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Talk about meals 2
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B: What did you have for lunch yesterday?
A: Pasta with meat sauce from the convenience store!ใ
B: You really like convenience stores, right?
A: Yeah, it's easy.
B: But it's not very healthy!
A: Yeah, so I crushed up some tomatoes I had in the fridge to bulk up the meat sauce and make it healthier.
B: That sounds like a good idea.
A: Yeah. It tastes better with a lot of sauce.
B: Indeed. What about at night?
A: I ate dumplings.
My friend's family from junior high school runs a dumpling store, so I bought some dumplings there before and froze them and kept them.
B: Is it good?
A: They are delicious. Especially the sui-gyoza are delicious.
B: the sui-gyoza?
A: Umm, boiled dumplings.
B: Oh, I see.
A: Have you ever eaten it?
July 26, 2022
Talk about drama
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B: Do you have any recommendations for Japanese dramas?
A: Let's see, there's an interesting one called "Legal High".
B: What kind of drama?
A: Like, a courtroom drama with a comedic touch. The main character is usually a jerk, but sometimes he says heavy words. It's good, too.
B: I see. I'll watch it!
A: Yeah! Lemme know if you watch it!
B: Sure!
A: On the other hand, do you have any drama recommendations?
July 26, 2022
Opinion about series
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Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?
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It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! ๐
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I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โ๏ธ
I just watched "JAILBIRDS" and "GIRLS INCARCERATED" on Netflix.
They really made me think.
I guess people arenโt bad from birth.
I think they do bad things because of their surroundings.
And I learned that relationships are much more important in American prisons than they are in Japanese prisons. It was like a school full of bad guys.
But the prisons I've seen in other documentaries were more extreme, so it made me wonder if these were just nicer prisons, or if the programs mostly showed the good side of prisons, or if the documentaries themselves were fake.
The mystery only deepens...
B: What's it about?
A: Jailbird" is about the daily life of a female inmate in the Sacramento County Jail, and "Girls Incarcerated" is about girls in an Indiana juvenile correctional facility.
July 26, 2022
Opinion about series
I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook! ๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ
I want to speak like a native speaker!! Seriously!!๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐ฅ๐ฅ
Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?
You can change whatever you want!
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! ๐
Also, I'd like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โ๏ธ
I finished "darktourist" on Netflix.
Some of the stories were quite intense.
I know that we shouldn't judge what people believe, but there were many things that shocked me and that I didn't understand. It was good to be reminded that there are all kinds of people in the world. I especially liked the part with the animation and music at the opening of the show.
July 26, 2022
Opinion about series
I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook! ๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ
I want to speak like a native speaker!! Seriously!!๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐ฅ๐ฅ
Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?
You can change whatever you want!
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! ๐
Also, I'd like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โ๏ธ
I found a very interesting show! ๐
I watch it to learn about various people's feelings and stuff, and it broadens my horizons. Some people say that "making a program like this is discriminating against people with disabilities", but I have learned about some diseases and symptoms thanks to this program. So, I think it's a good opportunity for people who are not familiar with diseases and things like that, including me, to learn more about them. If I think of it as a step toward better understanding and less discrimination and bullying against minorities as everyone gets to know various people, I think it's a very socially beneficial show. And, I found out that compared to Japanese relationship counseling services, in the U.S., quite few young people go to these services. I have never heard of 18 year olds going in Japan. I also found that American women care quite a bit about a man's height. I believe women in Japan also care, but not as much as women in the U.S. It's very interesting to learn this kind of information. The only problem is that there are only English subtitles, so I can only understand about half of what is being said.๐ต
I need to study...๐คฆ๐ฅ
July 26, 2022
Talk about anime
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I want to speak like a native speaker!! Seriously!!๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐ฅ๐ฅ
Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?
You can change whatever you want!
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! ๐
Also, I'd like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โ๏ธ
A: Do you know Crayon Shin-chan?
B: I don't know of that.
A: I guess it's like a Japanese version of The Simpsons. Maybe. Anyway, it's a Japanese national anime about a crazy family!
But it's fun and sometimes there are episodes that move me, so give it a watch!
I'd love to hear your honest thoughts.
B: I liked The Simpsons, so I might like it!
A: Then you might like it!
But a lot of people overseas hate the main character. lol
The main character likes to moon people, and I think this cartoon was banned in the US and Indonesia because of that!
