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Effects of competitive sports
Theme: Some people think that competitive sports have a positive effect on the education of teenagers while others argue that the effect is negative.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some people think that competitive sports have a positive effect on the education of teenagers while others argue that the effect is negative. Sports play crucial role when it comes to education. So let us weigh the pros and cons of competitive sports. In a nutshell, positive effects are they can develop as person and simply its fun to play competitive sports. Negative effect is it could be offensive in terms of fight against someone.
Competition is one of the best way to improve yourself. Space exploration in 1900s, for instance. The united states and Soviet union competed each other over the space satellite, gamma ray detector, and so on. Eventually, the united states succeeded landing on the moon and Soviet union also succeeded to send spacecraft on the surface of the moon. Another example for this is the entrance exam in China. China has a great deal of population, so getting into a good university is literally competitive. That said, we can explain why they are so good at math. Their score is always high compared with other country and it can be explained by the effect of competition. Same as space exploration and math, competitive sports going to be good for development.
Another reason is it's just fun to play competitive sports. It's clear whether you lose or win, and feedback like lost or win is nice to have when it comes to sports. Because you can notice the improvement by checking the feedback. As competitive sports give us a lot of feedback, you can feel a pleasure for playing competitive sports.
Sometimes, sportsman in the show, get so emotional and unlike themselves. This is due to competition. That kind of thing can make trauma and it will stress out teenagers. Losing so many times will make low self-esteem, and most of teenagers don't know how to deal with that sort of stress. This is especially because it is competitive. So maybe it depends on the personality. Some people don't want to fight against someone, and some can easily get emotional.
In conclusion, development and enjoyableness can thought as the pros of competitive game. Getting emotional like stressed out, and low self-esteem can thought as the cons of competitive game.
April 29, 2022
April 29, 2022
April 29, 2022
Problems of the modern zoo
Theme: Many people believe that zoos have no purpose in today’s world and should be closed. What problems do zoos bring?
What are the alternatives to zoos if they are closed?
Currently, great deal of people believe that zoos have no purpose in today's world. So let us weigh pros and cons of zoos and consider the problem of the zoos. Long story short, zoos has the problem regarding rights of the animals. Alternatives to zoos will be facility that has the ability to protect animals facing the danger of extinction.
As I mentioned above, zoos in modern world has a problem of rights of the animals. For example, Finland approved the legislation about the rights of monkey and other human-like mammals. The motivation for this legislation is very simple that human-like animals has high intelligence, and they can feel a stress by restricted. That can count us problem of the zoos.
Another example for problem is stress of the animals. Some animals feels really bad to be watched by people, and living in a restricted place. Because of this, some of them will not be able to make offspring.
However, some pros of zoos can not be overlooked. Protection of the animals, for instance. Considerable number of animals facing the danger of extinction. Zoos is a good home for them. Compared with the wild situation, they can live safety, easy to get foods, no need to care about a natural enemy.
As I mentioned before, we need to preserve animals that facing extinction. That's why we need a facility to protect animals. Zoos playing important role as that kind of facility. But zoos in nowadays has problems like rights of the animals and stress of the animals.
In conclusion, Zoos has some problems over both physical and mental health of the animals. Facility that can protect animals from extinction can be said as alternatives to the zoos if they are closed.
April 29, 2022
April 29, 2022
April 28, 2022
Els joves i les noves tecnologies
A les hores d'ara, tothom és conscient de que la nostra societat té un grau problema amb l'abús de les noves tecnologies. L'abast d'aquest problema afecta a persones incloses en totes les franges d'edat però, especialment als adolescents.
D'una banda, tenim la tendència de culpabilitzar al telèfon móbil, sent aquest només que un aparell tecnològic que fem servir pel que és realment perillós: connectar-se a les xarxes socials.
Aquestes xarxes són eines dissenyades amb l'únic objectiu de captar la nostra atenció com més temps possible, ja que gràcies a ella poden rendibilitzar-se mitjançant anuncis publicitaris que es mostran, tant en format propi d'anuncis com també d'una forma més nova i sigil·losa com és a través de persones denominades o considerades "influencers".
El motiu pel qual aquestes xarxes atrauen més els joves es que aquestes inclouen moltes funcionalitats d'interacció social: xatear amb colegas, fer nous contactes, generar nous enllaços... En definitiva, crear comunitat, cosa que per a aquestes edats és realment prioritari.
