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일기 겸 (짧은) 감상평: ‘그 해 우리는’
오랜만에 글을 작성해본다.
지난 한 달 동안 이것저것을 많이 하면서 바쁘게 지냈다. 미래에 대한 고민을 많이 하고, 밀린 강의를 듣고, 산더미 같은 과제를 하는 와중에 친구들을 만날 기회가 없었고 나만의 시간을 가지지 못 했다. 너무 앞만 보고 달려왔나 싶을 정도로 정신이 없었다.
쉴 틈만 생긴다면 꼭 드라마 한 편을 보고 싶었다. 가만히 못 있는 스타일이라 16부로 구성된 드라마를 보는 게 나에게 쉬운 일이 아닌데 한가할 때 머리를 비워서 마음껏 쉬고 싶었다. 그래서 저번주에 제출할 것을 다 제출하고, 못다한 일을 끝내고 마음 편히 “그 해 우리는”이라는 드라마를 보기 시작했다.
이게 감상평이 아니고 짧은 일기라 긴 말을 하지 않고 그냥 “그 해 우리는”이 정말 재미있고 볼 가치가 있다고 생각한다. 나중에 시간 되면 제대로된 감상평을 써보고 싶은데 “그 해 우리는”에 대한 나의 생각들을 어떻게 표현해야 이 드라마의 아름다움을 잘 전달할 수 있을까라는 고민을 해봐야 할 것 같다. 나의 인생작이 된만큼 마음을 담아 쓰고 싶은데 생각을 정리할 시간이 필요해서 당분간은 못 쓸 것 같다. 읽어줄 사람이 없겠지만 (있으면 환영) 내가 이 드라마를 본 소감을 평생 잊지 않았으면 하고 가끔 생각날 때 보려고 쓸 것이니 그래도 열심히 진심을 담아 써보고자 한다.
지긋지긋한 나의 일상을 잠깐이라도 잊게 해준 “그 해 우리는”에게 참 고맙다. 극 중 여주인공인 국연수처럼 나의 삶이 별 거 없다고 생각했는데 이 드라마를 보고 나서 내가 이 자리까지 오느라 힘들었지만 지금까지 살아온 삶이 참 찬란하다는 것을 깨달았으며 언젠가 이 지겨움의 끝도 보이겠구나라는 생각이 들었다. 오랜만에 “그 해 우리는” 덕분에 행복과 희망으로 가득 채운 날들을 보낼 수 있었고 잠시라도 삶의 희열을 되찾게 해준 것 같아 나에게 너무나 소중한 작품이다.
Feb. 21, 2022
친구에게 이메일을 보내다
친구에게,
오랜만에 얘기해요. 학기 어떻게 지내고 있어요?
저의 해외에서 학기에 대해 친구에게 말하고 싶으니까 저는 이 이메일 보내고 있어요. 여기 있은지 6주 돼요. 9월 처음 주에 도착했어요. 날씨가 정말 좋아해요. 사실은 그러니까 오늘은 일찍 바다에 수영하러 갔어요.
아직 스페인어 잘 말하지 않지만 나아고 있는다 생각해요. 스페인의 문화를 좋아하는 거 대문에 이는 거 같아요. TV 쇼를 보고 동료에게 얘기하는 거 친친히 쉬워져고 있어요.평일에, 집 근처 있는 대학교에 수업을 다녀요. 저기에 여러 사람을 만났고 그들 정말 친절해요. 새로운 친구들은 제가 대학교에 다녀서 제 스페인어가 나아졌다고 말했어요. 그래서 요즘은 가게과 식당에 제가 더 자신감 있어요. 그래도 가끔 부끄러움을 아직 타요.
저는 친절한 가족이랑 살고 있어요. 저는 제 방있지만 우리가 아침하고 점심하고 저녁, 다 식사를 같이 먹어요. 보통 일요일에 우리는 집에서 만들은 큰 파엘라를 먹어요. 스페인에서는 점심이 가장 중요한 식사예요. 그리고 사람들이 큰 식사를 먹은 후 보통 낮잠을 잘 거예요.스페인에 와서 행복하도 한국 있는 가족을 보고 싶어요. 곧 우리의 나라에 돌아갔으면 좋겠어요.
