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Sept. 15, 2025
Las cosas que perdimos en el fuego
Mi amiga de Argentina me ha prestado su libro que se llama ‘las cosas que perdimos en el fuego’ es una colección de historias cortas. Ayer empecé a leer el libro y la primera historia se llama ‘el chico sucio’. Se trata de una mujer que vive el barrio Constitución en Buenos Aires, sus padres creen que está loca porque vive en ese barrio peligroso pero á ella le gusta vivir ahí. Sus vecinos son una madre y su hijo que son pobre. Una noche el chico llamaba a la puerta de la mujer y decía que tenía hambre, la mujer le daba comida y le compraba un helado. Cuando regresaron de la heladería la mama del ‘chico sucio’ fue muy enojada con la mujer porque no sabía que hizo ella con su hijo.
Algunas días después la policía ha encontrado a un chico matado/muerto. La mujer pensaba que era el chico sucio y se sentía mal porque no le cuidaba. Al final fue otro chico y …. no he leído más
Me parece muy interesante aunque todavía no he acabado con el capítulo.
Sept. 15, 2025
Sept. 15, 2025
My Day
Today was the end of the week end so I went to high school and I saw my friends. I started with a spanish class and I had a test. I think I will have a great grade because I learnt my lessons and it was quite simple. After I had sports class but my teacher wasn't here. So, with a friend, we wanted in the gym (to work out) because he went there for 2 weeks. But we couldn't because I had to be 16 and I am fifteen. And the worse in that is that I will be sixteen tomorrow. But I'm going to sign up in another gym close to my friend's gym so we will can go there together.
Sept. 15, 2025
Sept. 15, 2025
After vacation
It was the first day at work after my vacation. I thought it would be worse. However, although I have a tough task, I have done it.
My work is about constantly solving problems. I'm a developer. Code changes all the time. Sometimes you need to create a new feature and it means you should read a lot of code to make sure that your input wouldn't break anything. Additionally, you analyze files to keep code clear and understandable. For example, today I've worked on a component that I had made before, and because of new requirements I had to divide it into other components. I don't think my solution is great, but considering the circumstances, is better than it was or could be.
I often doubt myself as a developer. At least, I don’t have a diploma in Computer Science. My job is unofficial but it's all I could find without any experience. To be honest, it's not my style to choose something easy. There is a huge competition in IT. But I would be bored if my path was easier.
Sept. 15, 2025
Sept. 15, 2025
Sept. 15, 2025
Turkish Language
As a native Turkish, I sometimes have difficulty explaning Turkish Language's detail to foreigner that what part of it is easy and what part of it is difficult. I will share this video with anyone who wants to learn Turkish's detail. I am so happy to see a non-Turkish evaluating this language. Additionally I want to point out another matter. Due to the difference between Turkish language and European Language, Turks have difficulty learning these languages. Because There is no articles and gender of words such as Italian, French, German etc and we, Turks, cannot understand how the articles are used and determined the correct articles by words. As far as I remember there is no specific rule what word is masculine or feminine.
Sept. 15, 2025
Sept. 15, 2025
Sept. 15, 2025
Richard Löwenherz 1
Heinrich der Jüngere war schon storben, weshalb Richard Löwenherz, der der dritte Sohn von Heinrich II. und der beliebteste von Eleonore war, den Thron bestieg.
Er unternahm mit Philipp August den dritten Kreuzzug. Philipp versuchte Richard und seine Schwester zu verheiraten. Richard zustimmte aber nicht dieser Ehe.
Sept. 15, 2025
My Introduction and day off
Hello. How about today?
I’ll introduce myself and explain my day off.
First, I work as a Japanese government officer. I started it 3years ago. It’s very challenging for me, but I think that my work is highly rewarding! That’s because I can work in national government and feel dedication for my native and people. Honestly, sometimes my work that gives numberless hard tasks is exhausting to me. However, in this condition, I’m reminded to me that my work is helpful and informative for my country and people! Thanks to that, I continue to fight!
Second, let me explain my day off.
I usually spent my day off with my friends. For example, coming to drink or browse used clothing shops.
On the other hand, l like to stay home. It can be relax and care my body. I think it needs for me to do next week’s works.