B: Really? LOL.
A: On top of that, some people even call him a "naughty little boy". It may seem like a children's anime to people overseas, but in Japan, many adults love it too.
The anime is mostly just jokes, but the movies are seriously moving.
I'm moved by the kindness rarely shown by the main character, his parents, and his friends, and by the unexpectedly deep message. The movies "Sengoku" and "Otona Teikoku" are the best examples of this.
B :Oh, I might have heard of "Otona Teikoku" before.
A : Oh, really!?
B: I've never seen it, though.
A: It is such a work of work that you cannot talk about Japanese animated films without having seen it.
B: Is that so?
A: Maybe, I think I might have exaggerated a bit..Haha
But that's how much I love it!
You should watch it because it's definitely one of the greatest Japanese anime films! Like it or not.
But I think you should watch "Sengoku" first.
I think this is the one that everyone will like.
I have never heard of anyone in Japan who dislikes this film. am not sure what people from overseas think, though.Haha
B: Ok! "Sengoku"!
I'll check it out!
A: Also, if you haven't seen the anime, some things might need a little explanation, so it might be a good idea to become familiar with the family structure and characters beforehand.
If I were to explain it to you, I would say that it's an anime about it's an anime about a family of four people and a dog, and the daily life of Shinnosuke, the eldest son of the family, who is a very selfish five-year-old boy who annoys the people around him.
B: I see.
Thanks! I'll take a look!
A: Yeah, check it out!
July 26, 2022
Talk about music
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Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?
You can change whatever you want!
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! ๐
Also, I'd like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โ๏ธ
A: Mazinger Z song's cool even now. I sometimes feel like humming it, I've never seen the anime though.
B: Which song?
A: This one!
July 26, 2022
Opinion about manga
I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook! ๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ
I want to speak like a native speaker!! Seriously!!๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐ฅ๐ฅ
Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?
You can change whatever you want!
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! ๐
Also, I'd like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โ๏ธ
I just read Sayonara Eri.
The themes of book are about "bondage" and "liberation," and the story is about a mother who is ill, and the main character takes a video of his mother as a memory for various reasons, but the story changes again and again as it unfolds.
I liked the twists in the story, but it was a bit predictable.I especially liked the atmosphere at the end. For example, The scene where the main character leaves her and the scene the main character walks away alone. I mixed feelings. Part of me felt sad and part of me felt content. I felt a sort of ...melancholy ? I can't explain it, but I'm moved. ๐ฅฒIt's free for about 30 days or so, so try it.
July 26, 2022
Talk about manga
I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook! ๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ
I want to speak like a native speaker!! Seriously!!๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐ฅ๐ฅ
Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?
You can change whatever you want!
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! ๐
Also, I'd like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โ๏ธ
A: What's your favorite manga?
B: Fullmetal Alchemist
A: I like it too! But I read it when I was in about Jr high school, so I wonder if I remember it correctly. Who's your favorite character?
B: Hmmm, Greed, I guess.
A: Oh, shit. What kind of guy was he? LOL.
B: No way!
A: Hold on, give me 10 seconds. Remind me.
B: Okay.
A: Ahh, okay, okay. The one that turns black, huh.
B: Yeah, yeah, lol.
A: The one where King Bradley beat you up, right?
B: Yeah, yeah, lol.
A: I loved that scene. Why's that character your favorite?
B: Well, his way of life? LOL.ใ
A: Oh, I get the feeling that I kinda feel ya. But what was that why did he fuse into that Asian-looking guy?
July 26, 2022
About Kingdom episode 714
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Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?
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It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! ๐
Also, I'd like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โ๏ธ
Thoughts about Kingdom in Episode 714.
Why hasn't Banaji gone blind from the wound in his right eye? It's such a big scar.
It's always exciting when strong guys get together, even if they're enemies.
Mouten looks a bit foolish, huh?
It's normal to expect enemies to gather.
Riboku's words are always so profound and heavy.
That's why he's so respected.
He goes out of his way to call Kanki the 6th Shogun.
It's like, "If you can do it, do it.
July 26, 2022
talk about manga
I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook! ๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ
I want to speak like a native speaker!! Seriously!!๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐ฅ๐ฅ
Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?
You can change whatever you want!
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! ๐
Also, I'd like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โ๏ธ
A: Do you know "Kingdom"?