친구의 대답을 받는 거 기다리고 있겠어요. 아마 친구는 방문하러 오도 돼요! 어때요?
아프지 말고 행복하십시오!
Feb. 21, 2022
A Shot in the Dark - 47
Part no. 47.
This summary was deliberately written in the present tense (analyse it as if it’s taking place as you read it.)
As expected, Daily Clarion’s journalist Harry Jupiter has managed to persuade Inspector Steine. No one can escape Jupiter’s charisma. So here they are now, walking the streets of Brighton in seek of valuable details for Jupiter’s piece on Crystal’s murder. Although Steine sort of agreed, he now rather regrets it. The more they walk, the more it hangs over Steine that Jupiter is massively into the book “Brighton Rock”. As it happens, Steine loathes this book since it picture a false, wicked image of Brighton riddled with crime. As far as Steine is concerned, it is six years since the town is rid of villains. Before he can point that out to Jupiter, they’ve arrived in Middle Street, which is where the notorious “Middle Street Massacre” had unfolded six years ago. Knowing that Steine passionately cares about this pivotal event, Jupiter cunningly tries to look impressed by the place. After a stiff and brief discussion about the surroundings, they carry on over to the seafront. All the while, it becomes more and more plain to Steine that Jupiter is goint to use Brighton Rock’s references as insights into the logic behind Crystal’s murder. Even though Harry Jupiter has never seet foot in Brighton before, such a prominent journalist like him should know better than to believe an old, fiction book in the first place. And his being completely oblivious to the real Brighton is astounding and worse yet*.
*is it clear that I meant, “is even more astounding and worse”?
Feb. 21, 2022
Feb. 21, 2022
Feb. 21, 2022
Moonlight
When I woke up, I looked at the open window and saw the moonlight on the roofs of the taller houses. There was that strange feeling again. I hid my face in the shadows, away from the moonlight, but I failed to fall asleep. I kept thinking about that nagging feeling. Both of us woke up twice that night, but in the end my wife fell soundly asleep, her face beaming in the moonlight. I wanted to put my thoughts in order but was absolutely dazed. Life had seemed so simple in the morning when I woke up and saw the early signs of spring and heard the flute of the goatherd interwoven with the rustling of the leaves. However, this was an ancient city and nothing in it was simple, neither poverty, nor sudden riches, nor good, nor evil, not even the rhythmic breathing sounds of the person lying beside my under the pale moonlight.
Feb. 21, 2022
Feb. 21, 2022
Introducing myself
Well, my full name is Navid Rostami. My first name is Navid, and my Surname is Rostami. You can call me Navid. I don’t have any nicknames. My name means proposition. it’s not a common name in my country, since I’ve never met anyone same name as mine. Because of that, I think that my name is unique. My surname is Rostami which refers to the ancient hero called Rostam. I have never felt any pressure on myself because I was never compared to him in my life.
Traditionally In Iran, the names of newborn children are given by their grandparents, however, mine was different. My older brother's best friend is also named same as me. I am named after him who my older brother really admires. However, He was a real chatterbox. My older brother came up with my name, and my parents both liked and agreed on.
Feb. 21, 2022
Une balade à vélo, 22 février
Aujourd'hui je vais faire une balade à velo avec mon mari et mes amis. C'est l'hiver, mais le temps fait assez chaud.
Je n'ai pas fait du velo récemment, donc je dois mettre de l'air dans mes pneus avant je vais. Je dois aussi trouver mon casque et mes gants.
Nous irons commencer la balade à velo chez moi, et ensuite nous allons prendre la piste cyclable pour 10 milles. Suivant, nous allons prendre une pause à un restaurant, et prendre un casse-croûte et peut être une bière. Après cela, nous allons encore prendre la piste cyclable jusqu'à ma maison.
