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April 28, 2022
Gli alieni
Molte persone dicono che gli alieni esistono, altre dicono di no. Ma gli ultimi scoperti dagli scienzati indicano che ci sono tanti pianeti nel nostro Universo. Inoltre, più gli astronomi scoprono nuvoi pianeti, più la probabilita cresce che ce ne sia uno che potrebbe sostenere la vita come quella che conosciamo a Terra.
Spero che gli alieni esistono perché senza un'altro compagno intelligente nell'Universo la nostra esistenza sarebbe stato solitaria e diminuita e avrebbe meno rilevenza.
Infine, lo scoperto di vita extraterrestre avrebbe avuto un'altro significato. Oggi noi umani dobbiamo affrontare dei problemi molto grave. Incontrare esseri da un'altra pianeta significherebbe che possiamo anche risolvere i nostri grandi problemi e sopravivere nel futuro.
April 28, 2022
Question
I had to enter that mall first and then TAKE (why isn’t it “took”?) an elevator.
when I first heard her SAY (why isn’t it “said”, or “says”?) that.
The above two sentences are from my native English teacher. My questions are inside brackets. I hope someone can help me out. Thank you very much.
(I only use my phone to access LC, I don’t know where the question area is, please forgive me for posting questions here)
April 28, 2022
Journal
Yesterday afternoon, I saw a message in our department WeChat group that was sent by our leader. He said we could go to our office to work since then.
It's been around a month since the last time we were in our office because of the pandemic.
But at present, we are not able to get to our office the same way we used to because the first floor entrance is still closed.
The first floor of our office building connects to a mall. We have to enter that mall first, and then take an elevator down to basement level two, and walk for a while to the elevator we used to take.
There is a hotel in our office building. It has a different entrance and an elevator from our office and is on different floors. When the past wave of the pandemic started, that hotel was arranged as an isolation site by the government, but the entrance we used to get to our office was also closed.
It's said that even now, there are around ten students remaining there. That is why we still can't get to our office in the same way we used to.
I don't think this makes sense, because that hotel is only in the same building as our office, but they are on different floors and have different entrances and elevators.
Can Covid-19 go through walls or floors? I think the government overreacted.
Many private companies in that building use the same entrance and elevator as us, so they also couldn't go to work during the pandemic, but the government won't give them any compensation. It's not fair.
April 27, 2022
Vorbereitungen auf Prüfungen
Ich fange früh genug an, etwas zu lernen, wenn ich eine Prüfung habe. Ich plane immer vorab, was und wann ich lernen werde. Natürlich füge ich immer Pause hinzu, um etwas Schönes zu unternehmen, wie zum Beispiel Freunde treffen oder Sport treiben. Das entspannt mich und kann das Lernprozess leichter machen.
Allerdings leide ich an Prüfungsangst. Ich habe mir lange nachgedacht, warum das passiert, obwohl ich mir die Informationen einfach einpräge und rechtzeitig mit dem Lernen anfange. So bin ich zu der Einsicht bekommen, dass ich geringes Selbsvertrauen habe. Ich kann alles wissen aber werde nicht total fühlen, als ich das Thema gut beherrsche. Allerdings passiert immer, dass ich die Prüfung mit guten Note bestehe.
Ja, ich muss mehr an meinem Selbstvertrauen arbeiten.
Mit anderen zusammen lerne ich nicht gerne. Andere Menschen haben ihren eigenen Lernrhytmus und dieser kann anders als meiner sein. Manchmal kann jemand schneller oder langsamer als ich lernen und das nervt mich. Dementsprechend lerne ich am liebsten immer allein.
April 27, 2022
Después de la Semana Santa
Ya terminaron las vacaciones de Semana Santa, y al parecer toda la población de la Cuidad de Mexico está de vuelta. La calles volvieron a estar repletas de coches y camiones, hay mucha más gente caminando en las aceras, y el gimnasio está super lleno (supongo que todos quieren perder los kilos que adquirieron tomando cervezas en Acapulco durante las semanas pasadas). De verdad, no se qué haría si tuviera que viajar diariamente en coche en esta ciudad. Hay tanto tráfico que a veces es más rápido caminar! Por lo menos, ya empezó la temporada de la lluvia, y eso hace que el aire sea mucho mas limpio y que el efecto de la contaminación del tráfico y aumento de coches no se note tanto.
April 27, 2022
April 27, 2022
Is it fair?