Sept. 15, 2025
The Mid-Autumn Festival
The Mid-Autumn Festival is coming. It’s one of China’s traditional festivals.
I don’t know the origin of this festival. I only know some of its traditions.
The festival falls on the 15th day of the eighth lunar month in the Chinese calendar. This date usually falls in the middle of September in the solar calendar.
This festival is a time for people to visit their relatives, such as their maternal and paternal grandparents, uncles and aunts.
An indispensable gift when visiting relatives is mooncakes — a type of pastry made from wheat flour, nuts, dried fruits and sugar.
I don’t like eating mooncakes because they are too sweet. I always feel cloying after eating them.
Nevertheless, mooncakes have already become a symbol of this festival; without them, it wouldn’t feel like the Mid-Autumn Festival.
Thus, about one or two months before the festival, factories start producing mooncakes, which are then delivered to markets for sale. The prices of mooncakes also vary widely.
Every year for this festival, I don’t buy many mooncakes. I only buy a few high-quality ones for my family to taste.
Sept. 15, 2025
L’automne est arrivé
L’automne est arrivé, les station des buses sont de nouveau pleins d’élèves. Les journées s’écourtent. Les feuilles tombent. On est dans le neuvième mois de l’année. Comme c’est difficile d’accepter le passage de l’été. Les journées sont longes pleins du soleil, quand on se lève, le soleil est en haut, et même à neuf heures la lumières du jour est toujours visible.
Sept. 15, 2025
Mehr Grünflächen statt Parkplätze
Mit der Zunahme der Urbanisierung und der Entstehung verschiedener Umweltprobleme stellt sich die Frage, ob mehr Grünflächen statt Parkplätzen geschafft werden müssen. Diese Maßnahme bringt viele Vorteile mit sich. Als ein Vorteil lässt sich die Verbesserung der Luftqualität nennen. Außerdem führt die Schaffung mehr Grünflächen zur Senkung der Temperatur. Dies lässt sich dadurch erklären, dass Grünflächen Kohlendioxid absorbieren, was im Laufe der Zeit zu einer Reduktion der Treibhausgasemissionen führt und deswegen die durchschnittliche Temperatur sinkt. Ein weiterer positiver Aspekt wäre der Lebensraum für Tiere, wodurch die Biodiversität zunimmt. Darüber hinaus könnten mehr Grünflächen der Gesundheit dadurch förderlich sein, dass sie Menschen zum Sport oder Spielen sowie Verbringung der Zeit mit ihren Familien motivieren. Trotz der Vorteile der Grünfläche ist es zu berücksichtigen, dass in der heutigen Zeit das Bedürfnis nach Mobilität kontinuierlich steigt. Viele Menschen sind auf Autos angewiesen, weswegen der Mangel an Parkplätzen Frustration der Menschen auslösen kann. Außerdem kann dieser Mangel dazu führen, dass es eilig habende Menschen die Straßenregeln nicht mehr einhalten.
Die Frage, ob mehr Grünflächen statt Parkplätzen geschafft werden müssen, lässt sich also nicht leicht beantworten. Einerseits fördert die Schaffung der Grünflächen die Gesundheit und das allgemeine Wollbefinden, andererseits könnte der Mangel an Parkplätzen Frustration und Wut der Menschen auslösen.Ein Vorschlag wäre die Förderung alternativer Verkehrsmittel wie Fahrrad ,Bahn, damit man sowohl die Probleme der Mangel an Parkplätzen lösen kann, als auch mehr Grünfläche schaffen kann.
Sept. 15, 2025
Aktuelles Spiel
Ich spiele aktuelle ein Konsolenspiel, das heißt "Bandle Tales". Ich denke, ich bin eigentlich süchtig danach, weil ich habe es gestern bis 4 Uhr gespielt.
Es gibt kein Kampf in dem Spiel. Ich sammele Zutaten oder Stoff und bastele etwas als Aufgabe.
Es ist sehr gemütlich zu spielen. Aber ich denke, ich habe es gestern übertrieben.
Ich würde heute Nacht früher ins Bett gehen.
