Une citation d'Eugene O'Neill
Il y a une citation d'Eugene O'Neill. Il était un écrivant fameux (ou célèbre?)
La citation va:
"Il n'y a pas du présent ni la futur. Il n'y a que le passé, qui se répète toujours-maintenant."
J'aime bien cette citation parce qu'elle est si vrai. Il y a si plus de modèles à ce monde.
Aug. 19, 2025
Aug. 19, 2025
Je ne vapoterai jamais.
Les effets au corps sont trop mauvais pour vapoter. Une fois, j'ai parlé avec quelqu'un qui avait vapoté. Il m'a dit que je ne dois jamais vapoter. Il a dit qu'il a vomi. Je n'ai pas eu besoin de convaincre, mais égal... On peut imaginer que j'ai été surpris quand, quelques semaines en l'an de l'école, il a été suspendu car il a vapoté ! Pas moi, pas moi, je ne vapoterai jamais...
Aug. 19, 2025
Die Angriffe an Demokratie werden nie aufhören.
Wie jedes Regierungssystem, Demokratie wird immer Gegner haben. Diese gegner werden versuchen, ein verschiedenes, (wahrscheinlich autoritäres) System zu haben. Leute, die Demokratie mögen, müssen immer dafür kämpfen. Mit jedem System, das existierende muss sich schützen. Eine Diktatur muss paranoid sein, um das System zu halten. Wenn die Menschen eines Systems zu bequem werden, dann gibt es eine Lücke für die Gegner, die das System beenden können.
Aug. 19, 2025
Aug. 19, 2025
An Post in English
It's 2:29 at midnight and the temperature is 29. I still need to turn my air-conditioner on; otherwise, I can't sleep well due to the heat.
I keep waking up early in the morning these days for no reason, which I find a little bit torturous.
In order to pass the time while awake at midnight, I usually learn English, such as writing and reading in my mind.
I hope writing can improve my speaking skills. I used to do this for about one year. But I don't find an obvious relationship between these two skills. Maybe it only works to some extent.
As to speaking English, I am still a newbie. I can't speak fluently due to limited vocabulary, the usage of prepositions and tenses, as well as the flexibility of making sentences.
I don't know when I can achieve my goal in learning English. I don't even know that it's such a long way to go.
I really admire people who can speak English fluently. It seems that I can never reach that point.