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My first post.
Hello. My name is Daniel. I`m 35 and I`m learning english almost all my life, since I was 5. But I did it not too instense, and now I pass the english test with mark A2. I asked the deepseek - how can I learn english more efficient, and he said, that I need to write an essay every day, not long essay, a couple of sentences. So I`m starting this, and I hope, that it can help me to upgrade my english to B1 level, maybe higher. In thoose essays I will tell stories about my daily life, my successes and failures.
July 14, 2025
Eternal Dilemma
If you like nature like I do, maybe you thought about which is better?
To read an e-book you need power, but don't need to "waste" paper. If you read paper books, it's not necessary to use power, but someone cut a tree for that book. Which one is more sustainable? I don't know. But it maybe a good question to think and talk about.
Anyway. Although I really like nature and I try to live as green life as I can, I prefer paper books. I like paper, its smell, and that it's offline. I have a smartphone, a laptop, a bluetooth headset and a smartwatch, batteries everywhere. I have to charge them a lot and if one of them runs out, it does it at the worst possible time. Paper books never run out of battery, doesn't need a charger, and they're real. I mean we suround ourselves so many virtual stuff, I don't need more. Paper is awesome, so I'll go to plant some trees. :)
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Love
For every person his/her 1st love was parents specially mother. Love means life's only valuable emotions , It is God gifted thing in human life . In our life there is parse of love specially in the age between sixteen to twenty-five , This parse of life teach many important thing in our life specially trust . In everyone life their must be a second love or special one, whom we want to spend time with her/his, want to be together in the entire life until death but unfortunately in some case it's work or not .Love can't be success in one side it have to be two side than it can be success . If someone don't love you or like you then don't force them to love you leave them in their situation and think that he/she can't effort your unvaluable love .
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July 14, 2025
What i do in my free time?
In my free time i do many activities, for example, play volleyball with my team of the university, play online videogames with friends or my boyfriend, Cook a new recipe to me or my boyfriend, study for futures exams and finales just sleep, i love sleep
due to university i did not sleep enough, so this activities i do in my free time
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July 14, 2025
Tiktoker or a Writer?
I make videos for tiktok in my free time just for fun. The videos are usually about my life; like playing an instrument, basketball, my friends and more… Only one of my video had gone viral so I cant say Im famous :c but I love being myself in my videos description. I talk with everyone like everyone is my friend, I explain my feelings about the video and talk about the backstage where people cant see while watching. In my latest video I wrote something about “everything is up to us, todays decisions decides our future” and I really got surprised because the paragraph that I wrote was so good that even I couldnt believe i wrote it.
July 14, 2025
The best moment in your intier life
The best moment that i realy hope to live it again in my life it was thr birthday of my littel brother it was the hippiest day in my life ,because he came after 10 years,and also i love cheldren so much i'm realy fand of babies ,so when he was born it was a merical for me and i have been watching him for a long hours just reflecting his tiny face while he was sleeping .i realy admire this littel baby and i felt very warm and pleased feelings.
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Einn þreyttandi dagur
Ég hef gert mikið af afkastamiklum hlutum í dag.
Klukkan átta fór ég til matvörubúðarinnar til að kaupa mat. Klukkan níu borðaði ég morgunmatinn og ég ætlaði að æfa íslensku. Fyrst æfði ég framburðinn og að tala, svo æfði ég að skrifa. Klukkan tólf gaf ég köttunum mínum mat, og ég borðaði hádegið.
Fjölskylda mín kem í heimsókn klukkan hálf þrjú. Við borðuðum köku og við spjölluðum um nýja heim hennar fjölskyldunnar.
Þessi dagur var skemmtilegur!
July 14, 2025
C’est la quinzième entrée de mon journal
Aujourd’hui Je nettoierai ma cuisinière. Elle est très sale parce que je cuisine beaucoup et je ne la nettoie pas souvent. Je n’aime pas cuisiner et je ne cuisine pas bien. En plus, je n’aime pas faire la vaisselle. Mais je sais que la nourriture au restaurant est mauvaise pour la santé.
July 14, 2025
Longues rencontres
La journée où j'ai rencontré ma femme ne s'effacera jamais de ma mémoire.
C'était le premier jour d'un nouveau semestre, et j'avais récemment changé de spécialisation. Je ne connaissais pas le bâtiment où devait avoir lieu mon premier cours, donc je suis arrivé devant la salle de classe assez tôt.
Après quelques minutes, un autre étudiant est arrivé, lui aussi à la recherche de la salle. On s'est présentés, et nous avons parlé pendant un moment, jusqu'à ce qu'un grand groupe de nos nouveaux camarades arrive.
La professeure a ouvert la porte, nous sommes entrés, et je me suis assis au fond de la salle pour ne pas me faire remarquer.
À côté de moi, une jolie fille aimable, souriante et bavarde s’est présentée. À côté d’elle, une autre fille — sexy, mystérieuse, et plutôt intelligente — nous a salués. C’était le coup de foudre. Notre premier devoir était un livre qui s'intitulait Brèves Rencontres.
Bref, ma recontontre était longue.
Un jour, je l’ai invitée au cinéma. Elle a accepté ce premier rendez-vous, puis un deuxième, un troisième… et dans deux semaines, nous célébrerons nos dix ans de mariage.
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Homestay four day
Today was special day！
I went to olympic sport center by bike. There is two people ride on the bikes.
I ride back seat.( front of ride my host family mother)
When we came back home way, we found some plum trees.
There were a lot of plums. We picked some plums.
Sometime we waved trees, because fell down some plums.
My host family made plum’s compote.
We had it after dinner. It was a little bit sour, but it’s very delicious.
It’s a cherished memories.
I had another stories, but it wrote next time.
July 14, 2025
Short answer: I hate them!
In my opinion, there's two type of reality shows:
1. Reality shows, where people act like real, average people.
2. Reality shows, where people act like crazy idiots from Mars, who never lived on Earth.
I have enough experience with average human behavior, so I don't need the first one. The 2nd one is too much for me so if I don't want to screem after 2 minutes, I have to avoid it. I think, these shows are really harmful to people. Since these things have been on TV, people started to act like people in the TV. And reality shows have become even crazier because they have to shoot above average, so a vicious circle is formed. People imitate shows, and shows try to outdo people.
I'm pretty sure it leads to a disaster, a catastrophy, an armageddon or the worst combination of these.
Anyway, there could be reality shows that are good but I don't know, so I acknowledge that my words can't be generalized to every reality show.
July 14, 2025
E-Books oder Papierbücher?
Mir haben schon immer Papierbücher gefallen: ihre Taktilität, Mobilität und Erscheinung. Nichtsdestotrotz habe ich seit einigen Monaten angefangen, täglich einen E-Reader zu verwenden. Der Wendepunkt für mich war die neue Preis für die „echten“ Bücher. Ich habe angefangen, dieses Thema zu recherchieren.
Aus mehreren Gründen fand ich den E-Reader deutlich praktischer als ein Buch. Erstens ist er viel handlicher: man kann im Voraus tausende Bücher herunterladen und tragen sie in einer Hosetasche. Zweitens könnte man diese E-Books absolut umsonst im Internet erlangen, währenddessen hätte es ein Vermögen kosten, teure Papierbücher zu kaufen.
Nach einer Woche von der Forschung habe ich einen E-Reader gewählt, der mir am liebsten gefällt hat. Ich wollte, dass er einem echten Buch ähnelt: die Größe, das Gewicht und die Bildschirmqualität (die Papierqulität) sind buchstäblich gleich. Ich freue mich sehr über meinen Kauf.
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