B: No.
A: This!
B: I've never seen or heard of that.
A: Yeah, I know. haha. A work that is extremely popular in Japan, but it's rare to find someone overseas that has heard of it. Give it a read when you have the time! You may not like the pictures at first, but after reading about 10 volumes, it just grabs your heart... Maybe.๐
But I wouldn't really recommend the anime. I think it's still good after season3, but 1 and 2 are not good at all. The movements are kind of weird. The pictures are not cool, either. I think the original are ruined.๐คฆ
B: What's it about?
A: It's the story about in called the Spring and Autumn and Warring States Period of China. It is a story about a boy named Shin, a war orphan with no relatives who aspires to become a great general, and a boy named Eisei, who later becomes the first Qin Emperor, who meet each other by fate and survive the warring times to achieve their dreams.
B: Sounds interesting!
A: Very interesting and awesome! It's a historical work, so to a certain extent, you already know what's going to happen. That is why the author has already depicted the main character becoming a general at the very beginning of the manga. But even if you read the manga knowing what happens after that, it's still sustaining interest. There are many deeply moving and heartfelt exciting developments. But I don't know why, but it's only popular in Japan. I can understand if they think it's not for them after reading it, but I don't understand people who think they are not interested in it before reading it. Deciding based on impressions is, y'know, like, discrimination.
B: Omg, haha. Say that much?
A: Yeah, it's like assuming someone isn't interesting without even talking to them. I think you should at least read the manga at least once, not just based on your impression of it. I guess that's how the seeds of discrimination grow. So, you must see and hear everything with your own eyes and ears, and have your own opinion after confirming it. This is important. So reading this manga is the first step toward eliminating discrimination. Seriously.
July 26, 2022
talk about manga
I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook! ๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ
I want to speak like a native speaker!! Seriously!!๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐ฅ๐ฅ
Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?
You can change whatever you want!
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! ๐
Also, I'd like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โ๏ธ
A: Do you know "Kingdom"?
B: Yeah, I know.
A: Omg, really?! You're a rare pokรฉmon!
A work that is extremely popular in Japan, but it's rare to find someone overseas that has heard of it. But, how could you stop in the middle of the road?
In most cases, once you start, you can't stop. Like, heroin.
Anyways, how far have you gotten?
July 26, 2022
re talk 102
I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook! ๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ
I want to speak like a native speaker!! Seriously!!๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐ฅ๐ฅ
Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?
You can change whatever you want!
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! ๐
Also, I'd like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โ๏ธ
B: Excuse me, I'm looking for a place that sells kimonos. Do you know if there are any stores around here?
A: Oh, kimonos, I have no idea. But I can check!
B: Thanks!
A: By the way, do you want a kimono instead of a yukata?
B: What's the difference?
A: Well, I'm not really sure either, but I think a kimono is a little more expensive. Also, I guess, kimonos were originally worn as clothing and are made of silk, so they're heavier and a little more formal. And yukatas were originally worn after taking a bath, and they're made of cotton, so they're lightweight and are considered a casual kimono worn at festivals and things like that.
B: Oh, I see.
A: They look like this.
B: Oh, I see. Both are good, but I prefer a kimono.
A: I don't know exactly how much they cost, but I think buying one online is the cheapest way to go. Would you like to see the real thing?
B: Hmm... Yes.
A: Ok! I'll see if there's a store around here!
B: Thanks!
A: Hmmm... It seems there are'nt any around here, but if you take the train, I've got three stores in my search. This is the closest one. I think they sell yukatas too.
B: How far is it by train?
A: Well, oh, it's only one stop. You could probably walk there.
B: What's the name of the store?
A: Tokyo Kimono. Look the other stores. Here you go.
B: Thanks.
A: If you find one that looks good, I'll check out how to get there.
B: Thanks. Let me have a look.
A: Yup.
B: Hmm, this one looks good.
A: Which one? Oh, this is the one we were talking about earlier. I'll check to see if you can walk there.
B: Thanks.
A: Walking will take about 20 minutes. But if you take the train, it might be about the same as walking, considering the distance from here to a station plus the distance from a station to the store. But if you walk, you might get lost, so the train is easier. Which one do you want to do?
B: Oh, well, I think I'll take the train.
A: Ok. Do you know how to get to B station?