Feb. 21, 2022
The Great Proletarian Cultural Revolution
ps：（This passage is my view about my country’sThe Great Proletarian Cultural Revolution）
I want to say sorry first.Because I may have some comments on capitalism later
The Great Proletarian Cultural Revolution is begins May 1966 to October 1976.Actually this revolution is wrong, its blackboard is Prevent the restoration of capitalism and seek China's own road of building socialism.
This revolution has brought us great losses，But it is our growth and we believe that China will develop better。
Feb. 21, 2022
Une rédaction
Le mardi prochain, je devrai écrire une rédaction en français. En décembre 2020, on a regardé le film "L'auberge espagnole" au collège, j'ai aimé le film et je voudrais voir le film suivant "Les Poupées russes".
La question de ma rédaction parle de la vie d'un étudiant et on devra analyser les scènes, les effets spéciaux etc.
L'année prochaine académique, on lira un livre pour l'analyser comme le film. Je devrai écrire deux rédactions dans mes épreuves pour mon "A-Level", une sur le film et l'autre sur le livre.
Feb. 21, 2022
Weekly meeting
We usually have weely meetings on Mondays. It last for about one hour everytime. There are a lot of topics we need to discuss. In today's meeting we talk about the projects everyone in charged. The project I have is tough and challenging. I have to figure something out to finish. Speak of my English learning. I should have had a one on one lesson on line today. But I didn't due to being busy. I gotta catch up tomorrow.
Feb. 21, 2022
21 février 2022 - Retour en arrière
Quand j'étais petite, j'aimais vraiment la vielle ère en Chine, parce que dans mon cerveau, en être influencée par le fantasme de livres et d’émissions de télévision, c'était un époque de l'élégance, de la beauté, et où on vivait dans la nature. Mais je ne voyais pas le noir de ce temps, ni l'inconvenience de la vie quotidienne. Même la modernité a détruit la nature, et a fait disparu les bonnes étiquettes de l'ancienne société, j'aime plus le confort et la rapidité que la modernité nous a apportés. En plus, dans la société moderne, la différence entre les pauvres et les riches se diminuaient. Si, il existe encore une grande écart, mais au moins la vie de la classe moyen a beaucoup amélioré. De plus, les femmes sont plus libres que d'avant et je pense c'est ça que je ne voulais pas de retour en arrière.
Feb. 21, 2022
Precious Time
Few days ago, I watched a video content about self-recognition.
When young age, many people are trying to do everything not only improving their skills but also making many friends.
As growing older, they need to choose things which they can do best.
Because, there is not enough time and not enough energy to do everything like the young.
I agree this idea that I don’t have time to do all other things except working and taking care of my kids, now.
For self-improvement, I have to wake up earlier than 6 AM before my family wakes up.
At the very first time, this life was too hard to do, because I was a night owl.
However, the time is now my precious one, and I do what I really want to do.
The time is like an oasis in a desert during my daytime.
Feb. 21, 2022
Feb. 21, 2022
Complemento directo o indirecto)
Gracias por recibirme
Estoy acostumbrado al ambiente
Mañana voy a visitar a mi amiga para hablar de la boda
Hoy quiero quédame aquí un rato para relajarme
Gracias por ayúdame
Necesitamos llamarle
¿Puedes ayudarnos con el menu?
Queremos decirte que preferimos algo sabroso y costoso
¡Dinos la verdad!
Dasela a ella. Tengo que irse. Con permiso.
Feb. 21, 2022
Por y para
Por
Voy por la calle ‘primero’
Mi celular se rompió por la agua
Hago ejercicio por la mañana
Él viaja por avión
Tengo que cambiar dólar por pesos
Para
Compré un cuaderno para escribir
Necesito dinero para comprar comida
El bus va para Tijuana
Quiero la respuesta para el jueves
Ella estudia para profesora
Feb. 21, 2022
Las vacacíones
Antes que el virus empezara, yo fuí a África por tres meses en 2019. Yo me quedaba en las calles locales, comia en las calles e íba a lugaresa donde no hay muchas personas.