I went to the zoo last week and realized that I didn’t get the same feeling as I did when I was a kid. Seeing some animals depressed and stressed made me sad. Is it really fair to keep animals in captivity for our amusement and wildlife education? I fully aware the fact that zoos are saving some endangered species from extinction. But still ,the cons outweigh the pros. They can’t have the freedom they deserved. Some can’t get proper care due to staff shortages and limited budgets during this pandemic period. I think we should seek the long term solution rather than promoting not to go to zoo at this time because adequate animal care in zoos is relied on public finical support from visitors. What are your thoughts on that?
April 27, 2022
Harry Potter und der Stein der Weisen
Harry Potter und der Stein der Weisen ist ein Kinderbuch von J.K Rowling. Es wurde im 1997 veröffentlicht von Bloomsbury-Verlag. Es gibt sieben Bücher in die Serie und ein Stück betitelt Harry Potter und das verwunschene Kind. Die Serie heutzutage ist die bekannteste Kinderbücher in der Welt, weil es einhundert Millionen Kopien verkaufen haben.
Der Buch verfolgt Harry Potter, eine Waisenkind, das mit seiner missbräuchliche Tante und Onkel (Mr. und Mrs. Dursley) lebt. An seinem elften Geburtstag erhält er einen Brief aus Hogwarts Schule für Hexerei und Zauberei. Ein alter Zauberer namens Hagrid Harry besucht und erklärt, dass Harry ist eigentlich auch einen Zauberer! In Hogwarts sind das Zauberer/Hexen vier Schulhäuser eingeteilt. Gryffindor ist rot und darstellt Tapferkeit, Ravenclaw ist blau und darstellt Klugheit, Hufflepuff ist gelb und darstellt Freundlichkeit, und Slytherin ist grün und darstellt Ehrgeiz.
Harry ist in Gryffindor mit seiner zwei Freunden (Ron und Hermione) geordnet. Hermione ist äußerst schlau und Beste aller ihrer Klassen geworden ist. In ihre erste Jahr, das Trio kämpfen ein Troll, treffen ein bösen Zauberer namen “Voldemort” und streiten mit ein Slytherin Schüler namen Draco Malfoy (einen Antagonisten).
Ich denke, dass die Buch war lustig und zuordenbar aber ist mehr passend fur Grundschule Schuler. Jedoch hat das Buch wichtig Moralen (Freundlichkeit, Freundschaft und Tapferkeit). Meiner Meinung nach “Harry Potter und der Stein der Weisen” ist ein klassischer Kinderbuch!
April 27, 2022
April 27, 2022
"Le Bazar De La Charité"
"Le Bazar de la Charité" is a series insppired in real facts. The Bazar was an event where the high class of Paris sold all type of objects like works of art, jewelry, books, etc, coming from donations. In that time, this charity events was organized by women and all this money was destined for the poor people. For this reason, usually there was more women that mens. Unfortunately, one day was a fire during the projection of a film, due to an error, had a mix between ether and oxigen in the projector. The fire ran very fast and in few minutes all the building was in flames. In that situation, all people went into panic and for the chronicals of journals and newspapers of that days, many mens don't doubted to use the force against women to get out of that hell. As a result of it, the majority of casualities were women. Thus, is a magnificent period recreation series based in a sad history.
April 27, 2022
27 avril 2022 - Matin ou soir?
Êtes-vous plutôt un lève-tôt ou un couche-tard?
Je suis 100% une lève-tôt parce que je fonctionne mal dans la nuit. Je ne comprends pas pourquoi la plupart de mes camarades ou amis couche si tard, par exemple 1h du matin, tandis que nous avons des cours à 8h30 or 9h, c’est-à-dire qu’il faut se réveiller à 6h30 si on veut prendre un petit déjeuner. Comme je dois me réveiller à cette heure, souvent environ 22 ou 22h30, je commence à être vraiment fatiguée et ne peux rien faire.
Avant, j’ai utilisé le temps de petit matin pour faire des revisions, c’était une habitude que j’ai eu depuis lycée. Mais dès que j’ai commencé à apprendre le français, je me suis rendue compte qu’il y a beaucoup des choses qui sont plus intéressantes que les études dentisteries, alors désormais, le petit matin est réservée pour mon projet et le développement personal.