B: B station, right?
A: Yes!
B: I just got on the train earlier, so, yeah, I know how.
A: Oh, that's good. Then you might wanna ask at the closest station to that store for directions to it, right?
B: Yes.
A: And if you have a navigation app on your phone, I can give you the address.
B: Oh, yeah. I want to know the address.
A: Well, it's 000.
B: 000, correct?
A: Yes.
B: Thank you very much.
A: You're welcome. Have a nice trip!
B: Thanks! Bye!
A: Bye bye.
July 26, 2022
re talk 101
I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook! ๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ
I want to speak like a native speaker!! Seriously!!๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐ฅ๐ฅ
Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?
You can change whatever you want!
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! ๐
Also, I'd like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โ๏ธ
B: Excuse me, I'm looking for some Japanese souvenirs. Any recommendations for places around here?
A: I don't really know about this area. What kind of things are you looking for? I can help you find a place on my phone, If you want.
B: Oh, really? That would be great.
I want a souvenir that reminds me of Japan.
A: Oh, nice. So, how about chopsticks, a kimono, or an inkan?
B: Aren't kimonos expensive?
A: Well, they might be expensive. I think you can buy one on the internet for a little over 10,000 yen, but it would be expensive to buy one in a store.ใ
B: Definitely. What's Inkan?
A: Well, it's a stamp with your name on it.
B: Oh, I see! Is there a store around here where I can buy one?
A: Just a sec... Let's see, uhh, there isn't, but you can find souvenir stores if you go to Asakusa. There's definitely a lot more souvenirs to choose from in Asakusa!
B: Good idea. Can you tell me how to get to Asakusa by train?
A: Sure!
B: Thanks.
July 26, 2022
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July 26, 2022
Schreiben Teil 3
Herr und Frau Stein haben Ihnen bei der Wohnungssuche geholfen. Sie sind nun vor zwei Tagen in die neue Wohnung eingezogen.
Schreiben Sie an Ihre Bekannten. Bedanken Sie sich hรถflich fรผr die Hilfe und laden Sie sie zu sich nach Hause ein.
Liebe Frau Stein, Lieber Herr Stein,
Ich bin nun vor zwei Tagen in die neue Wohnung eingezogen.
Ich mรถchte Ihnen fรผr die Hilfe sehr bedanken,und ich wรผrde Sie gerne am Sonntag um 16 Uhr zu kaffee einladen.
Ich freue mich sehr, wenn Sie kommen kรถnnten.
Viele Grรผรe
Abdulaziz
July 26, 2022
Integration
Jede Person bedeutet Integration anders, weil jeder unterschiedlich aufgewachsen ist. Meines Erachtens ist, dass man sich in andere Land wohlfรผhlt und einlebt. Es gibt verschiedene Faktoren, die darin Rolle spielen, einfach integrieret zu werden, nรคmlich Umfang der einheimischen Gastfreundschaft, die Sprache und persรถnliche Fรคhigkeiten. Erstens und wichtiger Punkt ist die Sprache Kenntnisse fรผr ein Einwanderer, ohne dass er mรผhsam studieren und arbeiten kann. Zwar die รbersetzer und die Dolmetscher sind hilfreich, aber nicht richtige Lรถsung. Auรerdem kรถnnen Auslรคnder anhand der Sprache einheimische Sitten verstehen und dann bewahren, sonst sie des Sittenverbrechers beschuldigt werden. Zweitens ist Verhalten des Gastlandes. Bedauerlicherweise haben manche Einheimische starke Ressentiment gegen Auslรคndische. Falls Sie die Gastarbeiter ausnutzen wรผrden, sollten sie gegen Rassismus und Diskriminierung kรคmpfen. Die Regierung und Media kรถnnen viel mehr darรผber informieren, sodass Menschen weniger fremdartige und exotische Gefรผhle gegen Fremde haben kรถnnen. Es ist fraglich, warum wir uns manchmal menschenunwรผrdig verhalten?!