Per l'altra banda, gràcies a la tecnologia i les seves funcionalitats, hem sigut capaços de comunicar-nos en temps de crisi com la pandèmia, i no només amb amics i familiars que viuen lluny, sinó també amb administracions per fer tràmits de forma electrònica des de el nostre sofà, una millora amb la que sense dubte, hem guanyat tots.
Resumint, les noves tecnologies i les xarxes socials és clar que tenen desavantatges però també tenen las sevas avantatges que ens beneficien a tothom. La clau és aprendre a fer un ús sa de les noves tecnologies i ajudar als nostres adolescents a trobar aquest equilibri i no perdre valiós temp de real oci perduts a internet.
April 28, 2022
¡No es fácil llegar a tiempo!
Esta ciudad no funciona muy bien cuando llueve. Todo se complica. Anoche, iba en rumbo a una cita y dado que me gusta pasar por bus, que normalmente es rápido y muy barato, decidí tomarlo hasta el sur de la ciudad. ¡Error capital! Cuando llegué a la parada de bus no había otras personas esperando, lo que me pareció un poco raro dado que los buses de esta ruta se suponen que llegan a cada seis minutos. Al esperar unos dies minutos empezó a llover y tronar intensamente, con un viento casi horizontal. El techo de la parada no me ayudaba mucho en quedarme seco. ¡Pero me aguanté! Pensé que seguramente el bus estaba justo por llegar. Lamentablemente, esperé 10 minutos más, ahora muy mojado, y el bus nunca llegó. ¿Como saben los ciudadanos locales que no iba a haber buses? Hay una fuente secreta de información a que no tengo acceso y a ellos sí? En fin, decidí a pedir un Uber, y los precios para un pedido eran el doble de los precios normales. El viaje duró dos veces mas tiempo de lo normal por el tráfico horrible ocasionado por inundaciones (Tambien creo que las calles se estancan siempre cuando llueve porque más gente pide taxi… como yo). Afortunadamente, no fue para tanto, pero llegué muy tarde a mi cita.
April 28, 2022
An Amusing Program
Wheeler Dealers is a British TV program, that I like a lot. It is to led by the car enthusiasts, Mike Brewer and Edd China. The first, Mike Brewer, is the dealer or trader, and has the task of buy old cars, find the several pieces they can to need and suggest some type of improvements. The second, Edd China, is an expert mechanic that will make all the necessary works for to have a nice and in very good conditions car. Eventually, Mike Brewer will find a buyer and try to have some type of profit. I enjoy when mike is triying to find some pieces on the storerooms or when Edd begin to disassembler the engine or any other part of the car. Is an amusing program.
April 28, 2022
Le frase parte due
Domenica scorsa faceva molto freddo quindi ho deciso di andare ad una mostra di quadri in centro al quale ho incontrato Paolo.
Dopo aver spedito un' e-mail a Franco due giorni fa gliene ho spedito un'altro ieri, ma non li ha ricevuti.
Se tua moglie ha bisogno di una lavatrice nuova, gliene compra una che lava e asciuga peró quella che lava e ascuiga costa molti soldi.
April 28, 2022
Le frase
Ieri ho visto due vestiti in vetrina, uno era elegante, l'altro era sportivo, li ho comprato tutti i due.
Poiché a Giovanna serve la frutta esotica per fare la macedonia, è andata al supermercato per comprarla, ma non ce l'ha trovata.
Sei hai bisogno di una vacanza per rilassarti, ne organizza una a Caraibi con gli amici poi vacci con loro.
La signora Elisa desidera comprare un'auto nuova che costa circa 20.000 euro, ma invece ne sceglie una usata che costa 15.000 euro.
April 28, 2022
Una domanda di volontà
Gentile Federico,
Studio all'università da due anni. Di recente mi sento molto svegliato, non ha voglia di studiare. A causa della mia malvoglia, i miei voti si sono sofferti e ora sono in pericolo di essere buttato dall'università per sempre.
A dire la verità non mi piaccia il mio programma academico di chimica che ho scelto. Mi ero costretto a sceglierlo dai miei genitori. Se avessi la libertà a fare che mi pare, mi diventerei un artista. Ma non posso pagare da solo per un percorso allo studio d'arte. I miei genitori pagano solo per l'università e nient'altro.
Che dovrei fare?
Distinti Saluti,
'Pigro e scoraggiato'
April 28, 2022
April 28, 2022
Правила дорожного движения
Сейчас, я изучаю правила дорожного движения. Французский экзамен по вождению состоит из двух частьей: теорическая часть и практическая часть (водить машиной с инструктором). Я предполагаю, что это таки и ещё в России, нет? Экзамен водожного кодеска я успешно сдал, но практическую часть нет. Так как больше пяти лет шли с этого времени, мне надо сдать теоретическую часть ещё раз. Я достаточно рад, потому что я не делаю много ошибок, и я быстро вспоминаю редкие вещи, о которых я забыл.