Sept. 15, 2025
Dilbilgisini ihmal etmemek
Haftada bir kez, Türkçe Türk arkadaşla öğrenirim. "Yedi İklim" adlı bir kıtab kullanırım. Bu kitap kötü değil, sadece dilbilgisini öğretmez! Elbette mesele değil, çünkü bu arkadaş bana grameri açıklayabilir, sadece bana göre, Türkçe dilbilgisisiz öğretmek problematik. Nasıl birisi bir dili anlayabilir, eğer çalısmasını anlamasa? Cümleler ezberden, makine gibi tekrarlamak" "anlamak" anlamına gelmez. *
Aslında, tüm diller öğrenmesi için dilbilgisini ihmal etmemeyi tavsiye ediyorum, özellikle Türkçe için, cünkü Türkçe yapısı Hind-Avrupalı'kinden çok farklı — örneğin, ekleri kullanbilirmek gerçekten esas.
Sept. 15, 2025
I moved to the mountains.
The mountain looked serene in the early morning light. A cold sunshine left me feeling invigorated. I moved last week. That's why I don't write anything. Every morning I wake up, drink my coffee and just look at the mountains near my new house. The fresh scent of the mountain herbs envelops me. My mind as clear as never before. I'll live here all winter and I hope to buy a house on this magical ground.
Sept. 15, 2025
Memento
Vor mehr als einem Jahr habe ich mir zum ersten Mal den Film „Memento“ angeschaut. Obwohl schon relativ lange Zeit verstrichen ist, kann ich ihn seitdem nicht vergessen.
Er wurde von Christopher Nolan inszeniert und ist meiner Meinung nach einer, wenn nicht der beste, seiner Filme.
In der Handlung geht es um die Geschichte von Leonard, der unter eine rare Art Amnesie leitet: er ist unfähig, neue Erinnerungen zu gestalten und hat kein Kurzzeitgedächtnis. Mit Hilfe von Notizen, Fotos und sogar Tattoos versucht Leonard, den Täter seiner Frau zu finden. Doch wie kann er wissen, dass er das schon früher mehrmals nicht getan hat?
Trotz 25 Jahren seit der Veröffentlichung bleibt dieses Werk aus mehreren Gründen absolut einzigartig. Zum Beispiel gibt es keine lineare Erzählung, stattdessen folgt man zwei Erzählungen, eine von denen wird in umgekehrten Reihenfolge schwarz-weiß vorgestellt. Am Ende des Filmes treffen sich die beiden, und man erhält die Lösung zum Rätsel.
Sept. 15, 2025
Mi primera entrada
Hola todos!
Hoy escribo mi primera entrada en LangCorrect.
Yo estoy aprendiendo español durante un año.
Uso cuatros materiales diferentes para aprender.
Uso Duolingo para aprender palabras nuevas.
Hablo con mi maestra de español, Laura, en Preply cada miercoles durante una hora.
Recientemente, empezo usar "Dreaming Spanish" para practicar mi comprensión auditiva.
Y ahora, empezo usar esta plataforma.
Sept. 15, 2025
My dad's secret
When I was in primary school, I always thought my father's hair can't grey since,I haven't never seen him to barber shop nor dry his hair at our home. It wouldn't be surprising when teacher taught us greying of hair start when you reach 50 years old, I shouted "You're such a liar! not even single hair on my dad's head is grey!“ Everyone looked at me like I'm an idoit. I feeled embrassing but still believed what I said. That evening when my dad picked me up at the school, I immediately asked him "Dad, you haven't been dyed your hair, haven't you? your hairs are natural?" Dad turned his head and speak with confident "Son, where do you this's from? Of course, I dyed my hair. Who would want other to see his old hairs?" Since then, I learn that Teacher can be right sometimes.
Sept. 15, 2025
Sept. 15, 2025
Daily Life: Part 19
Qingdao will have a giant rain after two days. To be honest, most people don't like rainy days, because it will interrupt their plans. But for me, it is a good opportunity to get more money; there are some people who need to be sacrificed. Why not me? I feel honored that I could help another person during a rainy day. maybe they are aged, paralyzed, or children. I have to say that these people need to pay attention to take care of themself. Since I decided to be a temporary deliver, I need to respond. Also, I have ordered a raincoat and anti-slip slippers for myself. I prepared everything that I think I need to have on a rainy day. ok, now, I'm about to go home and take a shower. Chatting with my parents about what's happened today. At the end of the day, I wish all of you guys having a good one!
Sept. 15, 2025