Zu guter Letzt ist Flexibilitรคt. Aus- und Einwanderer sollten nicht nur die Sitten und Gebrรคuche des Gastlands bewahren, sondern auch durch ihre kulturelle Ansicht neue Situation nicht verurteilen. Mir scheint in diesem Fall fremde Kontakt am geeignetsten. Ein/e guter/e Freund/innen von jedem kann alles erzรคhlen. Nach dem Bรผrgerkrieg in Afghanistan ist mein Heimatland ein groรes Gastland fรผr Asylbewerber. Hoffentlich haben Asylanten keine Sprachbarriere, weil wir zusammen persisch sprechen und verstehen. Aber leider haben Auslรคnderbeauftragte nicht richtige Maรnahmen gegriffen. Zum Beispiel Einwanderer haben Probleme, Konto in der Bank zu erรถffnen oder ihre Kinder in der Schule anzumelden. Ich hoffe darauf, dass in der Zukunft fremdfeindliche Gefรผhle und Verhalten vernicht wรผrden.
July 26, 2022
Wie ticke ich? Habe ich Leidenschaften?
Ich glaube ich bin normal, was das Ticken angeht. Ich mag die รผblichen Dingen im Leben, die der typische Mensch mag: Essen, Freizeit, Sex, Abenteuer, Geld und so weiter. Aber ich glaube, dass ich langweiliger als den durchschnittlichen Menschen bin. Ich halte sehr an meine Gewohnheiten fest. Ich gebe mir mit denselben Gerichten, Restaurants und Aktivitรคten zufrieden. Ich habe auch kaum Lust auf Tourismus. Ich werde von Abwechslung sehr schnell erschรถpft.
Also nun fรผr meine Leidenschaften beziehungsweise Hobbys. Ich liebe fast alle Varianten von Sport. Im letzen Jahr habe ich hauptsรคchlich Basketball gespielt, dennoch sehe ich Fuรball immer noch als mein Lieblingssport an (Fuรball ist halt schwieriger nebenbei zu spielen). Zudem hebe ich regelmรครig Gewichten. Meine andere groรe Leidenschaft ist es, Sprachen zu lernen. Deutsch ist auf jeden Fall meine beste Zweitsprache, aber ich habe vor, bald Chinesisch zu lernen und mal Spanisch dazu.
Ich spiele Schach auch sehr gerne, aber verbringe vergleichsweise sehr wenig Zeit damit.
July 26, 2022
26 juillet 2022 - vacances dโรฉtรฉ
Cโest enfin les vacances dโรฉtรฉ ! Je suis trรจs heureuse dโavoir mon temps libre parce que jโai tellement de choses sur ma liste dโattente. Je voudrais rรฉcupรฉrer mes compรฉtences en domaine de dessin et de photographie. Quand je revois les photos que jโai prises auparavant, je disais quโelles sont magnifiques, mais il y a deux ans que mon appareil photo ne marche pas et je me suis donc obligรฉ dโutiliser mon iPhone 7. Heureusement, jโai achetรฉ un nouveau smartphone dont la camรฉra est excellente mรชme si ce nโest pas le plus nouveau. Bon je crois quโen terme courte, je nโachรจterai pas un nouveau appareil photo.
July 26, 2022
Mis exรกmenes
La semana pasada, recibรญ todas de mis notas de mis materias. No sรฉ cรณmo me siento. Claro que sรญ, he sacado notas mejores que querรญa, pero, ahora, me siento la expectaciรณn de mis padres y mis profesores.
Las dos semanas prรณximas, deberรฉ hacer mis exรกmenes finales. Tengo seis exรกmenes en total, durante trece horas. ยกDemasiado tiempo!
Y, hoy, me alegre porque sรฉ quรฉ necesito hacer para que sacar buenas notas para las matemรกticas y la historia moderna, mis materias รบnicas que necesitan mi atenciรณn. Al menos seis horas al dรญa estoy estudiando. No puedo creerlo.
Si me dices, el aรฑo pasado, que estudiarรญa durante cinco horas, sin descanso al dรญa en preparaciรณn para mis exรกmenes, me habrรญa reรญdo de ti.
Espero que sacar buenas notas, y, espero que las horas que he pasado estudiando, en lugar con mis amigas y bailar en las fiestas adรฉmas trabajar, serรก suficiente.