Государство и инструкторы распрсостраняют с удовольствием идею, что наши правила — очен логичны и прекрасны, но это не так. Например, скорые — "приоритетны", по нашим правилам, но машины, которые возят кровы к местам аварий... нет! Теоретически, мне надо ним уступить дорогу, но ничто в законе меня заставляет делать это. Другие транспортные средства, такие как фургоны везящие заключённых, тоже отоносятся к этой "приоритетной" категории, но если даже данной фургон везят Ганнибала Лектера, я не понимаю, как он мог бы "приоритетнее" машин необходимых для переливания!
Другой например: правила включают вежливность в "экологивеское вождение", но по мою мнению, этика и экология — два различного концепта. Нам также скажут, что гибридные автомобили — всегда более экологически, но кто-нибудь, который хоть немного интересует научной литературой об этой теме, знает, что это не совсем правда...
Я думаю, что это характеристика всех администраций: они убеждённы, что они правы, даже когда свои утверждения — нелогичны или просто глупны. Но всё в порядке. Если мне надо "выучиться" нескольким глупостям, чтобы получить водительские права, мне совершенно подходит!
April 28, 2022
28 avril 2022 - l’ambiance du petit matin
Si je me réveille tôt à l’hiver, comme 5h30, le soleil ne s’est réveillé pas encore, donc c’était les lumières dans les rues qui illuminent ou des fois, je peux aussi observer des fenêtres éteintes (qui sont vraiment encourageant parce que je ne suis pas la seule). Bien sûr, quand le ciel est clair et l’angle est correcte, je regarde aussi la lune. C’est une ambience tranquille et j’aime bien observer le changement de couleurs du ciel quand le soleil se lève.
Mais souvent à l’été, comme le soleil se lève aussi tot, je profite un petit matin ensoleillé. L’ambiance n’est pas si tranquille avec celle dans l’hiver mais je suis plus énergétique quand je me lève après le réveil du soleil.
April 28, 2022
How do cheaters behave in a new relationship?
I am not a cheater so I cannot give you an accurate answer, but I saw and observed a lot of cheaters that I have some clues about them. My answer is one-sided and it is from my own perspective, for reference only.
There are three key clues how they behave:
1. They care their dressing a lot. You can find those cheaters who always like to wear pretty and it will make them more attractive and easy to hunt prey.
2. They like lying. I can tell all the cheaters are good liars and they know how to balance their stuff to save more time for flirting with girls.
3. They don’t know how to love a guy honestly. In my opinion, cheaters never know how great and warm when people can fall in love with their the one. That feelings are incredible.
The above are my observations. Thank you for reading. I hope they can help you and you are doing well.
Have a lovely day!
April 28, 2022
Dream City & House
Honestly, I intended to buy a four-bedroom apartment with a giant balcony overlooking the sea near an urban and famous area after I graduated from university outside of Iran.
I can decorate it and design my ideal home with whatever facilities I want. It has an unobstructed view. It have a giant yard and beautiful front walk and entrance door that cover by garden and flower bed.Have a patio and roof garden that have a large lawn lawn surrounded by a high hedge. I planning to settle down LA in my future.
April 28, 2022
Describe Your room and favorite place in your home
My current room is actually like a prince's room but a smaller version. I use it to sleep and study as well. It is painted in pale blue. It has a bed, bookshelves and a desk. It’s not really spacious but I'm crazy about it. However, I can design my place layout to suit myself. I also have a separate bathroom for myself.
I prefer my bedroom most due to its convenience and privacy. I want to be in a quiet place and never disturbed by anyone else.
My second favorite place in my home is definitely the kitchen. Not only launch and dinner time but also all of my family reunions take place there. Moreover, the kitchen is fully equipped with all mod con.
I have been living there ever since I was born, which is 23 years so far, that is a relatively long period of time, so I’m really attached to this quiet house. I hate house-hunting because moving into another house is too exhausting.
Both my parents think that moving to a new place is time-consuming. Although my mom thinks that cleaning and rearranging would be like torture for herself, She doesn't mind new decorations.
April 28, 2022
Daily Pratice
My daily English Practice: The usage of preposition
Against
1. Against with verbe
Millions of citizens gathered by social media to demonstrate against the new law proposed by the government.