April 27, 2022
sommeil
Actuellement, je me sens fatigué à cause de ma mauvaise habitude. Alors, habituellement l'école commence à huit heures pour moi. Mais aujourd'hui c'était à 9 heures. Et tous le temps si quelque chose de cette facon c'est passe, je suis réveillé 1 ou 2 heures plus. Parce que j'ai plus de temps à dormir. Malheureusement j'ai me réveille tous le temps à un certain temps, donc je n'ai pas assez dormir.
April 27, 2022
Talking With My Senior
I asked some questions to my senior who is a board member of the SW develop team.
The questions were about the capabilities of SW architectures that I really want to become.
He said that a SW architecture don't bother difficult issues, and he should give a result with nice negotiations.
Besides, he has to experience many fields over business boundaries.
His advices were not easy to do, but I thought that I could get many skills while doing them.
April 27, 2022
April 27, 2022
April 27, 2022
Helping out a friend who is stressed.
Bonjour, mon amie ! Ça va ? J’espère que ça va ! Je vous écris aujourd’hui parce que je suis très inquiète pour toi. Je sais que l’année 12 est très difficile, ne t’inquiètes pas, j’ai beaucoup de conseils.
Tout d’abord, prendre une grande respiration, détendez-toi, tout ira bien. Assures-tu de trouver quelque chose qui vous détend. Ça pourrait être dessiner ou marcher dans le parc, tout ce qui vous rend heureuse. Pour moi, j’adore regarder des films comiques avec ma famille, surtout ma sœur parce que nous avons le même goût dans les films. Je recommande de regarder 'Crazy Rich Asian' parce que ça me fait toujours rire quand je suis triste ou stressé.
Aussi, il est nécessaire de manger sainement, plus que cinq différents types de fruits et légumes. Évite les boissons sucrées et les aliments gras. Si c’est trop difficile ensuite essaye de limiter la consommation de ces aliments mauvais. Non seulement c’est mauvais pour ta santé, mais quelque chose de grave pourrait t’arriver.
Finalement, fais de l’exercice toutes les semaines pour au moins 7 heures. C’est très bon pour ta santé physique. Assure-toi de boire beaucoup d’eau parce que c’est très bon pour toi. Bois au moins une ou deux bouteilles par jour. Boire de l’eau a beaucoup d’avantages. Comme ça aide la digestion et porte des nutriments. Aussi, boire de l’eau est très important après le sport parce que tu perds beaucoup d’eau par la transpiration.
J’espère que cela a aidé, assurez-tu de me dire si cela a aidé ! Tu me manques !
April 27, 2022
Why shouldn't we always be the ones to attract the attention
Because we also cannot focus on our partners all the time and this is an nature of human beings. You will be annoyed if your partner keeps attracting you because it will make you feel that you have no space to stay with yourself.
As I remember, I used to have a relationship with a girl who always want to stay with me. We are crazy and sweet in the first three months because we are so eager to know everything of each other. That sounds nice, right? Who don’t want to get into a relationship in which they love each other in full enthusiasm? To make you disappointed, we feel so boring and tired after that because we can’t give each other space. Both of us want to attract each other and we will feel unserciuty if we were apart for a while. Finally, we broke up. This love story is enthusiastic and short and makes me impressive. I learned a lot from it.
Now, I would like to give my partner space and love with respect. We enjoy the life even if we are working in two different cities. We encourage each other and we want to get married one day. This is a positive loop and I believe it will grow sustainably.
I hope my story is inspiring and can help you.
Thank you for reading and have a lovely day!
April 27, 2022
Biased media coverage
Many people feel that media coverage is becoming increasingly biased today.
Why is this?
What can be done to fix this problem?
Media coverage industry has changed drastically in the past 20 years with the takeover of social media platforms and transition of power from government owned news channels to individual content creators. Intuitively we would expect more independent and unbiased coverage of news, but in reality major platforms like YouTube and Instagram are designed in a way that favors not the most unbiased opinion, but the most popular one. In my opinion, there are 2 main problems causing this.
First problem is targeted recommendations to the user based on the past history of browsing. Compared to switching channels on a TV and receiving different opinions on the matter, social media platforms will recommend the same channel or similar channels making users see only one point of view.
Second problem is winners bias. Again compared to watching TV or reading a magazine where you are forced to analyze information and come up with your own opinion, social media platforms allow to see the number of people who like or dislike the video and put most like comments on the top, which forces users to make fast conclusions without critically questioning the ideas and information presented to them.