Me siento feliz cuando estaba allá. En la foto era mi primera noche en Uganda. Caminamos en la noche y conimos comidas rápidas y bebimos jugo de fruta Luego fuimos al bar para beber cerveza y escuchar la música en vivo.
Feb. 21, 2022
Feb. 21, 2022
Feb. 21, 2022
Dessine-moi un mouton
J'aime apprendre le français à partir de chansons françaises. Si le temps le permet, je trouve une chanson avec des paroles en français et j'entame une longue série de recherches de sens et d'associations. Parfois, une phrase attire mon attention et mène à une autre chanson, un poème ou un événement, et la recherche continue indéfiniment.
Récemment, j'ai repensé à la phrase : "les moutons d'océan" que l'on retrouve dans deux chansons : "Les moulins de mon cœur" et "La mer"
« Comme un vol de goélands/Sur des moutons d'océan »
« La mer au ciel d’été/Confond ses blancs moutons/Avec les ang’s si purs »
Je suppose, les moutons de l'océan, ce sont des flocons de mousse créés par le vent sur les vagues. Mais je pense que les moutons sont des animaux trop dociles pour représenter des eaux turbulentes.
Il y a une description de nuages calmes dans un poème polonais bien connu « Messire Thadée » :
« Tous ces nuages blancs faiblement empourprés/Dorment comme un troupeau de brebis dans les prés »
Je m'en souviens seulement parce que j'ai dû l'apprendre par cœur quand j'étais à l'école.
Lorsqu'il y a une tempête en mer, la langue polonaise parle de bonhommes de neige de la mer. Cela n'a pas de sens non plus, car les bonhommes de neige ne sont pas connus pour être actifs.
Bonhomme de neige est la mascotte officielle du Carnaval de Québec à Québec. J'y étais en 2020 juste avant le début de la pandémie. Je ne sais pas si le Carnaval va être organisé cette année, c'est un événement que je recommanderais à tout le monde.
Comme tout le monde le sait, la citation du titre vient du livre « Le Petit Prince ».
Les moulins de mon esprit continuent de tourner.
Feb. 21, 2022
El autoaislamiento
Hoy hace tres días que hago un autoaislamiento por estar contagiado de COVID. Para no compartir el desafortunado virus con mi host de Airbnb, me mudé temporalmente a un hotel cercano en el mismo barrio. El hotel no está nada mal. Es barato, limpio, y tiene todas la conveniencias que esperaría de un hotel moderno. La luces y los enchufes electricos funcionan y el fregadero para baño tiene muy buena presión (¡es como estar debajo de una cascada fuerte!). Además, la habitación tiene una cortina gruesa para bloquer la luz de afueza, ¡lo que me parece una maravilla! Aunque a veces me aburro por la falta de contacto con otros seres humanos, estoy disfrutando un poco la vida solitaria de comer comida del servicio de habitación y sobrar de tiempo para leer novelas y estudiar el español.
Feb. 21, 2022
Kurze Puzzle
Am schwierigste ist ein Thema zu finden. Was will ich schreiben über? Ich denke, ich werde mit einem kurzem Puzzle beginnen. Kennst du diese Filmfigur?
Er ist mit sehr wichtigen Leute angenommen. In seinem job muss er immer verdächtig sein. Oft arbeitet er mit schönen Frauen zusammen. Er rettet die Welt in jedem Abenteuer. Und die letzte Tipp ist, dass er der bekannteste Spion der Welt ist.
Feb. 21, 2022
Feb. 20, 2022
Quelques choses sur moi
Bonjour, c'est mon premier essai de écrire en française. J'ai étudié cette langue pour suelement des semaines, mais je veux améliorer ma habileté pour lire et écrire.
Je étudie la informatique en l'univeristé, mais j'aime apprendre nouvelles langues durant mon temps libre. Je sais un peu espagnol parce que j'ai le aprendu en l'école.
j'aime les chats beaucoup et mes parents les détestent. Je vais obtenir un chat quand je vis seul.
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