My friend advise me against using too much electronic devices since it may be harmful to my eyes.
He is highly rebelling against the traditional rules.
The students argued against the idea that she has chat in the exam.
Regular workout helps guard against diseases.
He felt that he was discriminated against out too his poor look.
2. Against with noun
The major accusation against this cruel criminal is murder.
He makes a complaint against the seat arrangement.
We should keep the battle against poverty.
We have a fight against our enemy so we should keep training until we win the fight.
3. Postions
The lady in red dress was leaning against the wall .
April 28, 2022
Un conflit à le bureau
J’ai eu deux collègues qui ne s’entendaient pas bien. Les deux étaient gérants et ils avaient des styles de management complètement différents. Le première a un comportement calme et décontracté la plupart de temps. Pourtant, quand il est stressé, il ne sait pas comment maîtriser sa colère. Dans l'espace d’une seconde, il peut devenir irrationnel et perdre la tête. Il hurle à nous, les employés, même si nous ne sommes pas responsables du problème.
L’autre, en revanche, est toujours stressé. Son bureau avait des papiers partout de manière très désordonnée. Il est capable, mais il a tendance à faire des erreurs parce qu’il ne prête pas attention à des détails. Ils avaient une relation tendue. Je me souviens d'une réunion quand une dispute a éclaté. Ils hurlaient des insultes, et l’un d’entre eux sortait en trombe.
Après la dispute, ils tentaient de s’ignorer. Cela était regrettable, parce que notre travail comptait sur leur collaboration. D’ailleurs, dans leur vie personnelle, au début ils étaient des amis proches. Ils avaient même pris une vacance ensemble ! J’imagine qu’il soit passé des choses entre les deux que nous ne sommes pas au courant. Des rumeurs circulaient, et finalement le gérant désorganisé a décidé de démissionner.
Cela s’est passé il y a trois mois. J’ai reçu une invitation pour dîner à la maison de mon collègue qui a démissionné. J’y vais ce soir. Je me demande si je vais dénicher la vérité sur ce qui s’était passé entre les deux.
April 28, 2022
April 28, 2022
Bonjour ?
Argh
Trois années et le mot seulement que je peux dire bien est bonjour !
Est-ce que tu penses que je n'essaie pas mais je suis. Beaucoup !
Je suis une aux meilleurs dans ma classe mais je veux plus; parce que je veux d'écrire les romans dans français. Mais comment si je ne peux pas écrire une histoire courte !
Merci beaucoup pour tous vos aides.
April 28, 2022
Ich lerne eine Fremdsprache, weil...
Ich lerne eine Fremdsprache, weil ich mich verbessern möchte. Besonders will ich Deutsch lernen. Wenn ich Deutsch lerne, kann ich in Deutschland wohnen. Lerne Deutsch gefällt mir. In Letzter Zeit, anfange ich deutsche lieder hören. Die Sänger, die ich am meisten höre; Berge, Rammstein und Max Raabe. Was ist eure Empfehlung für deutschen Lied?
April 28, 2022
April 28, 2022
이번 주의 문법
1. 어제 뭘 했나요?
오늘 퇴근하는 길에 공항에 가서 동생이 마중했어요.
2. 지금 출발하나요?
네. 제 친구가 집 앞에서 밖에 가는 길이에요.
3 . 후라이드치킨을 왜 먹지 않아요?
기름이 너무 있는데다가 다이어트에 중이에요.
4. 요즘에 많은 사람들이 아이를 낳고 싶지 않는 것 같아요.
맞아요. 모든 친구들만 해도 미혼이에요.
5. 어떤 가계를 정말 사용하지 않아요?
핸드폰조차 사용하지 않아요.
6. 티켓을 막 판매되었네요! 지금은 살까요?
싼 티켓을 있거든 사려고 해요.
7. 저 가게를 왜 아주 좋아하나요?
옷이 예쁠 뿐만 아니라 점원들이 정말 친절해요.
8. 왜 화를 내요?
아까 경찰관이 정차하게 했는데 교통 위반 딱지를 줬어요.
9. 와, 강아지가 진짜 키가 커요!
이전에 강아지는 건강하지 않으니까 수의사가 강아지가 작을 거라고 했어요. 하지만 강아지가 갑자기 건강되던데요. 그래서 많이 자랐군요.
10. 많은 꽃을 키우네요!
먼저 꽃을 좋아하지 않지만 제 남자 친구가 많은 꽃 가지를 사서 저도 좋아하게 됐어요.