July 26, 2022
็ฟป่จณ (ใฆใฟๅทใฎใฐใฌใผใใฝใซใๆนใฎๆฐดใๆฟๆธ)
ใฆใฟๅทใฎใฐใฌใผใใฝใซใๆนใฎๆฐดใๆฟๆธ
ไปๅนดใฎ๏ผๆใ่ฅฟๅ็ใฎๆๅคงๅกฉๆนใฏๅฒไธๆไฝๆฐดๆบใจ่จ่ผใใใฆใใพใใๅฐ้ๅฎถใซใใใจใๆนใฎ็ธฎๅฐใฏๅใฆใฟๅทใฎไฝๆฐใ็ตๆธใจ็ๆ
ใซๅฑๅฎณใๅใผใๆใใใใใพใใ
July 26, 2022
goblet
For what reason it gives goblets and medal . We shouldn't waste fuels for metal and chain a paper with the congratulate is enough. But the people would like more gold cups and metal. I don't know who come of the idea with the goblets. I have no idea I mean yes it is a award and the most are out of plastic. I belive there are out of gold and so epensive because the presentation the winner. The people work so hard for this symbol of win and hard working. When if so see I understood why there gives. But I thought an certificate easily is better with a stamp and sign and more.I thought that is better than a goblet really .But I understood goblets are great and cost thanks for listening. Everyone has the law of his own opinion then we are free.
July 26, 2022
ๆฅๆฌ่ชใฎใกใผใซใซ้ขใใฆใฎ่ณชๅใงใ
ๅงใใฆใ็ธๆใใใๅฎขๆงใซ่ฟ็ญใใ้ใซๅฏพใใฆใใใกใผใซใฎๅ้ ญใฏใใไธ่ฉฑใซใชใฃใฆใใใพใใใใฏๅฟ ้ ไบ้ ใงใใโฆ๏ผใใ้ใใชใไฝใๆธใใฐ่ฏใใฎใงใใใใพใใกใผใซใซไปใฎ็นๆฎใชใใใผใชใฉใใใใพใใใๆใใฆใใใ ใใพใใใใ๏ฝ(__)๏ฝ
July 26, 2022
La flambรฉe de prix de lait de soja
J'achรจte souvent du lait de soja, รฉtant donnรฉe que je n'aime pas le goรปt de lait de vache (autrement dit le lait normal). Mais rรฉcemment, j'ai constatรฉ que son prix a beaucoup augmentรฉ, portรฉ de 1,69 euros ร 1,99 euros. Ce n'affect rien notre budget alimentaire, mais cette montรฉe du prix est grand vu d'un produit, environ de 17%. Comment cela se-fait il ?
Il semble que ce lait de soja en lequel je m'approvisionne rรฉguliรจrement provient de Belgique. Pourtant, l'Europe se procure 90% de leur consommation de soja de l'รฉtranger, notamment du Brรฉsil et des รtat-Unis. Vu la situation actuelle oรน le prix รฉcergรฉtique flambe, le coรปt de transport pourrait avoir de l'influence sur le prix du produit final. De plus, les exploitants de soja doivent รฉgalement se servir de l'รฉlectricitรฉ et il en va la mรชme pour les exportateurs d'engrais, et ainsi de suite. Cela nous aide ร imaginer les raisons pour lesquelles tous les coรปt montent pour les agriculteurs de soja, et cela se rรฉpercute sur le prix du lait de soja dont je me rรฉgale tous les jours.
Il convient de noter que l'engoument pour les produits de soja a des consรฉquences sur l'environnement. La culture de soja fait progresser la dรฉforestation surtout en Amรฉrique latine. Je me posais la question sur la montรฉe du prix, mais peut-รชtre que je dois payer davantage pour un produit afin de freiner la tandence catastorophique.
July 26, 2022
Tricher dans lโexamen finale
Je crois que tout le monde a trichรฉ dans lโรฉcole une fois ou une autre. Peut-รชtre on a copiรฉ la rรฉponse de son camarade devant soi ou avoir emportรฉ une petite note avec de quelques mots. La seconde chose est-ce qui jโai fait une fois oรน je prenais encore un cours de franรงais ร lโรฉcole. Nous avons dรป รฉcrire sur nos souhaites pour lโavenir en utilisant ยซย le futur procheย ยป puisque cโรฉtait un cours basique. Jโai emmenรฉ une note avec les conjugaisons du verbe ยซย venirย ยป pour que je ne les aie pas oubliรฉ. ร lโรฉpoque je mโen suis fichรฉ de la franรงais. Je nโen voulais pas parler. Jโรฉtais si naรฏveโฆ.