To fix these problems developers and owners of social media platforms need to realize that they should not only focus on profits, but also recognize that transparency and unbiasedness are crucial. Fixing algorithms to stop recommending users the same material will encourage them to look for different points of view and removing ratings from each video will force users to assess quality of information themselves.
April 27, 2022
April 27, 2022
Chat6
Could you please help correct anything that's wrong or unnatural in my sentences?
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang！ 🙇♂️
And I'd like to get your advice on talking to foreign people
I await your harsh comments!! 💪
By the way, A and B are people
A: Hi 🐣
B: Hey!
A: I'm Sho, nice to meet you!
B: You too.
A: Do you study Japanese?
B: Yesss. I like Japanese.
But I'm not studying that hard I'm just learning vocab and watching anime.
A: Japanese is difficult, right?
It's best to study at your own pace!
I'm a beginner at English so I'm not sure I'm making myself understood.😅
B: Yeah, Japanese is so difficult.
I'm really bad at japanese too🤣
Your English is good tho.
A: haha, Thank you😊
No, your Japanese is good!
So would you like to study with me to get better?
B: Yeah, of course!
A: How do you wanna do it?
B: I'm good with anything!
A: So... How about either I speak English and you speak Japanese, or we speak 30 minutes in English and 30 minutes in Japanese?
Or we could try the first proposal today and try the second the next time around.
Which do you prefer?
B: both!
A: OK! Also, which do you prefer to practice first, formal or informal spoken or written language?
B: Informal spoken language!
What about you?
A: It's up to you. OK! Here I go!
なんで日本語を勉強し始めたの？
ーーーOne hour later
A: It has already been one hour. Time flies! Do you still wanna continue?
B: Let's call it a day for today!
A: OK! Let's do it again!
B: Sure!
A: Do you know when it's convenient for you?
B: What about Saturday night?
A: OK! Thank you for Today!
See you Saturday night!
Have a good one.
B: Thank you, you too!!
April 27, 2022
2022年4月27日水曜日
おはようございます！
お元気ですか？
今、フランスに、Easterの休日とうとうだね。その休日が本来宗教的な記念日のために創立された。でも、私の家族が全然宗教的ではないので、何も祝わない。二週間の休日があって、一週間目に、私はおばあさんの家にいて、二週間目に、家族とレーネに行く。レーネが北西のフランスの街だ。
最近、ちょっと貸される日本人の友達の漫画を読んでいる。七つの大罪というの漫画だね。今、もっとわかるようになるので、嬉しいねー。でも、尚たくさんの単語を探さないといけない。私もJPLT N5というの試験の見本をしてみた。実際、この最初の試験が簡単だね。今年の目標がN5かN4に受かる。
では、行かないといけない！
読んでくれてありがとうございます！
またね！
April 27, 2022
Una stupida storia, parte 1
Muzhikóvsky, il locale supereroe d'una piccola città, ha finalmente trovato, dopo mesi di ricerca, il più grande criminale della zona - il terribile signor Assholini - e già sta per arrestarlo e mandarlo in prigione, però prima tutti i due devono combattere la loro grande battaglia - la battaglia finale fra il bene e il male. Cosa accadrà?...
Signor Assholini: Ti stavo aspettando, Muzhikóvsky! Stavo cominciando a preoccuparmi - pensavo che non verresti.
Muzhikóvsky: Sai perfettamente che non sono mai puntuale! E poi, stamattina la mia macchina si è rotta.
Signor Assholini: Lo so, l'ho rotta io!!
Muzhikóvsky: Sei un vero s*****o! A causa di questo dovevo correre qui a piedi!
Signor Assholini ha pensato per un attimo.
Signor Assholini: Ma tu non sai volare?
Muzhikóvsky, piano: Cavolo, l'ho dimenticato. (Forte) Basta con la chiacchierata! Adesso ti do una scelta: puoi arrenderti subito ed andare in prigione, o invece no. Nel quel caso combattiamo, e poi comunque ti porto in prigione!
Signor Assholini fa finta di pensare molto seriamente a la proposta, poi mette la sua mano lentamente dietro della sua schiena.
Muzhikóvsky ha pensato che signor Assholini abbia raggiunto per una pistola, quindi si è preparato a combattere.
Signor Assholini: Ho un'altra proposta...
Invece di una pistola, signor Assholini ha tirato fuori un mazzo di fiori.
Signor Assholini: Vuoi uscire con me, Muzhikóvsky?